++Unit11+writing 人教版九年級英語全冊

Unit11Sadmoviesmakemecry.writingLearninggoalsBytheendofthisclass,Icanwriteastorysimilartotheonein2b.3a.Thinkofsomeexperiencesthatmadeyoufeelveryhappyorsad.Tellyourpartneraboutthem.Usethefollowingideastohelpyou.●?winning/losingacompetition●?gettinggood/badgradesonanexam●?performingsomethingwell/badlyinfrontofabiggroupofpeople●?gettingintoafightwithyourbestfriend●?yourfirsttripoutsideyourhometown...Lead-inA:Whatexperiecemadeyouhappy?B:Winningacompetitionmademehappy.A:Whatexperiecemadeyousad?B:Losingacompetitionmademesad.Pre-writingcauseprocessresultthepasttenseWriteastorysimilartotheonein2busingyournotesin3a.3bWriteastorysimilartotheonein2busingyournotesin3a.3bInyourstory,trytoexplainthefollowing:*Whathappened?*Whendidithappen?*Wheredidithappen?*Howdiditmakeyoufeel?Why?Whohelpedyou?Howdidshe/hehelpyou?*Whatdidyoulearnfromtheexperience?Whatdoyouwanttosaytoher/him?Whatdoyouwanttodotothankher/him?Pre-writing本文根據(jù)要求是一篇記敘文。記敘文需包含六要素：事件的時間、地點、人物、事情的起因、經(jīng)過及結(jié)果，即我們通常所說的五個“W”（when,who,what,where,why）和一個“H”（how

）。人稱應(yīng)是第一人稱，時態(tài)應(yīng)是一般過去時。Mindmap

Whatdidyoulearnfromtheexperience?Whatdoyouwanttosaytoher/him?Whatdoyouwanttodotothankher/him?

MydayWheredidithappen?Howdiditmakeyoufeel?Why?Whathappened?Whendidithappen?Pre-writingWhohelpedyou?How?While-writingAfter-writingcauseprocessresultLessonsofexperienceAfter-writing是否符合題目要求：寫一次自己的經(jīng)歷時態(tài)運用是夠準確？（一般過去時）內(nèi)容要點是否完整？（事情發(fā)生的時間，地點，人物，事情的起因，事情的經(jīng)過，事情的結(jié)果）4.用詞是否得當？運用語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否正確？（makesb.do/adj.)5.行文是否連貫？Keepingadiaryisagoodwaytorememberanexperience.Whathesaidmademereallytouched.WhatanunforgettableexperienceIhad!Iwillrememberitforever.行文3’2’2’2’6’1Putthewordsintheappropriateplaceinthechart.nervousunhappyuncomfortableworriedcomfortablerelaxedangryawfulhappyuneasyPositiveNegativecomfortablerelaxedhappynervousunhappyuncomfortableworriedangryawfuluneasy2Writesentencesusingthewordsgiven.1.sadmovies/cry____________________________________________________Speakinginfrontofmanypeoplemakesmenervous.Moneyandfamedon’talwaysmakemehappy.Sadmoviesmakemecry.3.moneyandfame/notalwayshappy_____________________________________________________2.speakinginfrontofmanypeople/nervous____________________________________________________4.softpianomusic/relaxed____________________________________________________5.rainydays/stayathomeandwatchTV____________________________________________________Softpianomusicmakesmerelaxed.RainydaysmakemestayathomeandwatchTV.3Numberthethings[1–6](1=leastimportant,6=mostimportant).Writeareasonforeachchoice.

____fame(名譽)____power

(權(quán)力)

____friendship

(友誼)

____wealth(財富)