讀后續(xù)寫-恐高陰影下的滑索挑戰(zhàn)突破自我的飛翔講義-陜西省漢中市普通高中十校聯(lián)盟2024-2025學年高二上學期期中考試英語試卷

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。“Breakfast!”Mymomcalleddownstairs.“Today,wewillgoziplining(高空滑索)!”Mydadfollowedupinasingsongtone.Iputonmyclothesandwalkeddownthestairsslowly.“Hurryup,wedon'twanttobelate!”Mymomurged.Ilookedoutofthewindow.Thesunwasshining.WhenIenteredthediningroom,Iwasmetwiththenicesmellofpancakes.Allthesemademefeelalittlebitbetter.“Whatabeautifulday,”Itoldmyself,“Icandoit.”Asbreakfastwenton,Istruggledwiththemountingfear.Itwasthefirsttimeformetotryzip,lining.Tomakethingsworse,Iwasscaredofgoingtohighplaces.Ihadtriedtogetovertheunreasonablefearmany;manytimessinceithadkeptmeawayfromhavingfunwithmyfriends.AndIwasparticularlyfedupwithmakingexcusestocoverupmyfearofheight.Afterbreakfast,wesetoutinmydad'scar.Alongtheway,thesungrewhotter,andtheleatherontheseatsstartedtoburnmylegswhilemyparentsweretalkingaboutthesportenthusiastically.ButIwasstillabsorbedinmyfear.Eventually,wepulleduptoabigparkwhereourinstructorwaswaitingforus“Goodmorning!”hesaidcheerfully.“So,haveyoualltriedthissportbefore?”Weshookourheads.Igotmorenervouswhiletheinstructorwentoverthesafetyinstructionsandwarnedusofthepossibledangersofthesport.“Allright,itistimetohitthetails!”saidtheinstructorafterwefastenedoursafetybelts.Foramoment,Icongratulatedmyselfthathedidnotnotemyfear.“Itisareallygoodbeginning,”Itoldmyself,“HowhappyIwouldbeifIcouldmakeit.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Whenwewereready,mymomanddadwereaskedtogofirst.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,myturncame.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：作者一家要去體驗高空滑索，作者因恐高而內心恐懼，這是他首次嘗試且以往常因恐高錯過與朋友玩耍。早餐時雖有美景美食稍作安慰但恐懼仍在，路上父母熱情討論滑索而作者沉浸在恐懼中。到達公園后教練講解安全事項，之后準備開始滑索，父母先滑。伏筆與回應：伏筆：作者多次嘗試克服恐高未成功且常為此找借口，暗示此次滑索挑戰(zhàn)難度大?；貞涸诨鬟^程中經(jīng)歷激烈心理斗爭并最終有所突破。伏筆：作者看到窗外好天氣、聞到煎餅香感覺稍好，與后續(xù)滑索時的恐懼形成對比?；貞杭幢汩_始時有好感覺但面對滑索恐懼仍占上風。伏筆：作者擔心教練發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的恐懼，為后文自己滑索時的緊張鋪墊?；貞夯鲿r雖緊張但努力克服。伏筆：父母對滑索的熱情討論，與作者的恐懼對比，突出作者內心的掙扎?；貞鹤髡咴谶@種對比下更堅定克服恐懼的決心。伏筆：作者早餐時自我鼓勵，為滑索過程中的自我激勵埋下伏筆?；貞夯鲿r不斷給自己積極暗示。續(xù)寫要點：情感線：父母滑索時作者極度緊張，到自己滑索時從極度恐懼到鼓起勇氣嘗試，最后完成滑索后的釋然與自豪。故事線：父母順利滑索后，作者在教練鼓勵下登上滑索起點，經(jīng)歷內心掙扎后成功滑索。主旨升華句：“Facingfearsheadonisthefirststeptowardsconqueringthem.”（直面恐懼是征服恐懼的第一步。）“Thegreatestobstacleisoftenourownselfdoubt,andoveringitmakesusstronger.”（最大的障礙往往是我們自己的自我懷疑，克服它會讓我們更強大。）“Courageisnottheabsenceoffear,buttheabilitytoactinspiteofit.”（勇氣不是沒有恐懼，而是盡管有恐懼仍能行動。）“Inthejourneyofconqueringfears,wediscoverourhiddenpotential.”（在征服恐懼的旅程中，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)自己隱藏的潛力。）“Eachtimeweovereafear,weopenanewdoortopersonalgrowth.”（每次我們克服一種恐懼，就為個人成長打開了一扇新門。）寫作示范一：

Whenwewereready,mymomanddadwereaskedtogofirst.Theysteppedontotheplatformwithexcitementandlaunchedthemselvesintotheair.Iwatchedastheyglidedsmoothlyacrosstheline,whoopingwithjoy.MyheartpoundedinmychestasIwaitedmyturn.Theinstructorcameoverandpattedmyshoulder,saying,“Don'tworry,it'sgoingtobeokay.”Buthiswordsdidlittletoeasemyanxiety.Igrippedtherailingtightly,mypalmssweating.

Finally,myturncame.Itookadeepbreathandsteppedontotheplatform.Mylegsfeltlikejelly.Ilookeddownandthegroundseemedmilesaway.Closingmyeyes,Itriedtocalmmyself.Then,IrememberedallthetimesIhadletfearholdmeback.Withasuddenburstofdetermination,Iopenedmyeyesandpushedoff.ThewindrushedpastmyfaceandIscreamedwithamixtureoffearandexhilaration.AsIreachedtheend,Ifeltasenseofacplishment.Ihadconqueredmyfear,atleastforthismoment.寫作示范二：

Whenwewereready,mymomanddadwereaskedtogofirst.Theylookedsoconfidentandeagerastheytookoff.Istaredafterthem,envyingtheircourage.ThesecondstickedbyslowlyasIwaited,mymindfilledwithallkindsofterrifyingthoughts.WhatifIfell?Whatifthelinebroke?Theinstructornoticedmydistressandstartedtalkingtomeaboutthesafetymeasuresagain,tryingtoreassureme.ButIcouldbarelyhearhimoverthepoundingofmyheart.

Finally,myturncame.Iforcedmyselftomoveforward,onetremblingstepatatime.AsIstoodontheedge,IfeltlikeIwasonthevergeofpassingout.ButthenIthoughtabouthowmuchIwantedtooverethisfear.Itookadeepbreathandletgo.Thefeelingofweightlessnesswasterrifyingatfirst,butthenIstartedtoenjoytherushofthewindandtheview.WhenIlandedsafely,IknewIhadachievedsomethinggreat.Ihadfacedmyfearandwon.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Whenwewereready,mymomanddadwereaskedtogofirst.Themomenttheysetout,theyyelledandscreamed.Notforlong,theybecametwolittleblackdotsandtheirlaughterkeptringingintheair.Itwasobviousthattheexcitementtookholdofmyparents.ButIstoodthere,unable