北師大版高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)類型二第2講續(xù)寫熱 門話題親情友情學(xué)案

第2講續(xù)寫熱門話題親情友情閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay．HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed．TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge．Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen．Therewasnothingtoit．JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo．Thebigdaycameatlast．Thealarmrangat6a．m．Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen．Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst．TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast．Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk．Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture．Next，Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan．EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread．Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds．Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread．Thistime，sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely．ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake．Thenextminute，theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire．Jennapanicked．Thankfully，Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly．Butthestovewasamessnow．JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge．ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain．Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater．Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning．Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell．注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請按如下格式作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment，theirfatherappeared．Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup．寫作指導(dǎo)：Ⅰ．梳理原文細(xì)節(jié)，理清篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。Ⅱ．依據(jù)首句提示，構(gòu)思后續(xù)情節(jié)。第一段：由續(xù)寫第一段及續(xù)寫第二段的提示語可知，該段主要描述在爸爸的幫助下，早餐做成了。第二段：由續(xù)寫第二段的提示語可知，該段應(yīng)該描述雙胞胎的母親節(jié)祝福以及媽媽看到早餐時的反應(yīng)。范文佳作：Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment，theirfatherappeared．Seeingthemessinthekitchen，heimmediatelyunderstoodwhathadhappened，buthewasn'tupset．Instead，heappliedsomemedicinetoJeff'shand，andthensetouttohelpthemcleanupthemess，throwingawaytheburnttoast．Next，theybegantomakebreakfast，andbynowthetwinslookedcheerful．Beforelong，theporridgewasready．Theirfatherinstructedthemtofrytherestofthebread．Soon，thebreakfastwasready，too．Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup．Openinghereyes，shecouldn'tbelievewhatshehadseen．Beforeshecouldaskanyquestion，theirfatherturnedupandtoldhiswifeabouthowthetwinshadmadepreparationstogiveherthesurprisebreakfast，andwhattroublestheyhadgonethroughwhenmakingtheporridgeandtoast．Disbeliefgavewaytoexcitementandpride．Huggingtheminherarms，shesaid，“Thankyou，children．It'ssuchanunforgettableMother'sDayforme．”話題佳句：1．Thegreatestgiftoflifeisfriendship，andIhavereceivedit．生命中最棒的禮物是友誼，并且我已收獲了。2．Hisfacelighteningup，Arthursprangupintohismother'swarmhug．亞瑟喜笑顏開，跳進(jìn)了媽媽溫暖的懷抱。3．Atthatmoment，sherealizedthatitwasthewarmthandcompanyofherfamilythatenabledhertogothroughthisdifficulttime．在那一刻，她意識到，是家人的溫暖和陪伴讓她度過了這段艱難的時光。4．Deeplymovedbyallhissondid，thefathercouldsaynothingbuttohughimtightly，tearswellingup．被兒子所做的一切深深地感動了，父親說不出話來，只是緊緊地?fù)е鴥鹤?，淚水奪眶而出。5．Someday，whenIamolderandhavechildrenofmyown，IhopeIcanbejustasgreatamotherasMom．有一天，當(dāng)我長大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望我能成為像媽媽一樣偉大的母親。6．Myfather'sloveislikethesunshine，whichbringsmefirmnessandenthusiasmsothatmywillisstrengthened．父親的愛就像陽光，帶給我堅定和熱情，使我的意志更加堅定。7．Iwassurethattherewassomethinggloriousshininginhereyes．Igottoknowitwasthegraceoflove．我確信她眼中有光芒在閃耀，我深知那是愛的光輝。8．ExhaustedasHenrywas，hewasdelightedtohelphisfriend．Itwasintheinstantthatherealizedwhatistruefriendship．盡管亨利疲憊不堪，但他還是很樂意幫助他的朋友。就在那一刻，他意識到了什么是真正的友誼。9．Idoknowthatnolifeispermanent．Nomatterwheresheis，Iwillcherishourfriendshipandmissherforever．我的確知道沒有生命是永恒的。無論她在哪里，我都會珍惜我們的友誼，永遠(yuǎn)想念她。10．Afterthat，ourfriendshipbecamecloserandIwasmorelikeafriendthanateachertothe