Unit13課時4Writing（教師版）九年級英語全一冊講義（人教版）

Unit13We’retryingtosavetheearth.目標導航目標導航WritingWritealettertothecitymayorabouttheproblemsandyoursuggestions.Inyourletter,describetheenvironmentalproblemsinyourtown/city.1.Whataretheproblems?2.Wherearethey?3.Whatorwhoiscausingtheseproblems?Then,givesuggestionsorpossiblewaystosolvetheproblems.知識精講知識精講知識點01思路點撥本單元話題是“Protectingtheenvironment(保護環(huán)境）”，主要討論各種污染及其解決辦法。環(huán)境保護是一個熱門話題。與環(huán)保相關(guān)的書面表達通常是先列舉環(huán)境中出現(xiàn)的某一現(xiàn)象，然后要求考生就該現(xiàn)象進行描述，提出建議，闡述自己的觀點。具體來講，此話題主要會從以下四方面進行設(shè)題：(1)記敘你參加過的一次環(huán)?；顒?；(2)談?wù)摫Ｗo環(huán)境的重要性；(3)對保護環(huán)境的措施和建議；(4)對環(huán)境污染的看法并提岀保護環(huán)境的措施。體裁：說明文時態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時人稱：第一人稱和第三人稱知識點02必背單詞組和句型【開頭句】1．Itisveryimportanttotakecareofourenvironment．2．It'sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment．3．Asweallknow，waterisveryimportanttohumanbeings．4．Asmiddleschoolstudents，weshouldtakesomeusefulmeasurestostoppollution．5．Todayenvironmentalproblemshavedrawnpeople'sattention．6.WeneedtoprotectEarthbecauseitisourhome.7.Savetheearth,OurOnlyHome.8.Earthisourhome.9.Environmentalproblemsdirectlyaffectthequalityofpeople’slives.10.Themostimportantquestionintheworldtodayispollution.【中間句】1．Wecanbeginwithsmallthings，suchasplantingmoretrees，ridingbikesinsteadofdriving．2．Sortoutyourrubbishintoplastic，paperandrubber．3．Setuparecyclingnetworktoencouragepeopletorecyclethee－waste．4．Firstofall，wecanrideabikeorwalktoschooltoreduceairpollu5．We'dbetterplantasmanytreesaspossibletomakeourcitymorebeautiful．5．We'dbetterplantasmanytreesaspossibletomakeourcitymorebeautiful．6．Weshoulduseclothbagsinsteadofplasticbagswhenshopping．7．Wecancallonthepeoplearoundustodosomesmallthingstoprotecttheenvironment．8．Thegovernmentshouldmakesomelawstopreventfactoriesfrompouringwastewaterintotheriver．9．Lastbutnotleast，everyoneshouldrealizetheseriousnessofe－waste．10.SoIhopeallthestudentsinourclassstopusingtheplasticbags,anduseourownclothbags.11.Weshouldstopfactoriesfromproducingharmfulgases.12.Ifwegoonpollutingtheearth,itwon’tbefitforustolivein.13.Itnotonlydisturbsothersbutalsodoesgreatharmtopeople’shearing.14.That’saproblemweChinesemustpayspecialattentionto.15.Weshouldplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandmorehealthyinthefuture.16.Thedevelopmentofprivatecarshasbroughtaboutaseriesofproblems.【結(jié)尾句】1．Allinall，everyoneshouldmakeacontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment．2．Ifeveryonetrieshisbesttoprotecttheenvironment，ourcity/worldwillbeenicerandcleaner!3．Weallneedahealthyandcleanenvironment．Let'srepeatthethreethingseveryday：reduce，reuseandrecycle．4．Inaword，everyonecandosomethingtomakeadifference．5．Ifallofuscandoalittlethingtoprotecttheenvironment，I'msureitwillmakeabigdifference．6.Noneofuslikespollution.7.Ibelievewecanmakeourearthabetterplacetolivein.8.Ibelieveourlifewillbeebetterandbetterifwecandothesethings.9.Ifeveryonemakescontributionstoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbeemuchmorebeautiful.10.Let’sdoourbesttomakeitmorebeautiful.11.Let’stakeactionandbeagreenperson!知識點03提綱列提綱寫句子自我介紹及寫信目的I’m

from

No.

5

Middle

School.

I

like

our

city,

but

the

environment

around

here

is

getting

worse

and

worse.環(huán)境問題1問題There

is

white

pollution

everywhere

in

the

city(這個城市到處都是白色污染).

原因Peopleusetoomanydisposable(一次性的)things,suchasplasticcups,bottles,bagsandlunchboxes.Peoplethrowthemawayafteronlyusingthemonce(人們只用一次后就把它們?nèi)拥袅?.建議I

think

that

people

should

try

to

use

their

own

cups,

lunch

boxes

and

chopsticks

instead

of

disposable

things

(我認為人們應(yīng)該盡量使用自己的杯子、飯盒和筷子來代替一次性用品).環(huán)境問題2問題There

has

been

haze

(霧霾)

in

the

city

in

recent

years.原因That’s

because

there

are

more

and

more

cars

on

the

road

(那是因為馬路上有越來越多的汽車)

and

they

give

off

too

much

waste

gas.建議Peopleshouldusepublictransportationmore(人們應(yīng)該多使用公共交通工具).It’sagoodideatotakebusesandusesharedbikes(乘公共汽車和使用共享單車是個好主意).Ithinkthegovernmentshouldencouragemorepeopletousenewenergyvehicles(新能源汽車).表達希望Ihopetheenvironmentinyourcitygetsbetterandbetter.知識點04范文DearMr.Mayor,I’mfromNo.5MiddleSchool.Ilikeourcity,buttheenvironmentaroundhereisgettingworseandworse.First,thereiswhitepollutioneverywhereinthecity.Peopleusetoomanydisposablethings,suchasplasticcups,bottles,bagsandlunchboxes.Peoplethrowthemawayafteronlyusingthemonce.Ithinkthatpeopleshouldtrytousetheirowncups,lunchboxesandchopsticksinsteadofdisposablethings.Second,therehasbeenhazeinthecityinrecentyears.That’sbecausetherearemoreandmorecarsontheroadandtheygiveofftoomuchwastegas.Peopleshouldusepublictransportationmore.It’sagoodideatotakebusesandusesharedbikes.Ithinkthegovernmentshouldencouragemorepeopletousenewenergyvehicles.Ihopetheenvironmentinyourcitygetsbetterandbetter.Yourssincerely,WangLei尊敬的市長先生：，我來自第五中學。我喜歡我們的城市，但周圍的環(huán)境越來越差。首先，城市里到處都是白色污染。人們使用太多一次性物品，如塑料杯、瓶子、袋子和飯盒。人們只使用一次就把它們?nèi)拥袅恕Ｎ艺J為人們應(yīng)該盡量使用自己的杯子、飯盒和筷子，而不是一次性物品。第二，近年來該市出現(xiàn)了霧霾。那是因為路上的汽車越來越多，而且它們排放的廢氣太多。人們應(yīng)該更多地使用公共交通工具。乘公共汽車和共享自行車是個好主意。我認為政府應(yīng)該鼓勵更多人使用新能源汽車。我希望你們城市的環(huán)境越來越好。謹上，王磊能力拓展能力拓展【諺語俗語】

1．Savewater，wasteofshame．節(jié)約用水，浪費可恥。2．Don'tletourtearsbeethelastdropofwaterontheearth．不要讓我們的眼淚成為地球上的最后一滴水。3．Sharingthesamesky，atotalofasoilretaining．同頂一片藍天，共護一方水土。4．Mothernatureisgood，alsocoldbutcher．大自然是善良的慈母，同時也是冷酷的屠夫。分層提分分層提分題組A基礎(chǔ)過關(guān)練（2022·湖北湖北·模擬預(yù)測）現(xiàn)在環(huán)境惡化導致問題日益凸顯，假如你是學生會的干部，請你以學生會的名譽提出倡議，呼吁大家從小事做起，為保護環(huán)境盡一份力量。措施：1.節(jié)約用水和電2.少用塑料袋購物，不亂扔垃圾3.綠色出行；乘公共汽車，自行車或則步行……Theenvironmentisgettingworseandworse.Asastudent,wemustdosomethingtoprotecttheearth.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Theenvironmentisgettingworseandworse.Asastudent,wemustdosomethingtoprotecttheearth.First,it’sveryimportanttosavewaterandenergyinourdailylife.Don’tforgettoturnoffthelightswhenweleavetheroom.Second,wearesupposedtoreusetheplasticbagswhenwegoshopping.What’smore,weshouldn’tthrowrubbisheverywhere.Third,we’dbetterwalk,rideabikeortakethebuswhenwegoout.Lastbutnotleast,weneedtoplantmoretreesandflowerstomaketheenvironmentmorebeautiful.Howimportantitisforustoprotecttheenvironment!Ifwekeepdoingthesethings,Ibelievetheenvironmentwillbebetterandbetter.Let’sdoittogetherfromnowon.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇倡議書，要求我們以學生會的名譽提出倡議，呼吁大家從小事做起，為保護環(huán)境盡一份力量。2.寫作指導：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；寫作首先點明環(huán)境問題的嚴重性，然后根據(jù)所給提示分點介紹保護環(huán)境的具體方法，然后號召大家從小事做起，從現(xiàn)在做起?？梢赃m當運用連詞，副詞等進行過渡，條理清晰，將活動內(nèi)容介紹完整。（2021·廣西賀州·中考真題）近年來、環(huán)境惡化導致的問題日益凸顯。假如你是某中學學生會主席李華，請你以學生會的名義向同學們發(fā)出倡議，呼吁大家從小事做起，為保護環(huán)境盡一份力。提示：（一）措施1.節(jié)約水電；2.少用塑料袋，不亂扔垃圾；3.綠色出行，如乘公交車、騎自行車、步行上學或購物等；（二）提出希望要求：1.文章必須包括所給提示內(nèi)容，可展開思路；適當發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息；3.80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Dearfriends,Theenvironmentalproblemsaregettingmoreandmoreseriousnowadays.Asstudents,weshoulddosomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.First,it’sveryimportanttosavewaterandenergyinourdailylife.Don’tforgettoturnoffthelightswhenweleavetheroom.Second,wearesupposedtoreusetheplasticbagswhenshopping.What’smore,weshouldn’tthrowrubbisheverywhere.Third,we’dbetterwalk,rideabikeortakethebuswhenwegoout.Lastbutnotleast,weneedtoplantmoretreesandflowerstomaketheenvironmentmorebeautiful.Howimportantitisforustoprotecttheenvironment!Ifwekeepdoingthesethings,Ibelievetheenvironmentwillbebetterandbetter.Let’sdoittogetherfromnowon.theStudents’Union【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“保護環(huán)境”寫一篇作文。2.寫作指導：本文主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時。分為三段式：第一段引出主題；第二段提出保護環(huán)境的建議和措施；最后一段表達希望。寫作時保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強，無語法和標點錯誤。題組B能力提升練（2022·遼寧鞍山·中考真題）我校對部分教科書進行了循環(huán)使用。上周三下午，我們班同學就“教科書是否可以循環(huán)使用”展開了激烈的辯論。請你根據(jù)表格提示，以“Shouldwerecycletextbooks?”為題，簡述這次辯論的情況并闡述自己的觀點。（提示詞：資源resource；責任responsibility）要求：（1）不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息。（2）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，可以適當發(fā)揮。（3）內(nèi)容完整、意思連貫、符合邏輯、書寫整齊。（4）詞數(shù)：80～100詞。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。贊同：節(jié)約紙張；保護環(huán)境；增強責任感……反對不能在書上做標記；不能做筆記……自己的觀點……Shouldwerecycletextbooks?LastWednesdayafternoon,ourclassdiscussedifweshouldrecycletextbooks.Now,letmetellyousomethingaboutit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：

Shouldwerecycletextbooks?

LastWednesdayafternoon,ourclassdiscussedifweshouldrecycletextbooks.Now,letmetellyousomethingaboutit.

Ontheonehand,somestudentsinourclassagreetorecycletextbooks.Thereasonsareasfollows.Firstofall,recyclingtextbookscansavepaper.Secondly,itcanprotecttheenvironment.Finally,itcanalsoenhancestudents’senseofresponsibility.Ontheotherhand,otherstudentsareagainstrecyclingtextbooks.Becauseitpreventsstudentsfrommarkingupbooks.Anotherreasonisthatstudentscan’tmakenotesonbooks.

Inmyopinion,textbookscanberecycled.Aslongaswehaveagoodsystemtoimplementthisthing.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)表格提示，寫一篇作文簡述你們班“教科書是否可以循環(huán)使用”辯論的情況并闡述自己的觀點。2.寫作指導：本文時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時；人稱采用第三人稱為主。文章可分為三段，第一段文章已給出；第二段介紹贊同和反對的理由；第三段介紹自己的觀點。行文做到語句通順，無單詞語法錯誤。（2022·湖北武漢·模擬預(yù)測）4月22號是世界地球日（WorldEarthDay）。假如你是李明，請你給校廣播站寫一份倡議書。內(nèi)容要點如下：1.騎車或步行去上學，不讓父母開車接送；2.外出關(guān)燈，刷牙時關(guān)水龍頭；3.購物時不用對環(huán)境有害的塑料袋；4.多種花草樹木；5.補充一兩點個人的想法和建議。注意：1.文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；2.詞數(shù)：60~80；3.內(nèi)容連貫，不要逐條翻譯；4.標題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：tapn.水龍頭

reducev.減少

ratherthan而不是MaketheworldgreenerHello,everyone!Iamhappytogiveaspeechcallingonallofustocareabouttheenvironment.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】PossibleVersion:MaketheworldgreenerHello,everyone!Iamhappytogiveaspeechcallingonallofustocareabouttheenvironment.Everyonecanmakesmallchangesintheirlifestyleandhelpreducepollutionandwaste.First,wecanridebikesorwalktoschoolratherthangoingtoschoolinparents’car,asthiscanhelpreduceairpollution.Second,weshouldturnoffthelightswhengoingoutaswellasturnoffthetapwhenwebrushourteeth.Besides,weshouldn’tuseplasticbagswhenwegoshopping,becauseplasticisharmfultotheenvironment.Lastbutnotleast,weneedtoplantmoretreesandflowerstomaketheenvironmentgreener.Ifwekeepdoingthis,Ibelievetheenvironmentwillbebetterandbetter.Let’sdoeverythingwecantoliveagreenlifeandprotectourplanet.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于根據(jù)所給材料寫作。在寫作時應(yīng)承接短文開頭；第二段提出倡議；第三段提出建議；第四段提出希望。2.寫作指導：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述文章內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；描述具體做法時，應(yīng)描寫細致；整篇文章要描述完整，保證條理清晰，語句通順，無單詞語法錯誤。題組C培優(yōu)拔尖練（2022·山東·青島三十九中二模）最近你從報紙上得知某公司申請在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座汽車工廠，政府正在進行民意調(diào)查，你贊同還是反對呢？理由是什么？（至少兩點），保護環(huán)境，人人有責，作為中學生的我們能為家鄉(xiāng)的環(huán)保做些什么呢？請給相關(guān)部門回信，給出你的好建議。要求：1.詞數(shù)90左右；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。DearSirorMadam.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,ZhangHua【答案】例文：DearSirorMadam,Idon’tagreetobuildanautomobilefactoryinmyhometown.Herearemyopinions.Firstofall,ifafactoryisbuilt,itwillrequirealargepieceofland,andsomeoftheoriginaltreeswillbecutdown,whichwilldestroytheecosystemthere.Secondly,ifafactoryisbuilt,alargeamountofwastewaterandharmfulgaseswillbeproducedintheproductionprocess.Whenthesegasesaredischargedintotheair,theywillcauseharmtohumanbeings,animalsandplants.Ifthewastewaterisdischargedintotheriver,itwillpollutethewatersource,andwewillneverseetheclearriveragain.Ihopethatthegovernmentshouldcarefullyconsiderwhethertobuildfactories.Protectingtheenvironmentistheresponsibilityofallofus.Theearthisthehomeofeveryoneofus.Weshouldprotectit.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點，寫出自己的意見以及反對建工廠的理由，可以適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.

寫作指導：寫作時要緊扣主題，本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時；在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連