2021年6月英語六級作文賞析

2021年6月英語六級優(yōu)秀作文賞析

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【篇一】2021年6月英語六級優(yōu)秀作文賞析

Therearemanywaysoftraveling.Peoplemaytravelbyplaneif

theywanttotravelfarandreachtheirdestinationinashorter

time.Itisthemostcomfortablebutexpensiveway.Mostpeople

travelbytrainbecauseitisalessexpensivewaybutthecompar

tmcntsarecrampedandstuffy.Busjourneyisacheaperwaybutitis

spentonnarrow,bumpyroadswhicharecrowdedwithtraffic.Tripsby

shipmaybethecheapestandmostcomfortablewaybutittakestoo

muchtime.

Iliketravelingbybike.IcansetoutwhenIlikeandstopwhen

Ilike.IcangowhereverIlikesothatIcanenjoydelightfulspots

rarelyvisitedbyothertravelers.WhenIfeeltired,Isitdownby

thebikeandhaveagoodrest.Besides,Icansavemuchmoneyfor

ticketsandmuchtimeinwaitingforthetrainorbus.Icancover

moreplacesbyridingabikethangoingonfoot.

Travelingbybikeisgoodtohealth.Itisreallyasortofgood

exercisetostrengthenone*smusclesandtotestone'swill.

Moreover,itbringsnopollutiontotheair.Soithelpstocleanthe

atmosphere.

CET6六級作文結(jié)構(gòu)分析：

?旅游的方式有多種

*Plane

*Train

*Bus

*Ship

?我愛騎車出游

*Convenient

*Accessibletoanyplace

*Savemoneyandtime

?騎車出游有益健康

*Strengthenoneswill

*Testone*swill

*Nopollution

CET6六級作文內(nèi)容分析：

本文是一篇簡單的議論文，文中首先列舉了多種交通工具并說明優(yōu)缺點，

然后落實到作者自己的喜好-----騎車出游，接著說出喜好的理由。最后一段

為總結(jié)。本文篇幅不長，但層次清楚，又很連貫，每一段的第一句均為主題句,

段中意思統(tǒng)一，不跑題。本文應(yīng)是一篇四級作文。

CET6六級作文萬能句型：

destinationn.目的地

compartmentn.車廂

crampedandstuffy擁擠

narrow,bumpyroads狹窄而顛簸的路面

setout出發(fā)

strengthenone'smuscleandtestone'swill增強體魄鍛煉意志

【篇二】2021年6月英語六級優(yōu)秀作文賞析

Everywhereyougo,you'11seepeople,maleorfemale,oldor

young,wearingjeans.Indeed,jeanshavegrownmoreandmorepopular

sincethefirstpairwasborn.InnewspapersandmagazinesoronTV

youoftencomeacrosssuchadsas“Buythesejeanstheyarecheap.

Buythem-theyarehardwearing.Buythem-theyarecomfortable.z/

Ithinkthereisnocheatingintheseads.

Inthefirstplace,jeansaresocheapthatalmosteveryonecan

affordtobuyapair,especiallyforstudentsandwage-earners.Noone

wouldnotpaylessandgetmore.

Thatjeanswearwellandwashwellistheirsecondsuperiorityto

otherkindsoftrousers.Whereveryougoandwhateveryoudo,you*11

findjeansyourgoodcompanion.Madeofpurecotton,jeansarevery

comfortable.Whatismore,theyproduceagoodimageandmakeyoulook

casual,sporty,tough,elegant,andsophisticated.

Modernfashionscomeandgoquickly,but,thankstoLeviStrauss,

jeansalwaysremainpeople*sfirstchoice.

CET6六級作文內(nèi)容分析：

本文是一篇說明文，是一篇三段式作文。第一段說明牛仔褲流行的現(xiàn)象，

并以三句廣告詞說出流行的原因，即三大特點-----價廉、耐穿和舒適。第二

段中有三小段，分述上述三大特點，并加上評論。在最后一小段中自然地補充

了牛仔褲其他特點，使論述內(nèi)容更加豐富。結(jié)尾段只有一句，但簡練且總結(jié)性

強。

CET6六級作文萬能句型：

see...+ing看到...做某事

Thereisnocheatingintheseads.這些廣告并沒有欺騙。

wage-earnern.工薪階層

Noonewouldnotpaylessandgetmore.人人都愿要價廉物美。（本

句中用了雙重否定的表達(dá)）

wearwellandwashwell耐穿耐洗

produceagoodimage產(chǎn)生一好的形象

sportya.如運動員

tougha.堅韌

【篇三】2021年6月英語六級優(yōu)秀作文賞析

“PlayingaGameIsFunOnlyWhenYouWin.〃DoYouAgreeor

DisagreewithThisStatement?

Somepeoplearguethatathletes,whileplayinggames,should

adheretotheprinciple^Friendshipfirst,competitionsecond,and

thatisthetruesportsmanship.

Personally,Idisagreewiththispointofview.Thereisno

denyingthatcompetitorsshouldbefriendlywitheachother.However,

theprimaryconcernofeveryplayer,afterhardtrainingforayearor

two,istowinthegame.His/Hersolemotivation,eitherduringthe

trainingorintherace,ispromptedbyaloominghopeanda

prospectivechampionship.Beitachessgameoracompetitionof

weight-liftingoraraceofahundred-metredash,thecaseisalways

true.Ifhe/shewinsthegame,highrewards,flowersandhonourwill

pileuponhim/her.Ifhe/shelosesonceortwice,he/shewill

becomelesscourageousforthethirdtime.However,severallossesmay

beathim/herdown,andhis/hernextbattle,ifhe/sheisdaringto

fight,willprobablybeafiasco.

So,inmymind,thefunorhappinessofplayingagameliesin

theathlete'sultimateachievementofthegoal.WeallknowNapoleon's

famoussayingthatasoldierwhodoesnothavetheambitiontobecome

amarshalisnotarealsoldier.Iagreethatanunambitiousathlete

isnotarealathlete.

CET6六級作文結(jié)構(gòu)分析：

?somepeople1sargue—“Friendshipfirst,competitionsecond”

二truesportsmanship

?Myargue

*Primaryconcernofeveryplayer一towinthegame

*Motivatedbychampionship

*Severallosses-fiasco

?Conclusion

*Funorhappinessinultimateachievement

*Unambitiousathlete-notarealathlete

CET6六級作文內(nèi)容分析：

本文是一篇議論文，作者的論點打破了“友誼第一，比賽第二”的常規(guī)原

則，而認(rèn)為比賽就是要贏，文中充滿了競爭意識，但說理性很強，很難讓人不

信服。在結(jié)尾段中借用了拿破侖的名言“不想當(dāng)元帥的士兵不是一個真正的士

兵”，并依此證明“沒有雄心的運動員就不是一個真正的運動員”。此文很值

得六級和托福應(yīng)試者學(xué)習(xí)。

CET6六級作文萬能句型：

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