讀后續(xù)寫+金毛貝拉：從淘氣包到英雄守護(hù)者+講義 高一下學(xué)期期末考試英語試卷

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasadmittedtotheUniversityofAlabama,Idecidedtogetapuppy.SoIadoptedanadorableGoldenRetriever(金毛獵犬)puppyagainstmyparents’wishes.Soon,Irealizedmyparentswereright.Thedogwassonaughtythatitcausedmealotoftroubleeveryday.Infact,shesoonearnedthenickname(綽號)BellatheDevilatschool.However,astimewentby,shetaughtmehowtobeabetterdogmom,andItaughtherhowtobeabetterdog.Webecamebestfriendsanddideverythingtogether.Bellawasthereformeallthetime:parties,restaurants,games,evendates!Welovedspendingtimetogether.BythetimeIwasasenior,BellaandIdevelopedastrongerrelationship.Shewastrulymybestfriend.Inthethirdyear,Iworkedatthelocalcollegelbarnotfarfromthehouse.Onenight,Iwasrunninglate.BellaandIhadbeenwithfriendsdownthestreetwhenIrealizeditwasalready9:00p.m.WehadtorushhomesoIcouldmakeittoworkby9:30.Iranthroughthefrontdoorandjumpedtothebathroomtohaveashower.Bellafollowedmeintothebathroomandlayinherusualplaceonthebathroomfloor.ThenIheardmyfrontdooropen.ItwassoloudthatIthoughtitwasstrange.Itcouldn’tbemyroommateforshehadflowntoNewYork.Iturnedofftheshowerandyelledhername.Noanswer.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Instantly(立刻),Iknewsomethingwasseriouslywrong._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThenIwentoutsidetofindBellawiththepolicemen._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：作者在大學(xué)時違背父母意愿收養(yǎng)了一只金毛獵犬貝拉，盡管貝拉起初很淘氣，但后來她們成為了形影不離的好友。在作者大三時的一個夜晚，她回家匆忙洗澡準(zhǔn)備去上班，卻聽到異常的開門聲。她意識到有危險，而貝拉的反應(yīng)讓她確定情況不妙，之后她報警，貝拉成功嚇退了闖入的竊賊，成為了英雄，作者也更加珍視與貝拉的感情。故事山分析：開端：作者上大學(xué)收養(yǎng)淘氣的貝拉，與貝拉建立深厚感情，這是故事的起點，為后續(xù)貝拉保護(hù)作者埋下情感基礎(chǔ)。發(fā)展：作者大三某天晚上回家匆忙準(zhǔn)備上班，聽到異常開門聲，營造緊張氛圍，推動故事發(fā)展。高潮：發(fā)現(xiàn)竊賊，貝拉與竊賊對峙，這是故事的緊張時刻，也是關(guān)鍵情節(jié)。結(jié)局：貝拉成功嚇退竊賊，警察到來，故事得到初步解決，貝拉成為英雄。尾聲：作者深刻意識到貝拉的重要性，升華了人與寵物之間珍貴的情感關(guān)系，使故事完整且富有深意。五處伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)：伏筆：貝拉起初很淘氣，“Thedogwassonaughtythatitcausedmealotoftroubleeveryday.”回應(yīng)：在危險時刻，貝拉的勇敢和機智與之前的淘氣形成對比，突出其成長和對主人的保護(hù)欲，展現(xiàn)了寵物在關(guān)鍵時刻的忠誠。伏筆：貝拉和作者形影不離，“Bellawasthereformeallthetime:parties,restaurants,games,evendates!Welovedspendingtimetogether.”回應(yīng)：面對危險，貝拉毫不猶豫地守護(hù)在作者身邊，體現(xiàn)了她們之間深厚的情感紐帶，是日常陪伴積累下的默契與信任。伏筆：作者聽到異常大聲的開門聲，“ThenIheardmyfrontdooropen.ItwassoloudthatIthoughtitwasstrange.”回應(yīng)：這為竊賊的闖入提供了直接證據(jù)，也引發(fā)了后續(xù)貝拉的反應(yīng)和作者的緊張情緒，推動情節(jié)進(jìn)入緊張階段。伏筆：作者室友不在家，“Itcouldn’tbemyroommateforshehadflowntoNewYork.”回應(yīng)：排除了室友的可能性，讓作者更加確定危險來自陌生人，增加了故事的緊張感和懸念。伏筆：貝拉跟隨作者進(jìn)浴室，“Bellafollowedmeintothebathroomandlayinherusualplaceonthebathroomfloor.”回應(yīng)：在危險發(fā)生時，貝拉就在附近，能夠迅速做出反應(yīng)保護(hù)作者，體現(xiàn)了貝拉時刻守護(hù)主人的習(xí)性。續(xù)寫要點：第一段：作者在浴室等待警察到來時的緊張心情，如心跳加速、不斷思考應(yīng)對方法等?？梢悦鑼懾惱谕饷娴膭屿o，如持續(xù)的低吼聲，讓讀者感受到緊張的氛圍。第二段：描述作者看到貝拉與警察在一起時的欣慰和自豪，貝拉的狀態(tài)，如驕傲地?fù)u著尾巴，身上可能有些凌亂但眼神堅定。警察對貝拉的稱贊，以及這件事對作者和貝拉關(guān)系的進(jìn)一步升華，如作者更加珍惜貝拉，決定以后更好地照顧它，貝拉也更加依賴作者。情感線：文章的情感線圍繞著作者與貝拉的關(guān)系變化展開。起初，作者收養(yǎng)貝拉后經(jīng)歷了它的淘氣階段，雖有些無奈但也逐漸建立起感情。隨著時間推移，她們成為親密無間的好友，情感愈發(fā)深厚。在遭遇竊賊的危險時刻，恐懼與擔(dān)憂占據(jù)了作者內(nèi)心，但同時對貝拉的依賴和信任也達(dá)到頂點。當(dāng)貝拉成功嚇退竊賊，作者的情感轉(zhuǎn)化為自豪與感激，深刻認(rèn)識到貝拉在自己生活中的不可替代，這種情感的升華不僅體現(xiàn)了人與寵物之間真摯的情誼，也展現(xiàn)了在困難時刻相互守護(hù)所帶來的力量，使讀者能深刻感受到作者內(nèi)心豐富且強烈的情感波動。故事線：作者上大學(xué)違背父母意愿收養(yǎng)貝拉，貝拉起初很淘氣，得了“貝拉魔鬼”的綽號。隨著時間流逝，作者和貝拉相互陪伴，一起參加各種活動，關(guān)系愈發(fā)親密，貝拉成為作者最好的朋友。大三某晚，作者和貝拉與朋友聚會后回家已晚，匆忙準(zhǔn)備洗澡去上班。洗澡時聽到異常開門聲，發(fā)現(xiàn)有陌生人闖入，作者驚慌躲進(jìn)浴室并報警，貝拉在外面與竊賊對峙。警察到來，貝拉成功嚇退竊賊，成為英雄。作者對貝拉充滿感激和自豪，更加珍視與貝拉的感情，貝拉也在作者心中占據(jù)了無比重要的地位。主旨升華句：Inthefaceofdanger,Bella'sloyaltyandcourageshonebrightly,provingthatthebondbetweenhumansandtheirpetsisunbreakableandcanwithstandeventhemostterrifyingofsituations.（在危險面前，貝拉的忠誠和勇氣閃耀著光芒，證明了人與寵物之間的紐帶是堅不可摧的，即使在最可怕的情況下也能經(jīng)受住考驗。）ThisincidentnotonlystrengthenedtheconnectionbetweenBellaandmebutalsomademerealizethattruefriendshipandloveknownospecies,andourfurrycompanionscanbeourgreatestprotectors.（這次事件不僅加強了貝拉和我之間的聯(lián)系，也讓我意識到真正的友誼和愛不分物種，我們毛茸茸的伙伴可以成為我們最偉大的保護(hù)者。）Bella'sheroicactwasareminderthattheloveandtrustwebuildwithourpetsarereciprocatedinthemostunexpectedandheartwarmingways,teachingusthevalueofunconditionallove.（貝拉的英勇行為提醒我們，我們與寵物建立的愛和信任會以最意想不到和溫暖人心的方式得到回報，讓我們懂得無條件愛的價值。）Throughthisharrowingexperience,Ilearnedthatourpetsarenotjustanimalswecarefor;theyarefamilymemberswhowillstandbyoursidethroughthickandthin,readytodefenduswithalltheirmight.（通過這次慘痛的經(jīng)歷，我明白了我們的寵物不僅僅是我們照顧的動物；它們是家庭成員，無論艱難困苦都會站在我們身邊，準(zhǔn)備全力保護(hù)我們。）TheeventsofthatnighttransformedmyrelationshipwithBellafromasimplefriendshiptoanunshakablebond,showingthatinthedarkestmoments,itisoftentheloveofourfour-leggedfriendsthatbringsuslightandsafety.（那晚的事件使我和貝拉的關(guān)系從單純的友誼變成了牢不可破的紐帶，表明在最黑暗的時刻，往往是我們四條腿朋友的愛給我們帶來光明和安全。）寫作示范：第一篇：

Instantly(立刻),Iknewsomethingwasseriouslywrong.MyhandstrembledasIclutchedmyphonetightly,prayingforthepolicetoarrivequickly.IcouldhearBella'sfiercegrowlsandthesoundofscufflingoutside.Myheartpoundedinmychest,fearingforbothourlives.TimeseemedtostandstilluntilIfinallyheardthesirensapproaching.Withbatedbreath,Islowlyopenedthedoor,readytofacewhateverawaitedme.

ThenIwentoutsidetofindBellawiththepolicemen.Shewasstandingtallbesidethem,herfurslightlyruffledbuthereyesalertandproud.Theofficerswerepattingheronthehead,praisingherforherbravery.Oneofthemsaid,"She'sarealhero.Ifitweren'tforher,whoknowswhatcouldhavehappened."IrushedovertoBella,tearsstreamingdownmyface,andhuggedhertightly.Fromthatdayon,Ivowedtocherisheverymomentwithher,knowingthatshewasmorethanjustapet;shewasmyguardianangel.第二篇：

Instantly(立刻),Iknewsomethingwasseriouslywrong.IfeltachillrundownmyspineasItriedtocalmmyracingthoughts.IcouldhearBella'smenacingbarksandthesoundofsomethingbeingknockedover.IwishedIcoulddosomethingtohelpher,butIwastooterrifiedtomove.AllIcoulddowaswaitandhopethatthepolicewouldcomesoon.Theminutesfeltlikehoursasthechaosoutsidecontinued.

ThenIwentoutsidetofindBellawiththepolicemen.Shewaswagginghertailenthusiastically,asifsheknewshehaddoneagreatdeed.Thepolicemenweresmilingather,clearlyimpressedbyhercourage."She'squitethefighter,"oneofthemremarked.IwalkeduptoBellaandkneltdownbesideher,strokingherheadgently.Thisexperiencehadbroughtusevencloser,andIknewthatourbondwasunbreakable.Iwouldalwaysbegratefulforherpresenceinmylife,andIwouldnevertakeherforgrantedagain.參考答案Instantly(立刻),Iknewsomethingwasseriouslywrong.Atthismoment,Bellafacedthedoor,growling(咆哮著),withthehairraisedonherback.Ihadneverseenherlikethatbefore.Someonewasinmyhouse,andIwasindanger.WhenIfeltlostandhelpless,B