【讀后續(xù)寫】高二讀后續(xù)寫課件-尹娟

嵊州市高級中學2017學年第二學期期中考試高二讀后續(xù)寫嵊州市高級中學尹娟rug(地毯);____flowerpot(花盆);

happy;________family;________mom__________Useyourimaginationtocreateashortstorywiththegivenwordsastray(流浪的)dog;_________

house;_______night;________door;________asmallpuppy;imagination人物時間地點因果交流意圖AnalysisAnalysethepassageI,Spotty,Dad,Mom,everyoneinthefamilywhenIwassevenyearsoldNasikastraydog---afamilymember作者旨在通過對Spotty的回憶，重現(xiàn)這段美好的時光，以寄托對Spotty這個家庭成員的思念。Thoughitisoneofthefadedmemoriesofmylifetoday,therearetimeswhenIrememberhisfaceclearly,especiallyhiseyes.Ashehadyellowspotsonhiseyes,wecalledhimSpotty.Whichsentencesimpressyoumostinthepassagewhilereading?Iwentoutandfeltthoserefreshingraindropswithacoolbreezeonmyface.Itwasacolddark

night.Whichsentencesimpressyoumostinthepassagewhilereading?①一般現(xiàn)在時：itis...,therearetimeswhenIremember...②一般過去時：had,called,came;③過去將來時所表達的虛擬語氣：wouldhavebeen...FocusonTensePara1:①一般過去時：was,moved,wentout,heard,felt,came...②過去完成時：hadputoutsidethedoor;③過去進行時：wasraining,wastrembling④直接引語里的一般現(xiàn)在時：shallwekeep...FocusonTenseOtherParas:Passivevoice(被動語態(tài))：wasarranged,wassurrounded,wasamusedFocusonVoiceActicevoice(主動語態(tài))：Iremember...,hehadyellow...,wecalledhim...,Wemovedinto...StyleWhat'sthestyleofthepassageReminiscence(懷舊)Briskness(輕快)Thoughitisoneofthefadedmemoriesofmylifetoday,therearetimeswhenIrememberhisfaceclearly,especiallyhiseyes....feltthoserefreshingraindropwithcoolbreezeonmyface;Iwasreallyamusedwith;Spottyseemedveryhappy...描寫Spotty的詞匯描寫作者的詞匯描寫周圍環(huán)境的詞匯WordsclassificationWordshadyellowspotsonhiseye,astray(流浪的)dog,asmallpuppylyingonanoldrug,wetandtrembling,hadablackbody,darkereventhanablackrainycloud,happy,wenttosleepimmediatelywentoutandfeltthoserefreshingraindropswithacoolbreezeonmyface,hadourmeal,wenttosleep,heardasound,gotupmycourageandpeepedoutofthewindow,wasreallyamusedwith,saw,recognizehisappearance,feltpityfor,wentoutwithanoldtowel,wentneartheinnocentone,heldhiminmyhandandwipedthepuppy,tookhiminsideandmadeabedforhim,questionedmymomwassurroundedbylotsofbushesandvines(蔓藤),Itwasrainingveryheavilyontheday,thoserefreshingraindropswithacoolbreezeonmyface,Itwasacolddarknight,theflowerpot(花盆)keptonthewindowfallingdownParagraph1:Motherthoughtamomentandfinallyagreed._________________

Paragraph2:Afterleavingthehospital,motherpattedthedog’sheadsoftly.____

PredictionTimePlaceCharacterTenseResult/LogicaldevelopmentThinking12345CharactercoherenceTimecoherencePlacecoherenceTensecoherenceLogical/Themecoherence(協(xié)調性,一致性)Appreciate

Paragraph1:Motherthoughtamomentandfinallyagreed.ThemomentIheardwhatmomanswered,Ijumpeduphappily.However,thenextday,thesmallpuppywasseriouslyillandwaslyingontheoldrug,dying.Mothersawhimanddecidedtothrowhimawayatonce,butIinsistedontakinghimtotheanimals’hospital.Intheend,motheragreedtogothere.Afterthedoctorhadobservedhimcarefully,hesaidthathecaughtabadcold,sohegavehimsomemedicineandtoldushowtotreathim.

Paragraph2:Afterleavingthehospital,motherpattedthedog’sheadsoftly.Whenwegotinthehouse,thefamilycameupandtookcareofhi