高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)：建立網(wǎng)站來(lái)呼吁更多的人加入撿垃圾的行列

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)建立網(wǎng)站來(lái)呼吁更多的人加入到撿垃圾的行列1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Onemorningonmywaytoschool,noticedanelderlywomandressedinayellowvest(馬甲)carryingagarbagebagandoneofthoserubbishclaws(爪形器具)."What'sthatladydoing?"Iaskedmum."VestLady.Shejustpicksuprubbisharoundhereforfun,"mumsaid."Whywouldsomeonethinkpickinguprubbishlookinglikeaconstructionworkerisfun?"Ipuzzled.ForseveralyearsI'dwitnessthismysteriousVestLady—rainorshine—onmywaytoschool.Ihadthoughtshewascrazyforpickinguprubbish.EventuallyIsmiledandwavedathereachtimeIsawher.Later,Imovedtohighschool.ThetimeIsawrubbishhereandthereIfeltreallyannoyed.ThenI'dthink,"Whyisn'tanyonepickingupthisrubbish?PeoplearesoinconsiderateI"However,shortlyafter,Irealizedpickinguptherubbishwasnotsomeoneease'sproblem.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文NowIcouldn'twalkpastlitterwithoutfeelingguilty.Ivolunteeredtocleanuprubbisharoundourschool.Strangeasitmightsound,pickinguplitterwaskindofathrillforme!Infact,Iwassodeterminedthatformy17thbirthdayIboughtmyselfarubbishclaw,reusableglovesandareflectivesafetyyellowvestwithmyownnameonit.Duringmyfirstattemptinmystylishequipment,metwithunfriendlylooksfromothersasifIwereacriminaldoingcommunityservice.Oneday,Ihadanepiphany(頓悟):"I'mactingjustlikeVestLady!“Buttherewastoomuchrubbisharound,cigaretteendslitteredabout,cansrollingonthestreet,piecesofpaperhiddeninthegrassandplastic.alonewastooweakJHowwouldIgetmorevolunteersinvolvedinrubbishremoval?Asmartideaflashedintomymind.5段首句Para1:SoonIcreatedmywebsitegopickingupcom.

Para2：Moreandmorepeopleonvestswiththeirownnames.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析8本文以時(shí)間為線索展開(kāi)，講述了作者受到“馬甲女士”的影響自己也開(kāi)始穿著反光黃色安全背心撿垃圾，但是作者很快意識(shí)到一個(gè)人的力量是不夠的，于是作者想到創(chuàng)建網(wǎng)站來(lái)號(hào)召更多的志愿者加入到清除垃圾的行動(dòng)中來(lái)，獲得了巨大的成功。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：SoonIcreatedmywebsitegopickingupcom.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“很快我就創(chuàng)建了自己的網(wǎng)站go.pickingup.com?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫(xiě)作者如何通過(guò)網(wǎng)站來(lái)號(hào)召更多的志愿者加入到清除垃圾的行動(dòng)中來(lái)。10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：Moreandmorepeopleonvestswiththeirownnames.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“越來(lái)越多的人穿上印有自己名字的背心?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫(xiě)很多志愿者加入清除垃圾的行動(dòng)，環(huán)境得到了很大改善，人們的環(huán)保意識(shí)也得到了提高。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析續(xù)寫(xiě)線索發(fā)起運(yùn)動(dòng)——號(hào)召——成為熱門(mén)——改善——成功——感悟12續(xù)寫(xiě)素材可用詞匯：行為類(lèi)①描述：describe/depict②闡釋?zhuān)篿llustrate/clarify③影響：influence/affect情緒類(lèi)①驚訝：surprisingly/amazingly②高興：delight/please13續(xù)寫(xiě)素材[高分句型1]Ipostedpicturesofrubbishlitteredaboutonthewebsite,whichcouldnotonlyillustratetheseveresituationbutalsoshowthatalargenumberofvolunteerswereingreatneed.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和“notonly...butalso...”固定句式)[高分句型2]Whatdelightedmemostwasthatpeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotectionwasimproved.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句和what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句)14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)SoonIcreatedmywebsitego.pickingup.com.OnthewebsiteIlaunchedarubbishremovalcampaign.Idescribedmypurpose－callingonvolunteerstopickuprubbish.Ipostedpicturesofrubbishlitteredaboutonthewebsite,whichcouldnotonlyillustratetheseveresituationbutalsoshowthatalargenumberofvolunteerswereingreatneed.Besides,IsharedthestoryofVestLadywhoinfluencedmesomuch.Surprisingly,mywebsitegraduallybecameabighitontheinternet.16范文呈現(xiàn)Moreandmorepeopleputonvestswiththeirownnames.Volunteerscouldbeseenpickinguprubbishintheirsparetime.Theyellowvestsmadebeautifulsceneryintheparkoronthestreet.Withourjointefforts,theenvironmentbecamebetterandbetter.Whatdelightedmemostwasthatpeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotectionwasimproved.Therubbishremovalcampaignwasabigsuccess.ThankstoVestLadywhorootedthesenseofenvironmentalprotectioninmymind,morepeoplebecameVestLady.17范文譯文不久，我創(chuàng)建了自己的網(wǎng)站go。撿起來(lái)。我在網(wǎng)站上發(fā)起了一場(chǎng)垃圾清理運(yùn)動(dòng)。我描述了我的目的——號(hào)召志愿者撿垃圾。我在網(wǎng)站上發(fā)布了亂扔垃圾的照片，這不僅說(shuō)明了嚴(yán)峻的形勢(shì)，也表明大量志愿者急需幫助。此外，我還分享了《背心女士》的故事，她對(duì)我影響很大。令人驚訝的是，我的網(wǎng)站逐漸在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上大受歡迎。越來(lái)越多的人穿上印有自己名字的背心?？梢钥吹街驹刚咴跇I(yè)余時(shí)間撿垃圾。黃色背心在公園或