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內容主要包括：1

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自我介紹:Abilities？

Character？

Experience？)GenreApplication

ClearpurposeWhoWriter:Li

Hua→Reader:aninternationalstudentsorganizationWhytoapplyforthevoluntaryworkWhenPresenttense;PresentperfecttenseWheretobeheldin

ChangshaWhat1.Self-introduction2.Strengths

and

intentions3.Expectations

Let’s

analyze2

.

個人優(yōu)勢與參加意

3

.

希望獲準

。

注意：1

.

寫作詞數應為80左右；2

.

可以適當增加細節(jié)

，

以使

行文連貫How？小作文①自我介紹;寫作背景;寫作目的3分②個人優(yōu)勢4分；參加意圖2分③希望獲準3分2.語言和結構(3分)①漂漂亮亮：3分②穩(wěn)穩(wěn)妥妥：2分③馬馬虎虎：1分Let’s

evaluate評分標準：1.

要點(12分)72.個人優(yōu)勢平平3.語言句式單一1.文章段落清晰2.要點基本齊全3.卷面良好Let’s

evaluate1.主體段條理不清優(yōu)點：問題：過渡句：

I

am

deeply

convinced

that

I

am

qualified

for/am

equal

to/amcompetentforthisposition.銜接詞：

First

and

foremost/

Additionally/More

importantly...1.主體段條理不清晰Let’s

explore無銜接詞無過渡語如何在主體段突出個人優(yōu)勢？

實現交際目的：

申請成功Let’s

explore2.個人優(yōu)勢平平無實證無作用

I‘m

Li

Hua,

anexchangestudentfromChina

.Learningthatvolunteerstudents

arewantedforaChinesepaintingexhibition,

I’mhonestlywritingtoapply

for

the

position.句式總結：I'm

xx,同位語/定語.

Learning

(fromnewspaper/websitelonline..)that

……is/are

wanted/needed

for+活

動

，I'm

writing

to

apply

for

theposition/job.Para1小試牛刀：我是李華，在校報上得知你校將于明天舉行英語游園活動

(English

Garden

activities),需要一些志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。I'mLihua,astudentfrom

senior1.

Learningfromtheschoolnewspaperthatvolunteersarewanted

for

English

Gardenactivities,

I'mwritingtoappytobeone/for

the

position.

Personalstrengths

A:

Ability

1.

I

am

able

to

communicate

smoothly

with

foreign

students.

.2.

I

am

capable

of

dealing

with

voluntary

tasks

efficiently.

.1.a

good

command

of

ChineseandEnglish2.a

full

understanding

ofsummercamps1：With+具體能力,(主句)我能做什么(ACE“王牌”法則)+（實證）+作用Para2Beingsociablewarm-heartedresponsiblediligent2.I

can

try

my

best

to

performvolunteermissions.s2：Being

+性格特點,(主句)我可以很容易/盡力做什么1.I

find

it

easy

for

me

toget

along

with

others

well

.PersonalstrengthsC:Character(ACE“王牌”法則)+（實證）+作用

Personalstrengths

E:ExperienceItenables

me

tofulfill

allkindsof

volunteermissionsperfectlyhandleproblemsandemergenciesquickly

S3：(主句)我有某方面的經驗,which

enables

me

to

do

sth.Ihavemuchexperience

involunteering(such

asbeing...)(ACE“王牌”法則)+（實證）+作用enabling

....1.Being

friendly

and

helpful,I

am

ready

to

help

those

in

need

and

trytoengageparticipantsindiverseactivities.2.Withgoodcookingskills,Iamcapable

of

making

a

whole

table

of

deliciousChinesefoodforinternational

students.3.I

am

experienced

in

volunteering,which

enables

me

to

serve

people

well.Let’s

beautify過渡句：

I

am

deeply

convinced

that

I

am

qualified

for/am

equal

to/

amcompetentforthisposition.銜接詞：

First

and

foremost/

Additionally/More

importantly(ACE“王牌”法則)

（+

實證）+作用（+example)+effect（+example)+effect（+example)+effectLet’ssummarizeE:ExperienceA:

AbilityC:CharacterStrengthsI'dappreciateitif

youcouldtakemy

application

into

consideration.

Lookingforward

to

your

early

reply.Yours

sincerely,

LiHuaI'm

Li

Hua,a

student

from

Class

2117.

Hearing

that

you

are

looking

for

peerpsychological

counselingvolunteers

for“treehollowproject”

,

I'mLet’s

practiceapply

for

the

position.DearSir

or

Madam,ImLiHua,

a

student

from

Class2117.Hearing

that

you

are

looking

forpeerpsychologicalcounselingvolunteersfor“treehollowproject”

,

I'm

writingtoapplyfortheposition.

Tobeginwith,with

a

good

command

ofspoken

English

and

a

good

knowledgeof

interpersonalskills,Iamcapableof

communicatingwithpeer

foreign

studentsinneed.Additionally,beingemotionally

stableanda

good

listener,Icansincerelyandunconditionallyacceptothers.

More

importantly,

Iamexperiencedinpsychologicalcounseling,whichenablesmeto

comfort

otherswellandofferpractical

suggestions.Allin

all,

as

aresponsible

and

cooperative

and

dedicated

student

,

I

am

deeply

convinced

that

I

am

qualifiedforthisposition.I'd

appreciate

it

if

you

couldtakemy

application

into

consideration

.

Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours

sincerely,Li

HuaLet’s

appreciate(2019·全國I卷)

假定你是李華，