新高考英語二輪復習題型歸納與變式演練專題32 讀后續(xù)寫03 環(huán)境描寫突破（解析版）

專題32讀后續(xù)寫03環(huán)境描寫突破（解析版）目錄TOC\o"1-3"\h\u專題32讀后續(xù)寫03環(huán)境描寫突破（解析版） 1Part1命題解讀 2Part2思維導圖 2Part3環(huán)境描寫的重要性 2第一種方法：“情景交融”法 3第二種方法：比喻法 4Part4素材積累 51.人物動作的畫面定格 52.特殊寓意的寫景畫面 63.其他環(huán)境描寫 8Part5模擬演練 171．（2022·福建漳州·一模） 172．（2022·重慶·西南大學附中一模） 203．（2022·湖南邵陽·一模） 234．（2022·江蘇省蘇州實驗中學模擬預測） 255．（2022·湖南·長郡中學二模） 286．（2022·湖南·周南中學模擬預測） 317．讀后續(xù)寫模擬專練01 338．讀后續(xù)寫模擬專練02 37

Part1命題解讀通過對環(huán)境的描寫，能夠向讀者交待故事的背景，襯托人物，渲染氣氛，從而推動情節(jié)發(fā)展。環(huán)境描寫真的是必不可少的。此外，作者可以通過環(huán)境描寫向讀者間接的表達著故事中主人公的內心情感變化。Part2思維導圖Part3環(huán)境描寫的重要性首先要明確的是，把主旨想清楚，時刻不忘“寫景乃為主旨服務”這句話。如果景物與主旨無關，就是為寫景而寫景，就是無效的寫景。例如，大家看看我要傳達出“高興”與“悲傷”兩種不同主旨時，該用下面哪種景物描寫。A.花兒低著頭，楊柳無精打采。B.花兒昂著頭，楊柳擺動這枝條。答案一目了然。所以，景隨主旨變。先確定主旨，然后來寫景，這樣才有效果。通常情況下，傳達出的情感好，則用褒義色彩的美好的、正向的詞。傳達出情感需要不好，則用貶義色彩的糟糕負面的詞。大家看下面三例：Thewindwasblowingdreadfully(恐怖地)。Thewindwasblowingsoftly（柔和地）。Thewindwasblowingcomfortably（舒服地）。可以看出三句傳達出什么樣的情感吧。 第一種方法：“情景交融”法用一個公式來表達就是：寫景+感受寫景后，再添加一個明顯的情感描寫，就是指：有時在景物描寫之后，加上一兩句自己的情感態(tài)度。這樣做的整體效果就是：情境交融。當然，如果你想造成“留白啟發(fā)思考”的效果，那么就沒有必要添加這種顯性的情感態(tài)度描寫了。舉個例子，大家記得2017年11月高考《健忘的媽媽》的故事續(xù)寫吧。第一段可以用到下面三句：Thatnightwesetupourtentinapark.（那天晚上我們在公園里搭起帳篷。）Themoonwasheldupabovethesky,shininghersmoothandcharmingmoonlight.（月亮被高舉在天空的上方，照耀著她那光滑而迷人的月光。）Twinklingstarswereblinking（眨眼）,andfragrant（芬芳的）breeze（微風）gentlyblew.（閃爍的星星眨著眼，芬芳的微風輕輕地吹著。）這個景物描寫很精彩。但是如果后面在加一句：Restingbeside

mymother,withhandsheldtightlybyher,Ifeeltheworldissobeautiful.（躺在母親身邊，雙手緊緊地握著母親，我覺得這個世界是如此美麗。）這樣一加，就讓“母親”顯現，就讓“我與母親關系和諧”的主旨就顯現了。再比如，下面兩句景物描寫：第1句：Thewindwas

howlingdreadfully

andtherainwas

pouring

fromtheheaven,

whippingagainstthebranchesoflined（成排的）

trees.（風可怕地嚎叫，雨從天傾斜而來，拍打著成排的樹枝。）第2句：Theworld

wasloadedwith

aseaofdarkness（世界承載著一片海洋般的黑暗）.這兩句的后面，如果再加一句：Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature.Asenseofhorror

creepingupon

me.（我被自然發(fā)怒的力量抓住了。一種恐懼感悄悄爬到我身上。）這樣就進一步強調了自己的情感?？傊鶕癸@“情感”的需要，我們可以決定是不是該加一句顯性的“情感表達”，來決定是不是呈現顯性的“情景交融”。 第二種方法：比喻法我們的環(huán)境描寫還可以用比喻手法，用“l(fā)ike”即可，并交代、突出特點。如果總結成公式，那就是：寫景+比喻+特點與大家分享的例子是一位美國作家的短篇小說TheWhistle

(寒笛)中的寫景片段：原文是：

Nightfell.Thedarknesswasthin,

like

some

sleazy

dressthathasbeenwornandwornformanywintersandalways

lets

thecold

through

tothebones.Thenthemoonrose.譯文：

夜色降臨,暮色稀薄,

猶如穿過了數個冬季的敝衣,難以抵御刺骨的嚴寒。而后月亮升起。（sleazy

稀薄的，

let..through

讓...通過,類似passthrough）02我們再來做句子分析：這句話的核心句是：Thedarknesswasthin，即：暮色稀薄。其他內容都是錦上添花的作用，就是讓這個核心句子顯得更加完整具體。怎么做到的呢？首先是用到了比喻：這里的

like.就起到了這個作用：“l(fā)ike

some

sleazy

dress”像是一條薄薄的裙子，將darkness比作薄薄的裙子還不夠，還穿了好幾個冬天(hasbeenwornandwornformanywinters),冬天里穿裙子一定非常的寒冷。于是作者又加上了寒冷入骨(tothebones)。如此，一個寒冷的夜晚(coldnight)與一件不能御寒的敞衣相聯系，內容可以如此豐富。關于比喻，可能有些同學不是特別熟悉，再給大家一個例句：Afirestill

flutteredinthegrate(壁爐爐膛),...

like

abirdtryingtofinditswayoutoftheroom.一團火還在壁爐爐膛里舞動著，就像一只掙脫束縛的鳥。這句話里，把壁爐里跳動的火苗比作想掙脫束縛的鳥（finditswayoutoftheroom）。使“火苗”的描寫更加生動。我們再來上面提到的“薄霧”的例子，回憶一下公式：寫景+比喻+特點如果說詳細一點就是：平平無奇的交代下自然現象+比喻（定語從句或非謂語修飾）+突出特點(冷得不得了)學習讀后續(xù)寫，最快的方式，就是改編，仿寫。我們一起來牛刀小試一下吧：如果我們要描寫“霧”，應該怎么寫呢？Thewindwasblowing.Themistwasgettingthick,

like

ahuge

texturedvelvetcloak,

making

whatishiddeninsideanunclearmystery.風正在吹。霧越來越濃，像一件巨大的有質感的天鵝絨斗篷，把一切隱藏在模糊的神秘之中。這句仿寫的句子很好的get到了比喻的精髓，非常好的運用了“l(fā)ike”，texturedvelvetcloak（有質感的天鵝絨斗篷），形象具體。非謂語making做狀語，也著實炫了一下語法。既簡潔描繪了景色，又營造了一種神秘、緊張的氛圍。Part4素材積累1.人物動作的畫面定格Theystoodthereforamoment,sidebyside,waitingfortherushingholidaycurrentandfortheirplaceinit.Thenthedaughterglancedoverandmomentarilyregardedhermother.Andslowly,almostreluctantly,sheplacedherarmwithapparentlyunaccustomedaffectionaroundhermother’sshouldersandgentlyguidedherbackintothedeluge.

她們并肩站在那里，等待著節(jié)日的浪潮，等待著她們在浪潮中的位置。然后女兒掃了一眼，立刻注視著她的母親。慢慢地，幾乎是不情愿地，帶著明顯不習慣的愛她把胳膊放在她母親的肩膀上，輕輕地引導她回到洪水中。Hishardworkpaidoff!Holdingthesodatinfirmly,Reubenrushedfortheshoptobuythebrooch.Themomenthegotthebeautifulbrooch,heburstthroughthefrontdoorandplaceditinDora’shand.NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift.Speechlessandhappy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.他的努力得到了回報！魯本緊緊地握著汽水罐，沖向商店去買胸針。他一拿到那枚漂亮的胸針，就沖進前門，把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉從來沒有收到過這樣的禮物。她高興得說不出話來，緊緊地把兒子抱在懷里，眼淚涌了出來。Standingbesidetheemptyroad,theylookedupintothesky,feelingthepreciouspeacefromwithin.站在空曠的道路旁，他們抬頭仰望天空，從內心感受到珍貴的平和。2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面Theskywasabillionpureeyesoflightandthegrassgreenunderfoot,itwasasifnightanddayhadbecomeonebeautifulmoment.Dawnhadcome.

天空像是一億只純凈的眼睛拼接在一起，腳下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白晝已成為一個美麗的時刻。黎明已經來臨。（黎明到來的畫面）Dawnsentshimmeringraysovertheplacidocean,bestowingagoldenpathfromtheshoretothehorizon.黎明在平靜的海面上放射出出閃閃發(fā)亮的光線，留下一條從海岸到地平線橫亙而過的金色道路。（黎明到來的畫面）ThecrystalandceruleanwaterwasgentleasIwadedthroughit,thesunsetlikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.當我涉過水晶般天藍色的輕柔的水時，日落就像藍色畫布上的橙色顏料。（美好日落時的畫面）

Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight，resemblingapitch-blackcurtaindrapedoverthesky.逗留在天際的最后一縷陽光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一層漆黑的幕布覆蓋。（日落時的畫面）Themoonundersiegebystarsseemedtolightenthenightbringingforthstarsthatshoneandhungintheblackness.Theneverendingblacknessconsumedeverything.被群星圍困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，帶來了在黑暗中閃耀和懸掛著的群星。無盡的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描寫夜空的畫面）

Lookingup,IsawthesunshinebrighterthanIeverknewbefore.Isawatreeinthedistanceglistengentlyasitreflectedthesun'srays.Myconsciousnessebbedawaywiththeheat.ItookafewblinksbeforeIlandedwithathud.

抬頭一看，我看到太陽比我以前所知道的還要明亮。我看見遠處有一棵樹反射著太陽光，發(fā)出柔和的光輝。我的意識隨著熱度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到現實中，恢復了知覺。（特殊寓意）Dottedwithglittering

stars,thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality.

綴滿星光的天空，午夜的藍色，給了這一場景一個童話般的質量。（神話般美麗的夜空畫面）Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨水打著窗戶，向最后一縷陽光告別。

（雨水來臨的畫面）

Kissedbytherainandglistening,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrisesfromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.潮濕的地面走起來很冷，被雨水親吻后閃閃發(fā)光。一股濃郁的泥土般的香味從地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔軟的懷抱里。（雨后清新的畫面）TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.

我在街上漫步時，樹葉在我腳下嘎吱作響。偶爾，有葉子會從我身邊掉下來，輕輕地搖晃，緩緩落到到地面。（描寫落葉的畫面）

3.其他環(huán)境描寫1．Stanleyhadaposterofhimhangingonthewallofhisbedroom（房間，環(huán)境描寫）2．Itwaswhilehewaswalkinghome,carryinghiswetnotebook,withtheprospectofhavingtocopytheruinedpages,thatthesneakersfellfromthesky（事件，敘事，畫面感）3．Theshovelswerefivefeetlong,fromthetipofthesteelbladetotheendofthewoodenshaft（說明，介紹物品）4．Thelakewassofullofholesandmounds(土丘)thatitremindedStanleyofpictureshe'dseenofthemoon

（地貌，環(huán)境描寫，修辭）5．Thesunhadonlyjustcomeupoverthehorizon(地平線，天邊),buthealreadycouldfeelitshotraysagainsthisface（天氣，炎熱，環(huán)境描寫）6．Thesunwasn'tyetup,butitsraysarcedoverthehorizonandbroughtlighttothesky（天氣，日出，環(huán)境描寫）7．Itwasespeciallybeautifulinthespring,whenthepeachtrees,whichlinedtheshore,bloomed(開花)withpinkandrose-coloredblossoms(花，花朵)

（春天，環(huán)境描寫）8．Theairbecameunbearablyhumid(濕熱的)Stanleywasdrenched(濕透的)insweatBeadsofmoisture(水珠)randownthehandleofhisshovelItwasalmostasifthetemperaturehadgottensohotthattheairitselfwassweatingAloudboomofthunderechoedacrosstheemptylake（炎熱，天氣，環(huán)境描寫）9．Thepeaklookedtohimexactlylikeagiantfist,withthethumbstickingstraightup（山峰，環(huán)境描寫，修辭）10．Thestormmovedofffartherwest,alongwithanyhopeofrain（天氣，環(huán)境描寫）11．Ithadthecool,smooth(光滑的)texture(質地)ofmetal（介紹物品，說明，描寫）12．Theboatlayupsidedown,halfburiedinthedirt（環(huán)境描寫）13．Itwasasiftheyhadbeenwalkingacrosstheflatbottomofagiantfryingpan,andnowtheyhadtosomehowclimbupoutofit（環(huán)境描寫）14．Patchesofweedsdotted(點綴)themountainside（環(huán)境描寫）15．Hewasinafieldofgreenishwhiteflowersthatseemedtoextendallthewayaround

(環(huán)境描寫)16．Thesuncutthroughthecloud,andStanleyfeltitsraysbeatingdownonhimButsoonmorecloudsfilledthesky,shadingStanley（環(huán)境描寫）17．Itwastoomuchofacoincidence（巧合）tobeamereaccident

（觀點，評價）18．Itturnedoutthesneakershadbeenstolenfromadisplayatthehomelessshelter（結果，解開真相）19．Foronceinhislifeitpaidtobeoverweight（幽默，修辭）20．Againstherbetterjudgment,sheagreedtohelphim（讓步）21．NothinginlifeiseasyButthat'snoreasontogiveupYou'llbesurprisedwhatyoucanaccomplishifyousetyourmindtoitAfterall,youonlyhaveonelife,soyoushouldtrytomakethemostofit（評價，鼓勵）22．Bythenextmorning,Zerostillhadn'treturned（結果，準確運用時態(tài)）環(huán)境描寫烘托情感氣【用溫暖陽光表現】01.WhenIwasbathedinthesunlight,itfeltliketheamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.當我沐浴在陽光下，那感覺就像是琥珀色的陽光親吻著我每一寸肌膚。02.WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.當我拉開窗簾，陽光傾瀉而入。【用藍天白云表現】01.Theclearblueskywasdottedwithfluttering（飄舞;

振翅）larks.天氣晴朗，碧空里星星點點的云雀在翩翩飛舞。

bedottedwith意為“星星般點綴著…”.abutterflyflutteringitswings.…一只拍動著翅膀的蝴蝶。Thepaperflutteredtothefloor.

紙飄落到地板上。02.Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimminginbroadocean.朵朵白云飄在藍天中，就像安靜的魚兒在廣闊的海洋中暢游。

【用徐徐微風表現】01.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain.一陣風吹，吹起了彎柳的低垂枝條，就像那卷起的窗簾。02.Therearemanykindsofflowersbloominginthecornerofthepark,eveninautumn.Ismellthefreshscentwithcoolbreeze.Howsweet!即使在秋日里，公園里都開滿了各式各樣的鮮花，香氣伴著微風四處彌漫。多么香甜啊！

03.ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.

Therewasasongineveryheart.

Therewascheerineveryface

and

aspringineverystep.

Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.夏日周六的早晨，陽光明媚，空氣新鮮，處處洋溢著生機。每個人的心中都蕩漾著一首歌。每個人臉上都洋溢著歡樂，每個人都邁著跳躍的步伐?？諝饫飶浡曳嫉幕ㄏ?。

04.Colorfulflowerswerebloomingbeneaththebluesky,andthesunshinereflectedonthelake,makingitshinelikediamonds.ButSusanjustcouldn'tfocusherattentiononthebreathtakingbeauty.蔚藍色的天空下，百花盛開，陽光灑在湖面上如同鋪上了一顆顆閃耀的鉆石。但是蘇珊并沒有被這令人窒息的美景所吸引。【用風雨天氣來表現】1.Thefrostyairblewin,

cuttinglikeknife.寒冷的空氣吹進來，如同刀割般的感覺。2.Therewasa

deathlystillness

inthehouse.房子里一片死寂。3.Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.雨傾盆而下，洪流猛漲，狂風在肆意地沖擊著房屋。4.Onthatdarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashingandthewindswerehowling.在那個狂風暴雨的夜晚，海浪在肆意地拍打著，勁風在憤怒地咆哮著。

5.Theboyswerefrightenedasthewindblewseveraltreesontheirsideandthelightcontinuedtocomeandgointhesky.

風猛刮著身側的樹木，閃電在空中持續(xù)亂舞，孩子們嚇壞了。

6.Thenightwasveryquiet,soeventheslightestsoundmadetheboysjumpfromfear.夜晚非常安靜，所以即使是最輕微的聲音也使孩子們驚得跳起。【陽光明媚，生命美好，心情愉悅的景色描寫】1.

Thebeachtoyourrightstretchesoff(延伸)

tothehorizon,slowlynarrowingto

nothingness（虛無）,onlytore-emerge（重新出現）

againonyourleft.2.

WhenIwasbathedin

thesunlight,itfeltlike

theamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.3.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太陽下山，溫和的光線落在肩頭。4.

WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.陽光傾斜而入5.Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天氣晴朗，碧空里星星點點的云雀在翩翩起舞。6.Iwasimmediatelystunnedbytheazureskywiththicksilverliningcloudsdriftingaround.我立刻被湛藍色的天空和成群飄動的金色云朵所吸引了。

7.

Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimminginbroadocean.8.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain.一陣風吹起了彎柳的低垂枝條，就像那卷起的窗簾。9.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkled（撒、點綴）theslope.風，輕柔而清冷，輕點這樹枝，攪動著斜坡下的零星灌木叢。10.

Therearemanykindsofflowersbloominginthecornerofthepark,eveninautumn,Ismellthefreshscentwithcoolbreeze.Howsweet!公園的角落里開著各種各樣的花，即使是在秋天，我也會在涼風中聞到清新的香味。多甜蜜?。?1.

ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.CardiffHill,beyondthevillageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesandlookedbeautiful.這是一個星期六的早晨，整個夏天的世界都是明亮而清新的，充滿了生機。每個人心中都有一首歌。每個人臉上都洋溢著歡樂，每個腳步都輕快?？諝庵袕浡巳说幕ㄏ?。村子那邊的卡第夫山，山上長滿了綠色的樹木，看上去很美。

【暴風驟雨、心情抑郁的景色描寫】12.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds，(烏云密布、黑云壓頂)andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.整個世界仿佛都被一塊巨大的灰色棉被籠罩。13.Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygraycloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon(蒼白昏暗的月亮).14.Thefrostyair（寒冷的空氣）blewin,cuttinglikeknife.15.Thefrigidgustsofwindstungtheirfaces.一陣陣寒風刺痛他們的臉頰。Stung的原形為sting“叮咬”16.Thesummerbreezegentlymovedthroughtheleaveswithasighingsound.嘆息的聲音17.Therewasadeathlystillnessinthehouse.死寂18.Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy(陰郁的),atHartfield.Theweatheradded

whatitcouldofgloom.Acoldstormyrainsetin(陰冷的暴風雨襲來),andnothingofJulyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木叢）,which

thewindwasdespoiling(摧殘),

andthelengthoftheday,whichonlymadesuch

cruelsightsthelongervisible.（白晝的延長可以讓人多瞧一瞧這凄冷的景象）

【煩悶焦躁的景色描寫】19.It’shotenoughtomelthell.天熱得能融化地獄。20.Theairthathasbeenhotalldaybecomesheavy.Ithangsoverthetrees,pressestheheadsoftheflowerstotheground,andsitsonmyshoulders.整日悶熱的空氣變得格外呆滯。它籠罩著樹木，逼得花朵垂向地面，也壓得我的肩頭沉甸甸的。

【凄風苦雨、狂風暴雨、恐懼陰冷害怕的景色描寫】21.Onthedarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashing

andthewindswerehowling(嚎叫).22.Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.大雨傾盆，洪流暴漲，狂風肆意沖擊房屋。23.Theboyswerefrightenedasthewindblewseveraltreesontheirsideandthe

lightcontinuedtocomeandgointhesky(閃電在空中持續(xù)亂舞).24.Therewasnowafine,colddrizzlefalling(寒冷的細雨),andthewindhadrisenfromitsuncertain（模糊的）

puffs（一陣陣小風）intoasteadyblow.Thefewfootpassengersastir（活動的）inthatquarterhurrieddismally（沉悶地）

andsilentlyalongwithcoatcollarsturnedhighandpocketedhands（踹口袋里的手）.

【早上】1.Thesweetnessofthesunfillsmylungs.陽光的甜蜜充滿我的肺。2.Thefirstrayofsunlightistoofragiletotouch.第一縷陽光太脆弱，無法觸摸。3.Springbreezedrawsthecurtainofcloudsandthesunshinefloodsintotheclassrooms.春風拉開云簾，陽光灑進教室。4.Thewholeworldblossomswithonebreathofthesunshine.一縷陽光，全世界綻放。5.

Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofold

trees.雪覆蓋了每一個屋頂，壓在老樹的樹枝上。6.

Kissedbytherainandshining,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Thebirdsbusythemselvesaroundme,notcaringthatI'mthere.被雨露親吻，腳下濕漉漉的地面冰涼。鳥兒在我身邊忙碌著，根本不在乎我在那里。7.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrosefromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.一股濃濃的泥土香從地底升起，將一切都籠罩在它柔軟的懷抱中。8.WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.

拉開窗簾，陽光灑進來。9.

Goldensunshine,fragilegreensandaseaoffragrantflowerscrowd

intomyeyes.Walkingintothepainting,Iamtotallydrunkwiththetwittering(吱喳)ofbirds.Soonthedelicate纖弱的,精致的

airandsoftraindropsmeltmyheart.金色的陽光，嬌嫩的綠色，一片芬芳的花海涌入我的眼簾。步入畫中，鳥鳴啾啾，令我醉醺醺。很快，纖弱的細膩的空氣和柔軟的雨滴融化了我的心。10.ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.CardiffHill,beyondthevillageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesandlookedbeautiful.那是星期六的早晨，整個夏天的世界都明亮清新，充滿生機。每個人心中都有一首歌。每一張臉上都洋溢著歡呼，每一步都充滿了春天?？諝庵袕浡巳说幕ㄏ?。村外上方的卡迪夫山（CardiffHill）綠樹成蔭，看上去很美?！军S昏】1.

Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,hequickenedhissteps.隨著天色漸漸暗了下來，光線也漸漸暗了下來，他加快了腳步。2.

Thesunhidhimselfbehindthemountains,makingithardtoseeanythinginthethickdarkness.太陽躲在山后，漆黑一片，什么也看不見。3.Fallingleavesfluttereddowninthecoolmid-autumnair,biddingfarewelltosweetsummerandbeckoningtheautumnin.中秋的涼風中，落葉飄落，告別甜美的夏天，迎接秋天的到來。4.

It'sdarknowandthesnowisstillfalling,clumpsofwetflakesdriftingmindlesslydown,theairmoist,thesidewalkmushyunderfoot.天已經黑了，雪還在下，一團團潮濕的雪花漫不經心地飄落下來，空氣潮濕，人行道在腳下變得糊狀。5.Theraindrummedonthewindow,

biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨水打在窗戶上，告別了最后一縷陽光。6.

Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight，resemblingapitch-blackcurtaindraped

overthesky.余暉被急速落下的夜幕抹去，猶如漆黑的帷幕籠罩在天際。7.TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.走在街上，樹葉在我腳下嘎吱作響。偶爾，一個人會從我身邊掉下來，隨著空氣輕輕地將它帶到地面，輕輕搖晃。8.Thelakemirroredtheskyabove,bothofthemblamelessblueandshimmering.湖水映照著頭頂的天空，兩人都是無可指摘的藍色，閃爍著微光。9.Thesunsetwaslikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.

日落就像藍色畫布上的橙色顏料。10.ThestrongsunonmyblackhairwouldburnmeinminutesifIcouldn’tfindshelter.如果我找不到庇護所，我黑發(fā)上的強烈陽光會在幾分鐘內灼傷我。11.Thesundroppedthrough

andlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太陽落下，落在他的頭和肩膀上?！就砩稀?.Fromthedistance,hesawsomedimlight(昏暗的燈光)inthevillage.從遠處，他看到村子里有些昏暗的燈光。2.Silencebetweendadandmemadememorenervousandscared.Atthatmoment,itwascompletelydarkexceptthefaintlightgivenoutbyafewstarsinthesky.爸爸和我之間的沉默讓我更加緊張和害怕。那一刻，除了天空中幾顆星星發(fā)出的微弱光芒外，天已經完全黑了。3.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.漆黑的雨夜，風，雷鳴般的烏云，讓我完全掌握在它們的力量中。4.Thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality,andthestarsthatdottedtheskylitupthenight.天空，午夜藍，賦予場景一種童話般的質感，點綴天空的星星點亮了夜晚。5.Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.

湛藍的天空點綴著飛舞的百靈鳥。6.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdarkness.Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature,asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.狂風呼嘯，雨從天上傾瀉而下，拍打著成排的樹枝。世界籠罩在一片黑暗的海洋中。我被大自然的咆哮力量所吸引，一種恐怖感在我身上蔓延。我立即轉身滑進床上，蜷縮起來。7.

Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.漆黑的雨夜，風，雷鳴般的烏云，讓我完全掌握在它們的力量中。8.Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy(陰郁的),atHartfield.Theweatheradded

whatitcouldofgloom.Acoldstormyrainsetin(陰冷的暴風雨襲來),andnothingofJulyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木叢）,which

thewindwasdespoiling(摧殘),

andthelengthoftheday,whichonlymadesuch

cruelsightsthelongervisible.這一天的晚上很長，很憂郁，在哈特菲爾德。天氣增添了它可能的陰霾。一場陰冷的暴風雨襲來，七月的任何東西都沒有出現，只出現在被風掠走（殘）的樹叢中殘酷的景象越久可見。9.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds，

andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.

天陰沉沉的，烏云密布，整個世界仿佛都籠罩在一張巨大的灰色被子里。10.Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygraycloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon.Thefrostyairblewin,cuttinglikeknife.

稀疏的樹木在狂風吹拂，凌亂的灰色云彩掠過蒼白病態(tài)的月亮。寒氣襲來，如刀割一般?！酒渌渥淤p析】1.Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deepvalleysandsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.我在飛馳的車里閉上了眼睛。蜿蜒的河流、巍峨的山脈、深邃的山谷和陽光明媚的海灘讓我完全著迷。2.Thegentlebreeze(微風)strokedhishead,asifcomfortingallhistiredness.微風輕撫著他的頭，仿佛撫慰了他所有的疲憊。3.Familiarsmellsoftheearthroseuptogreether.Wanderinginthewoods,Allyslowedherpacetofindthelittleguyinthemixedair.Thesunlookedatherwithaglowingsmileandtheflowersnoddedmerrilytowardsher.Thebreezepattedherontheface,warmandcomfortable.熟悉的泥土氣息迎面撲來。漫步在樹林中，艾莉放慢了腳步，在混雜的空氣中找到了小家伙。太陽帶著燦爛的笑容看著她，花兒也朝她開心地點點頭。微風輕撫著她的臉龐，溫暖而舒適。4.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdarkness.Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature,asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.狂風呼嘯，雨從天上傾瀉而下，拍打著一排排的樹枝。世界籠罩在一片黑暗的海洋中。我被大自然的咆哮力量所吸引，一種恐怖感在我身上蔓延。我立即轉身滑進床上，蜷縮起來。5.Onthedaybacktoschool,darkcloudshunglowinthesky.Therainpoureddown,withcolddropsandangrywindsslapping(拍；摑)myface.Iwasdrownedinfloodsofwarmtearsandfreezingrain.返校那天，天上烏云低垂。雨傾盆而下，冰冷的水珠和怒風拍打（拍；摑）我的臉。我被溫暖的淚水和凍雨淹沒了。6.Spring,likeanamazingartist,paintsourcampuswithricheranddeepercolors.Goldensunshine,fragilegreensandaseaoffragrantflowerscrowdintomyeyes.Walkingintothepainting,Iamtotallydrunkwiththetwittering(吱喳)ofbirds.Soonthedelicate纖弱的,精致的

airandsoftraindropsmeltmyheart.Oh,I’mlost…inthemasterpieceofSpring!春天，像一位了不起的藝術家，用更豐富更深沉的色彩描繪了我們的校園。金色的陽光，嬌嫩的綠葉，一片芬芳的花海涌入我的眼簾。步入畫中，鳥鳴咝咝咝咝不已。很快，纖弱的細膩的空氣和柔軟的雨滴融化了我的心。哦，我迷失了……春天的杰作！Part5模擬演練（2022·福建漳州·一模）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Allisonstoodinlinewiththerestofherclass,waitingfortheschooldoorstoopen.ThiswasthelastdaybeforeschoolclosedforChristmasbreak.Shecouldn’twaitforsecretgiftswap(交換)happeninginclasstoday.Alisontunedtosaysomethingtoherbestfriend,Wendy,thenfroze.ShewassurprisedtoseeWendylookingdownatthegroundwithherbookspressedtightlytoherchest.“What’swrong,Wendy?”Allisonaskedquietly.Wendyshookherhead,hereyesconnectingwithAllison’s.AllisoncouldseethatWendy’sfacewasasdarkasacloud,withnosmileinsight.“Myparentsdidn’tgivemeanythingtobringtothegiftswap,”shewhispered.“Theysaidtheydidn’thaveextramoneyforstufflikethat.”AllisonlookedatWendy,confused.“But,weweren’tsupposedtobringanythingexpensive.Justsomethingsmallthatdidn’tcostalotofmoney.”Allisonthoughtbacktothelasttimeshe’dbeenatWendy’shouse.She’dopenedtherefrigeratorlookingforsomethingtodrink,onlytofindthatitwasmostlyempty.ThefurnitureinWendy’shouselookedoldandbeatenup.“Itwillbeokay,Wendy,”Allisonsaid.“WegettohaveallthattimeoffforChristmas.Comeon,cheerup!”Wendygaveherasmallsmile,thenlookedaway.Atthatmoment,awhistleblew,andthekidsstartedwalkingintotheschoolbuilding.TheChristmaspartywasabouttostart.Onebyone,thekidsdroppedtheirgiftsintothebagtheteacherwasholding.AllisonlookedoveratWendy.Mostofthekidsweresmilingaroundthebag,eagertogetstarted,butWendystoodofftotheside,lookingdownatherfeet.Allisonhatedseeingherfriendsoupset.Shewishedthereweresomethingshecoulddoaboutit.“Comeonup,Allison.It’syourturn,”theteachersaid.Sooneveryonehadpulledoutagiftandunwrappedit.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1:Allisonlookeddownathergift:alittleglasscat.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:“Wendy,Iwantyoutohavethis,”shesaid.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案：Paragraph1:Allisonlookeddownathergift:alittleglasscat.Itwascarefullyselectedbyherandhermotherinthestoreyesterday.Itisalovelylittleglasscat,whoseeyeslookedlikeacrescentmoon.Whenyoulookedatit,itwaslikesmilingatyou,whichcanmakeyouforgetthetroublesinlife.ShethoughtthegiftwasreallyperfectforWendy.Justthen,theteachershoutedagain“comeonup,Allison!”AllisonshookherheadslightlytowardstheteacherandthencameuptoWendy.Paragraph2:“Wendy,Iwantyoutohavethis,”shesaid.Wendywasamazedbutshookherheadsaying,“No,Ican’tacceptyourgift.Ihavenogifttoexchangewithyou.”Hearingthesewords,Alisonsmiledandreplied,“Wendy,youaremybestfriend.Ihopeyoucanbehappy.OpenitandI’msureyou’lllikeit.”SheinsistedonputtingthegiftintoWendy’shand.Wendyslowlyopenedthepresent.Whenshesawthelittleglasscatinside,shesmiledandsaid,“It’ssocute.Thankyou,mybestfriend!”Alisonsaid,“Lookatit,itwillmakeyouforgetthetroublesinlife.Smilemore.”【解析】【分析】本文以時間為線索展開，講述了在圣誕節(jié)交換禮物時，艾莉森的好朋友溫迪，因為父母沒有能力為她準備用來交換的禮物，而感到難過。艾莉森決定為好友做些什么，并最終把自己的禮物送給了溫迪的故事?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內容“艾莉森低頭看著她的禮物：一只小玻璃貓。”可知，第一段可描寫這個精心挑選的禮物以及艾莉森的決定。②由第二段首句內容“溫迪，我想要你拿著這個”可知，第二段可描寫艾莉森把禮物送給了溫迪，兩個人一起享受快樂的圣誕節(jié)。2.續(xù)寫線索：精心挑選的禮物——禮物的特別——決定送給溫迪——溫迪拒絕——勸說——接受3.詞匯激活行為類1.挑選：select/choose2.回答：reply/answer3.打開：open/unwrap情緒類1開心的：happy/delighted2.吃驚的：amazed/surprised【點睛】[高分句型1].Itisalovelylittleglasscat,whoseeyeslookedlikeacrescentmoon.（運用了whose引導的定語從句）[高分句型2]Whenshesawthelittleglasscatinside,shesmiledandsaid,“it’ssocute.Thankyou,mybestfriend!”（運用了when引導的時間狀語從句）（2022·重慶·西南大學附中一模）閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。KenScottkickedoffthecoversandleaptoutofbedathishomeintheRockyMountaintownofMullan,Idaho.He’djustheardontheradiothatthenearbySilverMountainResorthadbeenblessedwithnearlyafootandahalfofnewsnow.Asanexperiencedskiaddict,hedidn’twanttomissthisbiggoldenopportunity.Theseconditionsarewhatskierslivefor.WhenScottreachedSilverMountain’slockerroom,hecameacrosshisfriendPaul,aformerskiinstructorwhohadalsobeenaregularontheseslopesformorethantwodecades.Bothofthemwereexhilarated.Beforesettingoff,itwasPaul’sroutinetocheckhisphonetightlyfixedinsidehisparka(風雪外套).Forthenexthourthepairskiedonvariousrunsunderalightlydullsky,makingfreshtracks.Theywerebothinaplayfulmood,laughingastheytackledthesteepruns.Almostimmediately,thesnowbeneaththeirfeetgaveway.Inamillisecond,Paulrealizedwhatwashappening.“Avalanche!(雪崩)”heyelledtoScott,whowasnotfarbehind.Scottresponded.Thesuddensnowslidecausedfearinhisvoice.“Thisishappening!”Instantly,bothwerehitbyamassofsnowthatwouldhitandcarrythemsome500feetdownthemountain.Scottfeltitsurroundingandenclosinghim,movingquicklyuphisbackandoverhisshoulders,thenheavyagainsthisneck.Snowfilledthespaceinfrontofhimandpileduparoundthewholeofhim.Paul,too,wassweptdownhill.Theyrememberedtheavalanchesurvivallessonstheyhadlearned.Keepyourheadup.Trytoswim.Stayontopofthesnow.Butthesnowwastoopowerfulandtheyfeltthemselvesrollinglikealoadofclothesinawashingmachine.WhenScottfinallycametorest,hewaslyingonhisleftsideandcompletelyburied,skisandpolesstillattached.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1:Paulwasluckier,endinguppartiallyburiedandprobablysurviving._____________________________________