2017中考一模（應(yīng)用文）【學(xué)生版】

第頁(yè)2019楊浦一模Inatleast60words,writeaposterforschooluniformdesigncompetition.(用至少60個(gè)詞寫(xiě)一份校服設(shè)計(jì)競(jìng)賽的海報(bào)，部分信息已經(jīng)提供。）Thefollowingquestionsarereferenceonly(以下問(wèn)題僅供參考）：√Whataretherequirementsforthedesign?√Whowillbethejudges?Whatistheprizeforthewinner?√Howmuchistheentryfee(報(bào)名費(fèi)）？Wheredoesthemoneygo?√What’stheaimofthecompetition?(注意：段文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分)案例分析：寫(xiě)作診斷：此處添加學(xué)生案例范文范文點(diǎn)評(píng)：SchoolUniformDesignCompetitionDoyouhaveanycreativeideaaboutdesigningtheschooluniform？Aslongasyouarekeenondesigningandyoucandrawupyouridealstyleoftheschooluniform，comeandjoinintheSchoolUniformDesignCompetitionwhichwillbeheldinSchoolArtRoomonFebruary16th!Theheadmasterandfiveotheradministrativestaffwillbethejudgesandtheprizewillbeacomputer.Besides,theentryfeejustcosts10yuanandallthemoneywillbedonatedtothestudentsinneed.Let’sattendthiscompetitiontogetherinthehopethatourschooluniformwillbecomebetter-looking.語(yǔ)言進(jìn)階：同位語(yǔ)從句inthehopethat“希望，為了…”同位語(yǔ)：兩個(gè)成分處于相同地位，對(duì)與之同位的名詞（本位語(yǔ)）提供補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明，描繪的作用。同位語(yǔ)從句：同位語(yǔ)從句用句子作同位語(yǔ)，它與主句的本位語(yǔ)同位或等同，用以說(shuō)明該名詞表示的具體內(nèi)容。同位語(yǔ)從句常放在fact,news,idea,truth,hope,problem,information,wish,promise,answer,evidence,report,explanation,suggestion,conclusion等抽象名詞后面。Idoubtthereportthattheshiptheshipsankonitsfirstvoyage.Ihavenoideawhatliesbehindthemountain.特殊情況1）在某些名詞(如demand,wish,suggestion,resolution,advice,request,proposal等)后面的同位語(yǔ)從句的謂語(yǔ)要用虛擬語(yǔ)氣。Theywerefacedwiththedemandthatthistax(should)beabolished.Theyexpressedthewishthatshe(should)accepttheaward.2）分離式同位語(yǔ)從句Thenewsspreadthathehadwonacarinthelottery.Thethoughtcametohimthatmaybetheenemyhadfledthecity.同位語(yǔ)從句與定語(yǔ)從句的區(qū)別1）同位語(yǔ)從句是名詞性從句，用來(lái)對(duì)一個(gè)名詞加以補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明。定語(yǔ)從句是形容詞性的，對(duì)一個(gè)名詞加以修飾和限定。2）同位語(yǔ)從句中的that不作成分，但是不能省略；定語(yǔ)從句中的that充當(dāng)賓語(yǔ)時(shí)?？墒÷浴１揪渲邪裪nthehopethat放在完整的句子后面表示做一件事的意圖和目的，可以用來(lái)替換“sothat”或者“todo”。詞典例句：Theproblemhowthequalityoftheproductsaffectscustomers’decisionhasnotbeensettled.產(chǎn)品的質(zhì)量是如何影響顧客決定的這一問(wèn)題還沒(méi)有被解決。Wewilldonatethemoneytothestudentsinremoteareainthehopethattheywillhaveabrightfuture.我們將會(huì)把錢(qián)捐給偏遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)的學(xué)生，希望他們有一個(gè)美好的未來(lái)。練習(xí)：1.Thereason____thelittleactresshasbeensuchasuccessis____sheisbothcleverandhard-working.A.why,why B.why,that C.that,because D.for,because2.Theorder____theprisonerbesetfreearrivedtoolate.A.which B.whether C.that D.what翻譯鞏固：我父母努力工作希望我能有一個(gè)舒適的生活______________________________________________________________________________你認(rèn)為不動(dòng)腦筋就能做好這件工作的想法是完全錯(cuò)誤的。______________________________________________________________________________昨天老師和我談了很多，希望我能夠改掉上課遲到的壞習(xí)慣。______________________________________________________________________________bekeenon對(duì)…感興趣可以用來(lái)替換like，beinterestedin，haveinterestin或者befondof，表達(dá)“喜歡，對(duì)…有興趣，”后面可以加名詞或者動(dòng)名詞。如果想要加動(dòng)詞，可用bekeentodo。詞典例句：It’ssaidthatourheadmasteriskeenoncollectingstamps.據(jù)說(shuō)我們的校長(zhǎng)熱衷集郵。Mymotheriskeenondesigningvariousschoolbagsforme.我媽媽很喜歡給我設(shè)計(jì)各種各樣的書(shū)包。翻譯鞏固：很多學(xué)生熱衷于看電子書(shū)。____________________________________________________越來(lái)越多的中國(guó)人喜歡出國(guó)旅游和買外國(guó)產(chǎn)品。____________________________________________________那些開(kāi)車熱衷于追求速度的人經(jīng)常會(huì)不遵守交通規(guī)則。____________________________________________________drawup意思為“畫(huà)出，制定出，草擬”，可以用來(lái)替換“workout，paint，write”。詞典例句：Hedrewupashoppinglistbeforegoingtothesupermarket.他去超市之前列了一個(gè)購(gòu)物單。OurnewEnglishteacherhasdrawnupafewrulesfortheEnglishclass我們的新英語(yǔ)老師制訂了一些英語(yǔ)課堂的規(guī)則。翻譯鞏固：他們同意起草一個(gè)正式的協(xié)議。______________________________________________________________________________我和我的朋友一起制訂了一些互相幫助學(xué)習(xí)的方法。______________________________________________________________________________政府最近制定的一些新的交通規(guī)則有效的緩解了高峰時(shí)期的交通堵塞。______________________________________________________________________________二次修改：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________