讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)微技能對(duì)話描寫(xiě)課件高三英語(yǔ)上學(xué)期一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)●微技能對(duì)話描寫(xiě)寫(xiě)作文寫(xiě)作文寫(xiě)作文寫(xiě)作文使我快樂(lè)

對(duì)話(dialogue)是故事角色在整個(gè)故事中對(duì)彼此或?qū)ψ约赫f(shuō)的話。對(duì)話可揭示人物的性格和個(gè)性，也可推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展。Whatrolesdofunctionofdialoguespalyinastory？Thinking:對(duì)話描寫(xiě)中容易出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題？標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)使用錯(cuò)誤xxxsaid用詞單一復(fù)雜冗長(zhǎng)一、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的規(guī)范性1.“hurryup！Youareabouttolate.Iyelledtohimanxiously.2.“Iwilltrymybestonit,”Hepromisedfirmly.3.Ihuggedhimandsaid:

“thankyou.

”Hurry”he,Thank標(biāo)點(diǎn)改錯(cuò)自言自語(yǔ)說(shuō)

大聲說(shuō)笑著說(shuō)提問(wèn)說(shuō)回答說(shuō)

say(said)/murmuredtooneselfrant(咆哮);yell(大叫);shout（高聲喊道);scream（尖叫）

fume(氣得冒煙);

growl(低吼);warn（警告）;howl（怒吼）

grin(咧嘴笑);beam(眉開(kāi)眼笑)；smiled（微笑）;laugh(笑);cheer(歡呼)inquired正式用詞replied/responded二、對(duì)話用詞的豐富性表?yè)P(yáng)說(shuō)抱怨說(shuō)其他的“說(shuō)”praised

稱贊complained

抱怨

sighed嘆息beg(乞求);reply(回復(fù)),emphasized/stressed強(qiáng)調(diào)

swear(swore)發(fā)誓

scolded責(zé)備stammeredagree(同意);add(補(bǔ)充道)

decide(決定);

demand(強(qiáng)烈要求)二、對(duì)話用詞的豐富性用詞加點(diǎn)料1.“That’sokay!”saidMaryinapleasanttone.2.“Ididn’tmeanthat,”shemurmuredinalowvoice.3.Jackrantomeandcriedinexcitement,“Youmadeit!Iamsoproudofyou!”4“Howdareyou！”shesaidangrily..“Absolutely!”repliedJohn,excitementshininginhiseyes.加語(yǔ)氣加嗓音加情緒短語(yǔ)(介詞短語(yǔ))加情緒副詞加獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)加語(yǔ)氣ina/an+形容詞+toneina

pleasant愉悅的/firm堅(jiān)定的/rude粗魯?shù)?toneinatoneof+名詞inatoneof

surprise用一種驚訝的語(yǔ)氣inatoneofcuriosity用一種好奇的語(yǔ)氣加嗓音inaadjvoice（聲音）Inahigh/lowvoice高聲/低聲說(shuō)inaweakvoice虛弱地說(shuō)inatremblingvoice顫抖地說(shuō)加介詞短語(yǔ)

in/with+

情緒名詞in/withexcitement/ease/surprise/astonishment...witha...smile/sigh/look/expression

1)saidMas.Lee______________________一臉嚴(yán)肅地2)Shesaid______________________用一種低沉的嗓音

)Hesaid______________________用一種堅(jiān)定地表情5)Jacklaughed________________高興地笑了起來(lái)

withaseriouslookonherfaceinalowvoicewithadeterminedlookwithjoy

Haveatry!加副詞“Iwillmakeit!”Iyelled

firmly.proudly/gently/abruptly/unexpectedly/angrily/bitterly/seriously/firmly/cheerfully自豪/溫柔地/突然地/意想不到地/生氣地/悲痛地/嚴(yán)肅地/堅(jiān)定地/高興地說(shuō)……

1)_____________

冷靜地說(shuō)

2)said_______

生氣地說(shuō)

3)____________平和地說(shuō)

4)said________高興地說(shuō)5）said_______________意想不到地說(shuō)

cheerfully

said

calmlysaid

peacefullyangrily

Haveatry!unexceptedly三、語(yǔ)段內(nèi)容的豐富性①

對(duì)話為推動(dòng)故事情節(jié)服務(wù)，起點(diǎn)綴作用，不宜過(guò)長(zhǎng)。③

要有畫(huà)面感，盡量結(jié)合動(dòng)作/心理/情緒等描寫(xiě)②

避免生僻詞，艱難詞匯。“Hey，howareyou?”“I’mfine,howareyou?”“Howistheweather?”“Terrific!Nicedayforawalk,isn'tit?”點(diǎn)睛：這樣的對(duì)話在現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中很真實(shí)，但是寫(xiě)作畢竟是藝術(shù)加工，

無(wú)助情節(jié)推動(dòng)的&不能刻畫(huà)人物性格的日常寒暄，偏離文章主線的對(duì)話不要用。三、語(yǔ)段內(nèi)容的豐富性---對(duì)話描寫(xiě)搭配動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)1Sb.did,+did+said

(增加與“說(shuō)”的并列謂語(yǔ)，有效增強(qiáng)畫(huà)面感)“Idon'tbelieveyouanymore,”he

turnedaround,

shutthedoorandrushedout.2)Thefatherstaredatthedog,kneltdownandwhispered

inasoftvoice,“Poorlittlething.”

三、語(yǔ)段內(nèi)容的豐富性---對(duì)話描寫(xiě)搭配動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)2Doing...,sb.said,“......”“...”sb.said,Doing...(現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ))縱享絲滑的動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)Havingacigaretteclampedinhisfingers,theoldmansaid,“What’sup?”3with+邏輯主語(yǔ)+非謂語(yǔ),謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)作Withhiseyesbrimmedwithastonishment,theteachercouldn'thelpbutwalktohimandsighed,“Disturbswhat?Yourscorecouldn'tgetanylower.”

Haveatry!1.“Ihavetoquit”________________.

(我低落地說(shuō)“我不得不放棄?！?2.“Surely,Iwillmakeit!”_____________________(Tom用堅(jiān)定的聲音回答).3.“WhatshouldwedotocheerJackup?”_________________媽媽有些擔(dān)心地問(wèn)道).4.“Ihaveanidea,butitmightbealittlecrazy,”

__________(媽媽笑著說(shuō)道).“Let'sgetalittle

dogforPoppy.”Isaid,inalowvoicesmiledMomTomrepliedfirmlyasked