讀后續(xù)寫+善良的漣漪：從路邊救援到餐館里的溫情+講義 高一下學(xué)期4月期中英語試題

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫一段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhatGoesAroundComesAroundOnedaysomethingwaswrongwiththecarofanoldladyfromSt.Louis.Shewastrappedonthesideoftheroadinthedimlight.Noonehadstoppedtohelpforthelasthourorso.Thenamanlookingpoorandhungrypulledupinfrontofhercarandgotout.Hecouldseethatshewasfrightened,standingoutthereinthecold.Hesaid,“I'mheretohelpyou,ma'am.Whynotwaitinthecarwhereit'swarm?Bytheway,mynameisBryanAnderson.”Bryancrawled(蜷縮)underthecarlookingforaplacetoputthejack(千斤頂),skinninghisfingersatimeortwo.Soonhewasabletochangethetire.Buthegotdirtyandhishandshurt.Theoldladytoldhimshealreadyimaginedalltheawfulthingsthatcouldhavehappenedifhehadnotstopped.Shecouldn'tthankhimenoughforcomingtoheraidandaskedhowmuchsheowedhim.Bryanjustsmiledandtoldherthatifshereallywantedtopayhimback,thenexttimeshesawsomeonewhoneededhelp,shecouldgivethatpersontheassistancetheyneeded.Bryanadded,“Andthinkofme.”Heneverthoughttwiceaboutbeingpaid.Hehadlivedhiswholelifethatway.Thentheoldladystartedhercaranddroveoff.Afewmilesdowntheroadtheoldladysawasmalldirty—lookingrestaurant.Shewentinandorderedasimplemealpricedat5.Thewaitresswastogivebirthtoherbabyinamonthbutshewasstillbusyclearingtables,fillingsugarbowlsandservingpeople.Obviouslyshemusthavelivedahardlife.AtthatmomentsherememberedBryan.Afterfinishingthemeal,theoldladypaidforherfoodwithone100bill.Thewaitresstookoverthemoney,saying“Thanks”politelyandtoldhertowaitamomentforthechange.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thewaitresswenttothecashier'scountertogetthechange.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意一位來自圣路易斯的老太太汽車出故障被困路邊，許久無人幫忙。這時(shí)一個(gè)看似貧窮饑餓的男子布萊恩?安德森停下來幫助她。布萊恩在換輪胎時(shí)弄傷了手還弄臟了自己，老太太感激不已并詢問報(bào)酬，布萊恩表示希望她下次向需要幫助的人伸出援手。老太太開車離開后在幾英里外的一家小餐館用餐，看到懷孕仍在忙碌的女服務(wù)員，想起了布萊恩。用餐后，老太太用100美元付5美元的餐費(fèi)。伏筆與續(xù)寫回應(yīng)伏筆：布萊恩幫助老太太卻不求回報(bào)，只希望她將善意傳遞下去。續(xù)寫中老太太給女服務(wù)員100美元并留下紙條，回應(yīng)了傳遞善意的伏筆，讓愛心延續(xù)。伏筆：對女服務(wù)員艱難生活的描述。續(xù)寫中老太太的善舉將改善女服務(wù)員當(dāng)下的困境，體現(xiàn)對弱者的關(guān)懷，使情節(jié)連貫。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段情感線：驚訝與感動(dòng)。女服務(wù)員去收銀臺(tái)找零錢回來發(fā)現(xiàn)老太太離開且留了紙條，會(huì)感到驚訝，明白紙條內(nèi)容后會(huì)被深深感動(dòng)。故事線：描述女服務(wù)員的行動(dòng)和心理變化，從正常找零到發(fā)現(xiàn)老太太離開的疑惑，再到讀紙條后的觸動(dòng)。續(xù)寫示范：Thewaitresswenttothecashier'scountertogetthechange.Butwhenshereturned,theoldladywasgone.Instead,therewasanote.Readingit,shewasdeeplytouched.Tearswelledupinhereyesassherealizedthekindnessshehadjustreceivedandtheresponsibilityitcarried.第二段情感線：決心與溫暖。女服務(wù)員被老太太的行為打動(dòng)，決心將這份善意傳遞，內(nèi)心充滿溫暖，也讓讀者感受到愛的力量。故事線：講述女服務(wù)員在感動(dòng)之余決定要向老太太學(xué)習(xí)，在今后生活中幫助他人，使愛心的鏈條延續(xù)。續(xù)寫示范：Shedecidedthatshewouldfollowtheoldlady'sexample.Whenshesawsomeoneinneedinthefuture,shewouldofferhelpwithouthesitation.Thisactofkindnessfilledherheartwithwarmthandhope,knowingthatlovecouldbepassedonlikethis.情感線從老太太的感激、布萊恩的善良無私，到女服務(wù)員的驚訝、感動(dòng)，再到她決心傳遞善意的溫暖，情感真摯且層層遞進(jìn)，讓讀者感受到人性之善的傳遞。情感變化推動(dòng)故事發(fā)展，使讀者更關(guān)注善舉的延續(xù)和影響。故事線故事圍繞老太太汽車故障被救展開，通過布萊恩的幫助、老太太的感恩與傳遞善意，到女服務(wù)員受到觸動(dòng)，情節(jié)完整、邏輯清晰。每個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)緊密相連，突出了愛心傳遞、善有善報(bào)這一主題。主旨升華句"Kindnessisatorchthat,whenpassedon,canlightupcountlesslivesinthedarkestoftimes."（善良是一支火炬，當(dāng)它被傳遞時(shí)，可以在最黑暗的時(shí)刻照亮無數(shù)生命。）"Inthecycleofgivingandreceiving,lovemultiplies,creatingaworldfilledwithhopeandcompassion."（在給予和接受的循環(huán)中，愛成倍增加，創(chuàng)造一個(gè)充滿希望和同情的世界。）"Asingleactofkindnesscansetoffachainreaction,warmingheartsfarbeyondwhatwecanimagine."（一個(gè)小小的善舉可以引發(fā)連鎖反應(yīng)，溫暖的心靈遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超出我們的想象。）"Thestoryshowsthatwhenwehelpothersselflessly,weplantseedsoflovethatgrowandbloomintheheartsofmany."（這個(gè)故事表明，當(dāng)我們無私地幫助別人時(shí)，我們種下了愛的種子，它們在許多人的心中生長和綻放。）"Thechainofkindnesshasnoend,asitlinksonehearttoanother,buildingabridgeovertheriverofhardship."（善良的鏈條沒有盡頭，因?yàn)樗鼘⒁活w心與另一顆心相連，在苦難之河上架起一座橋梁。）寫作示范范文一Thewaitresswenttothecashier'scountertogetthechange.Whenshecameback,shesawonlyanemptyseat.Shewaspuzzleduntilshenoticedthenote.Readingit,shewasovercomewithemotion.Sheknewshewouldcherishthismomentandpayitforwardwhenshecould.Later,whenacustomerdroppedhiswallet,shereturneditwithasmile,justliketheoldladydidforher.Shefeltasenseoffulfillmentasshesawthegratitudeinthecustomer'seyes.范文二Thewaitresswenttothecashier'scountertogetthechange.Buttheoldladyhaddisappeared.Therewasanotethatsaidtopassonthekindness.Thewaitresswasdeeplymoved.Shethoughtaboutherowndifficultsituationandhowthisactofkindnesswaslikearayofsunshine.Fromthenon,shealwaystriedtobeextrakindtothecustomers.Whenahomelessmancametothedoor,shegavehimawarmmeal,keepingthechainoflovegoingstrong.范文三Thewaitresswenttothecashier'scountertogetthechange.Tohersurprise,theoldladywasgone.Therewasanotewhichtoldherthestoryofkindnessandaskedhertocontinuethecycle.Tearsfilledhereyes.Shemadeuphermindtobekindtoeverycustomer.Oneday,anewmotherwithababywasshortonmoney.Thewaitressp