2024上海高考英語問題解決型寫作模板及方法指導(dǎo)（含真題）

山東高考英語指導(dǎo)寫作問題解決類專項訓(xùn)練

模塊導(dǎo)航

?模塊一問題解決型寫作

?模塊二議論文（解決問題）常用句式

?模塊三問題解決型作文模板

?模塊四2020-2022年春季高考真題特訓(xùn)

?模塊五2024屆上海名校?？碱}特訓(xùn)

模塊一問題解決型寫作

知識點一：問題解決型寫作

【知識械理】

此題型是先指出某一問題或現(xiàn)象，然后提出解決方法。此類型的論說文重心在解決問題匕

但有時題目中也要求對問題產(chǎn)生的原因或引起的嚴(yán)重后果做相應(yīng)的描述,所以審題時，要注

意弄清作文段落間的合理比例,

1.寫作結(jié)構(gòu)指導(dǎo)（

問題陳述U

分析（原因/后果）。

Y

問題解決u

結(jié)論（期望/展望）°

2.常用句型

1

問題陳述

Recently/Nowadays,...hasbecomeaseriousproblemwehavetoface.

...（hephenomenon...hasarousedthepublic'sconcern.

Thereisnodenying（hat...hasbecomeaseriousconcernamongpeople.

分析（原因/后果）

Thereareseveralreasonsfortheproblem.

Thereareavarietyoffactorscontributingtothephenomenon.

問題解決

Peoplehavefiguredoutmanywaystosolvetheproblem.

Itishightimethatweshouldfigure/figuredoutwaystodealwiththeproblem.

結(jié)論（期望/展望）

With（hejointefforts,1amconfidentthat...

Aslongaswewewillresolvetheproblemeventually.

【例題精講】

2020上海高考英語作文

假如你是明啟中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，前幾日，你邀請你的好友王磊下周五去郊野公園一起欣賞

露天音樂會。面對天氣惡劣、交通不便等原因，王磊一直猶豫不決。假如你是李華，請寫一

封信說服王磊和你起參加。

要求包括以下內(nèi)容：

1.解決王磊的困擾2.音樂會的重要性

01

題目綜述

今位的高考作文題，基本延續(xù)了近年來上海高考英語作文的出題方式。

作文話題以生活情境形式出現(xiàn)，同時需要借助信件寫作的模式來表達自己的一些看法和建議。

02

審題要點

①

今在高考的話題依舊是圍繞著同學(xué)們身邊的生活來展開。同時也需要聯(lián)想一些細節(jié)來展開自

己的描寫。

例如，面對一場露天■&樂會，同學(xué)們在實際生活中應(yīng)該不會陌生，但是關(guān)于露天音樂會的場

景，有哪些有意思的方面，這需要大家在平時的生活中留意觀察。

2

考試中時間有限，但是如果能夠展開合理的聯(lián)想，這對大家寫作非常有幫助。

②

寫作套用了近年來常用的信件套路，結(jié)合了實際生活的需要。這個和我們高考越發(fā)貼近實際

生活場景這個大的方向是保持一致的。

信件寫作的基本格式和結(jié)構(gòu)需要所有同學(xué)都能夠熟練掌握。(見下文)

③

本質(zhì)上來看，這依舊是一篇議論文。高中英語寫作中，議論文的寫作同學(xué)們務(wù)必掌握清楚。

細細讀來，這篇文章看似是在幫同學(xué)解決心中疑慮。如果落入這個陷阱，說明同學(xué)們在審題

方面沒有看透本質(zhì)。

其實這篇文章抓住議論文這個核心結(jié)構(gòu)就可以了：我們需要說服同學(xué)的點在于，演唱會值得

一看或者不可錯過。這其實就是議論文的核心觀點，剩下的正文中寫出幾個核心理由并搭配

補充的例子和解釋，那么這篇文章的基本脈絡(luò)就清晰可見了。

03

實用結(jié)構(gòu)

信件寫作的基本框架

Greeting:

Useanappropriategreeting(DearMr/Miss/Mrs/Ms...+lastname,orDear+firstname)

Openingparagraph:

Usesetphrasetobeginyourletterandsaywhyyouarewriting(Howareyoudoing?Itwasniceto

hearfromyou...etc)

Mainpart:

Thecontentofyourwriting

Closingparagraph:

Stateanythingyouwanttoemphasize.

Usesetphrasestoendyourletter

Signatureendings:

Yours,allthebest,bestwishes...

議論文的基本框架

Introduction：

Brieflyintroduceihetopicyou'regoingtodiscuss.

Sayhowyoufeelabout.

3

Mainpart:(twoparagraphs)

Choosetwomainaspectsoftheissueandwriteoneparagraphoneach.

Explainyourideas/points,andgiveexamplesifpossible.

Conclusion:

Sumupbystatingyouroverallopinion.

同學(xué)們只要把這兩個框架融匯起來合理使用，就是本文的基本大綱。

04

參考范文

DearWangLei,

It'sbeenawhilesinceIheardfromyou.Lasttime,Iinvitedyoutoattendtheconcertwhichwillbe

heldnextFridayin(hecenturypark.Thoughyoudidnotreplytome,thehesitationwearingon

yourfaceofferedmeaglimpseofwhatwasgoingoninyourmind.Maybeitistherecentghastly

weatherortheterribletrafficthathinderyoufrommakingupyourmind.However,asfarasI

concerned,it'sstillworthoureftbrts.

Thisconcertisnotapopmusicconcertbutaclassicmusiconewhereseveralprestigioussymphony

orchestraswillperformmanywell-knowncompositions.Itmustbeafeastforalltheaudience.

Moreover,chancesarethatwemayhaveanalbumwithperformers5autographsonit.Youshould

nevermisssuchafabulousconcert!

Intermsofdifficultiesyouareworriedabout,Ihavealreadyfoundsomesolutions.Myfatherwill

beavailableonthatdaysothathecandriveustothescene.Ihavemanagedtopersuadehimto

makehispromise.Inaddition,incaseofarainyday,Ihavepreparedtworaincoats.Iamconfident

thatwewillindulgeourselvesintotheelegantflowofnotes.

Iamlookingforwardtohearingyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

例1.根據(jù)所給信息寫一篇關(guān)于JunkMessage的短文：目前垃圾短信泛濫，給人們的生活帶來

困擾，分析這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，談?wù)劶雍谓鉀Q這個問題.

Junkmessagesareintheair.Peoplearecaughtupinaconstantrustlewiththem—you

deletewhiletheyarrive.Howunpleasant!

Reasonsfossuchinconveniencevary.Somemaybecausedbybusinessbatlieswhere

companiestakeadvantageofleakedpersonalinformationandusetextmessagesasawayof

4

advertisingwhileothersmayresultfromevilthoughts,includingleasingonesorevenblackmailing

ones.Stillothersareperhapsduetoineffectiveadministrationortechnologicalfailures.Whatever

（hecauses,theymustberemoved.

Themostdirectsolutionistoturntophoneproducerswhomayequippedeachphonewitha

messagefiltersoastoautomaticallyabandonthosejunkmessages.Butitmaynotbethemost

far-reachingsolution.Tohandletheproblemthoroughlywemayfirstsetupasupervisingnetwork

todetectthespreadofjunkmessages.Secondly,lawsforpunishmentshallfollowtofightagainst

thesebehaviors.Meanwhile,ourpersonalinformationmustgetbetterprotectiontoavoidbeing

aimedataspotentialcustomers.Andfinally,thepublicshouldbeeducatedlorespectothersby

stoppingthespreadofjunkmessages.

Anli-junk-messagewarcanbedemanding,butitwillbeworththeeffortst。freepeoplefromihe

constantassaultpresentedbytheseunwelcomedvisitors.

模塊二、.論文（解決問題）常用句百。

知識點二：議論文（解決問題）常用句式

【知識梳理】

Introductionoftheissue

1.Whenitcomesto,mostpeopleareinfavorof/maintain/hold/doubtquestion

2.Currently,thereisagrowingtendencythat.

3.Withtherapiddevelopmentof,anincreasingnumberofpeoplebegin

tonotice/realize/areaware.

4.Recently,thereiswidespreadconcern/controversyover.

5.Today,oursocietyiswitnessingmoreandmore.

Standpointorpointofview.

5

1.Asforme,Iamconvincedthat.

2.AsfarasIcansee,itismoresensibleandreasonableto.

3.Inmypointofview,nothingismorethanto.

4.Manyofushavebeenundertheillusionthat.Acloseexamination

wouldrevealhowridiculousitisto.

5.Contrarytowhatiswidelyaccepted,Imaintainthat.

6.AsfarasIamconcerned,itmakesnosensetoarguefor.

7.Facing(Facedwith.Confrontedwith),oneshouldinsteadof

Reasoningoranalysis

1.Thereisadefinitelinkbetweenand.

2.willexert/produceaprofound(far-reaching)/undesirable/

unimaginable/disastrouseffecton.

3.Toomuchstress(emphasis)placedoninevitablywillleadto(giverisetoresult

in).

4.Manyfactorscontributetothephenomenon,ofwhichplaysaleadingrole.

5.Comparedwith,tendto.Itisnotdifficultto

understandwhythereissuchabigdifferenceif.

6.Considering,itisnowonder.

7.Speakingof,thedisadvantages(far)outweighitsadvantages.

Unfortunately,hasbecomethevictimof.

Suggestionsandmeasures

1.Giventheseriousnessoftheissue,itismosturgentto.

2.Effectivemeasuressuchasmustbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.

__________isworthatry.

3.Tochange,wccaneasily.

4.Tochangethecurrentsituation,isrequired/calledfor.

5.Noeffectivesolutionisathandnow,butthegeneralawarenessofthevalueof

mustbeenhancedatfirst.

Transitionstructure

6

1.Tobegin/startwith,.Inaddition,.What'smore,.

2.Therearcmanyreasonsbehindmydecision.Firstandforemost,.

3.Ononehand,.lastbutnottheleast.

4.Anotherequallyimportantreasonisthat.

5.isacaseinpoint.Anotherexampleisthestoryof.

6.Whydopeople?Therootcauseis.Otherreasons

includeand.

Ending

1.Itishightimethatweputanendto.

2.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthat

3.inaword/Inconclusion/Inshort/Tosumup/Toconclude.isthemosturgent

thingatthemoment,whichrequiresusto.

4.Basedonthereasonslistedabove,noonecandenythefollowingideathat.

5.Withtheapproachof,isboundtocome/happen/occurinthe

nearfuture.

議論文（解決問題）注意事項

問題解決型議論文的基本環(huán)節(jié)為：

1.引出要解決的問題

2.說明其嚴(yán)重性或必要性

3.提出解決方案并分述理由

4.提出可采納的建議以及

5.展望前景

其中1、3、5為核心部分；2、4根據(jù)題目要求和文章篇幅靈活變動。

文章務(wù)必做到中心論點明白扼要；分論點調(diào)理清晰并且有相應(yīng)的擴展支持或?qū)嵗?/p>

說明。在積累萬能句型、亮點詞匯的時候盡量避免陳詞濫調(diào)性的表述，能有選擇

性的對好詞好句，進行加工組合，形成自己獨一無二的“獨門秘籍”并在寫作訓(xùn)練

中不斷磨練。

7

【例題精講】

作文要求：你是王海，是學(xué)校學(xué)生會主席，最近你做J'一次調(diào)查，發(fā)現(xiàn)你校學(xué)生都不愿在

學(xué)校食堂(canteen)就餐，有的則把食物丟進垃圾桶。請你以學(xué)生會主席的身份向校長反映你調(diào)

查的結(jié)果，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

命題解讀：本文屬于多種文體綜合寫作，書信體的格式加上夾敘夾議，

要求：1.書信體的格式；2.對學(xué)生就餐情況作陳述或描述；3.就此現(xiàn)象作議論。

DearPrincipal,

I'mWangHai,presidentoftheStudcnts,Union.Iamwritingtoyoutoreportanunpleasant

phenomenonthatisgoingonintheschoolcanteen.Recently,I'veconductedaresearchandfound

thatmostofthestudentsinourschooldonotfeellikediningintheschoolcanteen.Someofthem

eventhrowthefoodintotherubbishbin.

Amongthefactorsthesurveypresented,themajorconcernslieintheslowpaceofthestaffs

serviceandtheplaindishesoftheschoolcanteen①.Asstudentsintheseniorhighschool,we're

allbusywiththeschoolwork.Unfortunately,theinefficiencyofthecanteencostsustoomuchtime,

whichmakesusturntofastfood.What'smore,wehavequitefewchoicesofdishes,andinfact,

they'renotsatisfactoryinqualityandflavor,whichmayresultintheunpleasantwasteaswell.

Inmyopinion,itishightimeforourcanteentemakesomeimprovements.First,there

shouldbemorewindowssellingfoodandamoreefficientmanagingsystem.Second,various

dishesshouldbeaddedtothemenuandthefoodqualityneedsimproving.Ontheotherhand,

studentsshouldbeeducatedtorespectothcrs,laborandavoidwastingfoodinthefuture.

Withthejointefforts,Pinsurethatnexttime,thecanteenwillcomeasthebestchoiceto

satisfythestudents'need②.

Yourssincerely,

WangHai

結(jié)構(gòu)點評

書信體的格式：口期、稱呼、正文、結(jié)束敬語和簽名五個部分完整

正文部分先描寫現(xiàn)象后論述：

1.開門見山點明寫信目的：反映學(xué)生就餐情況，反映調(diào)查結(jié)果；

2.分析論述引起不良現(xiàn)象的幾個原因；

8

3.提出解決的措施；

4.對未來學(xué)生就餐情*兄進行展望。

語言點評

第一段：一短一長句（thal引導(dǎo)的定語從句）交代了自己的身份和寫信的目的；接著用一長（ihal

引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）一短句描述了學(xué)生就餐情況；

第二段：①句總啟論述；用liein分析原因所在：食堂服務(wù)的慢節(jié)奏和食堂乏味的菜；用一

短一長句（which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）分析第一個原因；Whafsmore連接兩個

并列的原因;用and連接的并列句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句分析了第二個

原因；

第三段：用“itishightimeIbr...todo...”提出解決的措施；用“First”“Second”論述食堂應(yīng)采取

的措施;“Ontheotherhand”表述從學(xué)生的角度應(yīng)采取的措施；三個并列的“should”表

達作者肯定的態(tài)度；

第四段：“Withthejointefibrts”承上啟下：概括第三段的三個措施;②句展望未來。

【課堂練習(xí)】

例文：1.目前盜版的現(xiàn)象比較嚴(yán)重

2.造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因及危害

3.我們應(yīng)該怎么做

Nowadaysitisgenerallyacceptedthatpiracyisbecomingmoreandmoreofaproblem

inChina.Manyproducts,suchastape,CDandhi-techdevicescanbecopied.Shortlyaftera

newly-developedproductisputonthemarket,peoplewillunsurprisinglyfinditspirated

counterpartsinthestores

Specialattentionshouldbepaidtothefactthatpiracyisbringinggreatdamage.Onone

hand,piratedproductsoftencostfarlessthantheoriginalones,sotheyenjoyunbeatableadvantage

inpriceinspiteoftheirrelativelypoorquality,andtheoriginalones,on（hecontrary,sellpoorly.

Ontheotherhand,inthelongrun,piratedproductsmayalsohavenegativeimpactsoncustomers

sincethoseproducers'enthusiasmmaybegreatlyhurtasaresultofmoneyloss.Therefore,itis

hightimethatwesolvedtheproblemassoonaspossible.

Manyawaycanbeadoptedtoreduce（hepiracyphenomenon.Firstofall,itisthedutyofthe

governmentlocalloneveryonetofightthebattleagainstpiracy.Inaddition,ascustomers,we

shoulddevelopourconsciousnesstoresistpiratedproducts.Moreover,strictlawsanddecreesare

9

ofgreatimportance.Onlyinthiswaycanthisproblembesolvedradically.

模塊三1問題解決型作文模板o

知識點三：問題解決型作文模板：

【知識梳理】

第一段：引出現(xiàn)象，并指出這種現(xiàn)象的后果

引出現(xiàn)象的句型：

[1].Recentlytheriseinproblemof7(phcnomcnonof)...hascause/arouscd/capturcd

public/popular/wide/worldwideconcern.最近現(xiàn)象的日益增多已經(jīng)引起了全世界/公

眾/廣泛的注意。

⑵.Recentlytheissueoftheproblemof7thephenomenonof.....hasbeenbroughtintofocus.（has

beenbroughtintopublicattention）最近...的問題已經(jīng)成為人們關(guān)注的焦點。

[3].Nowadays,thereisgrowingconcernabouttheproblem/phenomenonthat....如今，越來越

多的人開始關(guān)注……

[4]Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeoplecometorealize/beawareoftheirnportar.ee

of...現(xiàn)在越來越多的人開始意出到……的重要性。

[5]Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplearcconcernedabouttheproblemof...

現(xiàn)在越來越多的人開始關(guān)注……的問題。

[6]Itisundeniable/Thereisnodenyingthefactthat...hasbecometheutmostconcernamong

peoplenowadays.不可否認，...己經(jīng)成為人們最關(guān)注的問題。

第二段：提出解決的辦法

引出解決辦法的常用句型：

[1]Confrontedwith--A--，weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththe

situation.Foronething,---------------（解決方法一）.Foranother-------------（解決方法二）.

Finally,--------------（解決方法三）.面對……，我們應(yīng)該采取一系列的措施來應(yīng)對目前的形

勢。

|2|Itisessential/indispensablethatproperactions/effectivemeasuresshouldbetakento

reversethissituation/trend.

為了扭轉(zhuǎn)局勢，我們有必要采取有效的措施。

|3]Itishoped/suggestedthatconsiderable/greateffortsshouldbedirectedto/focused

io

on...希望（據(jù)建議）我們?nèi)σ愿啊?/p>

14]Thereisnoeasy/immediatesolution/approachtotheissueof...but...mightbe

beneficial/helpful,并沒有很容易的方法來解決這個問題，……有可能會有幫助的。

第三段：總結(jié)這樣做的好處

常用句型：

Onlyinthiswaycanwe...

只有這樣，我們才能…

【例題精講】

HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentobeIndependent?

目前，不少父母為孩子包辦一切

為了孩子的獨立，父母應(yīng)該。。。。。。

HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentobeIndependent?

Nowadays,thereisagrowingconcernoverthephenomenonthatsomeparentstake

careofalmosteverythingconcernedwiththeirchildren,includingstudy,workandmarriage.Some

parentsbelievethatthisislove,however,itisonlytodestroychildren'sindependencethoroughly.

Forthefutureofthenextgeneration,moreeffortsshouldbemadebyparentstohelptheir

childrentobeindependent.Mos:importantly,parentsshouldhelptocultivatechildren's

awarenessoftheimportanceandnecessityofbeingindependent,whichissupposedtobegin

fromchildhood.Inaddition,Childrenshouldbetaught（hatnoonecanbestrongerandmore

helpfulthanthemselvesinthisworld.

Theimportanceofindependenceissoindispensableforusthatparentshadbetteractasa

tutor,notadictator.Andonlywithparents'trust,canthenextgenerationaccumulateconfidence

stepbystep.

【鞏固練習(xí)】

TrafficintheCity

1.交通是現(xiàn)代城市的一大問題

2.噪音污染和堵車是兩大主要交通問題

3.解決交通問題的手段有很多種

Nowadaysitisgenerallyacceptedthattrafficisoneofthegreatestproblemsofamoderncity.

Asmoreandmorepeoplebuytheirowncars,airpollutionaswellasnoisepollutionsbecomes

ii

moreandmoreserious.Additionally,roadsarepackedwithcars,busesandbicyclessothattraffic

jamisverycommon.Therefore,howtodealwithtrafficproblemisworthpayingmoreattentionto.

Thefollowingwayscanbeadopted.Firstly,morestreetsandroadsshouldbeconstructed.

Secondly,theprivatecarownershipshouldbelimited.Thirdly,undergroundtrainandcitytrain

shouldbedevelopedquickly.

Asforme,thenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputundercontrol.Morecarsmeanmore

pollution.Inaddition,morecarsareagreatchallengetoroads,asthebuildingofroadsisnotas

speedyadtheincreasingofcars.Inaword,itisadvisablethatlessmotorvehiclebeused.

模塊四12020-2022年春季高考真題特訓(xùn)O

2022年1月春考

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese

假如你是明啟中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李明。入冬以來，你們學(xué)校組織全校師生進行晨跑，時間在7:30到7:50,休

息5分鐘之后準(zhǔn)備上第?節(jié)課。但是有同學(xué)反映，晨跑后身體不適，因此校方委托學(xué)生會向同學(xué)們征集對

晨跑的意見，請你向?qū)W生會寫封郵件。要求:

1.你認為晨跑安排中存在的問題：

2.提出改進的建議和理由。

學(xué)籍作文（僅供參考）

DearStudentUnion,

Iamwritingthislettertoreflectontheschool'sorganizationofmorningrunningforallteachersand

students.Gladthattheschoolorganizesmorningrunningforthehealthofstudents.However,somestudents

reflectedthattheywereuncomfortableaftermorningrunningwhichisanurgentproblemtobesolved.To

solveit,myreasonsandsuggestionsareasfollows.

Firstofall,itisinappropriatetosetthetimeformorningrunningfrom7:30to7:50inthemorning,

becauseitisonly5minutesfromthefirstclass.Studentswillbeverytired,whichwillimpactthelearning

efficiencyofthefirstclass.Meanwhile,justafterbreakfastinthemorningvigorousexerciseisnotsuitable

forhumanbeings,otherwiseitwillcausestomachdiscomfort.Whynottrytoputthemorningrunningtimein

thebigbreakafterthesecondclass?What*smore.Ihold,beforeorganizingmorningrunning,weshouldgive

studentsacomprehensivephysicalexaminationtoensurethateveryone'sphysicalconditionissuitablefor

running.Wecanarrangesomeotherwarm-upexercisesforthesestudentsandteacherswhoarenotsuitable

forrunningpreventingsomeunexpectedaccidents.Lastbutnotleast,theschoolshouldconsiderstudents

withphysicaldiscomfortioaskforleaveinadvanceandinformthereason.

Inshort,whatmattersmostisthatphysicaleducationisacrucialpartofeducation.Onlyby

Strengthening<)nrhotlyc,;inwebelterprotectnnrcountryandbuildnurmntherlandIhopesincerelystudents

canexperiencehappinessinreasonablesports.

Yours,

LiMing

2021年1月春考

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinefe.

假如你是明啟中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生王佳，你學(xué)校的教師Lucy準(zhǔn)備在高中開設(shè)關(guān)于??信息素養(yǎng)“(information

literacy)的課程。課程包含以下四個板塊：“網(wǎng)站設(shè)計”、“大數(shù)據(jù)處理”、嘛別真?zhèn)涡畔ⅰ焙汀熬_搜索信息”。

現(xiàn)在向全體同學(xué)征求建議。請你給她寫?份電子郵件，要求：

1.選擇兩個你感興趣的板塊；

2.說明為什么選擇這個板塊的理由。

審題：

背景：學(xué)校將要開設(shè)“信息素養(yǎng)”課程（informationliteracycourse）

任務(wù)：

1.，（關(guān)聯(lián)性較強;自己有所了解的容易寫）

“網(wǎng)站設(shè)計”(web-design)a

“大數(shù)據(jù)處理”(bigdataprocessing)

“精確搜索信息”(smart-internetsearching)

“辨別真?zhèn)涡畔ⅰ?informationcredibilityevaluation)

可以從興趣愛好、日常經(jīng)歷或社會現(xiàn)象寫起廣網(wǎng)站設(shè)計”:通過建立自己的網(wǎng)站來宣傳自己喜歡的事

物

a.或者推廣一些公益性的活動，并且能夠在移動設(shè)備上瀏覽。

b.“大數(shù)據(jù)處理”:課題研究要做調(diào)查、或者對于一些社會現(xiàn)象想要了解更多，甚至作為大學(xué)專業(yè)方向提前學(xué)起

來°

c.，?精確搜索信息”:平時接觸到太多無效、誤導(dǎo)或營銷信息希望能夠省時省力、快速定位到自己需要的內(nèi)容。

d.“辨別真?zhèn)涡畔ⅰ?讀新聞報道或科普文章不能確定真實性，僅靠權(quán)威信息源和常識未必夠用（可以提疫情期間

和社交媒體）。

參考范文：

DearLucy,

MynameisWangJia,asenior3studentattheschool.I'mdeeplyinterestedinthecoursein

informationliteracythatyou'replanningtolaunch.SoI'mwritingthisemailtoinformyouofmychoiceofthe

twosectionsI'dliketolearnabout,whicharc“smartinternetsearching,'and"informationcredibility

evaluation*5.

Tobeginwith,I'vebasedmydecisionontheexpectationthatthecombinationofthetwosectionscanlead

metomydesiredresults.Its,inmyview,self-evidentthatsearchingfortheinformationIneedandensuringthe

14

authenticityofitscontentarcinterconnected.

Inaddition,intoday'sdigitalizedworldandwiththeexpansionofsocialmedia,informationiseverywhere

andmisinformationisprevalent.Thechallengethenistoseparatefactfromfalsehood*efficientlyandeffectively.

TakepracticalpreventivemeasuresinthecaseofCOVID-19asanexample------thegeneralpubliccanbeeasily

overwhelmedbyahostofseeminglyidenticalandpotentiallyfalsenewsreports.

Consequently,ifproperlyinstructedinthebasicskillsofusinginformationtechnology,includinghowto

pinpointwhatI,mlookingforandtoverilythatwhatI'vefoundisvalid,Imaybebetterpreparednexttime

wheninurgentneedofaccurateinformation.

Inanutshell,inthehopeofimprovingmyinformationliteracylevel,Iexpecttolearnmorefromyour

courseabouttheinformationworldandthewaysinwhichtosafelynavigatethroughitwithease.

Thankyouforyourtimeandhaveagreatday.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.

Bestregards.

WareJia

2020年1月春考

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese

你是明啟中學(xué)李華，看到電視臺行報道說很多超市有大量臨近保質(zhì)期的食物，針對這些食物如何處理

想征集觀眾意見，你很有感觸遂寫信給電臺，表達想法，信件內(nèi)容包含：

1）對如何處理這些臨近保質(zhì)期的食品提出建議；

2）提出這些建議的理由。

【參考范文】

Towhomitmayconcern.

15

Havingwatchedyourrecentreportaboutahugestockoffoodapproachingexpirydate,Vdliketooffersome

suggestionstohelp.

TheChineseNewYearisaroundthecorner.Meanwhile,therearehousingandrailwayconstructionsites

runningroundtheclock,wherehundredsofmigrantworkerssacrificetheirpreciousfamilyreuniontomeetthe

deadline.IsuggestlaunchingaNewYearPurchasingProgramforthesebuildersofShanghai.Allowingthema

specialdiscountonthefoodinthesesupermarkets.

Shanghaicouldn'thavebeensuchacommercialhubandfinancialcenterbulforthesweatthesemigrant

workersshed.Thustheydeservesomefavorabletreatmenlforiheirprimeyearsdevotedtothecity.Meanwhile,

milk,bread,coffeeandsnacksareconsumedbymany,butareconsideredd?arbythosewhosaveeverypennyfor

theirfarawayfamilies.Thisprogramservesasatokenofourlocals*gratitude,respectstheirneedsandmainkiins

thedignityofthem,fortheycandecidetheamountandsortoffoodtobuybythemselves.Lastbutnotleast,it

servestheneedofsupennarketmanagersaswell.Bynomeanscaniheyfindamoremeaningfulandaffordable

wayloaddressthisproblem.

Isincerelyhopemyntivirecanhelpboththe《upermarketsandthepeopleinneedThnnkyoufortakingit

intoaccount.

Yoursfaithfully,

LiHua

模塊五2024屆上海名校模考題特訓(xùn)。|

1.（2022秋?上海金山?高三上海市金山中學(xué)?？迹〥irections:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150words

acccrdingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

你是明啟中學(xué)高三學(xué)生.李華，最近在某雜志上看到一篇文章，文章里說到，現(xiàn)在的年輕人，包括高中生，

只想過安逸的生活，他們習(xí)慣了索取而不是給與，也不會考慮到別人的需求和感受，請你給雜志社寫一封

郵件，說說你是否彼成文章作者的觀點。你的文章需包括：

I.你是否贊成作者的觀點；

2.叁例說明你的理由。

【答案】Deareditor.

I'mwritingtotellyouthatIquiteagreewiththewriterofthearticle.Firstly,Ithinkitisacommon

phenomenoninoursocietynowadays.Withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingconditions,youngpeopleare

gettingmoreandmorefromtheirparents,whichmakesthemjustwanttohaveacomfortablelife.Asaresult,

mostyoungpeopleareusedtotakingra.herthangiving.Inaddition,mostoftheyounggenerationaretheonly

childintheirfamilies,sotheygetmuchmorecareandlovefromtheirparentsthanfamilieswithseveralchildren.

Sotheyareoftenthepersonswhoarecaredforbyothers,notthepersonswhocareaboutothers.Takemyselfas

anexample,Iamtheonlychildinmyfamily.Myparentstakegoodcareofmeandletmeliveacarefreelife.I

don'tusuallyhavetocareaboutothermembersofmyfamilyiniliatively.Forthisreason,mostofIheyoung

generationseldomconsidertheneedsandfeelingsofothers.

ThesearethereasonswhyIagreewiththeauthorofthearticle.

Yours,

Li

hiia

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書而表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給雜志社寫一封郵件，就該雜志上的一篇文章發(fā)表一下自己

的觀點，并陳述理由。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

首先：Firstly—>Firstofall

習(xí)慣：beusedto—>bcaccustomedto

舒適的：comfortable—*easy

此外：Inaddition—Whal'smore

2.句式拓展

普通句變強調(diào)句

原句：Forthisreason,mostoftheyounggenerationseldomconsidertheneedsandfeelingsofothers.

拓展句：Itisfor（hisreasonthatmostoftheyounggenerationseldomconsider（heneedsandfeelingsofothers.

【點睛】[高分句型1]I'mwritingtotellyouthatIquiteagreewiththewriterofthearticle,（isfflfthat引導(dǎo)

的賓語從句）

[高分句型2]Withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingconditions,youngpeoplearcgettingmoreandmorefrom

（heirparents,whichmakes（hemjustwanttohaveacomfortablelife.（運用了which弓|導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句）

2.（2022秋?上海?高三上海市敬業(yè)中學(xué)校考）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150words

acccrdingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李明，最近收到好友王磊的郵件。在郵件中，王磊表示自己因為拖延癥

(procrastination)而耽誤了重要事情，想請你提一些建議，如何克服拖延癥。回復(fù)一封郵件，內(nèi)容須包括:

I)你的建議

2)你的理由

【答案】DearWangLei,

Iamglad(ohearfromyou.Iknowyouarenotsatisfiedwithyourprocrastination.Procrastinationhas

negativeeffectsonourlife,whichbothersmanypeople.NowIamwritingtogiveyousomesuggestionstogetrid

ofit

Firstly,wecanwritedownourtasksinavisibleplacewilhiheirduedates.Additionally,wecantellour

familyorfriendsabout(nirgoalbecausetheywillmotivateusalongtheway.12sthutnotleast,rewardourselves

forajobwelldone.

Hopefully,mysuggestionswillbeofhelptoyou.

Yours,

LiMing

【導(dǎo)