Unit3-寫作課-名師課件（一）

Firstwealthishealth.

——EmersonHewhohashealthhashope,andhewhohashopehaseverything.ProverbsCanyoutellsomeharmfuleffectsofsmoking?

Ifyouwanttopersuadeafriendorarelativeofyourstogiveupsmoking,whatsuggestionsareyougoingtogivehim/her?1.對(duì)…有害beharmfulto/doharmto/havenegativeeffecton2.養(yǎng)成…的壞習(xí)慣getinto/form/developthebadhabitofdoingsth.3.對(duì)…上癮be/becomeaddictedto4.身心健康physicalandmentalhealth5.對(duì)…有益bebeneficialto/dogoodto6.改掉…的習(xí)慣getridofthehabitof…/quitdoingsth.7.身體很差beinpoorhealth8.認(rèn)為…很重要attachgreatimportanceto9.毫無疑問…Thereisnodoubtthat…10.從長遠(yuǎn)來看inthelongrun11.在學(xué)習(xí)和娛樂之間保持平衡keep/strikeabalancebetweenstudyandentertainment12.我建議你…Isuggestthatyou(should)do…13.使情況更糟糕的是Tomakethingsworse,…/Worsestill,…14.下定決心做某事bedeterminedtodo

15.在我看來Inmyopinion/AsfarasIamconcerned

AdvicefromGrandadPara4Theharmfuleffectsofsmokingharmfuleffectsdodamagetoheart&lungsdifficulttobecomepregnantsmellterrible

affectnon-smokers’healththeendsoffingersturnyellowunabletoenjoysportbecomebreathlessRead

HowcanIstopsmoking(Page19)

andanswer:Suggestionsforquittingsmoking:____________________________________________________________________________________PrepareyourselfBedeterminedBreakthehabitRelaxGethelpifyouneeditKeeptryingTopicsentencesupportingevidence1supportingevidence2supportingevidence3supportingevidence4…Conclusion(whennecessary)Discussion

SupposeyouhaveagoodfriendcalledDean,whoisaddictedtoplayingonlinegameslikemanyyoungpeople.Hisstudyissufferinggreatly.

Whatwouldyousaytohiminordertopersuadehimtogiveupplayingonlinegames?Alettertomyfriend現(xiàn)象：據(jù)報(bào)道70%的高中生學(xué)習(xí)成績不好是由于迷上網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲。我發(fā)現(xiàn)你不久前開始玩游戲，現(xiàn)在發(fā)現(xiàn)很難戒掉。危害：1.2.3.……希望：我希望盡快聽到你的好消息。建議：1.2.3.……細(xì)審題，三確定1.確定體裁：本文為

；2.確定人稱：本文的主要人稱應(yīng)該為

；3.確定時(shí)態(tài)：主要使用

和

。建議信第二人稱一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)一般將來時(shí)巧銜接，順成文first,firstly,inthefirstplace,firstofall...second,secondly,inthesecondplace,next...third,thirdly,besides,inaddion,futhermore,what‘smore,moreover,inadditionatlast,lastly,finally,inthelastplace,lastbutnotleast...inaword,insummary,tosumup,inshort,inconlcusion...寫作高分原則出彩的詞語、短語、句式；從句（定語從句、狀語從句、4種名詞性從句）非謂語特殊句型（倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句等）TipsAlettertomyfriendDearDean,Itisreportedthat70%ofthehighschoolstudentssufferfromlowmarksduetoplayingonlinegames.Ifindthatyoustartedtoplaygamesandnowyouarefindingitdifficulttogiveitup.危害：1.2.3.……I’mlookingforwardtohearingyourgoodnewssoon.Yoursincerely,XXX建議：1.2.3.……ChecklistofPeerReviewStructure文章或段落結(jié)構(gòu)GrammaticalMistakes語法錯(cuò)誤Coherence銜接DiverseExpressions表達(dá)的多樣性AlettertomyfriendDearDean,Itisreportedthat70%ofthehighschoolstudentssufferfromlowmarksduetoplayingonlinegames.Ifindthatyoustartedtoplaygamesandnowyouarefindingitdifficulttogiveitup.Youmaynotknowmuchabouttheharmfuleffectsofplayinggames.Infact,itcandoterribledamagetoyoureyesightorthatitiseasierforyoutogetagreatpaininyourneck.Besides,addictedtogames,youcan’tconcentrateonyourlessons.Asaresult,youquicklyfallbehindothers.What’smore,manygamesarefilledwithviolence.Ifyouplaythesegamesoverandoveragain,youmayalsosettledisagreementswithviolenceautomatically,whichmayresultincrime.

Howtostopplayinggames？

Itisnoteasytostopplayinggames,butmillionshavemanagedtoquitandsocanyou.Firstly,listthedisadvantagesofthatbadhabit.Thenputthelisttotheplacewhereyoucanseeiteasily.Secondly,findsomethingfunandgoodtodo,butnotgamingrightaway.Leavemoretimewithyourfriends,moretimetohangoutatabookstore,joinasportteamorsomethingelse.Lastly,makeaneffectivescheduleandfindasupervisor.Heorshewillcheckyourprocessofthetimetableandalsowillgivewarningifyougotoplaygames.

I’mlookingforwardtohearingyourgoodnewssoon.Yoursincerely,