2023年高考英語考前信息必刷卷之寫作部分與解析

2023年高考英語考前信息必刷卷之寫作部分與解析

（云南、安徽、黑龍江、吉林、山西新高考五省專用）

第四部分寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）

第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）

66.請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示寫一篇短文，闡述水在人們生活中的重要性以及如何解決缺水問題。

1.沒有水，人與動(dòng)植物怎么辦？

2.缺水問題越來越嚴(yán)重。原因有人口增長、工農(nóng)業(yè)的發(fā)展、污染等。

3.應(yīng)采取措施解決缺水問題；充分利用；避免污染；凈化雨水或海水。

參考詞匯：凈化purify；缺水watershortage；污染pollute/pollution；采取措施takemeasures；

工業(yè)industry

注意：1.短文要包括以上要點(diǎn)；

2.不要逐字逐條翻譯，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；

3.詞數(shù)120左右。

第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫（共1小題，滿分25分）

67.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

67.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

HillaryHarrislivedwithherhusbandanddaughterinEauClaire,Wisconsin.However,she

wasthinkingofmoving.Notbecauseshedidn'tlikethehouseortheneighborhood,butbecause

ofthehousenextdoor.Firstofall,shehatedthatherfamilyhadtosharethedrivewaywiththe

neighbors,whileshealsodislikedthefactthattenants（租戶）cameandwenttothathouseallthe

time.Andwhenacoupleintheir50smovednextdoor,itwasn'tanydifferent.Hillaryfeltthatshe

hadhadenough,soshedidn'teventrytobewarmtowardsthem.

“Herewegoagain,9,shethought.tcNowwhat?”Assheadmitted,shewas"turnedoff'bythe

womannextdoorandthattheywerecoldtoeachother.

“Shewouldnotacceptmeanyhow,“DawnJohnson,thenewneighborrecalled."Iwould

cometogetmymail,shutitandwatchherwalkintothehouse.Buteverythingwasaboutto

changeinanunbelievableway.

Hillaryknewshehadbeenadopted（收養(yǎng)）whenshewasababy,aswellassheknewshehad

severalhalfsiblings（兄弟姐妹）.Infact,shehadalreadymanagedtoreunitewiththreeofthem

throughtheInternet.Buttherewasstillonehalf^siblingthatshecouldn'ttrackdown.Allshe

knewwasthathernamewasDawnJohnson.Shehadfoundthreeotherhal「siblingsonthe

Internet,butshewashavingnoluckwithDawn.Shewasbeginningtothinkthatshe'dneverfind

her.

Whensherealizedhernewneighbor'snamewasDawn,shekindofhadafeelingthatshe

justmightbehersister.Shelearnedthatthewoman'sfirstnamewasDawnandthatshewasfrom

Greenwood-thesametownwhereDawnJohnsonhadlivedaccordingtowhatshehadlearned

fromherfather,WayneClouse.Shetoldherhusband,4CHernameisDawn-whatifshe'smysister?”

Theybothlaughedandsaid,"Noway!Nowaycouldthatbe.”

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

However,shecouldn'thelpthinkingaboutit.

So,whenJohnsonwentoutoftown,Hillarytextedher,askingaboutherfather'sname.

答案解析

第四部分寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）

第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）

66.Itisdifficulttoimaginewhatlifewouldbelikewithoutwater.Waterisveryimportanttoall

livingthings.Therewouldbenolifewithoutwater.

Watershortagehasbecomeaseriousproblem.Thegrowingpopulationandthedevelopment

ofindustryandagricultureneedmuchmorewater.Waterpollutioninsomeareasalsocontributes

towatershortage.

Therefore,measuresmustbetakentosolvetheproblem.Firstofall,wemustmakegooduse

ofwaterandavoidpollutingit.Inaddition,wecangetusefulwaterthroughpurifyingrainorsea

water.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放作文，請(qǐng)考生根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示寫一篇短文，闡述水在人們生活

中的重要性以及如何解決缺水問題。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

重要的：important一significant

導(dǎo)致：contributeto一leadto

充分利用：makegooduseofftakefulladvantageof

此夕卜：Inaddition=Besides

2.句式拓展

合并簡單句

原句：Waterisveryimportanttoalllivingthings.Therewouldbenolifewithoutwater.

拓展句：Waterisveryimportanttoalllivingthings,withoutwhichtherewouldbenolife.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Itisdifficulttoimaginewhatlifewouldbelikewithoutwater.（運(yùn)用了what

引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

[高分句型2]Inaddition,wecangetusefulwaterthroughpurifyingrainorseawater.（運(yùn)用了動(dòng)

名詞作賓語）

第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫（共1小題，滿分25分）

67.However,shecouldn'thelpthinkingaboutit.Butshecouldn,tfindthecouragetogooverto

theneighbor'shouseandaskwhatherlastnamewasorwhoherbirthfatherwas.Untiloneday,

Hillaryendedupseeingthewoman'slastnameononeoftheirdeliveries.Amazingly,itwas

Johnson!Hillarygotexcited,andsheimmediatelycalledherhusbandtolethimknowshehadjust

foundhersister.Harrisknewshehadtoaskthewomandirectly,butshewasworriedaboutbeing

refused.

So,whenJohnsonwentoutoftown,Hillarytextedher,askingaboutherfather?sname.Indeed,

itwasWayneClouse.Thetwowomenspentthatnighttalkingonthephoneandcrying.Neitherof

themcouldbelievethataftersomanyyearstheyfoundeachotherjustbychance.Thetwowomen

havebeeninseparablesincetheyfoundouttheyaresisters.Theyadviseanyonewhoislookingfor

theirbirthfamilytojustknockontheneighbors5door-youneverknow.Itgoestoshowthatyou

shouldalwaysbekindandrespectfultoyourneighbors.Whoknows,theycouldendupbeinga

long-lostrelative.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以情感發(fā)展為線索展開，講述了作者與鄰居關(guān)系不和睦，偶然從鄰居的名字發(fā)

現(xiàn)他們是分別多年的姐妹。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

口由第一段首句內(nèi)容“然而，她總是禁不住想這件事“可知，第一段可描寫作者試圖尋找細(xì)節(jié)

證實(shí)鄰居是否自己分別多年的妹妹。

1由第二段首句內(nèi)容“因此，當(dāng)約翰遜出城的時(shí)候，希拉里給她發(fā)信息，詢問她父親的名字?！?/p>

可知，第二段可描寫作者與鄰居直接溝通，證實(shí)她們確實(shí)就是分別多年的姐妹關(guān)系。

2.續(xù)寫線索：禁不住想這件事——沒有勇氣聯(lián)系——從包裹上看到鄰居的姓——發(fā)短信直接

聯(lián)系——證實(shí)姐妹關(guān)系——再也不能分離——感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

□直奔：gostraightto/gooverto/headdirectfor

口打電話：call/phone/ring

□建議：advise/suggest

情緒類

□擔(dān)心：bewoniedabout/befearfulof

□偶然：bychance/byaccident

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Butshecouldn'tfindthecouragetogoovertotheneighbor'shouseandask

whatherlastnamewasorwhoherbirthfatherwas.（使用動(dòng)詞不定式作定語）

[高分句型2]Hillarytextedher,askingaboutherfather'sname.（使用現(xiàn)在分詞短語做目的狀語）

第四部分寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）

第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）

66.你校英語網(wǎng)站正在開展以“OnlineSafety”為題的討論。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文發(fā)表在該網(wǎng)站上,

內(nèi)容包括：

1.你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)安全的認(rèn)識(shí)；

2.在網(wǎng)上保持安全的建議。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

OnlineSafety

第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫（共1小題，滿分25分）

67.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的短文。

Aschooltalentshowwouldbeheldthreeweekslater.Itoldmybestfriend,Tina,thenews.

Myolderbrotherhadbeenteachingmejuggling（玩雜耍）,andIknewhe'dhelpmewithmyact

fortheshow.Tinaranovertothenoticeboardandreadtheposter.ButwhenTinaaskedmewhat

ouractwasgoingtobe,Ididn'tknowhowtospeakupformyself.Iheldontomybookstightly.

Tinalaughedandpointedtotheposter.Itsaidactscanbeindividuals,partners,orsmallgroups.

Mygrip（緊握）onmybooksnowbecameuncomfortable.IaskedTinaifshewantedtodoanact

withme.Shenodded.Ihesitatedforasecondbeforecontinuing."Tvegotanideaand...“Tina

interruptedmeimmediately.6CYeah,metoo;lefstalkaboutitoverlunch.9,

Duringmath,ItriedtothinkofhowIwouldtellTinathatIwantedtodomyownact.After

all,wewerebestfriends;weshouldbeabletoseeeyetoeyeaboutthis.TheproblemwasTina

alwaystookcharge.Ineverspokeup,andthenIendedupfeelingangry.Idesperatelywantedto

win,butitwasmorethanthat.Iwantedtowinonmyown-withanactthatwasallmine.

Atlunch,Tinastartedtalkingassoonaswesatdown.Shehaditallplannedout.Shesaidwe

couldsingalongtoasonganddoadanceroutine,andhermothercouldmakeuscostumes.

However,Igotupthecourageandtoldheraboutmyjugglingact.Tinasaidshedidn,tthinkshe

couldlearntojuggleinthreeweeksandthatshewouldprobablydroptheballs.Shedidn'twantto

beembarrassed.Ididn'tsayanything,butafterschool,Iranaroundthetrackacoupleoftimes

justtoletoffsteam.

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.續(xù)寫部分分兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。

Paragraph1:Mygrandmotherdroveovertopickmeup.

Paragraph2:Whenwegothome,Itook12deepbreathsbeforeIcalledTina.

答案解析

第四部分寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）

第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）

66.OnlineSafety

Nowadays,onlinesafetyhascausedextensiveconcern.Somecriminalsusenetwork

technologytocreatescams,wheremanypeoplearecheated.WiththepopularityoftheInternet,

I'velearnedmuchabouthowtostaysafeonline.

Firstly,weshouldprotectourprivacyandshouldn'tgiveoutourownpersonalinformation

liketheaddressandthephonenumber.Secondly,ifsvitaltoinstallsomesecureantivirus

software.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldbepoliteontheInternetbecausebeingrudeonlinemay

makeusbecometargetsforacyberbully.

【導(dǎo)語】本文是開放性作文。要求考生寫一篇以“OnlineSafety”為題的討論稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1.你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)安全的認(rèn)識(shí)；2.在網(wǎng)上保持安全的建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

導(dǎo)致：cause一leadto

廣泛的：extensive一wide

擔(dān)憂：concern—>worry

騙局：scam一trick

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：WiththepopularityoftheInternet,Fvelearnedmuchabouthowtostaysafeonline.

拓展句：AstheInternetisbecomingmoreandmorepopularity,Fvelearnedmuchabouthowto

staysafeonline.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型11Somecriminalsusenetworktechnologytocreatescams,wheremany

peoplearecheated.（由where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2】Lastbutnotleast,weshouldbepoliteontheInternetbecausebeingrudeonline

maymakeusbecometargetsforacyberbully.（由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）

第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫（共1小題，滿分25分）

Paragraph1:

Mygrandmotherdroveovertopickmeup.RealizingIwasunusuallyquiet,sheaskedmewhathad

happened.Italkedaboutthetalentshow.Lookingatmyfacefromthemirrorinthefrontofthecar.

Shesaidgently,6（Honey,yourideasdeservetobeconsideredcarefully.ShealsosuggestedItell

thetruth.Hearingwhatshesaid,Ithoughtaboutitoverandoveragain.Ibegantorealizethatit

wouldn'thurttoletTinaknowwhatIreallywantedifshewasatruefriendofmine.Finally,I

madeupmymindtotalktoTina.

Paragraph2:

Whenwegothome,Itook12deepbreathsbeforeIcalledTina.Withbutterfliesinmystomach,I

waitedfbrhertopickupthereceiver.AfterIgotthrough,ItoldherthatIwasgoingtodomy

jugglingactalone.Muchtomyrelief,shesaidOKafterashortsilence.Beforehangingup,she

alsowishedmesuccess.Thenextday,shedescribedheractandItalkedaboutmypractice.We

encouragedeachotherandexchangedideas.Ifounditnotsohardtospeakupformyself.Onthe

dayofthetalentshow,mywonderfulperformancereceivedthunderousapplausefromthe

audience.Itwasthetalentshowthatboostmyconfidenceandmademeintoabetterpersonby

speakingupbravely

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，文章通過講述作者和朋友堤娜對(duì)于學(xué)校即將舉辦的才藝秀

兩個(gè)人的想法不同，因?yàn)橛亚?，作者抑制了自己的想法，但是在祖母的啟發(fā)下，作者終于勇

敢地向堤娜表達(dá)了自己的想法后獨(dú)自表演了節(jié)目并取得了成功的故事。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

口由第一段首句內(nèi)容“祖母開車來接我?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者在祖母的啟發(fā)下決定和堤

娜澄清自己的想法。

口由第二段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)我們到家的時(shí)候，在給線娜打電話之前我做了十二次深呼吸?！翱芍?，

第二段可描寫作者和堤娜提出獨(dú)自表演并取得了成功的經(jīng)過。

2.續(xù)寫線索：作者和祖母表明想法——祖母勸作者堅(jiān)持自己的想法——鼓起勇氣和堤娜提出

獨(dú)自表演——堤娜同意并祝福了作者一一作者的表演取得了成功——感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

□.談?wù)?talkedabout/discussed

□.建議：suggested/advised

□.鼓勵(lì)：encouraged/inspired

情緒類

口.勇敢地：bravely/courageously

口.溫和地：gently/mildly

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].AfterIgotthrough,ItoldherthatIwasgoingtodomyjugglingactalone.

（由連詞after引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句和連接詞that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句作told的賓語）

[高分句型2],Itwasthetalentshowthatboostmyconfidenceandmademeintoabetterperson

byspeakingupbravely.（Itwas...that引導(dǎo)的強(qiáng)調(diào)句結(jié)構(gòu)強(qiáng)調(diào)主語thetalentshow）

第四部分寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）

第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）

假定你是李華。你的外國朋友Mike即將到你的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封郵件，向他

推薦家鄉(xiāng)的民俗文化館（FolkCultureMuseum）。郵件內(nèi)容包括：

1.闡明寫信事由；

2.介紹文化館特色；

3.表示歡迎。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫（共1小題，滿分25分）

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

MyhusbandandIenjoyseeinglifethroughtheeyesofourchildren.It'samazingtowatchas

theydiscovertheirworld.

Whilewewereoutdoorslastsummerenjoyingthesunshine,ouroldestdaughter,Kaytlin,

calledmetothedoorway.Beneaththestepswasababyredsquirrel.

Wewatcheditfromadistance,notwantingtodisturbitorscareoffitsmother.Butaftera

longwait-andlookingallaroundourhouseforsignsofanestoramotherwerealizedthetiny

squirrelwaslost.

Shakingterribly,hewasweak,thin,andhungry.Wetriedtofindanexperttohelp,butthe

InlandFisheriesandWildlifewebsiteshowedthattherewerenowildlifeexpertsinourarea.After

somequickresearch,weconcludedthatthebestwaytogivethesquirrelafightingchancewasto

careforhimourselves.Soatriptothelocalstoreformilkandsupplieswasinorder.More

researchtaughtushowmuchtofeedhim,howtoestimatehisage,howandwhentowean（斷奶）

him,andthatweshouldlethimgoassoonashecouldsurviveonhisown.

OurdaughtersandItookturnsinfeeding“Squirt."Kaytlintookonthemostresponsibility.

Shetaughthimtoeatfromabottle,andshewokeinthenightforhisfeeds.

Toourrelief,Squirtsoonbecamehealthyandstrong.Withinafewweekshebecamemore

active.Hewouldchatter（吱吱叫）fbrhisnextmeal,playfullygoaroundthegirls,andliedownon

themforsleep.Itwasn'tlongbeforehewasweanedontosolidfoodandreintroducedtothewild.

Hisfirstfewvisitstothegreatoutdoorswerefunny.Justlikeachild,hewouldplayinthe

grasssomeandthenrunbacktoKaytlinforsafety.Soonshehadhimclimbingtreesandfinding

nestmaterial.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.

Onenight,Squirtdidn'tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.

答案解析

第四部分寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）

第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）

DearMike,

Howiseverythinggoing?Knowingthatyouaregoingtotravelinmyhometown,Iam

writingtorecommendthelocalFolkCultureMuseum.

Thereisalottodointhemuseum.First,whatwillimpressyoumostisthatavarietyof

culturalhandicraftssuchasmusicalinstruments,farmingtoolsandsoonareexhibitedindifferent

halls.Here,youcanbeinvolvedinmakingcraftslikepaperumbrellasandChineseknots.Whafs

more,withthehelpoftheguideswhoisprofessional,youwillhaveabetterunderstandingofthe

historyanddevelopmentofourfolkculture.

You'rewarmlywelcometovisitthemuseum.I'msureyou'llimmerseyourselfinthefolk

cultureandfallinlovewithit.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外國朋友Mike寫一封郵件，向他推薦家鄉(xiāng)

的民俗文化館

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

介紹：recommend—introduce

各種各樣的：avarietyof^-allkindsof

展示：exhibit-show

涉及：beinvolvedin一relateto

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Knowingthatyouaregoingtotravelinmyhometown,Iamwritingtorecommendthelocal

FolkCultureMuseum.

拓展句：BecauseIknowyouaregoingtotravelinmyhometown,Iamwritingtorecommendthe

localFolkCultureMuseum.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】First,whatwillimpressyoumostisthatavarietyofculturalhandicrafts

suchasmusicalinstruments,farmingtoolsandsoonareexhibitedindifferenthalls.（運(yùn)用了what

引導(dǎo)的主語從句和that引導(dǎo)的表語從句）

【高分句型2】What'smore,withthehelpoftheguideswhoisprofessional,youwillhavea

betterunderstandingofthehistoryanddevelopmentofourfolkculture.（運(yùn)用了who弓|導(dǎo)的定語

從句）

第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫（共1小題，滿分25分）

Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.Butthefamilywasnonetoo

happyabouthisvisit.Theyscoldedandswattedathim.AtfirstSquirtwassounhappythathe

avoidedthem.Andthenhequicklylearnedsomesocialskills.Hewouldtakesomesnackstomeet

them.Forseveraldaysheplayedalldayinthetreessurroundingourhousebutcamedownat

bedtime.

Onenight,Squirtdidn'tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.Ourgirlsfretted.They

wantedtoseekSquirt.Wepreventedthembecauseitwastoodangerous.Butwhenthesunrose

thenextday,therewasSquirt,beggingforfood.Andthatremainedthepatternforweeks.The

experiencewasentertainingandheartwarmingforourfamily.Inthewildandsomewhatsilly

momentsofraisinganorphanedbabysquirrel,ourchildrenlearnedtovalueandappreciatelife.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者一家一天看到一只幼小的迷路的松鼠，他們決

定收養(yǎng)它，看著這只小松鼠從瘦弱幼小，慢慢變的健康活潑，讓作者一家感覺既有趣又溫暖。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

口由第一段首句內(nèi)容“一天，在樹林里，Squirt遇到了一個(gè)灰色松鼠家庭?！笨芍?，第一段可

描寫Squirt遇到這一家灰松鼠的情況，Squirt如何與灰松鼠一家交往。

口由第二段首句內(nèi)容“一天晚上，Squirt沒有回到我們家，下起了大雨。可知，第二段可描

寫作者一家的擔(dān)心，和最后的結(jié)果，以及作者的感悟。

2.續(xù)寫線索：遇到灰松鼠——與灰松鼠一家交往——沒有回家，擔(dān)心它——感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

□責(zé)罵：scold/blame/rebuke

□拍打：swat/slap/hit

□尋找：seek/find/lookfor/searchfor

□阻止：prevent/putastopto/headoff

情緒類

口高興的：happy/delighted

□有趣的：entertaining/delightful/engrossing

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型l]AtfirstSquirtwassounhappythatheavoidedthem.（so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果

狀語從句）

[高分句型2]Butwhenthesunrosethenextday,therewasSquirt,beggingforfbod.（when弓|導(dǎo)的

時(shí)間狀語從句和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）

第四部分寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）

第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）

66.新學(xué)期伊始，學(xué)校英語俱樂部舉行主題為“我家的年夜飯''的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文

參賽，內(nèi)容包括：

1.年夜坂的意義；2.年夜坂前后的活動(dòng)。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

MyFamily'sReunionDinner

第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫（共1小題，滿分25分）

67.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Bobwasashortchildwhopreferredindoortooutdooractivities.Hewasmild-manneredand

mostlykepttohimself.Sittinginthecomeroftheclass,hewasverymuchaloner.

Atthebeginningofthesemester,Bobhadanewclassmate,Alex,whohadjustreturnedto

England.AlexwasassignedaseatnexttoBob.Tohissurprise,withinweeks,hebecamegood

friendswithAlexeventhoughtheywerepolesapartinpersonality.Alexwaspopular,outspoken

andartistic.4tAlexisallthatIwanttobe,“BobthoughttohimselfHebeganlisteningtothemusic

Alexlistenedtoandhavingsimilarhaircut.Heevenquithisdramaclubandstartedplayingthe

onlinegamesthatAlexplayed.Heseemedtohavebeenoutofhisloneliness.

ItwasnotlongbeforeBobwasintroducedtoAlex's"cool"friends.Hetoldhimselfthathe

wouldtryallmeanstobepartofthegroup.Hewouldfollowthemtothefootballgamesandjoin

theartclubafterschoolsohecouldspendmoretimehangingoutwiththem.Bobfollowedthem

aroundlaughingwhentheytoldjokes,agreeingwhentheyhadopinions-mostenthusiasticallyat

theoneshedisagreedwith.Hedidnotdaretodifferinopinionsashewouldnotwantthemto

thinkbadlyofhim.Thiscontinuedforseveralmonths.Atlast,Bobfeltrelievedthathehadfinally

fittedin.

Oneday,BoboverheardAlexandhiscoolfriendstalking.ctBobissuchaloser,oneboy

commentedinaplayfultone.46Hejustfollowsyouaroundtryingtobeyou.Hecopiesyou;he

doesnothaveapersonalityofhisown!^^anotherboyexclaimed.Alexlaughed,tomakematters

worse,headded,t4Thatfellowwearsmeout.Iwishhewouldleavemealone.Hethinksweare

bestfriends.Athoroughfbol!”

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Paragraph1:

Bobstoodstilltothegroundandcouldnotbelievehisears.

Paragraph2:

Bobdecidedtochangehimselfafterhearinghismotherswords.

答案解析

第四部分寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）

第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）

66.Myfamily'sreuniondinner

HavingreuniondinnerisoneofthemostsignificantcustomsduringtheSpringFestival,

whichsymbolizesthereuniontimeforpeopletosaygoodbyetotheoldandwelcometheNew

Yearwithfullexpectation.Myfamily'sreuniondinneralwaysbringsbackbeautifulmemoriesto

me.

Unlikeinpreviousyears,myfamiliesfinallygatheredtogetheronLunarNewYear'sEvethis

year!Onthatday,whileeagerlywaitingforthereturnofmycousins,Ihelpedmyparentsto

preparethedinner.Iwenttothesupermarkettobuytheingredientsandmadesomedumplings.

Afterthedinner,weexcitedlysetoffthefireworks,watchedtheSpringFestivalGalaandhappily

welcomedtheNewYeartogether.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一篇主題為“我家的年夜飯''的短文，參加學(xué)

校英語俱樂部的征文活動(dòng)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

有重大意義的：significant一important/meaningful

代表，象征：symbolize一represent

期待：expectation—>anticipation

最終：finally—>eventually

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Unlikeinpreviousyears,myfamiliesfinallygatheredtogetheronLunarNewYear'sEve

thisyear!

拓展句：Whatmadeitdifferentfrompreviousyearswasthatmyfamiliesfinallygatheredtogether

onLunarNewYear'sEvethisyear!

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Havingreuniondinnerisoneofthemostsignificantcustomsduringthe

SpringFestival,whichsymbolizesthereuniontimeforpeopletosaygoodbyetotheoldand

welcometheNewYearwithfullexpectation.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Onthatday,whileeagerlywaitingforthereturnofmycousins,Ihelpedmyparents

topreparethedinner.（運(yùn)用了省略的時(shí)間狀語從句）

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67.參考范文：

Paragraph1:

Bobstoodstilltothegroundandcouldnotbelievehisears.Tremblingandsobbing,he

collapsedontheground,feelingaloneandbetrayed.Hehadnochoicebuttocryallthewayback

home.Seeinghismother,hecouldn'tconcealhissorrow,pouringtheincidentouttoher,who

wouldalwaysbethereforhimwheneverhefeltdown.Strokinghertremblingboy,themothersaid

gently,"Justbeyourself,Son!Peoplewilllikeyouforwhoyouare."Bobhadheardtheremarksa

milliontimesbefore,yethenevertrulygotthepoint.Suddenly,itallclicked.

Paragraph2:

Bobdecidedtochangehimselfafterhearinghismotherswords.Heboughtanewschoolbag

andchoseahaircuthefancied.Hedroppedhisartclassandjoinedthedramaclub.Hemadenew

friendswholikedhimfbrwhohewas.Herediscoveredhimself.Ifhehadnotbeengiventhe

chance,hemighthavebeentooconcernedwith“fittingin“desperatelytoexperiencesomeofthe

"best"timesofhislife.Itdawnedonhimthatdespitethepainhefeltthatday,itwasagiftthey

hadgivenhim,whichtaughthimtobehimself.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了性格不合群的Bob和新來的同學(xué)Alex成為了朋友，

Bob努力模仿和迎合Alex,本以為用自己的主動(dòng)贏得了Alex的友誼，結(jié)果有一天，Bob無

意中聽到Alex和他的朋友們?cè)谡務(wù)摗癇ob真是個(gè)失敗者'“'是個(gè)十足的傻瓜

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

口由第一段首句內(nèi)容“Bob一動(dòng)不動(dòng)地站在那里，簡直不敢相信自己的耳朵''可知，第一段可

描寫B(tài)ob的反應(yīng)并將此事告訴了媽媽，媽媽鼓勵(lì)他做自己。

口由第二段首句內(nèi)容“Bob聽了媽媽的話后決定改變自己''可知，第二段可描寫B(tài)ob的改變過

程和感悟。

2.續(xù)寫線索：

哭泣一媽媽鼓勵(lì)一恍然大悟一做出改變一感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

口哭泣：cry/weep

□選擇：choose/select

□關(guān)心：beconcernedwith/careabout

情緒類

□悲傷：sorrow/sadness

□沮喪：down/depressed

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Seeinghismother,hecouldn'tconcealhissorrow,pouringtheincidentout

toher,whowouldalwaysbethereforhimwheneverhefeltdown.（由關(guān)系代詞who弓|導(dǎo)非限制

性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Itdawnedonhimthatdespitethepainhefeltthatday,itwasagifttheyhadgiven

him,whichtaughthimtobehimself,（that引導(dǎo)主語從句和which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）

第四部分寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）

第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）

66.新華中學(xué)近期組織了校園勞動(dòng)周（CampusLaborWeek）活動(dòng)。假定你是學(xué)校英語報(bào)記者。

請(qǐng)寫一篇簡短的英文報(bào)道。內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動(dòng)的時(shí)間與地點(diǎn)；

2.活動(dòng)的過程；

3.你的感想。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫（共1小題，滿分25分）

67.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Imustadmit,Ihaven'talwayslikedanimals.Infact,Idistrustedthemgreatlywhilegrowing

up,andIstillfeartheonesIdon'tknowpersonally.Whatsetmybeliefsinstonewasbeing

attacked-notoncebutmanytimes,includingthesummeraftersecondgradewhenIwasbittenby

arabbit.Then,whenIwasnineandridingmydirtbikedowntheroad,alargedogchargedmeand

triedtobitemyankle.Afterallthosenegativeexperiences,therewasonethingIknewforsure:

Allcreatures,greatandsmall,werenofriendsofmine.

AftercollegeinCalifornia,IreturnedtolivethesinglelifeinLasVega.ThenImetLisa.In

notimeatall,wefellinlove,marriedandmovedintoanewhouse.Despitemyavoidanceof

animals,LisahadadogcalledBailey.Baileydidn'tlikeme,buthetoleratedmyexistenceoncehe

realizedIwasn'tgoinganywhere.

Thingschangedasspringcame.Wewelcomedanewmemberofourfamily:oursonEvan.

OneeveningEvangrabbedholdofthedog'stail.Theirritateddogpausedandturnedtolookat

hisstucktailbutwaitedpatientlyuntilbeingreleased.StillthestoriesI'dheardofanimals

attackingbabiesworriesme.

Thenmyworstfearoccurred.Isatonthecouch（沙發(fā)）readingafteralongdaywhilemy

wifeworkedatthedining-roomtablepayingthebills.IsawEvancrawlacrossthefamily-room

carpetashemadehiswaybehindthecouch.Oneminute,allwasquietandthenBaileyenteredthe

roomandheadedtowhereEvanhadcrawled.InearlyjumpedoutofmyskinwhenIheardthe

dogstartafearfulbarkingbehindme.

注意：

L續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Throwingthebookaway,Irushedaroundthecouchwithgreatfear.

Havingwitnessedourdogkillingascorpion（蝎子）andsavingmyson,Iwasspeechless.

第四部分寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）

第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）

66.Onepossibleversion:

Aimingtoimprovestudents?physicalquality,ourschoollaunchedanactivitythemed

“CampusLaborWeek”.ItwasheldfromMay7thto11thinourschool.Somelecturesconcerning

laborskillsweregivenonthefirstday,whichbenefitedusalot.Cuttingtreesandwatering

flowerswereattractionstoSenioron