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閱讀下面的材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。InaverycoldJanuary,apuppywanderedaroundMr.Lacey’shouse,wherehelivedwithhiswifeMamieandtheirdaughterDoris.Icicles(冰錐)hungthreefeetormorefromtheroofsofhousesandsnowswallowedupcars.Thepuppyhadbeenabandoned,anditmadeitswaydowntheroadtowardtheLaceys’smallhouse,withitsearsdownandtremblingfromshynessandcold.Doris,whoseschoolhadbeencalledoffbecauseofthesnow,wasclearingthestepswhenshespottedthepuppyontheroad.“Comeon,littledog!”shecalleditover.ThepuppyshylywaggeditstailwhenDorisapproached.AssoonasDorisputthedogdowninthekitchen,hermom,Mrs.Lacey,askedwherethedogcamefrom.Mr.Lacey,whowascleaninghisfingernailswithhispocketknifeatthetable,said,“Idon’tknowwhereitcamefrom,butIknowforsurewhereit’sgoing.”Dorishuggedthepuppyhardagainsther.Shesaidnothing.Becauseofthesnowyweather,Mr.Laceycouldn’ttakethepuppytotheshelterrightaway.So,itstayedinthebasement,andDorisfeditleftovers,eventhoughhermomdidn’twanttowastefood.Doristhoughtthepuppywasaroundsixmonthsoldandwouldbequitenoisysometimes.Surprisingly,thepuppybehavedwell,didn’tcryormaketroubleinthebasement,andonlyfollowedDorisupstairswhensheinvitedit.Dorisoftenfounditonthebasementstepslisteningtothekitchentalkandsmellingthefood.Shefeltthepuppywantedcompany.Evenafteraweek,Dorisdidn’tnamethedog,knowingherparentswouldn’tletherkeepit.Herfathermadesolittlemoneythatanypetswereoutofthequestion.Desperatetokeepthedog.Doristriedtoconvinceherparentsbypraisingthedog’sgoodbehaviorandexpressingherloveforit,butherparentsdidn’tgiveadefiniteanswer.Despiteherefforts,Dorissecretlywishedthebadweatherwouldnevergoaway,fearingthepuppy’sunavoidabletriptotheshelter.However,ninedaysafterthedoghadarrived,thesunwasshining.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dorisknewitwastimetosaygoodbyetothedog.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Dorisputherhandtohermouthandcouldn’tbelievewhatshehadheard._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意在一個寒冷的一月,一只被遺棄的小狗來到了Lacey家的小房子前。Doris發(fā)現(xiàn)了這只小狗,把它帶回了家。盡管天氣惡劣,但小狗在地下室安頓下來,Doris用剩飯喂它。盡管她的母親不想浪費食物,但小狗表現(xiàn)得非常好,不吵不鬧,只在Doris邀請時才上樓。Doris意識到小狗渴望陪伴,但因為家庭經(jīng)濟狀況不允許養(yǎng)寵物,她知道不能留下小狗。盡管她試圖說服父母,但他們沒有給出明確的回答。當(dāng)天氣轉(zhuǎn)晴,Doris知道是時候和小狗說再見了。然而,就在她父親準(zhǔn)備帶小狗去收容所的時候,她的母親出人意料地宣布他們可以留下小狗。這個決定讓Doris感到驚喜和感激,小狗終于成為了Lacey家的一員。在原文中,有幾處伏筆暗示了故事可能的發(fā)展方向,并在續(xù)寫中得到了回應(yīng):1.伏筆:Doris的學(xué)校因為雪天關(guān)閉了,這讓她有機會在家發(fā)現(xiàn)小狗?;貞?yīng):在續(xù)寫中,Doris有了更多時間和小狗相處,建立了深厚的感情。2.伏筆:Mr.Lacey提到了小狗的來歷不明,但肯定知道它要去哪里,暗示了可能會被送到收容所。回應(yīng):續(xù)寫中提到了Doris擔(dān)心小狗被送到收容所,增加了故事的緊張感。3.伏筆:Doris沒有給小狗起名字,因為她知道父母不會讓她留下它。回應(yīng):續(xù)寫中,盡管Doris努力說服父母,但他們沒有明確表態(tài),這增加了故事的不確定性。4.伏筆:小狗在地下室表現(xiàn)得非常好,沒有制造麻煩?;貞?yīng):續(xù)寫中,小狗的乖巧行為最終贏得了Lacey家人的心,成為他們決定留下它的關(guān)鍵因素。5.伏筆:Doris對小狗的愛和她對小狗可能被送走的擔(dān)憂?;貞?yīng):續(xù)寫中,Doris的愛和擔(dān)憂得到了回應(yīng),她的父母最終決定留下小狗。6.伏筆:天氣的轉(zhuǎn)變,從雪天到陽光明媚?;貞?yīng):續(xù)寫中,天氣的轉(zhuǎn)變象征著故事情緒的轉(zhuǎn)變,從悲傷和不確定性到喜悅和希望。在續(xù)寫中,這些伏筆得到了回應(yīng),使得故事情感豐富,情節(jié)合理,同時也滿足了讀者對小狗命運的關(guān)心。續(xù)寫要點第一段:Doris與小狗的告別-Doris意識到天氣轉(zhuǎn)晴意味著小狗即將被送往收容所。-她與小狗共度最后的時光,心中充滿了不舍和悲傷。-Mr.Lacey準(zhǔn)備帶小狗離開,Doris緊緊擁抱小狗,試圖抑制自己的情感。-小狗似乎也感受到了即將到來的分離,用尾巴搖擺和親昵的舔舐來安慰Doris。第二段:意外的轉(zhuǎn)機-正當(dāng)Mr.Lacey要帶小狗離開時,Mrs.Lacey出人意料地提出了留下小狗的建議。-Doris震驚于這突如其來的好消息,她的情感從絕望轉(zhuǎn)為喜悅。-家庭經(jīng)濟狀況的考慮被對小狗的愛和Doris的堅持所克服。-小狗最終成為Lacey家的一員,象征著家庭的擴展和愛的包容。讀后續(xù)寫Dorisknewitwastimetosaygoodbyetothedog.Recallingtheninedaysshespentwiththepuppy,amixtureofworriesandsadnesssweptoverDoris.However,thedogwaggeditstailanditdidn’tknowthecrueltruth.WhenDorishuggedthedogandwalkedtoherparents,shemadeonelastattempttoconvinceherparentstoletherkeepit.“Ireallywanttoraisethedog.IcanaccompanyitforalongtimeandIwilltakecareofit.Please!”.Mr.LaceyandhiswifeMamielookedateachotherandfinallyagreed,“OK,youwilltaketheresponsibilityforraisingit.”Dorisputherhandtohermouthandcouldn’tbelievewhatshehadheard.Overjoyedandspeechlesswithhappiness,sherushedtohugherparentsandexpressedhergratitude.ThenshenamedthedogTreasureandpreparedalittlehomeforit.Treasurewaggeditstailhappilyasifitknewthatitwasacceptedbythefamily.NowDorishadanewfriend.ShebeamedatTreasure,anticipatingthenewlifewiththefriend.ItwasonthatdaythatDorisrealizedtheloveandkindnesswouldmakeabigdifference.下水文1Dorisknewitwastimetosaygoodbyetothedog.Sheheldthepuppyclose,hereyesbrimmingwithtearsasshewhisperedsoftgoodbyes.Thesun'sraysstreamedthroughthewindow,castingawarmglowonthescene,yetitdidnothingtoalleviatethechillinDoris'sheart.Shehadgrownattachedtothelittlecreature,andthethoughtofpartingwayswasalmostunbearable.AsMr.Laceypreparedtotakethedogtotheshelter,Dorisclungtothelastmomentswiththepuppy,hersmallframeshakingwithquietsobs.Dorisputherhandtohermouthandcouldn'tbelievewhatshehadheard.Herfather,withagentlesmile,announcedthattheycouldkeepthedogafterall.Itseemedthatthepuppy'sgoodbehaviorandDoris'sunwaveringlovehadwonherparents'hearts.Theicethathadencasedtheirdecisionseemedtomeltawaywiththeweather,andthefamily'scollectivewarmthhadmaderoomforanewmember.Doris'stearsofsorrowtransformedintotearsofjoyassherealizedthatthepuppywouldnotbeleavingafterall,butwouldbecomeapermanentpartoftheirfamily,acompaniontosharethecoldwintersandthewarmsummerstocome.下水文2Dorisknewitwastimetosaygoodbyetothedog.Thesun'srayshadchasedawaythesnow,andwithit,theexcusetokeepthepuppyalittlelonger.Sheheldthesmall,shiveringbodyclose,breathinginthescentofthedogthathadbecomeacompanioninthecoldwinterdays.Herheartachedwiththethoughtofparting,butsheknewherfamily'ssituation.Thepuppydes
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