高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作表達(dá)微技能（全國(guó)）14日記類

14日記類(2012年，上海卷）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.上周一，你在一所小學(xué)觀摩了小女孩Amy所在班級(jí)的兩堂繪畫課（如圖所示），回家后你用英語寫了一篇日記，內(nèi)容包括：1.對(duì)兩堂繪畫課的具體描述；2.你從中獲得的啟發(fā)?！緟⒖即鸢浮緿ate:June8,2012Lastweek,Isatinontwopaintingclassesataprimaryschool.Inoneclassastudentdippedherfeetininkandmadeapaintingoutoffootprints.Bycontrast,thesamestudentusedabrushtomakeabreath-takinglandscapepainting—sovividthatonecouldalmostsmelltherefreshingriversandhearthechirpingbirds.Thoughstandinginstarkcontrast,thetwopaintingsbothintriguedme.Infact,theyremindedmeofwhatFacebookfounderMarkZuckerbergsaid,“Keepyoureyesonthestarsandyourfeetontheground.”It’sthismaximonsuccessthatlendsinsightintothetwopaintings.Thefirstpaintingrepresentsthatweshouldremaingroundedandbecautiousofbeingcarriedawaywithtemporarysuccess.Akitestaysafloatbecauseit’sattachedtoareel;otherwiseitwillinstantlyloseitsbalancebeforeeventuallycrashingintotheground.Soitiswithus.However,successrequiresmorethanbeingsimplydown-to-earth,withaloftyidealbeinganothercrucialfactor.Sograndwasthesceneryportrayedinthesecondpaintingthatitembodiedthereachofourdreams.Insteadofignoringthegleamoflight,thesparkofwisdomthatflashesacrossourmindandworshippingthelusteroftheskyofgeniuses,we’dbebetterofftrustingthatthegleamandthesparkwillonedayshineasbrightlyasasearchlightifwehavefaithinourselves.Thepaintingstaughtmetodreambigandactsmall.AndIbelieve,bydoingso,thewarmlightofsuccesswillcascadeintomylife.【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇看圖寫話，體裁是日記的形式。內(nèi)含兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)：介紹對(duì)兩堂繪畫課的具體描述和你從中獲得的啟發(fā)。文章要緊緊圍繞這兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)展開。各個(gè)要點(diǎn)表達(dá)要清晰，要點(diǎn)要根據(jù)圖的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行具體描述。然后談?wù)勛约旱膯l(fā)。層次要分明，銜接要自然。需要考生自己做合理的聯(lián)想，啟發(fā)要有新意，內(nèi)容要符合圖的邏輯。日記分為記事型、議論型、描寫型和抒情型。建議大家在學(xué)習(xí)寫日記的過程中，可按以下步驟進(jìn)行：

①將一天所經(jīng)歷的主要事情和過程依次簡(jiǎn)要地記下來，不附加任何感情色彩，這是最簡(jiǎn)單的記日記的方法;

②閱讀別人的日記，并利用所學(xué)過的句型來表達(dá)個(gè)人在一天中觀察到的或感受到的事情。例如：March12th，20xx，TuesdaySunny(Fine)

TodayisTreePlantingDay.At7∶30inthemorning，allthestudentsinourclassmetattheschoolgate.Wewalkedtothepark.MissGaoandotherteacherswentandworkedwithus.Allthestudentsworkedveryhard，andweplantedabout200trees.Thoughweweredirtyandtired，westillfeltveryhappy.

模板①M(fèi)arch12th,2020,TuesdaySunny(fine)

Ｍyparentsareteachers,sotheywantmetoreadmorebooks.ＷhenＩstartedtolearnreading,theyboughtmealotofnovelbooks,suchasＨarryＰotter,ＡliceＩntheＷo(hù)nderlandandsoon.Ｉsawthemoviefirst,andthenＩwouldhavetheinteresttoreadthenovels.ＩfoundthatthenovelwerewithmuchmoredetailsandＩwasabsorbedinit.Ｔheliterarybooksnotonlydescribedanattractiveworld,butthemoreimportantthingwasthatitenlightenedmetobeabettergirl.WhatlearnedfromthesenovelshelpsmetobeindependentandＩhavemyownthinking.

模板②December,10,SundayFine

ThisafternoonIwenttotheparkwithWangNeng,wheretherewasapond.Wesawseveralboysskatingthere.Suddenlyweheardacryforhelp.Oneoftheboyshadfallenintothewater.WangNengjumpedintotheicywaterimmediatelyandmanagedtopulltheboytosafety.Thentheboywasgivenfirstaidandsooncametohimself.Theboy’sparentscamesoonaftertheyreceivedthephonecall.TheywereverythankfultoWangNeng,whowastremblingwithcold.日記是每日生活的記載，是一種記事文體。

一、基本要求

1.注意日期、星期和天氣的書寫位置

英語日記日期和星期要寫在正文的左上角，其順序多是“星期+月、日、年”（也有把星期放在后面的），如“20XX年11月22日，星期一”可寫為“ＭondayＮovember22，20XX或Ｎovember22，20XXＭonday”。天氣情況應(yīng)寫在正文的右上角，如：Ｆine，Ｒainy，Ｃloudy，Ｗindy等。

2.關(guān)于題目的書寫

在日期和天氣的下一行中間可以寫上日記小題目，也可以不寫題目。

3.關(guān)于正文的書寫

正文是關(guān)于一天生活的記載，也是日記的主習(xí)題。在書寫正文時(shí)要做到：

1）要選擇當(dāng)天感受最深刻、最有意義的事件來描述，不要寫成簡(jiǎn)單的流水帳；

2）日記的內(nèi)容多是親身經(jīng)歷和耳聞目睹的事情，所以要用第一人稱來寫；

3）日記多是在當(dāng)天晚上來記述當(dāng)天發(fā)生過的事情，因?yàn)閯?dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)常使用過去時(shí)，但使用時(shí)必須靈敏掌握并且要簡(jiǎn)明扼要，層次清楚，寫出真實(shí)感。

二、主要格式

英文日記通常由書端和正文兩個(gè)部分組成。日記常以第一人稱記下當(dāng)天生活中的所見、所聞、所做或所想的事情。中、英文的日記三格式大致一樣。英語日記的書端是專門寫日記的日期、星期和天氣的。左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。右上角寫上當(dāng)天的天氣情況，如：Ｓunny,Ｆine,Ｒainy,Ｗindy,Ｓnowy,Ｃloudy等。

1.日期表達(dá)有多種形式

英語日記年、月、日都寫時(shí)，通常以月、日、年為順序，月份可以縮寫，日和年用逗號(hào)隔開。例如：December18,2019或者Ｄec.18,2019

2.星期的特殊性

星期也可以省略不寫，可將其放在日期前或后，星期和日期之間不用標(biāo)點(diǎn)，但要空一格，星期也可縮寫。如：

Saturday,October22nd,2019；October22nd,2019Saturday

3.天氣情況必不可少

天氣一般用一個(gè)形容詞如:Sunny,Fine,Rainy,Snowy等表示。寫在日期之后，用逗號(hào)隔開，位于日記的右上角。如：

Saturday,Ｍarch4,2020,Windy；1stJanuary,2019,Fine

三、日記的類型和訓(xùn)練

日記分為記事型、議論型、描寫型和抒情型。建議大家在學(xué)習(xí)寫日記的過程中，可按以下步驟進(jìn)行：

①將一天所經(jīng)歷的主要事情和過程依次簡(jiǎn)要地記下來，不附加任何感情色彩，這是最簡(jiǎn)單的記日記的方法；

②閱讀別人的日記，并利用所學(xué)過的句型來表達(dá)個(gè)人在一天中觀察到的或感受到的事情。1．每年3月是植樹活動(dòng)月，假定你是李華，你們班開展了一次植樹活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，寫一篇日記，敘述記錄這次植樹活動(dòng)，并在英語課上向同學(xué)們展示。1．活動(dòng)目的：親近自然，美化環(huán)境；2．具體活動(dòng)過程；3．活動(dòng)感受。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李華，你正在英國(guó)某高中參加你們學(xué)校的“交換生”項(xiàng)目，請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇日記，敘述你在新學(xué)校第一周的學(xué)習(xí)生活。內(nèi)容包括：1.學(xué)校印象;2.同學(xué)印象;3.個(gè)人感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。September12th，SaturdaySunny____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是高一學(xué)生李華，高中生活已經(jīng)過了一周，一切都很新鮮。在此，你寫下一篇日記，記下了你對(duì)高中新生活的感受，并制訂計(jì)劃調(diào)整自己。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．日記的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。WednesdaySept.7SunnyNow,myhighschoollifehasbeenonforaweek.Highschoollifegavemethefeelingthat___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

IthinkIwilladaptmyselftothehighschoollifeassoonaspossible.4．假如你是李華，今天你參加了班級(jí)春游活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英文日記。內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、參加人員；2.活動(dòng)過程；

3.活動(dòng)意義。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。AnUnforgettableSpringOuting______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李華，本周你校開展了“記錄美好生活”系列活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇日記，記錄你本周的美好生活。內(nèi)容包括：1.你的生活情況；2.談?wù)勀愕母惺堋Ｗ⒁猓?、日記的格式已給出；2、寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；3、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。SaturdayJanuary16th,2022

SunnyDearDiary,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假定你是李華，進(jìn)入高中后，你加入了羽毛球俱樂部。請(qǐng)你以日記的形式記錄，向校英文報(bào)投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.參加的原因；2.安排或活動(dòng)；3.收獲及感受。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thursdayl5December____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假定你是李華，昨天你和你的美國(guó)朋友Mary一起去市圖書館參加高中生如何交友的講座。請(qǐng)你據(jù)此寫一篇英文日記。要點(diǎn)：1.時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2.講座內(nèi)容；3.參加講座收獲。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dec.6,2021_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．今天下午，你校手工俱樂部（handcraftclub）邀請(qǐng)民間藝人來校給你們傳授了燈籠制作技術(shù)。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語日記，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)過程；2.你的感受。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：lanternmakingactivityMay15SundaySunny____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．你是校陶藝社團(tuán)（potteryclub）的成員李華，參加了10月18日（周二）的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)寫一篇日記，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；3.活動(dòng)感受。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答；3.開頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Tuesday18OctoberTodayisourpotteryday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假定你是李華，上周日你和班里同學(xué)游覽參觀了長(zhǎng)城。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇日記，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：1.游覽心情；2.具體見聞；3.事后感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫Myweekend_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．假如你是李華，一周前參加了夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，結(jié)識(shí)了安靜、喜歡讀書的Lily和外向、幽默的Rose兩位室友，并成為好友，在一起愉快地度過了一周的時(shí)光。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇日記，描述這一周的夏令營(yíng)生活。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：臥室bedchamberFriday,16August,2019hotHowtimeflies!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．今天下午，你校手工俱樂部(handcraftclub)邀請(qǐng)民間藝人來校給你們傳授了燈籠制作技術(shù)。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語日記，內(nèi)容包括：1．活動(dòng)過程；2．你的感受。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。May15SundaySunny________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．假定你是李華，寒假期間，你參加了WWF舉辦的為期一周的野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)冬令營(yíng)。請(qǐng)你寫一篇日記分享這段有意義的經(jīng)歷。1.活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)及內(nèi)容；2.你對(duì)野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)的看法和感悟。注意：短文詞數(shù)80字左右。參考詞匯：冬令營(yíng)：wintercampSunday,8January,Sunny______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14．今天下午，你班在學(xué)校操場(chǎng)上組織了一次制作并放風(fēng)箏的室外班會(huì)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語寫一篇日記，記錄本次活動(dòng)經(jīng)歷。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.你對(duì)風(fēng)箏的喜愛；2.描述放風(fēng)箏的過程；3.你的感受。注意：1.短文詞數(shù)不少于100詞。2.開頭部分已寫好，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。3.文中不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。March3,2022

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SunnyInChina,thereisalonghistorytoflyakiteinthespringwhileusuallytheweatherandwindaresosuitableforthisleisure.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案1．March12SunnyTodayourclassheldatreeplantingactivitywhichaimedtogetclosetonatureandbeautifytheenvironment.Inthemorning,wetookabustoWesternHillwhichis5kilometersawayfromourschool.Onarrival,webegantoworkimmediately.Somewerediggingholes.Somewerecarryingandplantingyoungtrees.Otherswerewateringthem.Aftergettingtheworkdone,weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotectthetrees.Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.Beforeleavingwetooksomephotostorecordouraction.Throughthisactivity,welearnedthatitwasourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生就“班級(jí)開展了一次植樹活動(dòng)”一事，寫一篇日記，敘述記錄這次植樹活動(dòng)，并在英語課上向同學(xué)們展示?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累舉辦：hold→conduct立即：immediately→innotime挖掘：dig→unearth責(zé)任：duty→responsibility2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.拓展句：Whenwesawthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Todayourclassheldatreeplantingactivitywhichaimedtogetclosetonatureandbeautifytheenvironment.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)【高分句型2】Throughthisactivity,welearnedthatitwasourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)2．September12th,SaturdaySunnyOneweekhaspassedsinceIcametothisschoolasanexchangestudent.ItisthefirsttimethatIhavebeenawayfrommyparentsalone,soIfelthomesick.However,Isoongotusedtothenewenvironment.Tobeginwith,thecampusisquitedifferentfrommyschoolathome.Itliesatthefootofamountainwherethereisnaturalsceneryallaround.Asformyclassmates,theyaresofriendlythattheymakemelesshomesick.IthinkI’llspendthisperiodofstudyingherehappilyandIcansurelybenefitmuchfrommystayhere.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生用英語寫一篇日記，敘述自己在新學(xué)校第一周的學(xué)習(xí)生活。內(nèi)容包括:你對(duì)新學(xué)校、同學(xué)的印象個(gè)人的感受?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累到達(dá)；cometo→getto/arriveat然而；however→nevertheless首先；tobeginwith→firstofall受益；benefit→beofbeneficial2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句:Tobeginwith,thecampusisquitedifferentfrommyschoolathome.拓展句:Tobeginwith,whatimpressesmeisthatthecampusisquitedifferentfrommyschoolathome.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Itliesatthefootofamountainwherethereisnaturalsceneryallaround.(運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)【高分句型2】IthinkI’llspendthisperiodofstudyingherehappilyandIcansurelybenefitmuchfrommystayhere.(運(yùn)用了省略that的賓語從句）3．Onepossibleversion：WednesdaySept.7SunnyNow,myhighschoollifehasbeenonforaweek.Highschoollifegavemethefeelingthattherewasverymuchfreetime.Firstly,Imakeaplaneveryday,andfollowitstrictly.Beforegoingtobedatnight,IwillcheckwhetherIhavefinishedit.Ifnot,I’llgivemyselfalittlepunishment,suchasplayinglesscomputergamesontheweekend.Secondly,I’llpreparetheseconddaycourseafterfinishingmyhomework.Inaword,Iwilloftensummarizemylearningtofindproblemsaperiodlater.AndifIdoitwell,Iwillrewardmyself.IthinkIwilladaptmyselftothehighschoollifeassoonaspossible.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是高一學(xué)生李華，高中生活已經(jīng)過了一周，一切都很新鮮。在此，你寫下一篇日記，記下了你對(duì)高中新生活的感受，并制訂計(jì)劃調(diào)整自己。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累遵循：follow→adhereto首先：Firstly→Firstofall完成：finish→complete總之：Inaword→Inshort

2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)雜句原句：Firstly,Imakeaplaneveryday,andfollowitstrictly.拓展句：Firstly,Imakeaplaneveryday,whichIneedtofollowstrictly.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Beforegoingtobedatnight,IwillcheckwhetherIhavefinishedit.（運(yùn)用了whether連接的賓語從句）【高分句型2】AndifIdoitwell,Iwillrewardmyself.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）4．參考范文AnUnforgettableSpringOutingToday,Iparticipatedinourclassspringoutingatthenearbypark.Ourentireclasswaspresent,includingourteachersandsomeparentswhoaccompaniedus.Duringtheouting,weengagedinmanyactivitiessuchasplayinggames,singing,dancing,andtakingpictures.Wealsohadalovelypicnicwithsomedeliciousfoodanddrinks.Itwasafun-filledday,andeveryonehadagreattime.Apartfromtheenjoymentandrelaxation,thisoutingwasalsoessentialasithelpedusbondandcreatestrongerrelationshipswithourclassmatesandteachers.Additionally,itprovidedanopportunityforustoappreciatenature,whichisnotonlyhelpfulbutalsocrucialtoourpersonaldevelopmentandmentalwellbeing.Overall,theoutingwasasuccess,andI’mgratefultohavebeenpartofit.Ilookforwardtomorefun-filledactivitiesinthefuture.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假如你是李華，今天你參加了班級(jí)春游活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英文日記。內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、參加人員；2.活動(dòng)過程；3.活動(dòng)意義。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累參加：participatein→engageoneselfin許多：many→various美味的：delicious→flavorful有益的：behelpful→bebeneficial2.句式拓展同義句改寫原句：Wealsohadalovelypicnicwithsomedeliciousfoodanddrinks.拓展句：Alovelypicnicwithsomedeliciousfoodanddrinkswasalsoenjoyedbyus.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Ourentireclasswaspresent,includingourteachersandsomeparentswhoaccompaniedus.（現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語）【高分句型2】Additionally,itprovidedanopportunityforustoappreciatenature,whichisnotonlyhelpfulbutalsocrucialtoourpersonaldevelopmentandmentalwellbeing.（非限制性定語從句）5．SaturdayJanuary16th,2022

SunnyDearDiary,Recently,Iparticipatedintheactivityofrecordingyourbeautifullifeheldbymyschool.Andthroughit,Ilearntoappreciatethebeautylyingineverydaylife.Thisweek,Iwasbusywithmypreparationsforthefinalexams.Toachieveidealgrades,Inotonlymadeapracticalreviewplanbutalsofolloweditwithoutanydelay.Besides,Igotmuchencouragementfrombothmyteachersandparents,whichhelpedmebuildconfidencetofacethechallenges.Lastbutnotleast,mybestfriendphonedmetoarrangeawinterholidaytriptogether.Allthesebeautifulmomentsmakemefeeldelightedtomoveforthedayahead.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華，本周你校開展了“記錄美好生活”系列活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇日記，記錄你本周的美好生活。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累欣賞：appreciate→admire參加：participatein→takepartin高興的：delighted→glad此外：besides→inaddition2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Toachieveidealgrades,Inotonlymadeapracticalreviewplanbutalsofolloweditwithoutanydelay.拓展句：InotonlymadeapracticalreviewplanbutalsofolloweditwithoutanydelaysothatIcanachieveidealgrades.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Toachieveidealgrades,Inotonlymadeapracticalreviewplanbutalsofolloweditwithoutanydelay.(運(yùn)用了不定式作目的狀語)[高分句型2]Besides,Igotmuchencouragementfrombothmyteachersandparents,whichhelpedmebuildconfidencetofacethechallenges.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)6．Thursdayl5DecemberSportsplayanimportantpartinourdailylife.Afterenteringhighschool,Ijoinedthebadmintonclub.MypassionforbadmintonwasfromYuYang.Itwashergracefulmovesandjumpsthatmotivatedmeintobadminton.Intheclub,Iplaybadmintonwithmyteammatesthreetimesaweek,andsometimesIjoininabadmintonmatch.Itisagreatsport,whichmakesmemeetlotsofnewpeopleandenjoymyselfatthesametime!Badmintonisnotonlyfunbutalsogoodformyhealth.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生向校英文報(bào)投稿，介紹自己加入羽毛球俱樂部的初衷、體驗(yàn)和感受?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累激勵(lì)：motivate→inspire參加：joinin→takepartin比賽：match→competition有趣的：fun→interesting2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Sportsplayanimportantpartinourdailylife.拓展句：Thereisnodoubtthatsportsplayanimportantpartinourdailylife.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Itwashergracefulmovesandjumpsthatmotivatedmeintobadminton.(運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型結(jié)構(gòu))【高分句型2】Itisagreatsport,whichmakesmemeetlotsofnewpeopleandenjoymyselfatthesametime!(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)7．Dec.6,2021MyAmericanfriendMaryandIattendedalectureheldinourcitylibraryyesterday.Itwasaimedathowseniorhighstudentscouldmakefriendsandwhatmatteredmosttomaintainafirmfriendship.Anexperiencedprofessorgavethelecture.Histalkwasinformative,humorousandinteresting,attractinghundredsofstudentsplusparents.Tooursatisfaction,herepliedtoourquestionspatientlyandclearly.Soabsorbedinthelecturewerewethatwewereunwillingtowavehimgoodbye.Fromthislecturewefiguredoutsomepracticalapproachestomakingclosefriends.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇英語短文介紹自己和美國(guó)朋友Mary去市圖書館參加高中生如何交友的講座，內(nèi)容包括時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容和參加講座的收獲。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累參加：attend→present/takepartin漲知識(shí)的：informative→intellectual方法：approach→method2.句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：MyAmericanfriendMaryandIattendedalectureheldinourcitylibraryyesterday.Itwasaimedathowseniorhighstudentscouldmakefriendsandwhatmatteredmosttomaintainafirmfriendship.拓展句：MyAmericanfriendMaryandIattendedalectureheldinourcitylibraryyesterday,whichwasaimedathowseniorhighstudentscouldmakefriendsandwhatmatteredmosttomaintainafirmfriendship.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Histalkwasinformative,humorousandinteresting,attractinghundredsofstudentsplusparents.（使用了現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語）【高分句型2】Soabsorbedinthelecturewerewethatwewereunwillingtowavehimgoodbye.（運(yùn)用了so＋adj.+that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句和部分倒裝）8．May15SundaySunnyThisafternoon,ourhandcraftclubheldalanternmakingactivity,whereafamousfolkartistwasinvitedtoteachushowtomakelanternsbyhand.Hefirsttoldusthehistoryandoriginoflanterns,andthevariousmaterialsformingthem.Afterthat,heshowedusthebasicstepsandskillsoflantern-making.Thencamethetimeforustohaveatry.Undertheguidanceoftheartist,allofusfinishedourworkssuccessfully.Throughthisactivity,notonlyhaveIimprovedmyhandcraftskills,butIhavealsodeepenedmyunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaningsoflanterns.I’vecometorealizewhyShueyRhonRhonlanternfigureissopopularworldwide.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一篇日記，記錄學(xué)校手工俱樂部邀請(qǐng)民間藝人來校給你們傳授了燈籠制作技術(shù)；內(nèi)容包括：活動(dòng)過程以及個(gè)人感受。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累舉辦：hold→host各種各樣的：various→avarietyof展示：show→display提升：improve→prompt/advance2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Hefirsttoldusthehistoryandoriginoflanterns,andthevariousmaterialsformingthem.拓展句：Hefirsttoldusthehistoryandoriginoflanterns,andthevariousmaterialsformingthem,whicharegreatlyamazing.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Thisafternoon,ourhandcraftclubheldalantern-makingactivity,whereafamousfolkartistwasinvitedtoteachushowtomakelanternsbyhand.（運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Throughthisactivity,notonlyhaveIimprovedmyhandcraftskills,butIhavealsodeepenedmyunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaningsoflanterns.（運(yùn)用了notonly…butalso…連接句子時(shí)，notonly位于句首，該部分用部分倒裝）9．Tuesday18OctoberTodayisourpotteryday.WehadthehonortoparticipateinthepotteryclubactivityheldintheActivityCenterthisafternoon.Asscheduled,theactivitystartedwiththeexcellentpresentationmadebyourinstructorMr.Wang,whodesignedthetaskforthissession.Weallobservedcarefullyhowamassofclaywastransformedfantasticallyintoavividartwork.Healsoencouragedustomakeoneofthetwelveanimalsigns.Thankstotheteacher’shelp,weaccomplishedourownwork,withwhichwehadphotostakentogetherproudly.Throughtheactivity,weknewmoreaboutChinesepotteryandwhatittooktomakeacraftsman.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于記敘文。要求考生寫一篇日記，記錄10月18日（周二）的陶藝社團(tuán)活動(dòng)情況?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累參加：participatein→takepartin舉辦、組織：hold→organize鼓勵(lì)：encourage→inspire幫助：help→assistance2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：WehadthehonortoparticipateinthepotteryclubactivityheldintheActivityCenterthisafternoon.拓展句：WehadthehonortoparticipateinthepotteryclubactivitywhichwasheldintheActivityCenterthisafternoon.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Asscheduled,theactivitystartedwiththeexcellentpresentationmadebyourinstructorMr.Wang,whodesignedthetaskforthissession.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)【高分句型2】Thankstotheteacher’shelp,weaccomplishedourownwork,withwhichwehadphotostakentogetherproudly.(運(yùn)用了介詞+which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)10．LastSunday,IwenttovisittheGreatWallwithmyclassmates.Itwasasunnyday,whichbroughtusgoodmoods.Beyondourimagination,therewerealargenumberofvisitorsfromhomeandabroad.Nowonderthatitiswellknownworldwide.ClimbinguptheGreatWallandseeinghowsplendidthesceneryis,wecouldn’thelptakingphotosaround.WhatmakeusexcitedthenwascompletingtheHeroSlope.Standingontheslope,Ifeltmyselftobearealmanthen.ThatdayIwalkedtoomuch.TiredasIwas,Iwasfeelinghappy.Iwasrewardedandtaughtalot.Iftherewereanotherchanceoneday,howIwishIcouldpayavisittothegreatman-madewonderasecondtime.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生在游覽參觀了長(zhǎng)城后，用英語寫一篇日記?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累參觀，游覽：visit→payavisitto眾所周知的，出名的：wellknown→famous疲倦的：tired→exhausted高興的：happy→pleased2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：LastSunday,IwenttovisittheGreatWallwithmyclassmates.拓展句：ItwasLastSundaythatIwenttovisittheGreatWallwithmyclassmates.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Itwasasunnyday,whichbroughtusgoodmoods.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Nowonderthatitiswellknownworldwide.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)同位語從句)11．佳作展示Friday,16August,2019hotHowtimeflies!Aweekhaspassed.Thinkingbacktothethingsthathappenedduringthelastweek,Ifoundthelifeherefullofhappinessandjoy.Icanstillrememberthefirstdayofthesummercamp.Icametomybedchamberbymyself.WhenIopenedthedoor,Isawagirlwithshorthairsittinginachairwithabookinherhands.Shemustbeaquietgirlwholikedreading,Ithoughttomyselfatthetime.HernamewasLily.Assoonaswesaidhellotoeachother,