九年級中考英語總復(fù)習-作文講評課件(共15張課件)

EnglishComposition英語作文

書面表達：近來，天津市正在創(chuàng)建全國文明城市，這一話題在我校引起了熱烈討論。作為一名中學生，請根據(jù)下面提示信息給學校英語專欄寫一篇短文，呼吁大家如何為創(chuàng)建文明城市貢獻力量。1.見面跟人打招呼2.與同學友好相處3.保持教室及社區(qū)環(huán)境衛(wèi)生4.幫助家人做力所能及的事5.在公共場合遵守秩序6.如果友人不遵守規(guī)則，你會…要求:書寫規(guī)范，語句通順，行文流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語法正確詞數(shù)80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)短文應(yīng)包括所有要點，不要逐字翻譯，但可適當發(fā)揮。2018年九年級模擬考試英語作文提示詞：話題issue全國文明城市社區(qū)thenationalcivilizedcity

遵守公共秩序obeypublicorder絕望型抄寫型奮斗型精英型Problems

inyourwriting

要點不全詞數(shù)太少無頭無尾缺少過渡語法錯誤書寫潦草卷面涂改

書面整潔干凈，行文連貫通順，句式多樣，語法基本無誤或有少量語法錯誤。Enjoythefollowingcompositions.Wehadbetterhelpourparentsdothehouseworkwhichwecando.(季建雯)It’sourdutytoprotect

ourenvironment.(周晶美)Weshoulddosomethingwecandotobuildanationalcivilizedcity.(郭爽)It’sagoodideatoget

onwellwithothers.

(姚春情)It’simportanttokeep

ourcommunityclean.(季雅杰)

Enjoythefollowingsentences.評分標準：第五檔（13-15分）能寫明全部要點，文章中語法無誤，行文連貫且通順，表達清楚且豐富。第四檔（10-12分）能寫明全部或大部分內(nèi)容要點，文中有少量語法錯誤，行文基本連貫，表達基本清楚。第三檔（7-9分）

能寫明部分內(nèi)容要點,文中有較多語法錯誤，尚能達意。第二檔（4-6分）

只能寫出少部分內(nèi)容要點，文中有許多語法錯誤，只有個別句子可讀。第一檔（0-3分）

只能寫出語所要求內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些單詞或1-2個要點。正確抄寫全部參考詞匯給1分；寫出相關(guān)要點的詞組給2-3分。評分：_______理由：______

Version1:First,studentssayhellowhentheypeople.Second,studentsarefriendlytoanybody.Third,studentsshouldkeeptheenvironmentiscleaninclassandincommunity.Fourth,studentshavebetterhelpparentstodohousework.Inpublic,wemustobeypublicorder.Finally,whenyoumetsomebodynottoobeyorder.Youmuststophis.andyoucantellherightisaction.

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Version2:

Englishtextbooksplayan

importantpartinourstudyof

English.Theycanhelpuslearn

Englishwell.Itcanalsohelp

openourmindsandmakeour

schoollifecolorful.We’velearned

manywonderfulthingsinthe

worldinourtextbooks.Wealso

learntalotaboutculturesaround

theworld.Myfavoritepersonis

SpudWebb.I’velearnedalot

fromhim.評分標準：第五檔（13-15分）能寫明全部要點，文章中語法無誤，行文連貫且通順，表達清楚且豐富。第四檔（10-12分）能寫明全部或大部分內(nèi)容要點，文中有少量語法錯誤，行文基本連貫，表達基本清楚。第三檔（7-9分）

能寫明部分內(nèi)容要點,文中有較多語法錯誤，尚能達意。第二檔（4-6分）

只能寫出少部分內(nèi)容要點，文中有許多語法錯誤，只有個別句子可讀。第一檔（0-3分）

只能寫出語所要求內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些單詞或1-2個要點。正確抄寫全部參考詞匯給1分；寫出相關(guān)要點的詞組給2-3分。評分：_______理由：______13

Version2:Asamiddleschoolstudent,weshoulddosomethingwecandotobuildthenationalcivilizedcity.Hereissomeadviceforus.Firstofall,whenwemeetsomeone,weshouldsayhellotothem.Andweshouldgetonwellwithourclassmates.Second,wehadbetterkeepourclassroomandcommunityclean.Becauseweshouldprotectourenvironment.Atlast,wemustobeypublicorderinpublicplaces.Ifsomeoneagainsttherules,weshouldstophimandtellhimabouttherules.Ifeveryonecandosomething,ourcitywillbecomebetterandbetter.

語法知識混亂，運用不夠準確代詞:Wemuststophefromdoingit.Youshouldgetonwellwithyouclassmates.時態(tài):Ibelieveourcitygetbetterandbetter.主謂一致:Ifsomeonedon’tobeytherules,…詞性：Wemustn’tagainsttherules.習慣搭配:Weshouldbefriendlywithothers.Weshouldkeepcleantheclassroom.

him

willgetbetterandbetter.break

doesn’ttoTypicalmistakes(典型錯誤)yourkeeptheclassroomclean.句型結(jié)構(gòu)Chinglish現(xiàn)象

IverylikeTianjin.Whenweatschool…Ifhavepeopledoesn’tobeypublicorder…areatschool…

likeTianjinverymuch.

Ifsomeonedoesn’tobeypublicorder…Recently,Tianjinisbuildingthecivilizedcity.Atourschool,wearetalkingaboutthisissue.Thenwhatcanwedotohelpbuildthenationalcivilizedcity?First,Ithinkitispolitetosayhellowhenwemeetsomeone.Andalsoweshouldgetonwellwithourclassmates.Second,keepourclassroomsandcommunitycleansothatwecanliveinacomfortableenvironment.Andasastudent,weshouldhelpparentsdosomethingwecando.What’smore,whenweareinpublic,weshouldalwaysobeypublicorder.Andifsomeonedoesn’tobeypublicorder,it’sourdutytostophimandtellhimtodotherightthing.

Inmyopinion,Tianjinisourhometown,so

let’stryourbesttomakeitabetterplaceandhelpbuildthenationalcivilizedcity.英語作文萬能的三段式“觀點--事例--總結(jié)“StandardofagoodcompositionNomistakes沒有錯誤

Enoughcontent內(nèi)容充足Finelanguage語言豐富Beautifulhandwriting書寫工整1.Youshoulddo…2.Youhadbetterdo…3.It’sagoodideatodo…4.It’sbettertodo…5.It’simportant/necessarytodo…6.Let’stryourbesttodo…

7.It’sourdutytodo…

Giveadvice（提建議）Youaresupposedtodo…

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