高考英語讀后續(xù)寫專題14 讀后續(xù)寫句子改寫之名詞化

專題14句子提升思維之名詞化一、讀后續(xù)寫中抽象名詞的運用文本賞析:Atthat,MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny’sspeechfirst.Jennymadeherwaytotheplatformwitheveryconfidence.Wordsbegantofloodoutofher.“Howcouldshemakeit?We’veneverseenJennygivesoterrificaspeech.”Whisperswentaroundtheclassroom,andevenMissWalkernoddedwithapproval.ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.Relieved,Jennytoldeveryonethetruth,andespeciallythemagicofthewatch.“Butit’sjustanordinarywatchwithnomagic”,Leeannounced.[80words]文中多次運用到抽象名詞作主語：Wordsbegantofloodoutofher.Whisperswentaroundtheclassroom,andeven...ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.二、概要寫作中抽象名詞的使用（一）despite的使用1.ThoughMikewasremindedmanytimes,apparentlyhedidn'treturnthemoney.ManytimesthoughMikewasreminded,apparentlyhedidn‘treturnthemoney.(變倒裝句）拔高：概寫中although/though換成despite第一種方法把動詞變成doing。Mikeapparentlydidnotreturnthemoney,despitebeingremindedrepeatedly.第二種方法把動詞轉(zhuǎn)化成相應(yīng)的名詞。Mikeapparentlydidnotreturnthemoney,despiterepeatedreminders.2.Hehasbeencriticizedmanytimes,butheremainsthesame.Despiteourrepeatedcriticisms,heremainsunchanged.3.Althoughhefailedmanytimes,hedidn’tgiveup.Despitenumerousfailures,hedidn’tgiveup.4.Hedidn’thaveenoughexperience,buthegotthejob.Despitehislackofexperience,hegotthejob.（二）witness的使用1.Inthepastfouryears,ourproductionhasincreased.Thepastfouryearshaswitnessedanincreaseinproduction.（時間作主語）2.Manygreathistoriceventshappenedinthecity.Thecityhadwitnessedmanygreathistoricevents.（地點名詞作主語）（三）其它常見抽象名詞的使用1.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Views

differfrompersontoperson.Opinionsvarygreatlyamongpeople.2.Moreover,theyspendlesstimewithyoungerchildrenbecauseofschoolreforms.Moreover,

lesstimespentwithyoungerchildrenisattributedtoschoolreforms.3.Progresscanbebeneficialtopeopleonlywhentheyaccepttechnologyandpursueefficiency.Progresscanbebeneficialtopeopleonlywiththeiracceptanceoftechnologyandpursuitofefficiency.（此處介詞with后的賓語名詞化）4.Anotherreasonisthattheyarenotinterestedinit.Lackofinterestisanotherreason.5.Weshouldconsider

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6.Peoplewithgoodhabitsareefficientwhilethosewithbadhabitsareinefficient.Goodhabitslead

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opposite.7.Itisgoodfortheplanttobeexposedtosunlight.Exposuretosunlightisagoodfortheplant.8.Therearemanypeoplewhocomplainofhousingshortages.Housingshortagesarousegreatcomplaint.9.Ifyoucomparethetwomethodscarefully,youwillfindthedifference.Carefulcomparisonofthetwomethodswillshowyouthedifference.三、更多用法舉例Sleepdidn‘tvisitheralthoughthesilenceofadeadworldwasonthejungle.盡管叢林里是死一般的寂靜,她還是不能入睡。Misthadcreptinfromthesea.薄霧從海面上彌漫過來了。Achillofhorrorsuddenlysweptoverhim.他突然感到不寒而栗。Despairseizedhimatthethoughtofherlivingaloneinthesmallvillage.想起她一個人住在小村莊里，他感到絕望。Couragedesertedhim.他沒有了勇氣。Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.我突然想到一個好主意Bynowoptimismhadgivenwaytodoubt.現(xiàn)在，樂觀變成了懷疑。Angerchokedmywords.我氣的說不出話。Manyyearsofhardworkchangedhergrandfathergreatly.多年的辛勞使她爺爺大大變樣了。Hisnameescapedmeforthemoment.我一時記不起他的名字。Hisnameslippedmymind…四、句子翻譯練習(xí)：我忘了確切的日期。（exactdate）Jack周一早晨精神萎靡。（miserable）他的工作使他不可能比每隔一個周末一次的頻率更加經(jīng)常地回家。你吃了這藥就會好些。一見到那個孤兒，我就想到了她的父母。天氣太壞，我們無法動身。Shelosthercourage.

她失去了勇氣。五年來，環(huán)境狀況逐步好轉(zhuǎn)。他突然想出了一個好主意。我心里熱呼呼的。一想起這事他就狂躁得無法工作。他悲傷之極。他非常貪戀錢財。他先是驚訝，接著笑了起來，笑聲越來越響。他失職了，這說明他沒有資格做這件事。他讀書，其樂無窮。如果別人打擾你時，你表現(xiàn)出一幅寬容的樣子，別人就容易利用你的善良、占用你的時間。這個問題如果不解決，勢必嚴(yán)重?fù)p害兩國關(guān)系。我有急事，所以沒去看你。黃昏的時候，她獨自在街上哭泣。這樣的遷徙在世界上史無前例。我立刻對他產(chǎn)生了一種崇敬和感激之情。得知老人的經(jīng)歷后，我們對他深感同情。她笑得說不出話來。當(dāng)他經(jīng)濟困難的時候，他絕望極了。他開始感到驚恐萬狀。這里的工作條件太差，已經(jīng)對他的身體健康帶來影響。他心事重重，眉頭緊鎖。答案：1.Theexactdatehasescapedme.（slippedoutofmymind)2.MondaymorningfoundJackmiserable.3.Hisworkmadeitimpossibleforhimtogethomeoftenerthan

everyotherweekend.4.Thismedicinewillmakeyoufeelbetter.5.WheneverIseetheorphan,Irememberherparents.----Thesightoftheorphanalwaysremindsmeofherparents.6.Wecouldnotstartbecauseofbadweather.-------Badweatherpreventedusfromstarting.7.Hercouragefailedher.

8.Overthepastfiveyears,theenvironmenthasseengradualimprovement.9.Agoodideasuddenlypoppedintohismind.10.Warmthfloodedovermyheart.11.Thethoughtofitmadehimsowildthathecouldn'twork.12.Hisgriefknewnobounds.13.Hisloveofmoneyknowsnobounds.14.Hisamazementturnsintolaughter,whichbuildssteadily.15.Hisfailureindutyshowsheisnotqualifiedforthejob.16.Readingsupplieshimwithendlessentertainment.17.Yourtoleranceofinterruptionscanallowotherstotakeadvantageofyourtimeandgoodwill.18.Failuretosettlethisissueisboundtoimpairtherelationsbetweenthetwocountriesseriously.19.Urgentbusinesspreventedmefromcallingonyou.20.Duskfoundhercryingcompanionlessinthestreets.21.Neverbeforehadtheworldseensuchamovement.22.Admirationandgratitudesweptthroughme.23.Alloursympathywenttoth