讀后續(xù)寫+情暖冬日：由泰迪熊開(kāi)啟的友誼故事+講義- 高三下學(xué)期總復(fù)習(xí)質(zhì)量測(cè)試英語(yǔ)試卷（二）

閱讀下面文章，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整短文，續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。SeeingthepictureofKellyandIholdingteddybearswithgreatjoy,Icouldn’thelprecallingthesweetmemory.Afewyearsago,beforeChristmas,mydadplacedalargeboxinhisgrocerystoreforpeopletodonatetoysforchildreninneed.Kelly,mybestfriendcameovertohelpwiththewrapping.Knowingthatoureffortswouldbringjoytosomanychildrenduringtheholidayseason,wethoughtitwasarewardingexperience.Asweworked,wesharedmomentsoflaughterandjoy.Afterashortwhile,wehadalmostfinishedwrappingallthetoyswithjustonelittleteddybearleft.Lookingatit,Isaid,“Itisthesweetest!Itremindsmeofmyteddybear.Isoldallmylittlekidstuffatourgaragesalewhenwemoved.ButnowI’mreallymissingit!”Kellycametoseeitandshared.“Ihaveasadteddybearstorytoo.Whenmylittlebrotherwasababy,IlethimplaywithmyRosyBear,butherefusedtogiveherback.Ever.”Afterourchat,weknewbothofushadaspecialstorywithateddybear.Rightthen,mydadenteredtheroomandexclaimed.“Wow,greatwrappingjob!Thekidsaregoingtobethrilledwhenopeningthesepresents.”“Theydefinitelywill.Maybewebothwanttobetheonewhocangettheteddybear.Icanjustimaginehowdelightedakidwouldbetounwrapthissweetteddybear.”saidKelly.Welaughed,gazingattheperfectlywrappedbears.Mymom,joininginthelaughter,suggested,“Whydon’tyougatheratourhousenextSaturdayforacookie-decoratingpartyandexchangeyourChristmasgiftsinadvance?I’llpreparethecookiesforyou.”“Goodidea!Iwillenjoythegreatjoyofunwrappingthegift.”Isaidcheerfully.Hearingwhatwesaid,Kelly’seyeslitup,saying,“Countmein!”“Allright,girls,”saidmydad.“Weneedtodothetoy-loadingworknow.Wehavetodropoffallthesepresentsbeforefiveo’clock!”注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Thenextweek,Iwastryingtofigureoutaperfectgiftfortheparty.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Finally,thedayofthepartyarrived.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：幾年前圣誕節(jié)前，作者和好友Kelly在爸爸的雜貨店幫忙包裝捐贈(zèng)給貧困兒童的玩具，剩下一只可愛(ài)的泰迪熊，兩人都對(duì)其有特殊情感且都希望有孩子能得到它。媽媽提議下周六在作者家舉辦餅干裝飾派對(duì)并提前交換圣誕禮物，之后作者和爸爸去送玩具，故事在此處展開(kāi)續(xù)寫。5處伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆：作者和Kelly都講述了自己與泰迪熊的故事，且都對(duì)剩下的那只泰迪熊有特別的情感，為后續(xù)兩人準(zhǔn)備禮物時(shí)可能與泰迪熊相關(guān)做鋪墊?；貞?yīng)：作者四處尋找與泰迪熊有關(guān)的禮物，最終買到一只復(fù)古的小熊鑰匙鏈，呼應(yīng)了前文對(duì)泰迪熊的情感，也使故事圍繞泰迪熊這一元素展開(kāi)，情節(jié)連貫且主題突出。伏筆：媽媽提議舉辦派對(duì)并交換禮物，引發(fā)了作者準(zhǔn)備禮物的行動(dòng)，推動(dòng)故事發(fā)展?；貞?yīng)：作者用心準(zhǔn)備禮物，在派對(duì)上與Kelly交換，這一情節(jié)順理成章，同時(shí)也營(yíng)造了溫馨歡樂(lè)的氛圍，豐富了故事內(nèi)容，體現(xiàn)了朋友間的情誼。伏筆：作者提到賣了小時(shí)候的東西后想念泰迪熊，暗示她可能對(duì)泰迪熊相關(guān)物品有渴望，這為她尋找禮物提供了方向?；貞?yīng)：作者買到復(fù)古小熊鑰匙鏈，滿足了自己對(duì)泰迪熊的情感寄托，也讓這份禮物更具意義，既符合人物心理，又使故事更加完整，強(qiáng)化了情感線。伏筆：作者和Kelly都期待派對(duì)上拆禮物的快樂(lè)，表現(xiàn)出她們對(duì)這次活動(dòng)的重視和期待?；貞?yīng)：派對(duì)上兩人交換禮物時(shí)的驚喜和開(kāi)心，回應(yīng)了之前的期待，將氣氛推向高潮，展現(xiàn)了友誼的美好，使情感線更加豐富和飽滿。伏筆：之前包裝玩具的歡樂(lè)場(chǎng)景，營(yíng)造了溫馨和諧的氛圍，為后續(xù)派對(duì)的歡樂(lè)氣氛做了鋪墊?；貞?yīng)：派對(duì)上大家一起裝飾餅干、交換禮物，充滿歡聲笑語(yǔ)，延續(xù)了之前的溫馨氛圍，使整個(gè)故事的情感基調(diào)保持一致，突出了愛(ài)與分享的主題。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)情感線：第一段：作者在準(zhǔn)備禮物的過(guò)程中，心情既興奮又有些忐忑，興奮的是即將和Kelly交換禮物，忐忑的是擔(dān)心自己準(zhǔn)備的禮物不夠好，同時(shí)懷著對(duì)童年泰迪熊的懷念之情，努力尋找能讓Kelly開(kāi)心的禮物，這份用心體現(xiàn)了對(duì)友誼的珍視。第二段：派對(duì)當(dāng)天，作者起初有些緊張，當(dāng)看到Kelly時(shí)又充滿期待，在交換禮物環(huán)節(jié)，收到Kelly的禮物后，心中滿是驚喜和感動(dòng)，感受到了友誼的深厚和溫暖，兩人的情誼在這個(gè)過(guò)程中進(jìn)一步升溫，整個(gè)氛圍溫馨而幸福。故事線：第一段：接下來(lái)的一周，我絞盡腦汁想為派對(duì)準(zhǔn)備一份完美的禮物。我逛了好幾家商店，都沒(méi)有找到合適的。直到有一天，我在一家二手店的角落里發(fā)現(xiàn)了一個(gè)復(fù)古的小熊鑰匙鏈，它看起來(lái)和我小時(shí)候的泰迪熊有幾分相似。我立刻把它買了下來(lái)，精心包裝好，期待著在派對(duì)上給Kelly一個(gè)驚喜。我想象著她看到禮物時(shí)的表情，心中充滿了喜悅和期待。第二段：終于，派對(duì)的日子到了。Kelly早早地來(lái)到了我家，我們一起開(kāi)心地裝飾餅干。當(dāng)交換禮物的時(shí)刻到來(lái)時(shí)，我緊張地把禮物遞給Kelly，她也笑著遞給我一個(gè)包裝精美的盒子。我打開(kāi)一看，里面是一只手工縫制的小熊玩偶，和我們之前看到的那只捐贈(zèng)的泰迪熊一樣可愛(ài)。Kelly說(shuō)她知道我想念小時(shí)候的泰迪熊，所以特意做了這個(gè)送給我。我感動(dòng)得熱淚盈眶，緊緊地抱住了她。這個(gè)圣誕節(jié)，因?yàn)橛羞@份真摯的友誼，變得格外溫暖。主旨升華句Truefriendshipislikeawarmfireinthecoldwinter,alwaysbringingcomfortandhappiness,andmakingeveryordinarydayshinewithextraordinarymeaning.（真正的友誼就像寒冬里的一團(tuán)溫暖火焰，總能帶來(lái)慰藉和幸福，讓每一個(gè)平凡的日子閃耀出非凡的意義。）Thebeautyofgivingliesnotinthevalueofthegift,butintheloveandthoughtfulnessbehindit.Itistheseintangiblethingsthattrulytouchtheheartandstrengthenthebondoffriendship.（給予的美好不在于禮物的價(jià)值，而在于背后的愛(ài)和體貼。正是這些無(wú)形的東西真正觸動(dòng)心靈，加強(qiáng)了友誼的紐帶。）Inthesimpleactofexchanginggifts,wefindtheessenceofChristmas-thespiritoflove,sharing,andthejoyofmakingothershappy,whichisthemostpreciousgiftwecangiveandreceive.（在交換禮物這一簡(jiǎn)單行為中，我們找到了圣誕節(jié)的精髓——愛(ài)、分享的精神以及讓他人快樂(lè)的喜悅，這是我們能給予和收到的最珍貴的禮物。）Sometimes,thethingsweholddearfromourchildhoodcaninspireustocreatenewmemoriesanddeepenourrelationships.Itshowsthatthepastisnotjustamemory,butasourceofinspirationforthepresentandthefuture.（有時(shí)，我們童年珍視的東西可以激勵(lì)我們創(chuàng)造新的回憶并加深人際關(guān)系。這表明過(guò)去不僅僅是一段記憶，更是現(xiàn)在和未來(lái)的靈感源泉。）Thewarmthoffriendshipcanfillthevoidleftbylostchildhoodtreasures.Itteachesusthatwhilethingsmaycomeandgo,theloveandconnectionwesharewithourfriendswillalwaysremain,makingourlivesricherandmoremeaningful.（友誼的溫暖可以填補(bǔ)童年失去的珍寶所留下的空白。它教導(dǎo)我們，雖然事物可能來(lái)來(lái)去去，但我們與朋友分享的愛(ài)和聯(lián)系將永遠(yuǎn)存在，使我們的生活更加豐富和有意義。）寫作示范第一篇Paragraph1:Thenextweek,Iwastryingtofigureoutaperfectgiftfortheparty.Irummagedthroughmyroom,lookingforsomethingspecial.ThenIrememberedthestoryKellytoldaboutherRosyBear.Idecidedtosearchforasimilarteddybearonline.Afterhoursofbrowsing,Ifinallyfoundonethatlookedjustlikeit.Iordereditimmediatelyandwaitedanxiouslyforittoarrive.Whenitcame,Iwrappeditupwithabigredbowandahandwrittennote,expressinghowmuchourfriendshipmeanttomeandhowIhopedthisbearwouldbringhersomecomfortandjoy,justlikethememoriesofherRosyBear.Paragraph2:Finally,thedayofthepartyarrived.Kellywalkedinwithabigsmileonherface,holdingabeautifullywrappedbox.Wespenttheafternoondecoratingcookiesandchattinghappily.Whenitwastimetoexchangegifts,myheartracedwithexcitement.Ihandedhertheteddybear,andhereyeswidenedinsurpriseanddelight.Shethengavemehergift,andinsidewasascrapbookfilledwithpicturesofusandthememorieswehadsharedovertheyears.Aswelookedthroughittogether,tearsofhappinessfilledoureyes.ThisChristmas,throughthesesimplegifts,werealizedthatthemostpreciousthingsinlifearethefriendshipswecherishandthelovewesharewitheachother.第二篇Paragraph1:Thenextweek,Iwastryingtofigureoutaperfectgiftfortheparty.IthoughtaboutallthethingsKellyandIhaddonetogetherandwhatshemightlike.Idecidedtomakeherapersonalizedphotoframewithpicturesofusandthetoyswehadwrapped.Ispentdayscuttingandpastingthephotos,decoratingtheframewithglitterandstickers.Ialsoaddedasmallcharmintheshapeofateddybeartothecorner.Whilemakingit,IthoughtabouthowluckyIwastohavesuchagreatfriend.Icouldn'twaittoseeherreactionwhenshereceivedmygift.Paragraph2:Finally,thedayofthepartyarrived.Thehousewasfilledwiththesmelloffreshlybakedcookies.Kellyarrived,andwehuggedeachothertightly.Aswedecoratedthecookies,welaughedandsharedstories.Whenitwastimetoexchangegifts,Ihandedherthephotoframe.Shegaspedwithdelightandgavemeawarmhug.Thenshegavemehergift,whichwasaknittedscarfinmyfavoritecolor.Shesaidshehadspentweeksmakingitforme.Iwasdeeplytouched.Thatday,aswesattogether,enjoyingthecookiesandourgifts,Iunderstoodthatthebestgiftsaretheonesthatcomefromtheheart,andthatourfriendshipwasthegreatestgiftofall.參考答案

Thenextweek,Iwastryingtofigureoutaperfectgiftfortheparty.HopingtobringgreatjoyandsurprisetoKelly,Isearchedforsomethingunique.Oneday,walkinghomefromschool,Isawitintheshopwindow.ItisateddybearexactlyliketheoneI’dbeenwrapping.Iquicklyran