2025版高考英語總復(fù)習(xí)高考語法與寫作專題14-10半開放性作文教學(xué)案外研版

PAGEPAGE1第十講(半)開放性作文[技巧點(diǎn)撥]半開放性作文相較于傳統(tǒng)的提綱寫作、指導(dǎo)性寫作限制較少，在給出相應(yīng)的命題后，一般不供應(yīng)詳細(xì)的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，有時(shí)甚至不供應(yīng)詳細(xì)的情景或不對文章的體裁進(jìn)行限制，因此考生自由發(fā)揮的空間較大。命題一般側(cè)重兩種文體：記敘文或爭論文。[寫作模板]Nowadays,thereisawidespreadconcernover__作文題目__.Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesin__題目議題__.Generallyspeakingitiswidelybelievedthereareseveralpositiveaspectsasfollows,firstly,__優(yōu)點(diǎn)一__.Andsecondly__優(yōu)點(diǎn)二__．Justasapopularsayinggoes,“Everycoinhastwosides”，__探討議題__isnoexception,andinanotherword,itstillhasnegativeaspects.Tobeginwith,__缺點(diǎn)一__.Inaddition,__缺點(diǎn)二__．Tosumup,weshouldtrytobringtheadvantageof__探討議題__intofullplay,andreducethedisadvantagestotheminimumatthesametime.Inthatcase,wewilldefinitelymakeabetteruseofthe__探討議題__．[經(jīng)典考題](2024·浙江三模)請以“OneThingI'mProudof”為題，用英語寫一篇100～120個(gè)詞的短文，記述一件你自己認(rèn)為得意的事情。要求如下：1．記述事務(wù)經(jīng)過；2．簡要說明你感到得意的緣由或從中得到的啟示。留意：文章的標(biāo)題已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。[滿分范文]OneThingI'mProudofIstillrememberhowIbecameagoodtabletennisplayer.ThefirstdayIwenttohighschool,Isawsomeofmyclassmatesplayingtabletennis.Amazedathowskillfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.Lateron,IkeptpracticinguntilIbecameconfidentenoughtochallengethegoodplayers.AttheendoftermIbecameoneofthebestplayersinmyclass.Iamreallyproudofthisexperience,becauseithelpsmerealizethatweallcanfulfillourpotentialandachieveourgoalsthroughhardwork.Italsohelpsmebetterunderstandtheproverb“Practicemakesperfect”．[閱卷評析]本文較多的運(yùn)用了分詞形式，使文章富有活力，如sawsomeofmyclassmatesplaying;beamazedat;keptpracticing；同時(shí)也恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用了過渡詞，如lateron;then和attheendofterm，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，具有層次性。[增分靚句]1．文章開頭佳句集錦①關(guān)于……人們有不同的觀點(diǎn)。一些人認(rèn)為……Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleasto...Somepeoplesuggestthat...②依據(jù)圖表/數(shù)字/統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出……。很明顯……，但是為什么呢？Accordingtothefigure/number/statistics/percentagesinthechart/line/graph,itcanbeseenthat...while.Obviously,...,butwhy?2．中間內(nèi)容部分佳句集錦①盡管如此，我信任……更有利。Nonetheless,Ibelievethat...ismoreadvantageous.②有幾個(gè)可供我們接受的方法。首先，我們可以……。Thereareseveralmeasuresforustoadopt.First,wecan...3．文章結(jié)尾佳句集錦①對我來說，我認(rèn)為有必要……。緣由如下：第一，……；其次，……；最終……但同樣重要的是……Inmyopinion,Ithinkitnecessaryto...Thereasonsareasfollows.First...Second...Lastbutnotleast,...②在總體上很難說……是好還是壞，因?yàn)樗诤艽蟪潭壬先Q于……的形勢。然而，就我個(gè)人而言，我發(fā)覺……Itisdifficulttosaywhether...isgoodornotingeneralasitdependsverymuchonthesituationof...However,fromapersonalpointofviewIfind...[熱點(diǎn)押題](2024·寧夏育才中學(xué)模擬)假如你是李華，你的英語老師在英語課上要求同學(xué)們就自己喜愛的一句座右銘談一下自己的體會(huì)，假如你喜愛“Arainbowcomesafterrain”，那么就請你以此為話題寫一篇短文。留意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[答案]Myfavouritemottois“Arainbowcomesafterrain”，whichtendstodrivemeforwardwheneverI'mintrouble.Asweallknow,onlyafterexperiencingfrustration,painsandsufferingsinlifecanwereallybecomepowerfulandmaturephysicallyandmentallyandeventuallyachieveourgoals.Andthisiswhatthemottoconveys.Atonetime,Iwasoneofthemostexcellentstudentsinmyclass,butlater,Isufferedfromaseriousdiseaseandmissedtoomanylessons.Asaresult,Ifellbehind,causingmyselftobeindespair.Itwasmyheadteacher