讀后續(xù)寫+摯愛孟買情逐夢新征程+Kabir+的故事+講義 高三12月聯(lián)考英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Inthedynamicandfast-pacedcityofMumbai,ayoungboynamedKabirlivedalivelylife.TheIndiancitywashisfavorite,filledwiththehustle(喧鬧)ofbusystreets,thesweetsmellofvariousstreetfood,andthelaughteroffriendsastheywalkedhomefromschool.HelovedeverythingaboutMumbai—theseawindthatblewhishair,thebrightcolorsandfestivitiesthatbroughtjoytothecity,andthewarmthofhisfriends'smiles.Hehadadailyroutinewhichwasfullofexcitementandjoy,livinginharmonywiththecityhecalledhome.Asaphotographylover,heoftentookpicturesofthebeautifullandscapesofthecity.Onefatefulday,however,everythingwasabouttochange.Kabir'sfather,MrKapoor,receivedaletterofgreatsignificance.Itwasanofferforanewjobinacityfaraway,anopportunitythatcouldprovidehisfatherwithcareerprospectsbutalsowouldtakethemawayfromtheircurrenthomeandthefamiliarsurroundingsKabirlovedsomuch.ThenewsleftKabirfeelingconflictedashethoughtaboutleavingbehindhisbelovedMumbaiandallitswarmthandjoy.Thefamilysatdowntodiscusstheofferindetail.MrKapoorspokepassionately,“Thisnewopportunitymaybringaboutabetterfutureforourfamily.Thereisthepossibilitythatwewillhavenewexperiences,newadventures,andnewbeginnings.”Hismothernoddedandsaid,“Ican'tagreemore.”Kabirlistenedsilently,hismindwanderingbacktothefamiliarsightsandsoundsofMumbaithathehadgrownupwith.Astheyspoke,Kabirstruggledwiththedecision.HeknewhelovedMumbaiwithallhisheart,buthealsosawthepotentialinthisnewopportunity.Heknewthatchangewasunavoidableandthatitbroughtthepotentialforgrowthandadventurewithit.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。第一段：Intheend,Kabirmadeadecisionthatheknewwasrightforhimandhisfamily.第二段：Thenextday,Kabirpickeduphiscamera,keepinghisfather'sadviceinmind.文章大意：在孟買生活的男孩Kabir熱愛這座城市的一切，然而父親收到一份去遠(yuǎn)方城市工作的邀請，這意味著要離開孟買。一家人討論此事時，Kabir內(nèi)心十分矛盾，既不舍孟買，又看到新機(jī)會的潛力。伏筆及回應(yīng)：伏筆：Kabir是攝影愛好者，常拍城市美景，為后文他拿起相機(jī)記錄孟買做鋪墊，續(xù)寫中他用相機(jī)記錄孟買的點(diǎn)滴，與前文愛好相呼應(yīng)，體現(xiàn)他對孟買的熱愛。伏筆：提到孟買的各種美好，如街道的喧鬧、美食的香氣、朋友的歡笑等，這些美好讓Kabir不舍，在續(xù)寫中他回憶這些美好，堅定了記錄孟買的想法，使情感發(fā)展更自然。伏筆：父親收到工作邀請，引發(fā)家庭討論，這是故事轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)鍵，續(xù)寫中Kabir最終做出決定，圍繞這一事件展開，情節(jié)連貫。伏筆：Kabir內(nèi)心的矛盾掙扎，既愛孟買又考慮家庭新機(jī)會，為他做出決定的艱難和后續(xù)的復(fù)雜情感埋下伏筆，續(xù)寫中他帶著不舍與期待的心情面對變化，符合其內(nèi)心狀態(tài)。伏筆：母親對父親的認(rèn)同，側(cè)面反映家庭對新機(jī)會的傾向，促使Kabir思考并做出決定，續(xù)寫中他的決定也包含了對家庭的責(zé)任，完善了故事邏輯。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：第一段：描述Kabir經(jīng)過思考后，決定支持父親接受新工作，盡管內(nèi)心充滿不舍，但他明白這是為家庭的未來著想。他決定在離開前，用自己的方式好好告別孟買，珍藏這份回憶。第二段：講述Kabir拿起相機(jī)，牢記父親“新機(jī)會帶來新成長”的話，走遍孟買的大街小巷，拍攝那些熟悉的地方和人們的生活場景。他的照片不僅是對孟買的留念，也成為他面對新生活的勇氣源泉，帶著對過去的熱愛勇敢邁向未來。情感線：從最初對孟買的熱愛與不舍，到面對家庭抉擇時的矛盾掙扎，再到做出決定后的堅定與釋然，最后在記錄孟買的過程中充滿溫情與希望，情感豐富且過渡自然。故事線：Kabir一家面臨去新城市的抉擇，Kabir從糾結(jié)到?jīng)Q定支持家庭，然后用相機(jī)記錄孟買，在變化中找到平衡與力量，完成從依賴熟悉環(huán)境到勇敢迎接新生活的成長轉(zhuǎn)變。主旨升華句："Changeisnottheendofwhatwecherish,butthebeginningofanewchapterfilledwithhopeandgrowth."（改變不是我們所珍視之物的終結(jié)，而是充滿希望與成長的新篇章的開始。）"Inthefaceofchange,wefindthatourrootsinthepastcanbecomethewingsthatcarryustoabrighterfuture."（面對改變，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)過去的根基能成為帶我們飛向更光明未來的翅膀。）"Embracingchangewithanopenheartallowsustocarrythebeautyofthepastintothepromiseofthefuture."（以開放的心擁抱改變，能讓我們帶著過去的美好走向未來的希望。）"Life'stransitionsareliketheturningofapage;theyholdthepotentialfornewstorieswhilekeepingtheessenceoftheoldonesalive."（生活的轉(zhuǎn)變就像翻頁，它們蘊(yùn)含著新故事的潛力，同時讓舊故事的精髓得以延續(xù)。）"Wemayleavebehindthephysicalplaceswelove,butthememoriesandspirittheyinstilledinuswillforeverguideourjourneyahead."（我們可能會離開我們熱愛的地方，但它們賦予我們的記憶和精神將永遠(yuǎn)指引我們前行的道路。）寫作示范一：Intheend,Kabirmadeadecisionthatheknewwasrightforhimandhisfamily.Hetookadeepbreathandtoldhisparentsthathewaswillingtomove.TearswelledupinhiseyesashethoughtofleavingMumbai,buthealsofeltaglimmerofexcitementfortheunknown.Herealizedthathisloveforhisfamilyoutweighedhisattachmenttothecity.Hedecidedthathewouldmakethemostofthisnewchapterintheirlives.Thenextday,Kabirpickeduphiscamera,keepinghisfather'sadviceinmind.HewalkedthroughthestreetsofMumbai,capturingtheessenceofthecityonelasttime.Theimagesofthelocalvendors,thecolorfulfestivals,andthesereneseabecamefrozenintimethroughhislens.Asheclickedaway,hefeltasenseofpeace.Thesephotoswouldbehistreasure,areminderoftheplacehecalledhome.Withaheartfullofloveandacamerafullofmemories,Kabirwasreadytoembracethechangeandseewherethisnewadventurewouldtakehimandhisfamily.寫作示范二：Intheend,Kabirmadeadecisionthatheknewwasrightforhimandhisfamily.Hemusteredupthecouragetosayyestothemove.HisheartachedatthethoughtofpartingfromMumbai,buthesawthehopeinhisparents'eyes.Heunderstoodthatthiswasachanceforthemalltogrowandexperiencenewthings.HepromisedhimselfthathewouldholdontothememoriesofMumbaitightly.Thenextday,Kabirpickeduphiscamera,keepinghisfather'sadviceinmind.Hevisitedallhisfavoritespots,fromthebustlingmarketplacestothequietparks.Thecamerabecamehistooltosaygoodbye.Hephotographedtheoldbuildings,thefriendlyneighbors,andthevibrantstreetlife.Eachclickwasatestamenttohisloveforthecity.Throughhislens,hefoundthestrengthtofacetheupcomingchange.HeknewthatMumbaiwouldalwaysbeapartofhim,andhewasnowreadytostepintothenewlifewithanopenheartandaheadfullofbeautifulmemories.

參考范文:Intheend,Kabirmadeadecisionthatheknewwasrightforhimandhisfamily.Withaheavyheart,heagreedtomovetothenewcity.However,Mr.KapoorcouldsenseKabir'sreluctancefromhisexpression,amixtureofsadnessandhesitation.TakingKabir'shand,hereassuredhim,“Wewillcomebacktovisitwheneverwehavethechance,”Inanefforttocomfortherson,Mrs.KapoorproposedthatKabirusehiscameratocapturesomepreciousmemories