山東省煙臺市2024-2025學年高二上學期11月期中學業(yè)水平診斷英語試題讀后續(xù)寫失之面試得之善緣Bob的奇妙經歷講義

閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Bobhadbeenjoblessforthepastfewmonths,andhisfamilycouldhardlymakeendsmeet.Buttodayitwashischancetoturnanewpage.Bobwaswaitingforthebus,readytoattendtheinterviewatZaneLawpanywithhisonlysuiton.Heknewallhehadtodowaspasstheinterview.Suddenlybigraindropsstartedfallingfromthesky.Boblookedupinsadness.Peoplehurriedlysoughtforshelter.Givinguphisinitialplanofwaitingforthebus,hefollowedthem.Pushinghiswaythroughcrowdsofpeople,Bobrantothenearesttrainstationtoshelterfromtherain.“Mypreviousplandidn’twork,butperhapsIcouldstillmakeitifItakethetrain,”hethought.Anelderlyladyaccidentallyknockedintohim,causingthecontentsofhisbriefcasetofallout.“I’msorry,Ididn’t…”shesaid.Bobcutheroff,signingitwasfineandhurriedlygatheredhisthings.Whenhereachedtheplatform,hewasdisappointedtoseethatnoticeshadbeenputupeverywhereinformingofatenminutepostponement.What’sworse,thefloorwasflooded.Panicbrokeout,followedbyadisorderedrushtotheexitswhereabottleneckhadformed.AsBobmadehiswaytotheexit,hesawtheelderlyladyMarywhohadknockedintohimearlier.Shewashobbling(蹣跚)amongthecrowds,holdingherwalkingstickwithherweakhands.Fearwaswrittenclearlyonherfaceasshedidn’tseehergrandsonDavidwhohadpromisedtopickheruptovisithisnewlyestablishedZaneLawpany.Tomakemattersworse,herphonewasoutofpowerandcouldn’treachDavid.“Auntie,letmehelpyou,”Bobsaidandwithoutwaitingforareply,heplacedherhandonhisrightarm.Aftersometime,theymadeitoutofthefloodedplatform.NotwantingtoleaveMaryalone,hedecidedtostaywithher.Afterall,therewasnowayhecouldmakeitforhisinterviewnow.Hewassadatthethoughtofmissingtheinterview.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Noticinghisobviousdiscouragement,Maryasked,“Son,whydoyoulooksosad?”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Abouttenminuteslater,MarysawDavidrushingtowardsthem.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：Bob失業(yè)數月，家庭經濟困難，他身著唯一的西裝準備去ZaneLawpany面試。途中突遇大雨，他改乘火車，卻遭遇列車晚點且站臺被淹。在混亂中，他遇到之前撞到他的老婦人Mary，她因與答應接她去參觀孫子David新成立的ZaneLawpany的David走散而驚慌失措，Bob出于善良決定幫助她，放棄了面試機會，因此十分沮喪。伏筆與回應：伏筆：Bob要去ZaneLawpany面試?；貞汉髞戆l(fā)現Mary的孫子David正是ZaneLawpany的相關人員。伏筆：Mary提到David要接她去參觀其新成立的公司?；貞罕砻鱀avid在公司有一定地位，為后文幫助Bob埋下伏筆。伏筆：Bob因幫助Mary錯過面試而沮喪?；貞汉笪腄avid為他提供新機會，讓他心情轉變。伏筆：站臺被淹人群慌亂?；貞和癸@出Bob在這種混亂中仍能幫助Mary的善良品質。伏筆：Mary沒電無法聯系David。回應：使得她只能依賴Bob的幫助，也讓故事得以進一步發(fā)展。續(xù)寫要點：第一段：Bob向Mary訴說錯過面試的難過，Mary安慰他，兩人交流中逐漸熟悉。突然Mary驚喜地發(fā)現David公司的一些獨特之處（如公司標志在附近建筑上），Bob也被吸引，暫時忘卻煩惱。第二段：David趕來，看到Bob照顧Mary很感激。了解Bob錯過面試后，被他的善良打動，決定給他在公司一個機會。Bob喜出望外，深刻體會到善良總會有回報。情感線：Bob從最初對錯過面試的極度沮喪，到幫助Mary過程中的無奈與平靜，再到與Mary交流時的舒緩，最后因David給予機會而轉為驚喜與感恩。故事線：Bob準備面試遇雨改乘火車受阻，幫助Mary，與Mary交流，David趕來，Bob獲新機會。主旨升華句：Kindnessislikeaboomerangthatalwaysreturns.（善良就像回旋鏢，總會回報自身。）Inthejourneyoflife,helpingothersispavingthewayforourownblessings.（在人生旅途中，幫助他人就是為自己的福澤鋪路。）Agooddeedtodaymayopenanunexpecteddoortomorrow.（今日的善舉可能開啟明日意想不到的大門。）Truekindnessnevergoesunrewarded,thoughtherewardmayeinunexpectedforms.（真正的善良總會得到回報，盡管回報可能以意想不到的形式出現。）Theseedsofkindnessweplantwillsurelybearthefruitsoffortuneinduecourse.（我們種下的善良種子必將在適當的時候結出幸運之果。）寫作示范一：Noticinghisobviousdiscouragement,Maryasked,“Son,whydoyoulooksosad?”Bobtoldherabouthisunemploymentandthemissedinterview.Marypattedhishandandsaid,“Don'tloseheart.Theremustbeabetterplan.”Astheywaited,Marypointedtoalogoonanearbybuilding,sayingitwasfromDavid'spany.Bobwasintriguedandstartedaskingaboutthepany.TheirconversationmadeBobforgethissadnessforawhile.Abouttenminuteslater,MarysawDavidrushingtowardsthem.Davidwasworriedsickabouthisgrandma.WhenheheardwhatBobhaddone,hewasdeeplytouched.HesaidtoBob,“Yourkindnessisreallyprecious.Ihappentohaveapositionavailableinmypany.Wouldyouliketojoinus?”Bobwasoverjoyed.Herealizedthathisactofkindnesshadbroughthimanewopportunity.Itwasareminderthathelpingothersislikesowingseedsofhope,whichwillbloomintobeautifulsurprises.寫作示范二：Noticinghisobviousdiscouragement,Maryasked,“Son,whydoyoulooksosad?”Bobexplainedhissituationwithaheavyheart.Marysmiledgentlyandsaid,“Dear,everycloudhasasilverlining.”Theyfoundabenchtositon.MarysharedsomestoriesaboutDavid'sstruggletoestablishthepany.Boblistenedattentively,hismoodgraduallylifting.Hebegantothinkthatmaybethissetbackwasnottheend.Abouttenminuteslater,MarysawDavidrushingtowardsthem.DavidembracedMarytightlyandthankedBobprofusely.LearningthatBobhadsacrificedhisinterview,Davidsaid,“Yourselflessactshouldberewarded.IcanofferyouajobinZaneLawpany.Weneedpeoplewithakindheartlikeyou.”Bob'seyeslitupwithgratitude.Thisexperiencetaughthimthatkindnessisacurrencythatalwayshasvalueandcanbuyunexpectedtreasuresinlife.參考答案1Noticinghisobviousdiscouragement,Maryasked,“Son,whydoyoulooksosad?”Bobheavedasighandrecountedhismisfortuneoflosingthejobinterviewduetohelpingher.Maryfeltapangofguiltbutthensaid,“Youareagoodsoul.I'msuresomethingbetterawaits.”Astheysatwaiting,MaryrecollectedthatDavidhadmentionedthepanywasclosetothestation.Bob'searsperkedup,hisinterestsomewhatpiqued.Abouttenminuteslater,MarysawDavidrushingtowardsthem.Davidwasvisiblyrelievedtofindhisgrandmasafe.AfterhearingBob'sstory,hesaidwithadmiration,“Yourkindnessinthischaoticsituationisremarkable.Wehaveanopeninginourpany,andIbelieveyou'dbeagreatfit.”Bob'sfacebrokeintoawidesmile.Henowunderstoodthathisactofkindnesshadledhimtoanewandpromisingpath.參考答案2No