高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習+夏日營地：從期待到高空挑戰(zhàn)恐懼+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習夏日營地：從期待到高空挑戰(zhàn)恐懼1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續(xù)寫原文Itwasahotsummerdaywhenmyworldturnedupsidedown.Thesunshonebrightlyandtheskyseemedtobepaintedinanendlessshadeofblue.LittledidIknowthatthisparticulardaywouldbecomerootedinmymemoryforever.Iwokeupwithasenseofexcitement;itwasthefirstdayofthesummercamp.Ihadbeenlookingforwardtothisdayforweeks,imaginingtheadventures,newfriends,andendlessfunthatawaitedme.IquicklydressedinmyfavoritecampT-shirtandshorts,mybackpackfilledwithsnacksandawaterbottle,eagerlyanticipatingthedayahead.AsIarrivedatthecamp,theenergywascontagious(有感染力的).Theairwasfilledwithlaughter,chatter,andthepromiseofanunforgettablesummer.IquicklymadefriendswithSarah,agirlwithacontagioussmile,andwebecamereallycloseoveroursharedloveforadventure.4續(xù)寫原文Thecampwasawonderland,withactivitiesrangingfromsportstoartsandcrafts.IfeltlikeIwasreadytoabsorbeverybitofknowledgeandexperiencethatcamemyway.Thedaywentbyquicklyaswelaughedthroughgames,amazedatnaturehikes,andcheeredeachotheronduringvarioussportsactivities.Thesunseemedtorunagainsttheclock,remindingustoenjoyeverymomentbeforeitwastoolate.However,thedaytookanunexpectedturnwhenateacherannouncedanunexpectedactivity-ateam-buildingexerciseinvolvingahighropescourse.Ihadalwaysbeenafraidofheights,buttheexcitementofthechallengemixedwiththeencouragementfrommynewfoundfriendspushedmetogiveitatry.Standingatthebaseofthetoweringstructure,myheartracedlikearunawaytrain.Eachstepuptheladderfeltheavier.Asenseofpanicgraduallybegantocatchme.5段首句Paragraph1：AsIreachedthetopandlookeddown,Ifroze.Paragraph2：Littlebylittle,Imadeittotheotherside.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了在一個炎熱的夏日，主人公滿懷期待地迎來了夏令營的第一天，穿著喜愛的營服、背著裝滿零食的背包前往營地。營地里充滿歡聲笑語，主人公很快和笑容極具感染力的莎拉成為好友，一同參與各類精彩活動，如游戲、自然徒步和體育項目等，盡情享受著夏日時光。然而，當天老師宣布了一項意外活動——高空繩索團隊建設練習。盡管主人公一直恐高，但在新朋友的鼓勵和挑戰(zhàn)的刺激下，還是決定嘗試。站在高聳結構下，主人公內心極度緊張，每一步攀登都無比艱難，故事在此留下懸念，引人期待主人公后續(xù)的表現以及他將如何面對內心的恐懼，在這次挑戰(zhàn)中實現自我成長。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：AsIreachedthetopandlookeddown,Ifroze.當我到達頂端向下望去時，我僵住了。雙腿發(fā)軟，仿佛被釘在了原地，無法挪動分毫。底下的一切看起來是那么遙遠而又可怕，我的心提到了嗓子眼，呼吸也變得急促起來。我緊緊地抓住繩索，手心全是汗，眼睛死死地盯著眼前的一小片區(qū)域，不敢再往遠處看。風在耳邊呼呼作響，似乎在嘲笑我的膽小。我開始后悔自己為什么要逞強來參加這個活動，腦海中不斷浮現出如果掉下去會怎樣的可怕畫面。此刻，我陷入了極度的恐懼之中，進退兩難。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Littlebylittle,Imadeittotheotherside.一點一點地，我挪到了另一邊。我深深地吸了一口氣，試圖讓自己鎮(zhèn)定下來。我想起了朋友們鼓勵的眼神和話語，心中涌起一股勇氣。我小心翼翼地邁出了第一步，盡管身體還在顫抖，但我緊緊咬著牙，堅持著。每移動一點，我都感覺像是用盡了全身的力氣。我專注地看著前方的目標，不再去想腳下的高度。慢慢地，我找到了節(jié)奏，一步一步地向前挪動。隨著距離終點越來越近，我的信心也逐漸增強。終于，我成功地到達了另一邊，一種巨大的成就感涌上心頭，我戰(zhàn)勝了自己內心的恐懼。11Part3范文呈現12范文呈現AsIreachedthetopandlookeddown,Ifroze.Mywholebodywentrigidandmylegsfeltliketheywereturnedtojelly.Thegroundseemedmilesawayandthesightofitmademystomachchurn.PanicsurgedthroughmeandIcouldhearmyheartpoundingviolentlyinmyears.Iclutchedtheropesotightlythatmyknucklesturnedwhite.Thewindwhippedaroundme,heighteningmysenseofdread.Iwasacutelyawareofhowprecariousmypositionwasandregrettedmydecisiontotakeonthischallenge.AllIcouldthinkaboutwerethepotentialconsequencesofafall.Iwascompletelyimmobilizedbyfear,unabletotakeanotherstepforwardorevenconsidergoingbackdown.13范文呈現Littlebylittle,Imadeittotheotherside.GatheringeveryounceofcourageIhadleft,Itookadeep,shakybreath.Ithoughtofmyfriends'encouragingsmilesandkindwords,andthatgavemethestrengthtostartmoving.Veryslowlyanddeliberately,Iliftedmyfootandplaceditonthenextstep.Mybodywasstilltrembling,butIrefusedtogiveintothefear.Ifocusedmygazefirmlyontheplatformahead,blockingoutthedizzyingdropbeneathme.Witheachsmallmovement,Igrewmoredetermined.AsIgotcloserandclosertotheotherside,aglimmerofconfidencebegantoreplacetheterror.Finally,afterwhatfeltlikeaneternity,Ifeltthesolidgroundbeneathmyfeet.IhadconqueredmyfearandachievedsomethingIneverthoughtpossible.14升級版范文呈現Itwasonthatfatefuldayofthesummercamp,whenstandingatthetopofthehighropescourseandlookingdown,Ifroze.Theseeminglybottomlessvoidbeneathmewaslikeayawningchasm,mylegsturningtojellyandeverynerveinmybodyscreaminginterror.Itwasatthatmomentthatthefollyofmybravadohitmefullforce.Thewind,howlingaroundmelikeabanshee,onlyaddedtomysenseofdread.15升級版范文呈現However,withtheimageofmyfriends'encouragingfacesfirmlyinmymind,littlebylittle,Imadeittotheotherside.TremblingasIwas,notasinglestepdidIfalter.NeverhadIthoughtIcouldmustersuchcourage.Itwasnotjustaphysicaljourneybut

atriumphovermyinnerdemons.Thisexperien