專題09寫作-2021-2022學年六年級英語下學期期末考試好題匯編（牛津上海版）

專題09寫作（教師版）No1上海外國語大學附屬中學20202021學年六年級下學期期末V.Translation.10%（3’+3’+4’）71.一份傳統(tǒng)的英式早餐包括香腸、培根、雞蛋和吐司。________________【答案】AtraditionalEnglishbreakfastincludessausages,bacon,eggsandtoasts.【解析】【詳解】“一份傳統(tǒng)的英式早餐”atraditionalEnglishbreakfast；“包括”include；“香腸”sausages；“培根”bacon；“雞蛋”eggs；“和”and；“吐司”toasts。陳述一般事實，用一般現(xiàn)在時，主語“atraditionalEnglishbreakfast”是單數(shù)，include用其第三人稱單數(shù)形式includes。句子開頭首字母大寫。故填AtraditionalEnglishbreakfastincludessausages,bacon,eggsandtoasts.72.你母親節(jié)的計劃是什么？我打算周六上午和父母去爬山。________________【答案】What’syourplanforMother’sDay?IplantohikeinthemountainswithmyparentsonSaturdaymorning.【解析】【詳解】“你母親節(jié)的計劃”yourplanforMother’sDay；“是什么”what’s；“我”I；“打算做某事”plantodosth.；“去爬山”hikeinthemountains；“和父母”withmyparents；“周六上午”onSaturdayafternoon。根據(jù)漢語意思可知要用一般現(xiàn)在時，I后用動詞原形。故填What’syourplanforMother’sDay?IplantohikeinthemountainswithmyparentsonSaturdaymorning.

73.麥克（Mike）經(jīng)常在快餐店點一大份色拉配希臘調料和一馬克杯蘇打水。________________【答案】MikeoftenordersalargesaladwithGreeksaladdressingandamugofsodawateratthesnackbar.【解析】【詳解】麥克：Mike，作主語；經(jīng)常：often；在快餐店：atthesnackbar，作地點狀語，放在句末；點：order，作謂語，本句用一般現(xiàn)在時，主語是三單，所以order用其三單形式；一大份色拉配希臘調料：alargesaladwithGreeksaladdressing；和：and，這里表示并列關系；一馬克杯：amugof；蘇打水：sodawater。故填MikeoftenordersalargesaladwithGreeksaladdressingandamugofsodawateratthesnackbar.Writeatleast50wordsonthetopic“Protectforests”(以“保護森林”為題，寫一篇不少于50個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。注意：不得出現(xiàn)考生真實信息。)Suggestedideas:1.Whataretheforests?2.Whatcanwegetfromforests?3.Howcanweprotectforests?Protectforests【答案】ProtectforestsForestsareveryimportanttopeople.Theplantsintheforestshelptomaketheairfresherandcleaner.Theycanholdthewaterwhenitrains.Theycanalsohelptocontroltheclimate.Theygiveusmanyusefulthings.ButnowForestsarebeingsmallerandsmaller.Sohowcanweprotectthem?First,weshouldn’tcutdownthetrees.Second,weshouldsavetheuseofpaper.Last,weshouldplantmoretrees.Forestsareourgoodfriends.Weshouldprotectthem.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇命題作文，以“保護森林”為題，寫一篇不少于50個詞的短文，要求給出了三點提示：1.森林是什么？2.我們叢森林里能得到什么？3.我們怎樣保護森林？2.例文點評：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了森林的重要性，主要用到了一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，用到了第一人稱和第三人稱，寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。3.高分亮點：短語：beimportantto；maketheairfresherandcleaner；helptocontroltheclimate；beesmallerandsmaller；cutdown；savetheuseofpaper句型：First,weshouldn’tcutdownthetrees.；Second,weshouldsavetheuseofpaper.Last,weshouldplantmoretrees.；Forestsareourgoodfriends.Weshouldprotectthem.（表示順序的詞：first…second…last…）No2上海市松江區(qū)20202021學年六年級下學期期末(B)Writing(寫作）64.Writeatleast40wordsonthetopic“Myfavourite_________”.(請以“我最喜歡的__________”為題寫一段話，不少于40個單詞。注意：不得出現(xiàn)考生真實信息)Suggestedquestions:1.Whatisyourfavourite...?(city/season/festival/sport/book/animal......)2.Why?Giveatleast2reasons.(至少給出2個理由）_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【64題答案】【答案】范文MyfavouriteanimalIlikedogs,becausetheyarehuman’sgoodfriends.Theycandomanyhelpfulthingstous.Forexample,aguidedogcanhelpandleadtheblindpeople.Sometimesdogscanhelptheirownerdosomework!Whenwearebored,wecantakethemforawalk,andwecanplaywiththem.Ithinkdogsarecute,clever,friendlyandhelpful.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目是半命題作文。在寫作時應符合文章主題；第一段寫喜歡的東西是什么；第二段主要寫喜歡他們的原因；第三段簡單總結。寫作指導：本文應該用第一人稱來敘述；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；描述細節(jié)時，細節(jié)應符合文章要求，不可隨意減少，可以有適當?shù)难a充；描述時應注意保證思路清晰。No3上海市嘉定區(qū)20202021學年六年級下學期期末VII.Writing(作文)(共10分)59.Writeatleast50wordsaboutthetopicTravellinginShanghai（以“上海的出行方式”為題，寫一篇不少于50個單詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Suggestedquestions:1.Whatwastravellinginourcitylikeinthepast?2.Whatdoyouthinkoftravelinginourcitynowadays?3.Howwilltravellingbeintenyears?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【59題答案】【答案】[例文]TravellinginShanghaiInthepast,thereweren’talotofbuses,carsorundergroundinShanghai.Sopeoplespentalotoftimeontheirwaytoworkorschool.Nowadays,travellinginShanghaiisnotverydifficult.Peoplecangoaroundthecityindifferentwayssuchasunderground,lightrailortaxi.Perhapsintenyears,moreandmorepeoplewilldrivecarsthemselves.Inmyopinion,therewillbemoreundergroundstationsandflyoversbutfewertrafficjams.IbelievetravellinginShanghaiwillbemuchmoreconvenient.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為話題作文，要求以“上海的出行方式”為主題寫一篇短文，內容必須包括上海出行方式演變的過去、現(xiàn)在和未來。2.寫作指導：寫作時人稱應用第三人稱，時態(tài)可采用過去時描述上海出行方式的歷史、現(xiàn)在時描述上海出行方式的現(xiàn)狀、將來時描述上海出行方式的前景展望。文章敘述按時間線“過去——現(xiàn)在——將來”展開，應做到條理清晰、層次分明，不要在文中出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫及語法時態(tài)使用錯誤。No4上海市奉賢區(qū)五校20202021學年六年級下學期期末XI.Writing.(共8分)62.Writeatleast60wordsabout“________is/areimportant”.(請以“________is/areimportant”為題)，寫一篇不少于60字的文章。注意：文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名，校名以及其他信息，否則不予評分。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【62題答案】【答案】參考范文：WaterisimportantAlmostthreequartersoftheEarthiswater.Weusewatertodrink,waterfloursandsoon.Butnowadaysalotofpeopleispollutingthewater,Ifthereisnowater,allthepeopleontheearthwilldie,soweshouldprotectthewater.Wecanprotectwaterbyfixingthedrippingtap.Wecanprotectwaterbynotwashingvegetablesorfruitsundertherunningtap.Let’sprotectwatertogether.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于提綱作文，議論文寫作。題目要求以“________is/areimportant”為題寫作，命題既有限制又給學生發(fā)揮空間。在寫作時應承接短文開頭，第一段總述對題目的解釋；第二段闡明原因或者目的并結尾。2.寫作指導：本文應用第一人稱來提出論點或主題；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；描述水重要的原因時要描寫細致，條理清晰。No5上海市浦東新區(qū)十五校20202021學年六年級下學期期末VIII.Writing(共10分)60.Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“______isimportanttous”usingthefollowingquestionsbelowforreference.(請根據(jù)提示問題，以“______對我們很重要”為題寫一篇短文，不少于60詞。)Suggestedquestions:1.Whatdoyouthinkisimportanttousinourlife?2.Whydoyouthinkso?3.Whatshouldwedotoprotectit?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【60題答案】【答案】例文：HealthisimportanttousAsweallknow,healthisimportanttousall.Bothphysicalhealthandmentalhealthhavegreateffectsonourlives.Ontheonehand,goodlivinghabitsplayanimportantpartinourphysicalhealth.Weshouldkeepabalanceddietanddomoreexercise.Also,goingtobedearlyandgettingupearlymakesusmoreactive.Ontheotherhand,keepinginagoodmoodwillbringusmentalhealth.Havingsomehobbiescanhelpusfeelrelaxedandmakeourfreetimemoreinteresting.Weshouldsmileatourlife.What’smore,goodmoodscanhelpusfacedifficultiesinanactiveway.Withphysicalhealthandmentalhealth,wearesuretobehealthyandhappy.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文主要圍繞“……對我們很重要”展開，首先把題目補充完整，之后根據(jù)題干中提示的要點進行寫作，也可適當增加細節(jié)使文章更加流暢。2.寫作指導：本文以第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時為主。第一段引出健康對我們很重要；第二段說明健康重要的原因以及我們如何保持健康；最后一段進行總結。寫作時運用不同的句式使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，注意不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。No6上海市金山區(qū)九校20202021學年六年級下學期VIII.Writing(寫話):(共9分)81.Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“TravellinginShanghaiin2050”.(以“TravellinginShanghaiin2050”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文。標點不占格。)1.WhatwilltravellinginShanghaibelikein2050?2.HowwillpeopletravelinShanghaiin2050?3.WhatdoyouthinkoftravellinginShanghaiin2050?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【81題答案】【答案】例文TravellinginShanghaiin2050NowadaysmanypeopleliketravellingbybusandundergroundinShanghai.Theyusuallyusetheirtransportationcardsbecauseitisconvenient.Iprefertotaketheundergroundbecauseitisfaster.Ithinktravellingwillbemucheasierin2050.Perhapstherewillbenobusesinthestreet.Therewillbemoreflyoversandtunnels.Peoplecangotootherplacesbyundergroundorlightrail.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingthechangesinShanghai.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“TravellinginShanghaiin2050”為題，結合提示問題進行寫作，注意要點齊全，可適當發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導：寫作時要以第一和第三人稱來介紹，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。作文要分別介紹2050年在上海旅游將會是什么樣子，2050年人們將如何在上海旅行以及你認為2050年去上海旅游怎么樣。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。No7上海市浦東新區(qū)川沙中學南校2020年六年級下學期期末Ⅱ.Writing.60.Pleasewriteatleast50wordsonthetopic“water”usingthefollowingquestionsbelowforreference.（以“水”為題,寫一段不少于50個單詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Suggestedquestions:1.Whatcanweusewatertodo?2.Whyshouldwesavewater?3.Howcanwesavewater?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【60題答案】【答案】[例文]WaterWaterisveryimportantinourlife.Wedrinkiteverydayanduseittocookandwashthings.Withoutwaterpeoplecan’tlive.Ifthereisnowater,wewon’thaveanywatertodrink.Wewillalsohavenofoodtoeatbecausethereisnowatertowaterthecropsandvegetables.Nowwemuststopwastingthewater.First,weshouldremembertoturnoffthetap.Thiswillsavelotsofwater.Second,wecouldtakeashowerquickly.Third,whynotdrinkallthewaterbeforethrowingthebottlesaway?Itcanalsosavewater.Savingwaterisourdutyandwemustsaveeverydropofwater.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題屬于話題作文，要求以“Water”為題寫一篇關于節(jié)約水的文章。時態(tài)可用現(xiàn)在時，人稱用第一人稱。2.寫作指導：文章可根據(jù)所給三個要點一個一段，最后再單獨用一段來作結尾，結尾可以是呼吁或倡議讀者節(jié)約用水。寫作時題目所給要點必須全部包含在內，并且要做到層次分明，思路清晰，單詞短語拼寫無誤。No8上海市浦東新區(qū)第四教育署2020年六年級下學期期末VIII.Writing(寫作)60.Writeatlast50wordsonthetopic"Let'sprotect___________"(以"讓我們保護_______"題寫一篇不少于50個詞的短文,要求意思明確、內容連貫,標點符號不占格):以下問題僅供參考:1.Whatdoyouwanttoprotect?2.Isitimportant?/Aretheyimportant?Why?3.Whatcanyoudotoprotectit/them?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【60題答案】【答案】例文Let'sprotectforestWeshouldprotectourforest,becauseitisveryimportanttous.First,wecangetalotofthingsfromit,suchaswoodandfruit.Second,theforestishometotheanimals.Finally,theforestisthepreciousresourcesontheearth.Ourforestisbeingdestroyed.Millionsoftreesarecutdowneveryyear.Ifwehavenotrees,theenvironmentwillbetrouble.Forexample,iftherearenotrees,wewillhavenotenoughoxygen.Anditwilldestroytheecosystem.Weshouldplantmoretreesinsteadofcuttingdown.Protectingforestistoprotectourselves.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體和時態(tài)。本文主要應用一般現(xiàn)在時，注意表達的順序，意思要連貫，表達要清楚條理。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，寫完后，注意查驗，是否有漏寫情況，有無語法、拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。2.例文點評：這篇短文很好的完成題目要求，表達清楚條理連貫，具有邏輯性,，使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。3.高分亮點：(1)連詞和短語：because；suchas；First,．．．Second,．．．Finally,．．．；Millionsof；if；insteadof等。(2)高分句型：①Weshouldprotectourforest,becauseitisveryimportanttous.because引導原因狀語從句；②Ourforestisbeingdestroyed.現(xiàn)在進行時的被動語態(tài)，③iftherearenotrees,wewillhavenotenoughoxygen.if引導的條件狀語從句；④Protectingforestistoprotectourselves.動名詞作主語。No9上海市靜安區(qū)育才初級中學2019年六年級下學期期末60.Writing（寫話）：Writeatleast40wordsaboutthetopic“__________is/areimportant”.（以“________很重要”為題，寫一篇不少于40個詞的短文。標點不占格。）提示：你可以選擇一個自然物（如水、樹……）談你認為它（它們）重要的原因（原因至少寫兩個）；表達時要注意名詞的數(shù)。【答案】TreesareimportantAsweallknow,treeshavemanyuses,withtherapidgrowthofeconomy,thetreeshavebeemoreimportantinourlife.Ontheonehand,treesnotonlycancleantheatmosphereandotherbuilding,desk,table,paperswood,butalsomakingoxygen.Ontheotherhand，treescanpreventsoilbewashedawaybyheavyrains.Inhotsummer,itgivesusshadeandmakeourenvironmentmorebeautiful.Sowemustplantmoretreesandprotectforestsandpreventpeoplefromcuttingdownthetrees.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：這是一篇話題作文。首先要選擇一個自然物補全標題，然后介紹它重要的原因。表達時注意名詞的數(shù)，用一般現(xiàn)在時。例文點評：這篇短文選擇了自然物trees，介紹了樹木重要的的四個方面：能制造氧氣凈化空氣；提供木材原料；遮陰美化環(huán)境；防止水土流失。最后提出號召，讓人們植樹，保護森林。短文運用一般現(xiàn)在時，內容豐富，語言準確。高分亮點：短語：Asweallknow，Ontheonehand，Ontheotherhand，makeourenvironmentmorebeautiful，cutdown,prevent..from...,notonly…butalso…被動語態(tài)：treescanpreventsoilbewashedawaybyheavyrains.No10上海市浦東新區(qū)第四教育署20202021學年六年級下學期VIII.Writing（10分）60.Writeapassageofabout50wordsonthetopic“