讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)微技能對(duì)話描寫(xiě)課件高三下學(xué)期英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)系列微技能--對(duì)話描寫(xiě)

（DialogueinContinuationWriting）

對(duì)話(dialogue)是故事角色在整個(gè)故事中對(duì)彼此或?qū)ψ约赫f(shuō)的話。它可以用來(lái)揭示人物的性格和個(gè)性，它也可以用來(lái)推動(dòng)情節(jié)向前發(fā)展，并展示情節(jié)發(fā)展的過(guò)程。Whatisthefunctionofdialogueinastory？

對(duì)話描寫(xiě)的原則：

①對(duì)話要為推動(dòng)故事情節(jié)服務(wù)，每段出現(xiàn)一兩句即可；②對(duì)話描寫(xiě)必須反映人物的心理與情感，刻畫(huà)人物的性格；③不宜過(guò)長(zhǎng)，側(cè)重口語(yǔ)化詞匯，避開(kāi)生僻詞匯；④盡可能結(jié)合動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)，明確對(duì)誰(shuí)說(shuō)。對(duì)話描寫(xiě)存在的問(wèn)題？？？標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)使用不夠規(guī)范xxxsaid對(duì)話標(biāo)簽用詞單一復(fù)雜冗長(zhǎng)堆砌成段標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)使用不夠規(guī)范對(duì)話標(biāo)簽用詞單一復(fù)雜冗長(zhǎng)堆砌成段LearningObjectives一、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的規(guī)范性Shesaid,“Ourbuswillarriveinfiveminutes.”①說(shuō)話人在前

當(dāng)Sbsaid位于句首時(shí)，后面一般用逗號(hào);引號(hào)內(nèi)第一個(gè)字母大寫(xiě),句尾標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)放在引號(hào)內(nèi)。Sbsaid,“Xxxxx.”

規(guī)規(guī)矩矩【觀察思考】【探究總結(jié)】一、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的規(guī)范性“Ihopeyouwillbehere,”hesaid.“Idon'tcare!”hesaid.“Why”heasked.②說(shuō)話人在后

當(dāng)sbsaid位于句末時(shí)，引號(hào)內(nèi)第一個(gè)字母大寫(xiě),陳述句句末用逗號(hào)，疑問(wèn)句用問(wèn)號(hào)，感嘆句用感嘆號(hào)。引號(hào)外第一個(gè)字母小寫(xiě)。“Xxxxx,

??？”sbsaid.

規(guī)規(guī)矩矩【觀察思考】【探究總結(jié)】一、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的規(guī)范性③說(shuō)話人在中間當(dāng)sbsaid位于句中時(shí),

前面引號(hào)內(nèi)句末用逗號(hào)，引號(hào)外第一個(gè)字母小寫(xiě)；sbsaid后面一般用逗號(hào)，后面引號(hào)內(nèi)第一個(gè)字母小寫(xiě)?！癤xxxxx,”

sbsaid,“xxxxxx.”

規(guī)規(guī)矩矩“That’scool,”hesaid,“canIhaveatry”【觀察思考】【探究總結(jié)】一、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的規(guī)范性“Xxxxxx,

??？”

sbsaid.Sbsaid,

“Xxxxxx.”

“Xxxxxx,”

sbsaid,“xxxxxx.”①

說(shuō)話人在前②

說(shuō)話人在后③

說(shuō)話人在中間

規(guī)規(guī)矩矩一、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的規(guī)范性1.“comeon！Youcandoit.Iwhisperedtohiminasoftvoice.2.“Iwillneverdothatagain,”Heansweredfirmly.3.Irantohimandsaid:

“getupandrun!”

4.“Thankyousomuch,”Hesaidwithachokingvoice,“ButIdon'tknowhowtopayforyourkindness.”Come”he,Get改錯(cuò)hebut注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)&大小寫(xiě)標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)使用不夠規(guī)范對(duì)話標(biāo)簽用詞單一復(fù)雜冗長(zhǎng)堆砌成段規(guī)范表達(dá)LearningObjectives二、對(duì)話用詞的豐富性用詞---如果續(xù)寫(xiě)中語(yǔ)言描寫(xiě)較多，那么一定要避免通篇都是“said”，而要靈活多變地使用表示“說(shuō)”的動(dòng)詞換個(gè)詞唄用詞---不能只是said---換個(gè)詞

說(shuō)道________回答道________問(wèn)道_______拓展資料說(shuō)______解釋道_______嘆氣地說(shuō)______同意地說(shuō)______大笑地說(shuō)______請(qǐng)求_______尖叫道___________大聲地吼道___________承諾________抱怨道________說(shuō)服________安慰________道歉________建議_______耳/低語(yǔ)____________

shout/yell/roarlaughsayreplyaskaddexplainsighagreescreamcomplaincomfortbegpromisewhisper/murmursuggestapologizepersuade各種各樣的“說(shuō)”1.“Whydon’tyouwanttoacceptthiswonderfulopportunity”___________thebossonthephone.2.“Shallweleavenow”he___________tousandwelefttheroomveryquietly.3.“Help!Help!Ican’tswim,”___________thefrightenedboy.4.“Iwillneverdothatagain,”I___________.5.“Ididn’tlikethatmealatall,”________thecustomer.askedwhisperedscreamedscreamwhisperpromiseaskcomplainFillintheblankwiththerightverbform.用所給動(dòng)詞的正確形式填空。promisedcomplained對(duì)話標(biāo)簽用詞單一復(fù)雜冗長(zhǎng)堆砌成段規(guī)范表達(dá)豐富表達(dá)LearningObjectivesHowtoexpress"say"morevividlyThink

(三)給各種“說(shuō)”加點(diǎn)料加點(diǎn)料唄在直播節(jié)目中，李發(fā)出一聲驚人的喊叫，“我的媽呀，答應(yīng)我，買它！”Inalivestreaming,Lishoutedinasurprisingtone,“Oh,myGod!Promisemetobuyit”!skill1加語(yǔ)氣

基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:

in

a/anadj

tone(語(yǔ)氣，語(yǔ)調(diào))加點(diǎn)料---修飾動(dòng)詞said加點(diǎn)料---修飾動(dòng)詞saidskill1加語(yǔ)氣

基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:

inatone以一種溫柔的語(yǔ)氣in

a

tone以一種愉悅的語(yǔ)氣in

atone

以一種堅(jiān)定的語(yǔ)氣in

a

tone

以一種粗魯?shù)恼Z(yǔ)氣in

a

tone

以一種悲傷的語(yǔ)氣inatone以一種好奇的的語(yǔ)氣inantone以一種不耐煩的語(yǔ)氣加點(diǎn)料唄

in

a/anadj

tone(語(yǔ)氣，語(yǔ)調(diào))soft/gentle/mildpleasantfirmsadrudeimpatientcurious“Ididn'tmeanto,”shemurmuredinalowvoice.“我不是故意的，”她低聲說(shuō)。skill2加嗓音

基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:加點(diǎn)料---修飾動(dòng)詞saidin

a/anadj

voice(聲音)skill2加嗓音

基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:

inavoice用一個(gè)高的聲音inavoice用一個(gè)低的聲音inavoice用一個(gè)響亮的聲音

inanvoice用一個(gè)惱火的的聲音inavoice用一個(gè)堅(jiān)定的聲音inavoice用一個(gè)顫抖的聲音

inanvoice用一個(gè)局促不安的聲音加點(diǎn)料---修飾動(dòng)詞said加點(diǎn)料唄in

a/anadj

voice(聲音)awkwardtremblinghigh

lowloud

firm

annoyed

特朗普是如此生氣，以致于他在辦公室大聲吼道，“這下完蛋了！”SoannoyedwasDonaldJohnTrumpthatheroaredloudlyintheoffice,“It'sover”!加點(diǎn)料---修飾動(dòng)詞saidskill3加副詞

基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:adv.大聲地難過(guò)地溫柔地不情愿地不耐煩地生氣地禮貌地

絕望地真誠(chéng)地堅(jiān)定地loudlypolitelysincerelygentlyfirmlyimpatientlysadlyunwillinglyangrilydesperately加點(diǎn)料---修飾動(dòng)詞saidskill3加副詞

基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:加點(diǎn)料唄adv.鞏固提升完成句子1.Shelookedathimwithanangryglanceand____________________“Leavemealone!”她生氣地看了他一眼，不耐煩地說(shuō)：“別煩我！”2.Hestoppedmeand___________________,“Idomissyou!”他攔住我，輕輕地說(shuō)：“我真想你！”3.“Whobroketheglass”theboy_________________________.男孩聲音顫抖地問(wèn)道，“誰(shuí)打碎的玻璃？”saidimpatientlyaddedinasofttoneaskedinatremblingvoice“說(shuō)”動(dòng)詞+副詞“說(shuō)”動(dòng)詞+語(yǔ)氣“說(shuō)”動(dòng)詞+嗓音注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)&動(dòng)詞鞏固提升4..“Iwouldloveto,”_______________________________.“我很樂(lè)意這樣做，”艾米麗用一種愉快的語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)。5.Ina_______________________he_____________________,“Okay,Iguess.”他用顫抖的、局促不安的聲音不情愿地回答說(shuō):“好吧，我想。”Emilysaidinapleasanttonetrembling,awkwardvoiceansweredunwillingly“說(shuō)”動(dòng)詞+語(yǔ)氣“說(shuō)”動(dòng)詞+嗓音注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)&動(dòng)詞6.Thechildren_____________________,"HappyMother'sDay!"孩子們大聲說(shuō)：“母親節(jié)快樂(lè)！”shoutedloudly“說(shuō)”動(dòng)詞+副詞“說(shuō)”動(dòng)詞+副詞復(fù)雜冗長(zhǎng)堆砌成段規(guī)范表達(dá)豐富表達(dá)豐富表達(dá)LearningObjectives續(xù)寫(xiě)微作文Lastweekatadinnerparty,thehostessaskedmetositnexttoMrs.Rumbold.Mrs.Rumboldwasalarge,unsmilingladyinatightblackdress.①_________________________________________________(當(dāng)我在她身邊坐下時(shí)，她甚至連頭都沒(méi)抬一下).②__________________（她的眼睛盯著自己的盤子，）andinashorttime,shewasbusyeating.Itriedtomakeaconversation.“Willyoubespendingyourholidaysabroadthisyear”③___________________________________(我微笑著禮貌地問(wèn)道).Shedidn’tevenlookupwhenItookmyseatbesideherHereyeswerefixed/focusedonherplate鞏固提升____________________________________________________________________________________________Iaskedpolitelywithasmile“No,”④________________________________（她頭也不抬地回答，“說(shuō)”）.“WillyoubestayinginEngland”⑤_________________________________(我繼續(xù)用溫和的語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)）.“No,”sheshookherhead.⑥_____________________________________________________（我絕望地問(wèn)她晚餐是否吃得好）.“Youngman,”⑦_(dá)____________________________________（她用一種惱火的聲音回答）,“ifyouatemoreandtalkedless,wewouldbothenjoyourdinner!”sheansweredwithoutlookingupIcontinuedinagentletoneDesperately,Iaskedherwhethershewasenjoyingherdinner鞏固提升sheansweredinanannoyedvoiceSummary①

規(guī)范標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)②

豐富對(duì)話用詞（詞）③

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