高中二年級下學(xué)期英語《讀后續(xù)寫-明喻和暗喻》教學(xué)課件

年級：高中三年級學(xué)科：英語課堂：讀后續(xù)寫---明喻和暗喻HowtousesimileandmetaphorinContinuationWriting?Bytheendofthisclass,we’llbeableto:1.gettoknowwhatthesimileisandwhatthemetaphorisbyappreciatingthesamplesentences;2.makethedescriptionsincontinuationwritingmorevividbyusingsimileandmetaphor.Learningobjectives:standardsfullscore25,7levels評分檔次描述(22-25分)1.logicplots2.detailedandvividdescription,variedsentencepatterns3.properconnectionsSomethingwasintheair.WhiteFangknewit.Allhissensestoldhimthatsomebigchangewasabouttocome.“Listentothat.”saidMattonenight.Scottlistened.Throughtheopendoorcamealow,anxiouswhine(哀鳴),likeasobbingunderthebreath.Thencamealongsniff,asWhiteFanglookedathismaster,checkinghewasstillthere.---WhiteFangAlltheworldisastage.---Shakespeare

simile明喻metaphor暗喻Simile：Itisafigureofspeechwhichmakesacomparisonbetweentwounlikeelementshavingatleastonequalityorcharacteristicincommon.明喻是比喻修辭的一種，在強(qiáng)調(diào)兩種事物的相似點(diǎn)的同時，本體、喻體、喻詞都出現(xiàn)，且能使語言生動形象。

Thecrocodilelookslikeadog.

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喻體simile明喻句式一：byusingsimilemarker“l(fā)ike,as,asif/though”A+表“像”的詞匯+BA像B

1.Icouldnotbearthethoughtofneverhearingthatlaughteranymore.Forme,itwaslikea

springoffreshwaterinthedesert.（情感描寫）我無法忍受再也聽不見那笑聲了。對我來說，它就像沙漠里的一股清泉。《小王子》2.Thesceneryalongthejourneyisjustlikeabreath-takinglandscapepainting.(景物描寫)沿路的風(fēng)景就像一幅美麗的山水畫卷。3.Mrs.Satherlookedatmyeyesasif(shewere)seeingmyinnerselflockedawayinside.（動作描寫）Sather老師看著我的眼睛，仿佛看到了我靈魂深處封閉的自我。4.Herhairgrewgreyerandgreyer,asif(itwere)coveredwithsnowandfrost.（肖像描寫）他的頭發(fā)越來越白了，簡直像蓋了一頭皚皚的霜雪。句式二：byusingmarker“as…as…”Aas+adj./adv.+as+a(n)+B

1.Ifoundherlyingonherbed;shewasaslovelyasaflowerandasdrunkasamonkey.(人物描寫)我發(fā)現(xiàn)她躺在床上，貌美如花，酩酊大醉?！读瞬黄鸬纳w茨比》2.Fatherrushedtohisson'sschool,onlytodiscoverthebuildingwasasflataspancake.

(景物描寫)父親沖到兒子的學(xué)校后，才發(fā)現(xiàn)這座建筑已經(jīng)變成一片廢墟。3.Thesmileonherfacewasasvibrantasthesunonasummerday（情感描寫）她臉上的笑容和夏天的太陽一樣充滿活力。更多搭配：asbusyasabee忙忙碌碌 ashungryasawolf饑腸轆轆asproudasapeacock傲如孔雀 aseasyasABC極其容易asbraveasalion勇猛如獅 asprettyasapicture美如畫Metaphor：Itisafigureofspeechcontaininganimpliedcomparison,inwhichawordorphraseordinarilyandprimarilyusedofonethingisappliedtoanother.Unlikesimile,awordoraphrasethatcomparesonethingtoanother,usingthewordslikeoras.暗喻是比喻修辭的一種，用一種事物比喻另一種事物，本體喻體都出現(xiàn)，中間常用喻詞“是”等連接，有時不用喻詞。暗喻的典型形式為：甲是乙，而不用like,as等喻詞。

Theoldman'sfaceisamapoftime.老人的臉是歲月的寫照。metaphor暗喻句式三：byusingmetaphorsimilemarker“be/v.”A+be動詞/動詞+BA是B

1.Lifeisanunexploredriver.fulloftwistsandturns.(哲理)生活就像一條未被涉足的河流，有各種曲折。2.Aheavysilenceblanketedtheroom.（環(huán)境描寫）整個房子沉浸在一片寂寞中。3.Ifeltalumpinmythroat,tearingwellingupinmyeyes.（情感描寫）我如鯁在喉，淚水濕潤了眼眶。4.Stopbeingsuchababy.(人物描寫)別這么幼稚好不好。5.Hejustparrotswhatotherpeoplesay.(動作描寫)他只會鸚鵡學(xué)舌。Task

1指出下面句子里的修辭，并背誦各句。1.Mymotherislikeacoatinwinter,offeringwarmthtome.2.Timewentonasatortoisewent,heavyandslow.3.Hervoicesoundedlikemusicandwasasexcitingasever.4.Thepianoisamonsterthatscreamswhenyoutouchitsteeth.5.Foodandmedicalsuppliesstreamedinbyplane,train,truckandcar.6.Helookedasifhehadjuststeppedoutofmybookoffairytales.7.Shecameintothesittingroom,singinghappily,andasfreshasaroseinaprettywhitedress.8.Jimfeltwonderfullycalmashelookedouteverydayattheshipsliketoysinthesea.metaphor

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2根據(jù)上題中各句進(jìn)行一對一效仿寫句，并背誦。1.這本書就像一位我的老朋友似的，陪伴了我很久。Thebookislikeanoldfriend,accompanyingmeforquitealongtime.2.這輛滿載乘客的公交車就像蝸牛爬行一樣緩慢。Thebusfullofpassengerswentslowlyasasnailwent.3.風(fēng)聽起來像火車呼嘯而過。Thewindsoundedlikearoarofatrainpassingby.4.她的頭發(fā)像是一條流淌在她肩上的金色河流。

Herhairwasaflowinggoldenriverstreamingdownhershoulders.5.小男孩狼吞虎咽。

Theboywolfeddownthefood.6.他在草地上奔跑仿佛他是一只快樂的小鳥。Hewasrunningonthegrassasifhewereahappybird.7.她下了車，跑進(jìn)屋里，高興得像一只歸巢的小鳥。Shesteppedoutofhercarandranintothehouse,ashappyasabirdtogethomeagain.8.湯姆的話像一把刀子刺進(jìn)了瑪麗的心。Tom’swordsseemedtogointoMary’sheartlikeaknife.三，微續(xù)寫閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)漢語提示或要求利用明喻或暗喻的手法填寫空白部分，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。1.____________________________(我如風(fēng)般騎車穿過，明喻)theevergreentreeswhichwereastallasskyscrapers.Thewarmsunshonethroughclouds,2.__________________________________________(那是天上飄著的棉花糖，非限定性定語從句，暗喻).Ithencycledintoagiantgardenofbeautifulpink,yellowand