2023~2024學(xué)年 Unit 4 Reading for Writing高中英語(yǔ)課件

Unit4ReadingforWritingWriteasummary1243knowmoreaboutthenaturaldisastersandtheireffects影響;mastertheformat(格式)andthemaincontentofabrief簡(jiǎn)要的summary;learntorespectandprotectourenvironment;cultivate(培養(yǎng))thecritical(批判的)thinking.LearningobjectivesTsunamiWarmingupTsunamiWhatis“tsunami”?

Thegreatwaves“tsunami”

isaseriesof一系列travelingoceanwavesofextremelylonglengthgenerated生成，引發(fā)byearthquakesoccurring發(fā)生blow在...之下orneartheocean,submarine海底的landslides山崩，滑坡anderuptions爆發(fā).DamageAPacific-widetsunamigeneratedbythe1960ChileEarthquake.1960年智利地震引發(fā)的太平洋海嘯。TheGreatAlaskanEarthquakeof1964produceddeadlytsunamiwavesinAlaska,OregonandCalifornia.1964年的阿爾薩坎大地震在阿拉斯加、俄勒岡和加利福尼亞引發(fā)了致命的海嘯。Afterscanningthematerials,answerthequestions.1.Whatisatsunami?Whatcausesit?2.Whatdamagecanitcause?Harborwave.Itiscausedbytheearthquake.Itcancrash碾碎overeverythinginitsway,buildingsandevenawhole全部的city.Besides,itcancause導(dǎo)致manydeathstoo.Predictwhatthetextisaboutaccordingtothetitleandthepicture.Lead-inItisanewsreport新聞報(bào)道.Itmightbeaboutthebigdamagethetsunamicaused.0201031.Whendidthetsunamihappen?2.Whatcausedthetsunami?3.Whywoulditbedifficulttodeliverfoodandsupplies?Ithappenedon26December,2004Averypowerfulearthquakeof9.0-magnitudewhichhappenedundertheseaoff遠(yuǎn)離thewestcoastofSumatraIsland蘇門(mén)答臘島inIndonesia.Dangerousconditionsanddamaged被破壞的roadswillmakeitdifficulttodeliverfoodandsupplies.Readingpart添加標(biāo)題AddthetitleClickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent添加標(biāo)題AddthetitleClickheretoaddyourtextcontent，ClickheretoaddyourtextcontentClickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，ClickheretoaddyourtextcontentClickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，ClickheretoaddyourtextcontentClickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，ClickheretoaddyourtextcontentClickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，ClickheretoaddyourtextcontentWhat:

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Where:How:Thetsunamicausedover6500peopledeathsandcausedgreatdamagetobuildings,carsandroads.On26December,2004,Thetsunamiwascausedbyapowerfulearthquake.InIndonesia,India,Thailand,Malaysia,andatleastfourothercountries.Foreignaidisorganized,butsupplies物資aredifficulttodeliverbecauseofthedamagedroads.MainpointsinanewsreportReadthesummary總結(jié)ofthenewsreportandcheckthemainpointsitincludeMainpointsinsamplesummaryWhatmainpointsdoesitinclude?(Ex.2onpage55)On26December2004,atsunamikilledmorethan6500tourists,fishermenandotherlocalsinSoutheastAsia.Thousandsofpeoplearemissingandthenumberofdeathsisexpectedtogrow.Thedamagecausedbythetsunamiismakingitdifficultforrescue救援workerstohelpthesurvivors幸存者.dateeventplaceeffectcauseWritingstyleWhatmakesthenewsreportbelievable?Thespotpicture現(xiàn)場(chǎng)圖片,theserioustitle嚴(yán)肅的標(biāo)題,thenumberscited引用的數(shù)字,andthefactreportedinanobjective客觀的manner方式

areallwhatmakethenewsreportmorebelievable.02032.Ittellsthemainideasandonlylists列出themostimportantinformation.1.Asummaryisashortstatement陳述.3.Itdoesn’tliterally文字地copytheoriginal原本的text,whichrequiresustowriteinourownwords.01FeaturesofsummarySummary

概要是一篇較長(zhǎng)文章本質(zhì)思想的簡(jiǎn)潔重述，它要求用盡量少的語(yǔ)言對(duì)原文的主旨進(jìn)行復(fù)述。概要不是簡(jiǎn)單的換句話說(shuō)，更不是評(píng)論，而是作者思想中最基本部分的準(zhǔn)確再現(xiàn)。Summary

《考試說(shuō)明》中規(guī)定概要寫(xiě)作閱卷時(shí)按5個(gè)檔次給分，其中最高檔次第五檔(21-25points)的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是：1.理解準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋全部要點(diǎn)；2.能準(zhǔn)確使用相應(yīng)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；3.完全使用自己的語(yǔ)言；4.有效使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使完成的概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。3211.定位——查找核心信息

通過(guò)閱讀定位語(yǔ)篇的核心信息，包括核心單詞，核心短語(yǔ)和核心句子。(句子為主，以單詞和短語(yǔ)為輔)3.核查——添加關(guān)聯(lián)詞，檢查句子的連貫性

核查標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法、連接詞及字?jǐn)?shù)，優(yōu)先考慮使用較短的連接詞，如：but，then，later等。

寫(xiě)作方法:2.改寫(xiě)——用自己的語(yǔ)言改寫(xiě)信息

在核心信息的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行語(yǔ)言表達(dá)形式的改寫(xiě)，對(duì)原文的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)形式盡可能實(shí)現(xiàn)大規(guī)模的改變。改寫(xiě)過(guò)程中，原則上字?jǐn)?shù)不超過(guò)原句，不改變?cè)牡倪壿嫿Y(jié)構(gòu)，充分考慮語(yǔ)句壓縮。steponesteptwostepthreestepfourReadthetextandwritealist清單ofthemaindetails.Writedownthemainideaofeachparagraphbasedonthedetailsabove.Organizetheideasanddraft打草稿yoursummary.Exchange交換drafts.Writingasummary：writeasummaryforthetextonpage50.StepI.Readthetextandwritealistofthemaindetails.◎Strange奇怪的thingshappenedinthecountrysidebeforetheearthquake;◎Anearthquakehit_________Chinaon28July1976;◎________________________________________________________________________◎____________________________________________________________◎________________________________________________________________________◎________________________________________________________________________TangshanThenumberofpeoplewhowerekilledorbadlyinjuredinthequakewasmorethan400,000;Nearlyeverythinginthecitywasdestroyed;Soldiers士兵andmedicalworkers醫(yī)務(wù)工作者cametohelpthepeoplewhohadgreatlossandtotryandfindsurvivors幸存者;Withstrongsupport支持fromthegovernmentandthetireless不知疲倦的effortsofthecity'speople,anewTangshanwasbuiltupontheearthquakeruins廢墟.StepII.Writedownthemainideaofeachparagraphbasedonthedetailsabove.

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Para3:Para4:Para5:StrangethingshappenedinthecountrysideofHebei,China.AstrongearthquakehitTangshan,andmanypeoplewerekilledorinjured.Thecitywasgreatlyaffectedandnearlydestroyed.Therescueworkbegansoonafterthequake.Withstrongsupportfromthegovernmentandthecity'speople,thenewcityofTangshanwasbuilt.Step-III.Organizetheideasanddraftyoursummary.SampleWritingForseveraldays,strangethingsoccurred發(fā)生inthecountrysideofnortheastern東北部Hebei.Then,on28July1976,anearthquakehitTangshancity.Thecitywasgreatlyaffected影響andnearlydestroyed摧毀.Manypeoplewerekilledorinjured.The