2024屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)：讀后續(xù)寫簡單句秒變高級表達(dá)-長難句技巧素材

讀后續(xù)寫簡單句秒變高級表達(dá)——長難句技巧同學(xué)們在寫作時(shí)，常常感到在有限的時(shí)間內(nèi)，很難寫出復(fù)雜而優(yōu)美的長難句。我們經(jīng)常遇到這樣的情況：句子過于簡單，表達(dá)的內(nèi)容單一，無法吸引閱卷老師的注意，導(dǎo)致分?jǐn)?shù)不夠理想。很多同學(xué)明明有豐富的想法，卻因?yàn)榫渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)單一而失去了展現(xiàn)的機(jī)會(huì)。那么，如何能夠在短時(shí)間內(nèi)提升句子表達(dá)的層次感和復(fù)雜性呢？今天，我們就來介紹一種非常有效的方法——通過逐步增加修飾成分，讓簡單句“升級”。無論是副詞、形容詞短語、從句還是更豐富的涵義，都可以讓一個(gè)普通的句子變得充實(shí)、有深度，從而讓你的作文脫穎而出，抓住閱卷老師的眼球。例子1：關(guān)于“幫助他人”1."Ihelpothers."基礎(chǔ)句子：主語+謂語+賓語2."Iamalwayswillingtohelpothers."增加修飾成分：增加了“alwayswilling”這一形容詞短語，表示頻率和意愿。3."Iamalwayswillingtohelpothers,especiallythosewhoareindifficultsituations."增加修飾成分：增加了“especiallythosewhoareindifficultsituations”這一定語從句，進(jìn)一步描述幫助的對象。4."Iamalwayswillingtohelpothers,especiallythosewhoareindifficultsituations,becauseIbelievethatactsofkindnesscanmakeasignificantimpact."增加修飾成分：增加了“becauseIbelievethat...”這一原因狀語從句，解釋了愿意幫助別人的原因。5."Iamalwayswillingtohelpothers,especiallythosewhoareindifficultsituations,becauseIbelievethatactsofkindnesscanmakeasignificantimpactandcreateawarmer,moreharmonioussociety."增加修飾成分：增加了“andcreateawarmer,moreharmonioussociety”這一并列結(jié)構(gòu)，用來描述幫助行為帶來的影響。例子2：關(guān)于“讀書”1."Ilikereading."基礎(chǔ)句子：主語+謂語+賓語2."Ilikereadinghistorybooks."增加修飾成分：增加了“historybooks”這一名詞短語，進(jìn)一步限定閱讀的內(nèi)容。3."Iespeciallyenjoyreadinghistorybooksbecausetheyhelpmeunderstandhowtheworldhasevolved."增加修飾成分：增加了“becausetheyhelpmeunderstand...”這一原因狀語從句，解釋了喜歡讀歷史書的原因。4."Iespeciallyenjoyreadinghistorybooksbecausetheyhelpmeunderstandhowtheworldhasevolvedandallowmetolearnfromthelessonsofthepast."增加修飾成分：增加了“andallowmetolearnfromthelessonsofthepast”這一并列結(jié)構(gòu)，進(jìn)一步說明讀歷史書的好處。5."Iespeciallyenjoyreadinghistorybooksbecausetheyhelpmeunderstandhowtheworldhasevolvedandallowmetolearnfromthelessonsofthepast,sothatIcanavoidrepeatingthesamemistakesinthefuture."增加修飾成分：增加了“sothatIcanavoidrepeating...”這一目的狀語從句，強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)習(xí)歷史的最終目的是避免重復(fù)錯(cuò)誤。例子3：關(guān)于“寫作”1."Ilikewriting."基礎(chǔ)句子：主語+謂語+賓語2."Ienjoywritingimaginativestories."增加修飾成分：增加了“imaginativestories”這一名詞短語，具體說明寫作的內(nèi)容。3."Ienjoywritingimaginativestoriesthatallowmetoexpressmyuniqueperspectivesonlife."增加修飾成分：增加了“thatallowmetoexpress...”這一定語從句，說明故事的作用和意義。4."Ienjoywritingimaginativestoriesthatallowmetoexpressmyuniqueperspectivesonlife,andthiscreativeprocessmakesmefeelfulfilledandcontent."增加修飾成分：增加了“andthiscreativeprocessmakesmefeel...”這一并列結(jié)構(gòu)，描述了寫作帶來的情感收獲。5."Ienjoywritingimaginativestoriesthatallowmetoexpressmyuniqueperspectivesonlife,andthiscreativeprocessnotonlymakesmefeelfulfilledandcontentbutalsogivesmetheopportunitytoconnectwithreaders."增加修飾成分：增加了“notonly...butalso...”這一并列結(jié)構(gòu)，進(jìn)一步說明寫作的更多好處。例子4：關(guān)于“旅行”1."Ilovetraveling."基礎(chǔ)句子：主語+謂語+賓語2."Iloveexploringdifferentcultures."增加修飾成分：增加了“exploringdifferentcultures”這一動(dòng)名詞短語，具體說明旅行的內(nèi)容。3."Iloveexploringdifferentculturesbecauseitbroadensmyhorizonsandenrichesmyknowledge."增加修飾成分：增加了“becauseitbroadensmyhorizons...”這一原因狀語從句，解釋了喜歡探索不同文化的原因。4."Iloveexploringdifferentculturesbecauseitbroadensmyhorizons,enrichesmyknowledge,andhelpsmeunderstandthediversityofhumanity."增加修飾成分：增加了“andhelpsmeunderstand...”這一并列結(jié)構(gòu)，進(jìn)一步描述探索文化的好處。5."Iloveexploringdifferentculturesbecauseitbroadensmyhorizons,enrichesmyknowledge,andhelpsmeunderstandthediversityofhumanity,teachingmetorespectandembracedifferentperspectivesandvalues."增加修飾成分：增加了“teachingmetorespectandembrace...”這一結(jié)果從句，說明對多樣性的理解如何影響了自己的態(tài)度。例子5：關(guān)于“學(xué)習(xí)英語”1."IwanttolearnEnglish."基礎(chǔ)句子：主語+謂語+賓語2."IwanttolearnEnglishbecauseitallowsmetocommunicatewithmorepeople."增加修飾成分：增加了“becauseitallowsmetocommunicate...”這一原因狀語從句，解釋了學(xué)習(xí)英語的原因。3."IwanttolearnEnglishbecauseitallowsmetocommunicatewithmorepeopleandpavesthewayformyfuturecareerdevelopment."增加修飾成分：增加了“andpavesthewayfor...”這一并列結(jié)構(gòu)，進(jìn)一步說明學(xué)習(xí)英語的好處。4."IwanttolearnEnglishbecauseitallowsmetocommunicatewithmorepeopleandpavesthewayformyfuturecareerdevelopment,givingmetheopportunitytoparticipateininternationalprojects."增加修飾成分：增加了“givingmetheopportunityto...”這一非限制性定語從句，強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)習(xí)英語為未來帶來的機(jī)會(huì)。5."IwanttolearnEnglishbecauseitallowsmetocommunicatewithmorepeopleandpavesthewayformyfuturecareerdevelop