讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)+畫(huà)筆下的生命奇跡：一片葉子的救贖+講義 高三適應(yīng)性測(cè)試（二模）英語(yǔ)試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整短文。InDecember,anunseendiseasearrivedinavillage.Allywasoneofthevictims.Shelay,barelymoving,inherbedstaringatawalloutofthewindowunderherblanket.Thedoctortookherfather,whowasapainter,asideandclaimed,“Shehasonechancein—letussay,ten.Andthatchanceisforhertowanttolive.Trytoencouragehertothinkmorehopefulthoughts,aboutthefuture,aboutliving.”HerfathertooksomepaperandapenintoAlly’sroomandbeganapendrawing,inanattempttoraiseAlly’sspirits.Ally’seyeswereopen,buttheyweren’twatchinghim.Instead,shestaredoutthewindowandcountedbackwards,“Ten,nine,eight,seven…”“Whatareyoucounting,dear?”askedherfather.“They’refallingfasternow,”repliedAlly.“Threedaysagotherewerealmostahundred.Butnowthereareonlyfiveleftnow.Fiveleavesontheivyvine(常春藤).Whenthelastonefalls,Imustgo,too.”“Oh,Ineverheardofsuchnonsense,”quicklyrepliedherfather.ButAlly’smindwasmadeup.“Iwanttoseethelastonefall.Iwanttogosailingdown,down,justlikeoneofthosepoor,tiredleaves.”“Trytosleep,”saidherfather.Allyclosedhereyesquietly.Watchingherdaughter’spaleface,hewaslostindeepthought.Asapainter,hehadneverproducedamasterpiecehelongedtopaintin40years.Asafather,heevencouldn’thelpherdaughtercheerup.Lookingoutofthewindow,henoticedthattherewasjustoneremainingleaf.What’smore,acoldrainwasfallingmixedwithsnow.“Aretherepeopleintheworldthatarefoolishtothinkthey’lldiebecauseleavesdropofffromanivyvine?ThisisnotaplaceinwhichAllyshallliesick.”Hemadeuphismindtodosomething.Thenextmorning,Allywokeandaskedforthecurtainstobeopened.Oneleafremainedontheivyvine,bravelyholdingoninthewindandrain.“Itwillfalltoday.AndIwilldiewithit.”注意：1．續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thefollowingday,Allyaskedagainforthecurtainstobeopened.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afewweekslater,Allyrecoveredcompletelyandthesecretwasrevealed.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：在十二月，一種未知疾病侵襲村莊，Ally不幸染病，生命垂危，醫(yī)生稱她只有十分之一的生存機(jī)會(huì)，關(guān)鍵在于她自己要有求生欲望。Ally望著窗外的常春藤，認(rèn)為最后一片葉子落下時(shí)自己也將死去。她的畫(huà)家父親為了救她，在最后一片葉子掉落的那晚，在窗戶上畫(huà)了一片葉子。這片葉子給了Ally活下去的希望，最終她奇跡般康復(fù)，得知了父親的秘密后，她深受觸動(dòng)，懂得了愛(ài)與希望能戰(zhàn)勝絕望的道理。伏筆及回應(yīng)：伏筆：父親是畫(huà)家?；貞?yīng)：父親在最后一片葉子掉落時(shí)畫(huà)了一片葉子，拯救了Ally的生命。伏筆：Ally盯著窗外的常春藤數(shù)葉子，認(rèn)為葉子掉光自己就會(huì)死?；貞?yīng)：父親畫(huà)的葉子讓Ally看到葉子沒(méi)掉，從而改變了她的想法，重拾求生欲。伏筆：Ally說(shuō)三天前有近百片葉子，現(xiàn)在只剩五片，且最后一片葉子掉落時(shí)自己也要走?；貞?yīng)：這為后續(xù)葉子沒(méi)掉落引發(fā)的情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折做鋪墊，突出了葉子對(duì)她的象征意義以及父親行動(dòng)的重要性。伏筆：父親思考自己作為畫(huà)家沒(méi)有杰作，作為父親無(wú)法讓女兒振作?；貞?yīng)：畫(huà)葉子救女兒成為他人生中的“杰作”，實(shí)現(xiàn)了自我價(jià)值和對(duì)女兒愛(ài)的表達(dá)。伏筆：窗外風(fēng)雨交加，只剩一片葉子?；貞?yīng)：風(fēng)雨中葉子不掉，更加凸顯了葉子的堅(jiān)韌和父親行為的及時(shí)性，也強(qiáng)化了這一情節(jié)對(duì)Ally心理的影響。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)：第一段情感線：Ally從最初的驚訝于葉子還在，到內(nèi)心受到觸動(dòng)，開(kāi)始重新審視生命，對(duì)活下去有了更堅(jiān)定的信念，情感從消極向積極轉(zhuǎn)變。第一段故事線：Ally看到葉子依舊掛在枝頭，盡管經(jīng)歷了風(fēng)雨，但依然頑強(qiáng)。這使她開(kāi)始思考生命的意義，不再一心求死，而是嘗試配合治療，與病魔抗?fàn)帲眢w狀況逐漸好轉(zhuǎn)。第二段情感線：Ally在得知父親的秘密后，內(nèi)心充滿了感動(dòng)和感恩，對(duì)父親的愛(ài)有了更深的理解，同時(shí)也為自己重獲新生感到慶幸和珍惜。第二段故事線：父親向Ally坦白是自己畫(huà)了葉子，Ally深刻意識(shí)到是父親的愛(ài)給了她第二次生命。此后，Ally更加珍惜生活，以積極樂(lè)觀的態(tài)度面對(duì)未來(lái)，也更加懂得關(guān)愛(ài)家人和身邊的人。主旨升華句：Loveisthemostpowerfulmedicinethatcanhealthedeepestwoundsofthesoul.（愛(ài)，是能治愈靈魂深處創(chuàng)傷的最強(qiáng)有力的良藥。）Hopeisthebeaconthatguidesusthroughthedarkestnightsandleadsustothedawnofanewday.（希望是指引我們穿越最黑暗夜晚并走向新一天黎明的燈塔。）Sometimes,asmallactoflovecancreateamiracleandchangealifeforever.（有時(shí)，一個(gè)小小的愛(ài)的舉動(dòng)就能創(chuàng)造奇跡，永遠(yuǎn)改變一個(gè)人的人生。）Inthefaceofdespair,thepowerofloveandhopecanmaketheimpossiblepossible.（在絕望面前，愛(ài)與希望的力量能使不可能變?yōu)榭赡?。）Thebondoflovebetweenfamilymembersisunbreakableandcanovercomeanyobstacle.（家庭成員之間的愛(ài)之紐帶堅(jiān)不可摧，能夠克服任何障礙。）寫(xiě)作示范：示范一Thefollowingday,Allyaskedagainforthecurtainstobeopened.Themomenthereyesfelluponthewindow,aglimmerofastonishmentflashedacrossherface.Thesolitaryleafwasstillclingingtenaciouslytothevine,asifdefyingthemercilesswindandrain.Anewfoundsenseofhopebegantostirwithinher.Shethoughttoherself,"Iftheleafcanenduresuchhardship,whycan'tI?"Fromthatdayon,Allystartedtoeatmore,andafaintblushofvitalityreturnedtohercheeks.Shenolongercountedthedayswithdreadbutwithanticipation,graduallymusteringthestrengthtofightagainsttheillness.Afewweekslater,Allyrecoveredcompletelyandthesecretwasrevealed.Herfather,withtearsglisteninginhiseyes,toldherthetruthaboutthepaintedleaf.Overwhelmedwithemotion,Allyflungherarmsaroundherfather,herheartfilledwithgratitudeandlove.Sherealizedthatitwasherfather'sunwaveringloveandtheglimmerofhopesymbolizedbythatpaintedleafthathadpulledherbackfromthebrinkofdeath.Fromthenon,Allycherishedeverymomentoflife,knowingthatnomatterhowdarkthedaysmightbe,loveandhopewouldalwaysshinethrough.示范二Thefollowingday,Allyaskedagainforthecurtainstobeopened.Asthesunlightfilteredthroughthewindow,hergazefixedontheloneleaf.Itseemedtoradiateamessageofperseveranceandlife.Asparkofdeterminationignitedwithinher.Shewhispered,"Iwillnotgiveupsoeasily.Iwillholdon,justlikethisleaf."Slowlybutsurely,Ally'sspiritbegantorevive.Sheengagedinconversationswithherfather,sharingherdreamsandfears,andwitheachpassingday,herwilltolivegrewstronger.Afewweekslater,Allyrecoveredcompletelyandthesecretwasrevealed.Whenherfatherconfessedtopaintingtheleaf,Allywasdeeplymoved.Sheunderstoodthatinthemostdesperateoftimes,asimpleactoflovecouldbethemostpowerfulforce.Thisexperiencetransformedher,fillingherwithanewfoundsenseofpurpose.Shededicatedherselftospreadingkindnessandhope,believingthateventhesmallestgesturecouldmakeaworldofdifference.ForAlly,lifewasnowapreciousgift,andshewasdeterminedtomakeeverymomentcount,allbecauseofthelovethathadsavedher.范文Thefollowingday,Allyaskedagainforthecurtainstobeopened.Shepeeredthroughtheglasswithtiredbutdeterminedeyes.Herfather’sheartsankashesawthesamesolitaryleafstillclingingtotheivyvine,defyingtheharshweather.Heknewhehadtoactquickly.AssoonasAllyclosedhereyes,heranoutintotherainandsnow,determinedtosavethatlastleaf,ifonlyforhisdaughter’ssake.Heclimbedthetrelliscarefully,shiveringinthecold,andmanagedtosecureapieceofcanvasoverthevinetopr