讀后續(xù)寫(一)公開課

讀后續(xù)寫(一)公開課ContinuationWriting（讀后續(xù)寫）

讀后續(xù)寫:提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的材料，要求考生依據(jù)材料內(nèi)容、所給段落開頭語及所標關(guān)鍵詞續(xù)寫一篇150詞左右的短文。（滿分25分）新高考考試說明評分原則本題總分為25分，分5個檔次給分第五檔

(21-25)與所給短文融洽度高，與所提供各段落開頭語銜接合理。

內(nèi)容豐富，應(yīng)用了5個以上短文中標出的關(guān)鍵詞語。

所使用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯豐富、準確，可能有些錯誤，但完全不影響意義表達。有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使所續(xù)寫短文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。

高融洽度

tone(情節(jié)基調(diào))

languagecharacteristics(語言特征)

content(內(nèi)容:plotdevelopment--“W&H”)

Step1.Readforbasicinformation1.tone(情節(jié)基調(diào)):?

ThenIrealizedsomethingterriblewouldhappen....Hetookoutaknifendforcedmeto...Imanagnedtoteachmybrothercoulduntietheropeonhishands...dangeroussafeahappyendingStep1.Readforbasicinformation2.Languagecharacteristics(語言特征):?

Oneday,mybrotherandIwerealoneinourapartment...Ding-Dong!Ding-Dong!Outsideofthehousestoodamanwhoworeablackraincoatandblackrubberboots.Withoutanythinking，mybrothersaid:“No.”Storynarration(故事旁白)simple(簡單)vivid(生動)

Step1.ReadforbasicinformationonedayinourapartmentI,mybrotherandarobber

Mybrotheropenedthedoorforarobberandwewerecaughtbyhim.3.content(內(nèi)容:plotdevelopment---“W&H”)

Howwillthestorydevelop?When:Where:Who:What:How:PassageAmainlytells: Oneday,mybrotheropenedthedoorofourhouseforarobber,andwewerecaughtbyhim.Step2.Readfor

plotdevelopmentclues

(情節(jié)發(fā)展線索)Findoutthekeyclues(線索)basedonthebeginnings:Para1:

Thedoorofthekitchenwaslockedandwhat'sworse,Ididnothavethekey.Para2

Justatthesametimeourparentscamebackhome.Escapeornot?Step3.Predictpossible

plotdevelopment(tone:dangerous→safe→ahappyending)

Theunderlinedwords:inourapartment,parents,thedooe,unlocked,comicbooks,terrible,tieup,theman,thekitchen,thepolicethebrotherstherobberescape?notescape?caught?notcaught?parents?thepolice?

Languagecharacteristics:Tipsfordrafting

acontinuation(起草續(xù)篇)

simple(簡單)vivid(生動)Polishandcohere(潤色銜接):discoursemarks(銜接語)Content:

includetheunderlinedwords(≥5)Para.1:

Thedoorofthekitchenwaslockedandwhat'sworse,Ididnothavethekey.Para.2:

Justatthesametimeourparentscamebackhome.

Step4.Draftacontinuation(起草續(xù)篇)融洽度高

tone(情節(jié)基調(diào))

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