Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting建議信Howtowritealetterofadvice課件高一英語(yǔ)人教版

HowtowritealetterofadviceWritingDo

you

find

it

difficult

to

learn

English

well?Do

you

feel

tired

every

day?Do

you

want

to

go

to

a

key

university

after

graduating?I

suggest

you

should

learn

the

new

words

by

reading.

You

should

do

more

exercise

every

day.

It

is

important

to

study

hard

from

now

on.

get

a

cold用以下句型給出建議：You

should

do…I

advise/suggest

that

you

should

do…It

is

important/necessary

to…If

I

were

you,

I

would

do…Thanks

for

your

advice.It

is

important

to

drink

more

(hot)

water.I

suggest

that

you

should

see

a

doctor.If

I

were

you,

I

would

have

a

good

rest.

Firstly,

I

strongly

advise

that

you

should

see

a

doctor,

because

the

doctor

will

give

you

the

professional

instructions,

such

as

taking

some

medicines

as

the

doctor

said.

What’s

more,

it

is

necessary

to

drink

more

hot

water

than

usual,

which

will

help

you

feel

better.

At

Last,

if

I

were

you,

I

would

have

a

good

rest

for

few

days.

Yours

BillDear

Besty,

It

is

said

that

you

have

a

serious

cold.

I’m

writing

to

give

you

some

suggestions.

Here

are

a

few

suggestions.

I

hope

you

will

recover

soon.

All

the

best

wishes

to

you.Structure

Give

your

advice01Para

1Para

2Para

30203

State

your

writing

purpose

Express

your

hope

I

think

health

is

the

most

important

thing.

Watch

a

short

video

on

how

to

keep

healthy.

Write

done

some

key

words.Advice

on

how

to

keep

healthy.保持充足的睡眠不喝酒不抽煙不吃垃圾食品養(yǎng)成好的習(xí)慣早睡早起多做運(yùn)動(dòng)飲食健康_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________have/keep

enough

sleepdon’t

drink

too

much

alcoholdon’t

smokedon’t

eat

junk

foodshave/develop

good

habitsgo

to

bed

earlyget

up

earlydo

more

exerciseseat

healthy

food

假定你是李華，你的好朋友Jane最近發(fā)現(xiàn)自己在發(fā)胖，很苦惱。她寫(xiě)信請(qǐng)你給她就如何減肥提建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容給Jane回一封信，要點(diǎn)如下：

1.健康飲食；

2.多鍛煉；

3.保持充足的睡眠。注意：詞數(shù)100左右，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Analysis01體裁02時(shí)態(tài)03人稱04內(nèi)容A

Letter

of

AdvicePresent

TenseFirst

Person/Second

Person3

ParagraphPara

1:引出話題，表明寫(xiě)作意圖1.健康飲食；2.多鍛煉；3.保持充足的睡眠。Para

2:提出建議Para

3:表達(dá)愿望連接詞(多個(gè)建議+多個(gè)理由)Structure用以下句型給出建議：You

should

do…I

advise/suggest

that

you

should

do…It

is

important/necessary

to…If

I

were

you,

I

would

do…Sentence

patterns

for

referenceLinking

words—羅列觀點(diǎn)Firstly,Firstofall,Aboveall,Tobeginwith,

Inthefirstplace,Foronething,Secondly,Besides,Moreover,Inaddition,What’smore,Furthermore,Worsestill,Foranotherthing,Finally,Atlast,Intheend,Lastbutnotleast,1.I’m

sorry

to

hear

that

you

are

having

trouble

in…2.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…3.Knowingthat…,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.A.stateyourpurposesentencepatternsB.giveyouradvice1.It’shelpful/importantto…2.Itwouldbeagoodideato…3.Iwouldliketosuggestthat…C.expressyourhope1.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful.3.I’msureifyoutakemyadvice,youwill…

DearJane

Knowing

that

you

are

having

trouble

in

losing

weight,

I’m

writing

to…Yourssincerely,LiHua建議信Ending

expressyourhopeBeginning

stateyourpurposeBody

giveadvice&reasons

Your

Writing!Let’swrite!1020251550startPay

more

attention

to

your

writing!評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1、是否覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)2、是否恰當(dāng)使用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)3、是否運(yùn)用多樣句式和豐富的詞匯4、是否使用連接詞5、全文結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整合理表達(dá)愿望：5、我相信如果你接受我的建議，你會(huì)變得更加苗條和保持健康。Theuseofsentencepatterns表明意圖：1.你給Jane回信就如何減肥提建議。提出建議：2、健康飲食3、多鍛煉4、保持充足的睡眠Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,I’m

writingtogivesomesuggestions.Itisimportanttokeepahealthydiet.Itishelpfultodomoreexercise.Itwouldbeagoodideatohave

enoughsleep.Iamsureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy.

假設(shè)你叫李華，你的好朋友Jane最近發(fā)現(xiàn)自己在發(fā)胖，很苦惱。她寫(xiě)信請(qǐng)你給她就如何減肥提建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容給Jane寫(xiě)一封信，詞數(shù)100左右。

1、健康飲食2、多鍛煉3、保持充足的睡眠Discovery

and

conclusion:How

to

make

your

advice

more

persuasive(有說(shuō)服力的)?Eg.It

is

important

to

keep

a

balanced

diet.,

such

as/like

eating

more

vegetables

and

fruits.if

you

want

to

lose

weight.

,

because

it

can

help

build

up

our

body

and

lose

weight.in

order

to

lose

weight.,

which

is

the

basis

of

losing

weight.Have

a

try!Try

to

polish（潤(rùn)色）other

sentences

by

these

ways.

,

such

as/like

+舉例子.if

條件狀語(yǔ)從句.

,

because

原因狀語(yǔ)從句.in

order

to

目的狀語(yǔ).,

which

引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句.Your

advice!Let’spolish!1020251550startItishelpfultodomoreexercise.Itwouldbeagoodideatohaveenoughsleep.Itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.DearJane,Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,I’m

writingtogivesomesuggestions.First,itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.Inaddition,it

wouldbeagoodideatohave

enoughsleep.Besides,itishelpfultodomoreexercise.Ihope

youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy

after

you

take

my

advice.Inordertoloseweight,youcaneatmorevegetablesandfruits.If

you

do

this,youwillburnoff

themorefatandyouwillbethinner.Becauseenough

sleepcansupportourbodyandactivities,andhelpusloseweight.Dear

Jane,Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,I’m

writing

togivesomesuggestions.

First,

itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.

I