讀后續(xù)寫+圣誕尋寶之旅：未知的+“Humphrey”+與驚喜降臨+講義 高一11月月考英語(yǔ)試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。MybrotherBrandonandIhadalwayswantedapetdog.ThisChristmas,weopenedallofthepackagesundertheChristmastree.Allthatwasleftwasanenvelope.Weknewthatenvelopesusuallycontainedcards,andifwewereluckytheyalsocontainedgiftcardsorcash.Mydadlookedalmostlikehe'dforgottenabouttheenvelopeashecasuallyhandedittome.Ibrokeitssealanddiscoveredinsidea3x5cardwithaborderofglittersurroundingapoem.Ofcourse,Ididn'trememberthepoembyheart,butitsmysteriousrhymingmessageinstructedustogodownstairs.Wewereexcited.Whatwefounddownstairswasanotherenvelope,containinganothercardwithaborderofglittersurroundingapoem.ThispoemtoldustogotoDad'scar.Therewasjustanotherenvelopecontaininganotherglitterycardinhiscar.ThisonetoldustogotoMom'sofficedowntown.Neitherofuswasoldenoughtodrive.Thismeantwehadtobegourparentstohurryupandgetdressedandfinishdrinkingtheircoffeeandgetgoing.Theytookforever.Eventually,wemadeittoMom'sofficewherewefoundapoemtellingustogosomewhereelse.ThistimeitwastotheTVstationwhereDadworked.Bynow,ourcuriositywasstretchedtothelimitsofourimaginations.Werewemeetingsomeonefamous?WerewegoingtobeonTV?Itabsolutelydidn'tmakesensetokeepapetdogatthestudiobecauseDadhadadeskinanopenareasharedwithotherreporters.Wesoonfoundout,however,thatsuchadeskwasalovelyplacetokeepa3x5cardcompletewithglitterandapoem.Theinstructioninthispoemconfusedusmorethananyother.Ittoldustogotoanunfamiliaraddress.Fortunatelyforus,ourparentsknewhowtogetthere.Thecarstoppedinfrontoftheunknownhouse.Itfeltliketheendofthehunt.Mydadhandedusthefinalenvelope.Thefinalpoemtoldustoknockonthedoorandsay,“MerryChristmas!IsHumphreyhere?”注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。第一段：Wedidn'tknowwhowouldanswerthedoor,andwedidn'tknowwhatHumphreywas.第二段：AndthenIsawsomethingcomingtowardusattopspeed:acloudofwhitefur.讀后感：這是一個(gè)關(guān)于圣誕節(jié)尋寶游戲的故事。孩子們根據(jù)一系列的提示，最終找到了一個(gè)名叫Humphrey的寵物狗。以下是對(duì)故事的續(xù)寫構(gòu)思：伏筆及回應(yīng)：伏筆：一系列的信封與詩(shī)歌引導(dǎo)，目的地不斷變換?；貞?yīng)：最后來到陌生房子，完成尋找之旅的最終環(huán)節(jié)。伏筆：詩(shī)歌指令越來越神秘，讓人好奇最終目的?；貞?yīng)：原來是尋找Humphrey，且地點(diǎn)在陌生房子。伏筆：提到想要寵物狗，整個(gè)尋找過程圍繞未知事物展開?；貞?yīng)：Humphrey是一只白色的毛茸茸的寵物狗。伏筆：尋找地點(diǎn)包括多個(gè)場(chǎng)所，如家里、辦公室、電視臺(tái)等。回應(yīng)：最終在陌生房子找到關(guān)鍵線索，解開謎題。伏筆：不斷收到信封與詩(shī)歌，增加懸念?；貞?yīng)：最后信封中的詩(shī)歌給出關(guān)鍵提示，敲門并詢問關(guān)于Humphrey的事情。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：

第一段：描述敲門時(shí)的緊張與期待，以及門打開后的場(chǎng)景和對(duì)Humphrey的初步印象猜測(cè)。

第二段：詳細(xì)描寫看到Humphrey是一只可愛的狗時(shí)的驚喜與興奮，以及一家人與狗相處的溫馨畫面。情感線：開始是對(duì)未知的好奇與尋找過程中的急切，敲門時(shí)緊張，看到Humphrey后轉(zhuǎn)為驚喜與興奮，最后沉浸在溫馨喜悅之中。故事線：兄弟倆按詩(shī)歌指示來到陌生房子，敲門詢問Humphrey，門開后先是疑惑，隨后看到可愛的狗，一家人與狗開啟歡樂相處時(shí)光。主旨升華句：“Thejourneyofanticipationanddiscoveryisoftenthesweetestpreludetounexpectedjoys.”（期待與發(fā)現(xiàn)之旅往往是意外喜悅最甜蜜的前奏。）“Sometimes,themostpreciousgiftsarehiddeninthemysteryoftheunknown,waitingtobeunveiled.”（有時(shí)，最珍貴的禮物隱藏在未知的神秘之中，等待被揭開。）“Thepursuitoftheunknowncanleadustothewarmestandmostdelightfulsurpriseslifehastooffer.”（對(duì)未知的追尋能引領(lǐng)我們找到生活給予的最溫暖、最令人愉快的驚喜。）“Inthemazeofmystery,itisthefinalrevelationthatlightsupourheartswithboundlesshappiness.”（在神秘的迷宮中，最終的揭示用無盡的幸福點(diǎn)亮我們的心。）“Thepathofcuriositymaybewinding,butitalwaysleadstothemostendearingandcherishedmoments.”（好奇之路或許曲折，但它總是通向最可愛、最珍貴的時(shí)刻。）寫作示范一：Wedidn'tknowwhowouldanswerthedoor,andwedidn'tknowwhatHumphreywas.Ourheartspoundedasweknocked.Thedooropenedslowly,andafriendlyfacegreetedus.Itwasanolderlady.Westammeredout,“MerryChristmas!IsHumphreyhere?”Shesmiledandsteppedaside.Wepeeredintothehouse,lookingforanysignofwhatcouldbeHumphrey.Theroomwaswarmandinviting,buttherewasnoobviousclue.AndthenIsawsomethingcomingtowardusattopspeed:acloudofwhitefur.ItwasabeautifulwhiteSamoyeddog.Histailwaggedfuriouslyasheboundeduptous.Wewereoverjoyed.Humphreylickedourhandsandcircledaroundus.MybrotherandIhuggedhimimmediately.Ourparentswatchedwithbigsmilesontheirfaces.ItwastheperfectChristmasgift.WethankedtheladyandtookHumphreyhome,wherehequicklybecameabelovedmemberofourfamily,fillingourdayswithlaughterandlove.寫作示范二：Wedidn'tknowwhowouldanswerthedoor,andwedidn'tknowwhatHumphreywas.Nervously,weknocked.Amanopenedthedoor.Weaskedourquestion,andhechuckled.Heledusintoasmallroom.Therewasabigboxinthecorner.Welookedatitcuriously.WasHumphreyinthere?Themanjustgrinnedandmotionedforustoapproach.AndthenIsawsomethingcomingtowardusattopspeed:acloudofwhitefur.OutoftheboxsprangafluffywhiteMaltesepuppy.Hislittlebodywiggledwithexcitement.Wegaspedindelight.Ipickedhimupgently,andhesnuggledintomyarms.Brandonreachedouttopethim.Ourparentscameinandjoinedthehappyscene.HumphreywasthemostwonderfulChristmassurprise.Werealizedthatthejourneytofindhimhadmadethemomentevenmorespecial.Fromthatdayon,Humphreybroughtsomuchhappinessandwarmthtoourlives.參考答案

Wedidn’tknowwhowouldanswerthedoor,andwedidn’tknowwhatHumphreywas.

Butnow,thesecretwasabouttoberevealed.Withamixofexcitementandcuriosity,weknockedatthedoorandwaitedbreathlesslyforaresponse.Soon,asmall,elderlyladywithawarmsmilegreetedus.SheintroducedherselfasMrs.Jones,ananimallover,andinvitedusin.