高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+鄰居的冷漠：我心中的不解之謎+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)鄰居的冷漠：我心中的不解之謎1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Forcourage,myfingersclungtotheharness(繩套)onChó’sbroadbackaswepassedmyneighborfence.WalkingbyMr.Groll’syardisthebestpartofourmorningwalk,andalsotheworst.Itisthebestpartbecausetherosestalktous.“Goodmorning,Chó,”whispertherosescentstomyguidedog’snose.Otherrosesshouttome,“Hello,Mai!”Nowcomestheworstpart:Mr.Groll.Asusual,friendlyChóthumpshertail.ButChóisjustadog;howcansheknowthatthisneighbordoesnotlikemeatall?“Hello,Mr.Groll.”IgreetedhimasIdideverymorning.Andlikeeveryothermorning,hedidnotanswerme.ButIknewhewasthere,watching,behindhisfence.Healwayssoundsoutofbreath,andthecreakygateswingsnervouslyinhishand.Maybehe’safraidofmebecauseI’mblind.Disabilitiesdoscaregrown-upssometimes.ThenIremembered:theotherdayIheardhimplayingcheckerswithmyfriendJimmy,who’sinawheelchair.4續(xù)寫原文Chóa(chǎn)ndImarchedon,andmythoughtskeptstep.“WhydidMr.Grollignoreme?”It’samysterytome.Papahastoldmethatsomefolksdonotlikepeoplefromfarawayplaces.Doesthissolvethemystery?MaybeMr.GrolldoesnotlikeVietnameseneighbors.No,thatcan’tbeit.EverySaturdayMr.Grollandmybigbrother,Lien,helpeachotherwithyardwork.Theyarefriends.Well,then,maybehedoesn’tlikemebecauseI’magirl.Thesidewalkhummed(發(fā)出嗡嗡聲)beneathmyfeet.Askateboardzoomedby.“Hello,MaiandChoó”myfriendJanayelled.“Hi,Mr.Groll.”Iwaited.IfMr.GrollignoredJana,thenthemysterywassolved.Buthisvoicecalledout,“Hello,Jana!”5段首句Paragraph1：Thesoundofitbrokemyheart.Paragraph2：“Chóisavery...bigdog.”hesaidinavoicethattoldmehethoughtIwouldlaughathim.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了故事的主人公是盲人女孩Mai，每天早晨她和導(dǎo)盲犬Chó散步經(jīng)過鄰居Mr.Groll的院子時(shí)，玫瑰的香氣讓她感到愉悅，這是散步中美好的部分。然而，Mr.Groll對(duì)她的問候從不回應(yīng)，這讓Mai很是困惑。Mai猜測Mr.Groll不喜歡她或許是因?yàn)樗敲と?、來自遠(yuǎn)方或者是女孩，但這些猜測都被一些事實(shí)推翻，比如Mr.Groll會(huì)和坐輪椅的Jimmy玩棋，還會(huì)和她哥哥一起做庭院工作，甚至?xí)貞?yīng)其他孩子的招呼，唯獨(dú)不理會(huì)Mai，這一奇怪的現(xiàn)象成為Mai心中難以解開的謎團(tuán)，讓她在散步途中不斷思索。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Thesoundofitbrokemyheart.那聲音讓我心碎。是從隔壁院子傳來的隱隱約約的抽泣聲，在這寂靜的清晨顯得格外揪心。我下意識(shí)地抓緊了Chó的牽引繩，它也似乎感受到了我的不安，喉嚨里發(fā)出低沉的嗚嗚聲。我深吸一口氣，鼓起勇氣朝著聲音的來源走去。每靠近一步，那破碎的抽噎聲就愈發(fā)清晰，我的心也跟著揪得更緊。是不是有小動(dòng)物受傷了？還是有孩子在偷偷哭泣？種種猜測在我腦海中閃過，腳步也愈發(fā)急促起來，滿心擔(dān)憂著即將面對(duì)的未知狀況。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：“Chóisavery...bigdog.”hesaidinavoicethattoldmehethoughtIwouldlaughathim.“Chó是一只非?！蟮墓??！彼靡环N似乎覺得我會(huì)嘲笑他的聲音說道。我微微一怔，沒想到一向?qū)ξ依淠腗r.Groll會(huì)主動(dòng)開口跟我談?wù)揅hó。我輕輕笑了笑，回答道：“是啊，不過她很溫順?！蔽夷芨杏X到他的不自在，他的呼吸有些急促，手指不停地?fù)钢陆?。沉默片刻后，我鼓起勇氣問他有沒有聽到剛剛那令人心碎的聲音。他猶豫了一下，然后緩緩開口，說出的話讓我大吃一驚，也讓我們之間那層冰冷的隔閡開始出現(xiàn)了一絲裂縫，仿佛有什么秘密即將揭開，改變我們一直以來微妙而又尷尬的鄰里關(guān)系。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Thesoundofitbrokemyheart.Itwasthesoundofaviolin,playingamournfultunethatseemedtoseepintomyverysoul.Iwasstandingoutsidetheold,abandonedhouseattheendofourstreet.Chósatbymyside,herheadtiltedasifshetoowasaffectedbythemelancholicmelody.Ihadoftenheardrumorsaboutthisplace,thataonce-renownedviolinisthadlivedherebeforevanishingmysteriously.Now,asthemusicfilledtheair,Icouldn'thelpbutwonderifthosetalesweretrue.ThenoteswerefilledwithsuchsorrowandlongingthatIfelttearswellingupinmyeyes.IknewIhadtofindoutwhowasplayingandwhythemusicwassoheartrending.WithChóleadingtheway,Islowlymademywaytowardsthehouse,myheartpoundingwithamixtureoftrepidationandanticipation.13范文呈現(xiàn)“Chóisavery...bigdog.”hesaidinavoicethattoldmehethoughtIwouldlaughathim.IturnedaroundtoseeMr.Thompson,thelocalgrocer,standingthere.Hehadalwaysbeenabitgruffanddistant,sohisattemptatsmalltalktookmebysurprise.Ismiledandreplied,“Yes,sheis,butshe'sagentlegiant.”Heshiftedhisweightfromonefoottotheother,lookinguncomfortable.Afteramomentofawkwardsilence,heclearedhisthroatandsaid,“Isawyouheadingtowardstheoldhouse.Youknow,it'snotsafethere.Therearerumorsofitbeinghaunted.”Iraisedaneyebrow,intrigued.“Haunted?Bywhat?”Iasked.Heleanedincloser,asifsharingasecret,andwhispered,“Somesayit'stheghostoftheviolinist,stillplayinghissadsong,unabletofindpeace.”Hiswordssentashiverdownmyspine,butmycuriositywaspiquedevenmore.Ithankedhimforhisconcernand,withnewdetermination,continuedmyjourneytowardsthehouse,eagertouncoverthetruthbehindthehauntingmelodyandthemysteriousviolinist,despitethewarnings.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Oneday,asIwaswalkingwithChó,thesoundofitbrokemyheart.Itwasaheartrendingmelody,likeawailingcryofalostsoul,thatfloatedthroughtheair.Standingthere,tearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwasdeterminedtofinditssource.Chó,sensingmydistress,walkedcloselybesideme.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Nearby,"Chóisavery...bigdog,"cameavoice.ItwasMr.Groll.Nervously,heutteredthosewords,asiffearingmyreaction.Littledidheknowthatatthatmoment,myfocuswassolelyonthemysterioussound.Withafirmresolve,Idecidedtoapproachtheoriginofthemusic,ignoringtheuneasinessinMr.Groll'svoice.Itwasinthatdilapidatedoldhousethatthetruthawaitedme.O