2024年高考英語一模試題分類匯編：概要寫作（上海專用）（解析版）

專題08柢要寫作

(一)

(2024年楊浦區(qū)區(qū)一模)

Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinno

morethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

IgnoringYourBiggestRegrets

Regrets,peopleoftenfeel,aretobeavoided.Mistakesmaybeunavoidable,buttheyshouldbekepttoa

minimum.Andwhentheydooccur,thebestcourseofactionistoignorethemasinevitablestepsonourjourney.

Thatseemslogical,atleastuntilyouconsiderthatoneofthecriteriaformentalillnessisaninabilitytofeelregret.

AsauthorKathrynSchulzargues,4tIfyouwanttobefullyfunctional,andfullyhuman,andfullyhumane,Ithink

youneedtolearntolivenotwithoutregret,butwithCounterintuitively,sheandotherexpertsarguefeeling

regretisessentialforlivingyourbestlife.Nooneissaying,ofcourse,thatgettingtrappedinyourpastmistakesis

agoodidea.Butneitherisa“noregretsandneverlookback“mentality.

Regretforcesustoengageinareflectiveanalysistounderstandwhywethoughtoractedthewaywedidand

makesustrythingsdifferentlyinthefuture.Ifyoukeeptellingyourself"noregrets/5thenlearningisn'tgoingto

happen.Besides,hidingfromregretdoesn'tmakeithurtless.Actiondoes.Action,recentresearchshows,isthe

bestwaytomakeregrethurtless.Soifyou'retroubledbyyourfailuretotravelwhenyouwereyoung,science

suggestsyouconsciouslyplananadventuroustripnowthatyou'reolderandwiser.Upsetaboutabroken

friendship?Acttotrytorepairit.

Acknowledgingourmistakes,ratherthanignoringthem,remindsusthatwearevaluableandworthydespite

ourfaults.Thatsortofacceptanceisthebasisbothofrealself-confidenceandoftruekindness.AsSchulzsums

upinhertalk:"Regretdoesn'tremindusthatwedidbadly.Itremindsusweknowwecandobetter.9,

【答案】

Reference:01

Contrarytopopularbeliefthatregretsshouldbeignored,AuthorSchulzpointsoutthatfeelingregretis

crucialforahappylife.Regretmakesusreflectuponpastaction,makinglearningpossible.Besides,actionrather

thanhidingfromregretsmakesusfeellesspain(ful).Tosumup,regretisaremindertellingusthatwecanbe

better.[57]

Reference:02

Thearticlearguesthatregret,althoughoftenavoided,isanessentialpartoflivingafulfillinglife.Ignoring

mistakesandregretspreventslearning,growth,andself-improvement,whereasacknowledgingandreflectingon

pastregretscanleadtopersonaldevelopment.Insteadofavoidingregret,itissuggestedthatindividualsshould

takeactiontoremedytheirpastmistakesandworktowardsabetterfuture.Ultimately,regretisareminderofour

potentialforimprovementandself-growth.

原文文本結(jié)構(gòu)：

原文結(jié)構(gòu)分為引言、作者觀點闡述和觀點論證三部分。在引言部分，文章提到人們通常認為避免后悔是理

想的，但作者提出反駁。接著作者闡述了自己的觀點，認為后悔是人類生活中不可或缺的部分，是促進個

人成長和改善的動力。最后，作者通過論證和舉例，說明了接納并反思過去的錯誤和后悔之情對于個人發(fā)

展的重要性。

概要寫作框架：

1.引言：介紹人們通常對待后悔的態(tài)度

2.主體：闡述作者觀點，認為后悔對于個人成長至關(guān)重要

3.論證：舉例說明后悔可以促進個人成長，呼吁人們應主動面對并解決后悔

4.結(jié)論：總結(jié)后悔對于促進個人成長的積極作用

(2024年黃浦區(qū)一模)

Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomore

than60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

Whycompaniesarehiring'promptengineers9?

WiththenewgenerativeAItools,likeChatGPT,anyonecanputinaprompt-typeinafewwordsandgeta

result.Butthatdoesn'tmeanthattheresultswillberelevantoraccurate.

Thekeyisputtingintherightprompt.Thafswhysomebusinessesarenowhiringpromptengineers一

peoplewiththeskills,backgroundandpracticetotalktoso-calledlarge-languageAIsystemseffectively——and

whymanypeopleexpectpromptengineeringtobeadesirableskillformanykindsofworkerstoaddtotheir

resumes.

Ingeneral,themoredetailedtherequest,theclosertheresponsewillcometowhattheuserislookingfor.

Butthemosteffectivepromptengineeringgoesbeyondaddingdetail.

Foronething,addingtherightdetailtogetthebestresponseiscrucial.Also,therearemanywaystoguide

howanAIsystempresentstheinformationitfinds,dependingonthegoal-tellingittowriteinacertainstyleor

foracertainaudience,forinstance.Eachtoolalsohasparticularcapabilitiesandlimitationsthatuserscanlearnto

tackle.AndthebestresultsoftencomefromanextendedconversationwiththeAI,reactingtowhatitproduces

andaskingforrefinements.

Evenforpeopleapplyingtojobsthatdon'tclearlymentionpromptengineering,havingthisskillcould

becomeessentialforallsortsofroles.ArtdirectorscouldusegenerativeAItooutlineideas,andmarketerscould

useittodevelopnewslogans.Softwareengineerscoulduseittofindproblemswiththeircode.Lawyerscould

useittoresearchapieceoflaw.Thisisgoingtobeafoundationalskillthatallofusneedtoknow.Thethrough

lineiswhenyoulearnanewskill,youcantakeitinanydirectionyoulike.

71.

【參考答案01】

ArightpromptcanensureasatisfyingresultfromgenerativeAItools,socompaniesarehiringprompt

engineers.Besidesdetails,ifsimportanttotellthesystemhowtopresenttheinformationaccordingtoyourgoal,

tohandlethesystem'scapabilitiesandlimitationsandimprovetheresultthroughcommunication.Prompt

engineeringisanessentialskillacrossmultipleindustries.(57words)

【參考答案02]

Companiesarehiringpromptengineerswhohavetheskillsandpracticetoeffectivelycommunicatewith

large-languageAIsystems.Promptengineeringinvolvesprovidingdetailedandprecisepromptstogenerate

relevantandaccurateresponses.Thisskillisbecomingdesirableforvariousjobroles,asitcanbeappliedinfields

suchasartdirection,marketing,softwareengineering,andlawresearch.（58words）

原文文本結(jié)構(gòu)：

Introduction:談論新的生成AI工具，指出輸入正確的提示是關(guān)鍵。

HiringPromptEngineers:解釋一些公司正在雇傭promptengineers,并解釋他們的作用。

EffectivePromptEngineering:討論有效的提示工程如何超越添加細節(jié)。

ApplicationsofPromptEngineering:概述了promptengineering技能在不同領(lǐng)域中的應用。

Conclusion:總結(jié)了promptengineering技能的重要性以及學習新技能的好處。

概要寫作框架：

引言：簡述新的生成AI工具和如何使用它們。

“Promptengineering”是什么：定義promptengineering并解釋其重要性。

有效的提示工程：討論如何編寫適當?shù)奶崾?，以獲得準確的響應，包括指導AI系統(tǒng)呈現(xiàn)信息的方式和通

過與系統(tǒng)進行交互來優(yōu)化輸出。

應用：列舉promptengineering技能在不同領(lǐng)域中的應用。

結(jié)論：總結(jié)promptengineering技能的價值，以及學習新技能的益處。

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（2024年長寧區(qū)一模）

71.Theproblemofrobocallshasbecomesobadthatwerefusetopickupcallsfromnumberswedon't

know.Nearlyhalfofthecallswereceivearescams（欺詐）.We'verealizedtheseverityoftheproblemby

supportinganddevelopingagroupoftools,appsandapproachesintendedtopreventscammersfromgetting

through.Unfortunately,ifstoolittle.Bythetimethese"solutions“becomewidelyavailable,scammerswillhave

movedontocleverermeans.Inthenearfuture,it'snotjustgoingtobethenumberyouseeonyourscreenthatwill

beindoubt.Soonyouwillalsoquestionwhetherthevoiceyou'rehearingisactuallyreal.

Thafsbecausetherearemanypowerfulvoicemanipulation（處理）technologiestobeavailable.Acompany

showedanewvoicetechnologyabletoproduceaconvincinghuman-soundingvoiceabletospeaktoa

receptionistandbookareservationwithoutdetection.

Thesedevelopmentsarelikelytomakeourcurrentproblemswithrobocallsmuchworse.Thereasonthat

robocallsareaheadachehaslesstodowithamountthanprecision.Adecadeofdatadisclosureofpersonal

informationhasledtoasituationwherescammerscaneasilylearnyourmother'sname,andfarmore.Armedwith

thisknowledge,they'reabletocheatthetargetedpeople.Thismeans,forexample,thatascammercouldcallyou

fromwhatlookstobeafamiliarnumberandtalktoyouwithavoicesoundingexactlylikeyourbankteller's,

misleadingyouto“confirm“youraddressandcardnumber.Scammersfollowmoney,socompanieswillbethe

worsthit.Alotofbusinessisstilldoneoverthephone,andmuchofitisbasedontrustandexistingrelationships.

Voicemanipulationtechnologiesmayweakenthatgradually.

Weneedtodealwiththeinsecurenatureofourtelecomnetworks.Phonecarriersandconsumersneedto

worktogethertofindwaysofdeterminingandcommunicatingwhatisreal.Thatmightmeaneitherdevelopinga

uniformwaytomarkvideosandimages,showingwhenandwhotheyweremadebyorabandoningphonecalls

altogetherandmovingtowardsdata-basedcommunications-usingappslikeWeChatandAlipay,whichcanbe

tiedtoyouridentity.

例文1:

Robocallproblemsbecomemoreseverewiththedevelopmentofvoicemanipulationtechnologies.The

disclosureofpersonalinformationenablesscammerstocheatindividualsandbusinesseseasily,andmanypeople

havebecomevictims.Thus,toavoidbeingcheated,moresecuretelecomnetworksareneededtoprevent

scammers.Stopusingphonesandusedata-basedcommunicationstiedtoidentityinstead.(56words)

例文2：

Robocalls,withalmosthalfbeingscams,poseaseriousproblem.Despiteeffortstopreventscammersfrom

gettingthrough,newvoicemanipulationtechnologiesaremakingtheissueworse.Scammers'precisioninusing

personalinformationforcheatingisaconcern.Telecomnetworksneedtoestablishwaystoverifyauthenticity,

possiblythroughmarkingvideosandimagesorshiftingtodata-basedcommunications.

原文的結(jié)構(gòu)可以分為以下幾個部分：

引言部分：介紹了騷擾電話(robocalls)成為嚴重問題的現(xiàn)狀，以及當前工具和方法對抗騷擾電話的不足。

聲音操縱技術(shù)的出現(xiàn)：討論了強大的聲音操縱技術(shù)的出現(xiàn)，并給出了一個例子，展示了這種技術(shù)可以通過

模仿真實聲音來欺騙人們。

騷擾電話問題的加?。航忉屃蓑}擾電話之所以成為頭疼問題與其說是數(shù)量，不如說是精確性有關(guān)。通過大

量泄露個人信息，騙子能夠輕易獲得個人信息，進而詐騙目標人員。

影響與應對措施：指出聲音操縱技術(shù)可能會進一步惡化騷擾電話問題，并提出需要解決電信網(wǎng)絡的不安全

性。建議電信運營商和用戶共同努力，采用標記視頻和圖像的統(tǒng)一方式，或者轉(zhuǎn)向基于數(shù)據(jù)的通信。

概要寫作思路：

該文章旨在探討騷擾電話問題的嚴重性以及新興聲音操縱技術(shù)的出現(xiàn)可能讓問題更加嚴重。文章提到騷擾

電話問題的核心是精確性，騙子能夠利用大量泄露的個人信息欺騙人們。為應對這一問題，建議電信網(wǎng)絡

采用標記視頻和圖像的統(tǒng)一方式，或者轉(zhuǎn)向基于數(shù)據(jù)的通信。概括而言，文章呼吁加強對電信網(wǎng)絡的安全

性以解決騷擾電話問題。

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（2024年徐匯區(qū)一模）

Therearemanyreasonswhysomecatsarebad-tempered;theirtemperamentcanbeinfluencedbytheir

upbringingortheyaresimplybornthatway.However,eventhesweetest,mostaffectionatecatscansuddenly

becomebad-temperedandbehaveoutofcharacter.AccordingtoveterinarianDrKatrinaWarren,theproblemcan

generallybesolved,butyou'llneedtolookforunderlyingissues.

Changesinacafsbehaviourcanoftenbeexplainedbyahealthproblem.Paincancausecatstobehavevery

differently,andifseasytomistakeaproblemasbehavioural,wheninfactitismedical.Shouldyouobservea

significantchangeinyourcafsbehaviour,thenavisittothevetisthebestplacetostart?Watchoutforchangesin

eating,drinkingorlitter-boxhabits.Alsohidingandavoidingbeingtouched.Besuretoreportallchangestoyour

vet.Therearemanycathealthproblemsthatcanbereadilytreatedtoeasesymptomsandpainforyourcat.

Itpaystorememberthatcatsdon'tliketoshareorqueue.Sharingof"resources9suchaslittertraysand

foodbowlscancausestressandanxietyformanycats.Ifsalwaysagoodideatoprovideeachcatwiththeirown

litterbox,food,waterbowlsandbedasaminimum.Onelitterboxforeachcatplusaspareisevenbetter,asare

multiplesleepingspotsandextrascratchingposts.Alackofspacetohidefromoravoidothercats,competition

forterritoryandlackofindividualattentioncanalsoaddtohouseholdfriction.Ifyourcatisfeelinganxious,

offeringitanelevatedplacetosit,suchasaclimbingtree,canbehelpful.

Movingtoanewhouse,thearrivalofanewbaby,newpetsandothertypesofchangecanseriouslyimpact

catbehaviour.Catsarecreaturesofhabitandtendtobeterritorial,soachangeinroutinemaycausethemtoreact

inanumberofways,includingwithdrawaloraggression.Trytokeepyourcafsenvironmentascalmaspossible

andmakesurethereareplaceswheretheyfeelsafe.Sometimesconfiningthemtoasingleroomwithalitterbox,

beddingandhomecomfortscanhelpthemtosettle.

Somecatssimplydonotlikebeingtouchedandhandled.Theseareoftencatsthatreceivedlimited

socialisationwithhumanswhentheywerekittens.Thesecatsdobestinaquiethouseholdwithoutchildrenand

needunderstandingandpatiencetohelpbuildtheirconfidence.

參考答案1：

Cats9temperamentislinkedtotheirupbringingorinnatetraits.Healthissuesmayalsoaffectbehavior,requiring

vetattention.Stressfromsharingresourceslikelittertraysishighlighted,suggestingindividualessentials.

Environmentalchanges,likemovingorhavingnewcomers,canimpactcats,urgingacalmenvironment.Catsnot

likingtouchmightstemfromlimitedsocialization,needingpatienceinquiethomes.

參考答案2：

Cats*temperamentscanchangeduetohealth,lackofspaceorresources,environment,andsocialization.Avet

visitisnecessaryforsignificantbehaviorchanges.Providingindividualresources,suchaslitterboxes,foodbowls,

andbeds,alongwithscratchingpostsandperches,canreducestress.Patienceandunderstandingareessentialfor

catsuncomfortablewithtouch.

【導語】這篇文章主要討論了一些貓咪脾氣不好的原因，包括養(yǎng)育方式和天生個性等。然而，即使是最溫

柔、最親人的貓咪也可能突然變得脾氣暴躁，行為變得異常。文章指出，這個問題通?？梢越鉀Q，但需要

尋找潛在問題。貓咪行為的改變通?？梢酝ㄟ^健康問題來解釋，疼痛可能導致貓咪表現(xiàn)出截然不同的行為，

很容易把問題誤認為是行為問題，而實際上是醫(yī)療問題。如果觀察到貓咪行為的顯著變化，最好先去看獸

醫(yī)。此外，文章還提到了其他導致貓咪脾氣不好的原因，如資源共享、環(huán)境變化和社交不足。為每只貓咪

提供獨立的砂盆、飲食碗、床以及額外的抓板和高處可以減少競爭和壓力。對于那些不喜歡被摸和處理的

貓咪，需要給予理解和耐心，幫助建立它們的自信心。

寫作框架可以按照以下結(jié)構(gòu)展開：

第一段：引言

簡要介紹文章主題：貓咪脾氣不好的原因

提及養(yǎng)育方式和天生個性對貓咪脾氣的影響

第二段：健康問題導致行為改變

解釋疼痛對貓咪行為的影響

強調(diào)需要將行為問題與潛在的醫(yī)療問題區(qū)分開來

建議如有明顯變化，及時就醫(yī)

第三段：資源共享和環(huán)境變化導致脾氣不好

提及資源共享引發(fā)的競爭和壓力

強調(diào)提供每只貓咪獨立的物品，如砂盆、飲食碗和床

引用提供額外的抓板和高處來減少焦慮感

第四段：社交不足和個別貓咪性格

提及社交不足對貓咪脾氣的影響

介紹個別貓咪不喜歡被摸和處理的情況

強調(diào)給予理解和耐心，幫助建立自信心

第五段：總結(jié)

總結(jié)主要觀點：貓咪脾氣不好的原因及解決方法

強調(diào)重要性：及時尋求獸醫(yī)幫助、提供個體化資源和環(huán)境、理解和耐心對待

注意，以上僅為一個寫作框架，具體內(nèi)容可以按照自己的寫作風格和表達方式進行展開和調(diào)整。

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（2024年閔行區(qū)一模）

EmotionalPreparedness:ManagingLife'sChallenges

Expectingtheworsttoavoidfeelingbadlaterisknownas“bracing”.Itmayhelppeoplepreparefor

emotionallychallengingsituations,particularlyinthemomentsbeforethesesituationsoccur.Peoplebraceforthe

worstwhilewaitingforpotentiallynegativeoutcomes.Someonemightalsobracefortheworstinanticipationof

stressfuleventslikegivingapresentationatwork.

Somepsychologicaltheoriessuggestthatbracingshouldhelp.Forexample,"decisionaffecttheory"

proposesthathowwefeelaboutasituationisdeterminedpartlybycomparingwhatactuallyhappenedwithwhat

couldhavehappened.Basedonthis,peopleshouldbehappywhenaneventgoesbeyondtheirexpectations,and

disappointedwhenaneventfallsbehind.Therefore,byanticipatingtheworst,onecansafeguardthemselves

againstfuturedisappointment,becauseanyresultwilllikelysurpass(優(yōu)于)expectations.

However,otherpsychologicaltheorieschallengetheideathatbracingwillbehelpful.Ithasbeentheorized

andscientificallyestablished-thatexpectationscanpowerfullyinfluencereality.Therearetwokeywaysthat

expectationscanshapereality.First,peoplemaybehaveinwaysthatfitwiththeirexpectations.Ifyouexpectto

failanupcomingtestorinterview,thenyoumightnotinvesteffortsinpreparation,whichinturnreducesyour

chancesofdoingwell.Second,peoplemayinterpretasituationinlinewiththeirexpectations.Imagineyou

believeyouareinsufficientlyqualifiedforajobyou'veappliedfor.Duringthejobinterview,you'relikelyto

interpretblankexpressionsfromtheinterviewerinlinewiththisbelief,whichcouldnegativelyaffectyour

performance.Infact,theinterviewerdidnotwanttogiveanythingaway.

Drawingtogetherthescientificstudies,itseemsthatexpectingtheworstisnotawisewaytopreparefor

upcomingnewsorresults.

(Forreferenceonly)

Onepossibleversion01:

“Bracing“involvesanticipatingtheworsttoprepareforemotionalchallenges.Psychologicaltheories,suchas

decisionaffecttheory,proposeitsbenefitsinmanagingexpectations.However,othertheoriescautionthat

expectationscannegativelyshapereality,influencingbehaviorandinterpretation.Scientificstudiessuggest

holdingpositiveexpectationsmaybewiserthanalwaysbracingfortheworst.

Onepossibleversion02:

Theconceptof"bracing"involvesanticipatingnegativeoutcomestoemotionallyprepareforchallenging

situations.Whilesomepsychologicaltheoriesarguethatbracingcanhelpbysurpassingexpectationsandavoiding

disappointment,otherssuggestthatexpectationscanshaperealityindetrimentalways.Scientificstudiesindicate

thatexpectingtheworstisnotaneffectivestrategyforpreparingforupcomingnewsorresults.Instead,holding

positiveexpectationsmaybeawiserapproachtomanaginglife'schallenges.

原文文本結(jié)構(gòu)分為三個部分：

引言：介紹了“應對困境”的概念，以及在情感上為挑戰(zhàn)性情況做好準備的目的。

心理學理論：討論了兩種相反的心理學理論對于“應對困境”的有效性的觀點。第一種理論認為，通過超越

期望，應對困境可以帶來好處；而第二種理論則認為，期望可以以消極的方式塑造現(xiàn)實。

結(jié)論：總結(jié)了科學研究的發(fā)現(xiàn)，表明預期最壞的結(jié)果并不是一種有效的策略來準備即將到來的消息或結(jié)果。

Theoriginaltextisstructuredinthreeparts:

Introduction:Introducestheconceptof"bracing"anditspurposeinemotionallypreparingforchallenging

situations.

PsychologicalTheories:Discussestwocontrastingpsychologicaltheoriesontheeffectivenessofbracing.Thefirst

theorysuggeststhatbracingcanbebeneficialbysurpassingexpectations,whilethesecondtheoryarguesthat

expectationscanshaperealityinnegativeways.

Conclusion:Summarizesthefindingsofscientificstudies,whichindicatethatexpectingtheworstisnotan

effectivestrategyforpreparingforupcomingnewsorresults.

概要寫作框架：

引言：

定義“應對困境”為預期最壞的結(jié)果，以準備情感上的挑戰(zhàn)性情況。

提及其在為負面結(jié)果做準備方面的潛在好處。

心理學理論：

解釋支持“應對困境”的第一種理論（決策影響理論），該理論認為通過管理期望和避免失望來幫助人們應對

困境。

提出挑戰(zhàn)“應對困境”有效性的第二種理論，強調(diào)期望可能以消極的方式塑造行為和解釋。

結(jié)論：

總結(jié)科學研究發(fā)現(xiàn)，預期最壞的結(jié)果不是應對即將到來的消息或結(jié)果的明智策略。

提議保持積極期望可能是更好的管理生活挑戰(zhàn)的策略。

SummaryWritingFramework:

Introduction:

Define"bracing"asanticipatingtheworsttoprepareforemotionallychallengingsituations.

Mentionitspotentialbenefitsinpreparationfornegativeoutcomes.

PsychologicalTheories:

Explainthefirsttheory（decisionaffecttheory）thatsupportsbracingbyproposingthatithelpsinmanaging

expectationsandavoidingdisappointment.

Presentthesecondtheorythatchallengestheeffectivenessofbracing,highlightinghowexpectationscan

negativelyshapebehaviorandinterpretation.

Conclusion:

Summarizethescientificstudies*findingsthatexpectingtheworstisnotawiseapproachtoprepareforupcoming

newsorresults.

Suggestthatholdingpositiveexpectationsmaybeabetterstrategytomanagelife'schallenges.

（六）

（2024年虹口區(qū)一模）

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Agoodveganmilkneedstolooklikemilkandtastelikemilk,whetherit'safattyversion,preferredbybakers,

oraskimmedone,favoredbythehealth-conscious.Foryears,manufacturersofplant-basedproteinhavehad

troublehackingthisdelicateimitationgameanditseemsthattheyarewinningbackabit.Theglobalrevenues（4攵

益）fromalternativeproteinscouldreach$290billionby2035andthatisacautiousestimate.However,canitlast?

Unlikethoseearlyproducts,whichwereneitherterriblytastynorparticularlynutritious,cleaver（朵!1肉刀）

processingimprovestextures,additivesboosttasteandapinchofspeciallyengineeredpeasandbeansaddsnutrient

inthelatestproducts.Still,ultra-processedsubstitutesseldommatchanimalproteinsinnutritionalvalue.Animal

products,includingmilk,arebetterforchildren'sbonedevelopment,thoughlab-grownversionsofmeatordairy

arebecomingmorenutritious.Meanwhile,green-mindedconsumersarerealizingthatplant-baseddoesnot

necessarilymeansustainableinthatitstilltakesalottoobtainrawmaterials.Farmingalmonds（杏仁）tomakea

milk-likedrink,forexample,useshugequantitiesofwater.

Plant-basedproteinsarealsoatoughsellingiantmarketslikeIndia,wheredietsarealreadyrichinplantsand

vegetables,orNigera,wheremeat-eatingisasignofwealth.Thatlimitstheirglobalappeal.

Allthesesuggeststhatalternativeproteinshavefartogotoreplacetheanimalkind.Thelimitationsmaybe

weighingonthefirmsinvolved.Oatly'smarketvaluehasfallenbyabout80%sinceitslisting,partlybecauseof

productiondifficulties.ThatofBeyondMeat,whoseburgersfeatureinMcDonald'slatestmenu,isdownby90%

fromitspeak.Plant-basedfoodsmaynolongerbeonlyanappetizerindiets,buttheirmakerremainoneinfood

business.

【答案】

Theboomingplant-basedproteinindustryfaceschallenges.Plant-basedmeatcanneverbeasnutritiousas

animal-producedprotein.Besides,itsmanufacturingprocessisnotthatsustainable,forcultivatingplantsisresource

consuming.Itssalemayalsomeetsetbacksinsomecountriesduetotheirdietaryhabits.Thisuncertaintyis

reflectedinthedecliningmarketvaluesofrelevantenterprises.

【解析】

【導語】本文是一篇說明文。植物蛋白質(zhì)作為替代動物蛋白質(zhì)的產(chǎn)品在近年來逐漸受到關(guān)注，但其在營養(yǎng)

價值、口感等方面仍有待提高。盡管在一些市場上取得了成功，但在像印度和尼日利亞這樣的市場中，對

植物蛋白質(zhì)的需求相對較低，限制了其全球市場的擴展。因此，植物蛋白質(zhì)雖然已經(jīng)不再只是餐飲市場的

一個附屬，但其生產(chǎn)商仍需要在食品行業(yè)中努力擺脫小眾地位。

【詳解】1要點摘錄

①Foryears,manufacturersofplant-basedproteinhavehadtroublehackingthisdelicateimitationgameandit

seemsthattheyarewinningbackabit.

②Still,ultra-processedsubstitutesseldommatchanimalproteinsinnutritionalvalue.

?Meanwhile,green-mindedconsumersarerealizingthatplant-baseddoesnotnecessarilymeansustainableinthat

itstilltakesalottoobtainrawmaterials.

?Plant-basedproteinsarealsoatoughsellingiantmarketslikeIndia,wheredietsarealreadyrichinplantsand

vegetables,orNigera,wheremeat-eatingisasignofwealth.Thatlimitstheirglobalappeal.

⑤Thelimitationsmaybeweighingonthefirmsinvolved.Oatly5smarketvaluehasfallenbyabout80%sinceits

listing,partlybecauseofproductiondifficulties.ThatofBeyondMeat,whoseburgersfeatureinMcDonald?slatest

menu,isdownby90%fromitspeak.

2.縝密構(gòu)思

將第1、5兩個要點進行重組，將第2、3、4三個要點進行整合。

3.遣詞造句

Theboomingplantproteinindustryisfacingchallenges.

Plant-basedmeatcanneverhavethesamenutritionalvalueasanimal-producedprotein.

Inaddition,itsmanufacturingprocessisnotsustainablebecausegrowingplantsconsumesresources.

Salesmayalsoencountersetbacksduetothedietaryhabitsofsomecountries.

Thisuncertaintyisreflectedinthedecliningmarketvalueofrelatedcompanies.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Itssalemayalsomeetsetbacksinsomecountriesduetotheirdietaryhabits.句中包含介

詞短語作狀語的結(jié)構(gòu)，表達高級。

[高分句型2]Thisuncertaintyisreflectedinthedecliningmarketvaluesofrelevantenterprises.句中包含一般現(xiàn)

在時被動語態(tài)結(jié)構(gòu)以及介詞短語作狀語的結(jié)構(gòu)，表達非常高級。

（七）

（2024年松江區(qū)一模）

WhyShouldWeReadLiteraryClassics?

Manyhavegrownuponahealthydietofliteraryclassics.Someliteraryclassicshavebeeninspiringreadersin

manyways.Inthisageoffast-turners,howdoesinvestingourtimeinatimelessliteraryclassicchangeusforthe

better?

Manyliteraryclassicsfromyesteryear,whichgotlittleornosuccesswhenpublished,areconsidered

invaluable.Thesebooksofferawindowthroughwhichwecanexperiencehistoriesrootedindifferentcultures.One

canalwaysask,“Butwecandosobyreadingourhistorybookstoo.Whydoweneedtoreadclassics?^^Thesimple

answeristhattheseliteraryclassicsarenotjustaretellingofhistory.Theyallowustohaveamoreindividualized

experience,wheretheyshowusotherwaystolookathistory.

Itiscommonknowledgethatreadingasahabithelpsusimproveourcommandofthelanguage.Butliterary

classicshaveanedge:theenrichingwritingstyleissomethingthatsetsthemapart.Fascinatedwiththeamazing

wordingandphrasing,we911surelypauseandwonderaboutwhatweread.Forinstance,whenwereadShakespeare,

wenaturallybegintoconsiderhowtobetterexpressourideasjustlikehisfar-reaching"Havemorethanyoushow;

speaklessthanyouknow.”

Onemorebenefitisthatafterreadingclassics,wewon'tseenon-classicsasjustotherstories:we'llbecome

interestedinthem.Maybewe'llrealizethatsomedetailsweignoredlasttimeareactuallyworthappreciating,or

we'lldiscoverliterarydevicesthatbringawholenewmeaningtothestory.Literaryclassicsofferusmore

perspectivestodigdeepandenhanceourabilitytothinkandreason,whichwillinevitablyspilloverintoourreading

ofotherworks.Wefinallyfallinlovewithnon-classicsaswell.

【答案】

WhyShouldWeReadLiteraryClassics?

Readingliteraryclassicsbenefitsusalot.Firstly,Itoffersusindividualizedwaysofexperiencinghistory.secondly,

itimprovesourwritingabilitybyencouragingustothinkovertheirexpressionsandlearntoexpressourideasinthat

way.Besides,we'lllovetoreadnon-classicsbecausereadingclassicsenableustothinkandreasondeeplyfrom

diverseperspective.

【解析】

【導語】本文是篇議論文。閱讀文學名著使我們受益匪淺。首先，它為我們提供了個性化的體驗歷史的方

式。其次，它通過鼓勵我們思考他們的表達并學會用這種方式表達我們的想法來提高我們的寫作能力。此

外，我們會喜歡閱讀非經(jīng)典作品，因為閱讀經(jīng)典作品可以讓我們從不同的角度進行深入的思考和推理。

【詳解】1.要點摘錄：

l.Inthisageoffast-turners,howdoesinvestingourtimeinatimelessliteraryclassicchangeusforthebetter?

2.Thesimpleansweristhattheseliteraryclassicsarenotjustaretellingofhistory.Theyallowustohaveamore

individualizedexperience,wheretheyshowusotherwaystolookathistory.

3.Butliteraryclassicshaveanedge:theenrichingwritingstyleissomethingthatsetsthemapart.

4.Literaryclassicsofferusmoreperspectivestodigdeepandenhanceourabilitytothinkandreason,whichwill

inevitablyspilloverintoourreadingofotherworks.

2.縝密構(gòu)思:

將1、2、3、4分別進行總結(jié)概述。

3.遣詞造句:

Readingliteraryclassicsbenefitsusalot.

Firstly,Itoffersusindividualizedwaysofexperiencinghistory.

secondly,itimprovesourwritingabilitybyencouragingustothinkovertheirexpressionsandlearntoexpressour

ideasinthatway.

Besides,we'lllovetoreadnon-classicsbecausereadingclassicsenableustothinkandreasondeeplyfromdiverse

perspective.

【點睛】【高分句型11secondly,itimprovesourwritingabilitybyencouragingustothinkovertheirexpressions

andlearntoexpressourideasinthatway.（運用了動名詞作賓語。）