期末復(fù)習(xí)寫作專訓(xùn)Module13課件九年級(jí)英語(yǔ)下冊(cè)（合肥地區(qū)）

模塊寫作專訓(xùn)Module1Travel?

?本模塊圍繞“旅行”這一話題設(shè)計(jì)了一些語(yǔ)言實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，如談?wù)摷倨谏?，描寫自己的一次旅游?jīng)歷等，其中涉及乘坐的交通工具、旅游地點(diǎn)、難忘的人和事等。?

?[經(jīng)典例題]下表記錄了去年5月1日你與家人的旅行。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文描述這次短暫而愉快的旅行，詞數(shù)80～100。第一天我們乘飛機(jī)到達(dá)了聊城。天下著雨，長(zhǎng)途旅行后，我們累了，因此第一天下午我們?cè)谫e館休息。第二天陽(yáng)光明媚，我們參觀了光岳樓（GuangyueTower）、鐵塔（theIronTower）及山陜會(huì)館（Shan-ShaanGuildhall），了解了很多歷史知識(shí)。第三天上午我們?cè)跂|昌湖劃船，下午乘飛機(jī)回家。[思路點(diǎn)撥]①

要點(diǎn)提示：根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫作，并適當(dāng)進(jìn)行拓展。在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意時(shí)間順序。②

時(shí)態(tài)：以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。③

人稱：以第一人稱為主。[寫作提綱][高分范文]MyparentsandIwenttoLiaochengforatripbyplaneonMay1lastyear.Itwasrainyandweweretiredafterthelongflight，sowerestedinthehotelintheafternoon.Thenthenextday，itwassunnyandwevisitedGuangyueTower.Intheafternoon，wevisitedtheIronTowerandShan-ShaanGuildhall.Welearntalotaboutthehistoryfromtheguide.Onthethirdday，wewentboatingonDongchangLakeinthemorning.Intheafternoon，

weflewbackhome.Thetripwasshort.However，Iwasveryexcitedandenjoyeditalot.?

?去年國(guó)慶節(jié)，你和家人一起去黃山旅游。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文描述你們這次短暫而愉快的旅行，詞數(shù)80～100。內(nèi)容包括：1.黃山位于安徽省南邊；2.從合肥開(kāi)車，大約3個(gè)小時(shí)到黃山，我們沿途品嘗了當(dāng)?shù)孛朗常?.第二天登山，由于氣溫驟降，我們欣賞了霧?。╮ime），沒(méi)看到日出、云海；4.第三天回家。

LastNationalDay，IwenttoMountHuangwithmyfamily.ItliesinthesouthofAnhuiProvince.IttookusaboutthreehourstodrivetherefromHefei.Onthewaythere，wetastedlotsoflocalfood.Itwassonice.

LastNationalDay，IwenttoMountHuangwithmyfamily.ItliesinthesouthofAnhuiProvince.IttookusaboutthreehourstodrivetherefromHefei.Onthewaythere，wetastedlotsoflocalfood.Itwassonice.

Onthesecondday，itgotcoldsuddenly，soweputonourcoats.Wewereluckytoseetherimebecauseofthesuddencold.Wewentbackhomeonthethirddayanditwaswarmagain.ItwassuchawonderfuljourneythatIwillneverforgetit.

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Onthesecondday，itgotcoldsuddenly，soweputonourcoats.Wewereluckytoseetherimebecauseofthesuddencold.Wewentbackhomeonthethirddayanditwaswarmagain.ItwassuchawonderfuljourneythatIwillneverforgetit.

?Module2Education?

?本模塊的核心話題是“教育”。學(xué)生能夠相互交流并談?wù)撋磉叺氖挛?，表達(dá)自己對(duì)學(xué)校生活的觀點(diǎn)。?

?[經(jīng)典例題]某英文網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以“Myschoollife”為題的征文活動(dòng)。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)你寫一篇80～100詞的短文投稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)參考詞匯SubjectsEnglish，science...Teachersandclassmateskind，helpful...Activitiesbasketball...[思路點(diǎn)撥]

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要點(diǎn)提示：根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫作，并適當(dāng)進(jìn)行拓展。在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句子之間的銜接。②

時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。③

人稱：以第一人稱為主。[寫作提綱][高分范文]MyschoollifeI’mLiHuafromSunnyHillMiddleSchool.I’dliketosharemyschoollifewithyou.

Wehavemanysubjectsatschool，suchasChinese，English，scienceandsoon.IamfocusedonChinese，forIthinkit’sgettingmoreandmorewidelyusedthroughouttheworld.Ourteachersandclassmatesarekindandhelpful.WheneverIhaveproblems，theyarealwaysreadytogivemeahand.Schoolactivitiesarerichandcolourful.Ioftenplaybasketballwithmyclassmates.Ilikereadingaswell.SoIoftenspendmyfreetimereadingintheschoollibrary.MyschoollifeiswonderfulandIenjoyit.?

?（2023·亳州渦陽(yáng)縣模擬）為構(gòu)建德智體美勞全面培養(yǎng)的教育體系，國(guó)家印發(fā)了《關(guān)于全面加強(qiáng)新時(shí)代大中小學(xué)勞動(dòng)教育的意見(jiàn)》，把勞動(dòng)教育納入人才培養(yǎng)全過(guò)程。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身體會(huì)，就如何培養(yǎng)勞動(dòng)精神，給校報(bào)英語(yǔ)專欄寫一篇短文。不少于80詞。內(nèi)容包括：1.上勞動(dòng)課，學(xué)習(xí)生活技能；2.參加實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，如：植樹(shù)、洗菜等；3.學(xué)做家務(wù)，如整理房間、學(xué)做菜等；4.養(yǎng)成良好的勞動(dòng)習(xí)慣。

Guidelinesonhardworkingspiriteducationcameoutin2020inordertohelpmorestudentsofdifferentagestogetworkingspirit.

Asamiddleschoolstudent，Iwelcomethemwarmly.Firstly，weshouldhavehardworkingspiritclassestolearnsomebasiclifeskills.Secondly，wecantakepartinafter-schoolactivitiessuchasplantingtreesorwashingvegetablestoenrichourreal-worldworkexperience.Also，weneedtrytodosomechoresathome，liketidyingroomsorcookingsomedishes.Aboveall，weshouldformgoodworkinghabits.

Inaword，thehardworkingspiriteducationisnecessaryandithelpstobuildusup.

?Asamiddleschoolstudent，Iwelcomethemwarmly.Firstly，weshouldhavehardworkingspiritclassestolearnsomebasiclifeskills.Secondly，wecantakepartinafter-schoolactivitiessuchasplantingtreesorwashingvegetablestoenrichourreal-worldworkexperience.Also，weneedtrytodosomechoresathome，liketidyingroomsorcookingsomedishes.Aboveall，weshouldformgoodworkinghabits.

Inaword，thehardworkingspiriteducationisnecessaryandithelpstobuildusup.

?Module3Lifenowandthen?

?本模塊的中心話題是“現(xiàn)在與過(guò)去的生活”，具體圍繞“與過(guò)去相比，生活中的巨大變化”這一主題展開(kāi)，要求學(xué)生能夠使用比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)描述我們或其他國(guó)家人民現(xiàn)在與過(guò)去的生活環(huán)境的差別。?

?[經(jīng)典例題]假設(shè)你是李華，你的朋友John想了解你家鄉(xiāng)的變化，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封詞數(shù)為80～100的郵件，從居住環(huán)境、上班方式及道路狀況等方面介紹一下家鄉(xiāng)的變化，并適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的看法。[思路點(diǎn)撥]①

要點(diǎn)提示：根據(jù)題目?jī)?nèi)容寫作，并適當(dāng)進(jìn)行拓展。在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意比較級(jí)的用法。②

時(shí)態(tài)：以一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。③

人稱：以第一、三人稱為主。[寫作提綱][高分范文]DearJohn，Inthepasttenyears，greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Inthepast，

thereusedtobesmallhouses.Theroadswerenarrowandthelivingconditionswerebad.Peoplewenttoworkonfootorbybike.Buttherearemanytallbuildingsinmyhometownnow.Therearemanywiderroadsandthehousesarebrighterandbigger.Peopleusuallygotoworkbybusorbycar.What’smore，peoplenoweatbetterandlivelonger.I’mhappytoseethesechangesinmyhometown.Ithinkit’sstillimportanttorememberthepast.Ihopemyhometownwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.Yours，LiHua?

?某英文報(bào)刊環(huán)保專欄近期正在舉辦英語(yǔ)征文競(jìng)賽，其主題是贊美家鄉(xiāng)。假設(shè)你是李明，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇以“Mybeautifulhometown”為題的英語(yǔ)短文投稿。不少于80詞。要點(diǎn)提示：1.過(guò)去的家鄉(xiāng)：河水被污染，垃圾到處都是；2.現(xiàn)在的家鄉(xiāng)：山清水秀、空氣清新、鳥語(yǔ)花香；3.你的感想。Mybeautifulhometown

Myhometownisabeautifulplace.Ithasawideriverandisrichinfishandrice.Therehavebeenalotofchangesinmyhometown.

Inthepast，theriverinmyhometownwaspolluted.Therewasmuchrubbishandpeoplelivedahardlife.

Myhometownisabeautifulplace.Ithasawideriverandisrichinfishandrice.Therehavebeenalotofchangesinmyhometown.

Inthepast，theriverinmyhometownwaspolluted.Ther