讀后續(xù)寫+夏日垂釣：耐心與收獲的故事+講義 高三上學(xué)期7月月考英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Inmychildhood,undertheinfluenceofmyelderbrotherandmypeersintheneighborhood,Itriedanumberofoutdooractivities.Ofcourse,Iwasnotsotakenbyallofthem.whetherIwasdoingthemforthefirsttimeorcontinuously.However,fatehaditsownplansinstore.Youneverknowwhenanoutdooractivitywillchangemylife.Thenameofthisactivityis“fishing”.Abouttenyearsago,Ididn'treallyliketheideaofsittingonthebankofalakeorriver,spendinglonghoursunderthesun'sultravioletrays,whichcancausesunburnsandskindamage,andanxiouslyanticipatingsomefishtobekindtotakemybait(誘餌).Infact,Iusedtothinkofthisoutdooractivityassomekindof“hide-and-seek-game”thatispopularwithmostyoungkids,exceptthatitwasmuchharderbecauseIcouldseemy“prey(獵物)”onlyaftercatchingit.

However,allthatchangedwhenIpaidavisittomyauntinthecountrysideduringasummerholiday.Iwasfinallyconvincedbyoneofmycousinstoaccompanyhimtoanearbylakeinordertodosomefishingpracticewithhim.Infact,heevenassuredmethatfishwouldeatmybaits.SoIagreedandwenttothelakeexpectingtocatchsomefish.Beforethrowingmyfishinglineintothewater,mycousindidsometricksattachingsomesortoffoodtomyfishingpole.Learningtofishinariverorlakecanbechallengingforthebeginnerslikeme.Theactofdroppingalineiseasy,butbeingasuccessfulfisherishard.That'swhytheycallitfishingbutnotcatchingButwithpracticeandpatience,itcanbecomeeasierovertime.Patienceisessentialinlakefishing.Itmaytakesometimetofindtherightspotorlure(魚餌)thatwillattractfish.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Mycousinhadtorepeatedlyremindmetokeeppatient.________________________________________________________Whenwefinallyleftthelake,Ihadcaughtthreefish!________________________________________________________【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者童年，在哥哥和鄰居的影響下，我嘗試了一些戶外活動(dòng)。在某一次嘗試了釣魚之后，作者喜愛上了這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，變成了一個(gè)充滿激情的漁夫，喜歡花時(shí)間在戶外，欣賞生活的簡(jiǎn)單樂趣。原文中有幾處伏筆，為續(xù)寫提供了方向和可能的情節(jié)發(fā)展：對(duì)釣魚的初次印象：作者最初對(duì)釣魚并不感興趣，認(rèn)為它是一種“hide-and-seek-game”，這為續(xù)寫中作者態(tài)度的轉(zhuǎn)變提供了對(duì)比。對(duì)戶外陽光的擔(dān)憂：提到了長(zhǎng)時(shí)間在戶外可能導(dǎo)致的曬傷和皮膚損傷，這為續(xù)寫中作者可能遇到的困難或?qū)︶烎~體驗(yàn)的進(jìn)一步認(rèn)識(shí)提供了鋪墊。表兄弟的保證：表兄弟向作者保證魚會(huì)吃他的魚餌，這為續(xù)寫中作者是否真的能釣到魚以及他對(duì)此的反應(yīng)提供了懸念。表兄弟的技巧：表兄弟在釣魚竿上做了一些技巧，這暗示了釣魚可能需要特定的技能或知識(shí)，為續(xù)寫中作者學(xué)習(xí)這些技能或體驗(yàn)成功與失敗提供了基礎(chǔ)。耐心的重要性：文中強(qiáng)調(diào)了耐心在釣魚中的必要性，這為續(xù)寫中作者如何培養(yǎng)耐心以及耐心如何幫助他成功提供了線索。在續(xù)寫中，這些伏筆得到了回應(yīng)：作者最初對(duì)釣魚的不感興趣轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)橥ㄟ^實(shí)踐和耐心學(xué)會(huì)了欣賞釣魚的過程，這回應(yīng)了對(duì)釣魚初次印象的伏筆。作者在續(xù)寫中體驗(yàn)到了戶外陽光的直接后果，但最終認(rèn)識(shí)到了耐心和等待的價(jià)值，回應(yīng)了對(duì)戶外陽光擔(dān)憂的伏筆。表兄弟的保證在作者釣到魚時(shí)得到了驗(yàn)證，回應(yīng)了保證魚會(huì)吃魚餌的伏筆。作者通過實(shí)踐學(xué)會(huì)了釣魚的技巧，并體驗(yàn)了成功的喜悅，回應(yīng)了表兄弟技巧的伏筆。作者在續(xù)寫中展現(xiàn)了耐心的培養(yǎng)過程，以及耐心如何幫助他最終釣到魚，回應(yīng)了耐心重要性的伏筆。【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我表姐不得不一再提醒我要有耐心”可知，第一段可描寫作者釣上魚的經(jīng)過。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)我們最后離開湖時(shí)，我已經(jīng)釣到了三條魚！”可知，第二段可描寫作者喜愛釣魚以及對(duì)釣魚的感悟。2.續(xù)寫線索：提醒有耐心——指導(dǎo)作者——魚上鉤——喜愛釣魚——對(duì)釣魚感悟

【答案】Onepossibleversion:Mycousinhadtorepeatedlyremindmetokeeppatient.Hetaughtmehowtoadjustmypolebasedonthemovementsofthefishandhowtodeterminethebesttimetoliftthepolewhenafishwasonthehook.Underhisguidance,Icalmeddowngradually,stayingfocusedtowaitpatiently.Thensuddenly,Ifeltajerkofmypole.Asurgeofthrillsweepingoverme,IpulledthefishingpoleoutofwaterandIcaughtmyfirstfish!SoexcitedwasIthatIevengaveajumpintheair.Itwasasmallone,butitwasamilestoneforme!Whenwefinallyleftthelake,Ihadcaughtthreefish!Thrilledandfulfilled,Iskippedallthewayhomewithmycousin,tellinghimitwasapitythatIhadbeenmissingoutonsomuchbyavoidingthissimpleoutdooractivitybefore.Sincethen,Ihavebecomeapassionatefishermanandlovespendingtimeoutdoors,appreciatingthesimplepleasureoflife.Fishinghastaughtmetobepatientandpersistentandmostimportantly,ithasalsotaughtmealessonthatweshouldnotmissoutontheseopportunitiesjustbecausetheyaresimpleorjustwedonotknowhowtodothemwell.下水文1Mycousinhadtorepeatedlyremindmetokeeppatient.Thesunwasbeatingdown,andtheonlysoundthatbrokethesilencewastheoccasionalrippleofwaterasmylinetouchedthesurface.Iwatchedthefloatwithbatedbreath,willingittomove,tosignalthepresenceofafish.Thewaitseemedinterminable,andmyinitialexcitementbegantowane.Yet,mycousin'scalmdemeanorandhiswordsofencouragementhelpedmetounderstandthatfishingisasmuchaboutthewaitasitisaboutthecatch.It'saboutbeinginthemoment,enjoyingthetranquilityofnature,andlearningtoappreciatethequietvictoriesthatcomewithstillnessandtime.Whenwefinallyleftthelake,Ihadcaughtthreefish!Thesenseofachievementwasimmense,anditwasafarcryfromthefrustrationIhadfeltjusthoursbefore.Eachtugonthelinehadbeenasmallvictory,atestamenttothepatienceIhadlearnedtocultivate.AsIheldmycatch,Irealizedthatfishinghadtaughtmemorethanjustanewhobby;ithadgivenmealessoninperseveranceandthejoyofsimplepleasures.Thesunburnandthelonghoursunderthesunseemedinsignificantcomparedtothesatisfactionoftheexperience.Thatsummerholidayturnedouttobemorethanjustabreakfromroutine;itwasthebeginningofalifelongappreciationfortheartoffishing.下水文2Mycousinhadtorepeatedlyremindmetokeeppatient.Theinitialenthusiasmofcastingthelinewasreplacedbythemonotonyofwaiting.Thetranquilityofthelakewasastarkcontrasttomygrowingimpatience.Eachtimethebobberremainedstill,mydisappointmentgrew,andIwastemptedtogiveup.Butmycousin'spersistentwhispersof"Patience,it'sallaboutpatience,"echoedinmyears,remindingmethatthetruesportoffishingwasinthewait,notjustthecatch.Whenwefinallyleft