讀后續(xù)寫-從病床到希望之路信念支撐下的艱難復(fù)健與心靈啟迪講義-河南省信陽市2024-2025學(xué)年高二上學(xué)期11月期中英語試題

河南省信陽市20242025學(xué)年高二上學(xué)期11月期中英語試題六、書面表達(dá)47.閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Thepowerofbelief“Youwillneverwalkagain.Youwillhavetouseawheelchair.”Unpreparedforthedoctor’sjudgment,Iheardhiswordsfallheavilyonmyears,numbingmysoul.Myseriouscaraccidenthadleftmeunconsciousandincriticalcondition.Iawakenedtofindbothleg:wrappedincasts(石膏).Lyinginmybedmotionlessandrelyingonprayer,IwonderedhowIcouldgivemytenyearoldsonhopethatMomwouldheal.He’dbeencheerfuloneveryvisit,butIsawthefearinhiseyes.Thethoughtofhavingatotallyhandicapped(殘疾的)motherwasweighingheavilyonhislittleshoulder.HeneededtherayofhopethatIwouldnotbeinawheelchairforever.Justmaybe,Ithought,Icouldusethisexperiencetoteachwhattodowhendisastersstrike.IneededsomethingbesidesmyphysicalhealingtosinkmyIrishstubbornnessinto—it’sthatpersonalitythatkeptmegoingthroughthetoughestchallengeofmylifeItdidn’ttakemelongtobeeimpatientwiththepacethedoctorswerewillingtogowithme.Ideterminedtolearneverythingtheyshowedme.Ineededtomakethingshappenmyway.Andbeingconfined(限制)toawheelchairtherestofmylifedidn’tfitintomyplans.Atfirst,Itaughtmyselftomovefromthebedtothewheelchair.Imadetinymovementsforweeks,afraidoffalling,butmoreafraidtojustlieinbed.Ireachedapointwheremyarmswerestrongenoughtocarrymeintothechair.Gettingoutofthechairandbackintobedprovedmoredifficult,butIsoondevelopedamethodofgrabbingthesheets.Ioftenwonderedwhatthenursesanddoctorswouldhavedoneifthey’dseenmestrugglingonmyown.OncesureIcouldreturnmyselftothebedfromthewheelchair,Ibegantouseawalkerthathadbeenleftinmyroombyaformerhospitalroommate.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn’tbeinterrupted(打擾),Iwouldstarttotrain.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Itcametimetosharemyachievementswiththepersonmostimportanttome.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：作者遭遇嚴(yán)重車禍后雙腿被石膏包裹，醫(yī)生判定可能無法再行走只能坐輪椅，這讓作者內(nèi)心痛苦，同時(shí)也擔(dān)心給十歲兒子帶來心理負(fù)擔(dān)。作者憑借自身的倔強(qiáng)，決定不依賴醫(yī)生的緩慢進(jìn)度，自行學(xué)習(xí)從床上移動(dòng)到輪椅等動(dòng)作，盡管過程艱難且充滿危險(xiǎn)，但依然堅(jiān)持訓(xùn)練，希望能改變現(xiàn)狀并給兒子樹立榜樣。伏筆以及回應(yīng)：伏筆1：作者提到要用這次經(jīng)歷教導(dǎo)兒子面對(duì)災(zāi)難時(shí)該怎么做，為后文與兒子分享成果并給予他精神激勵(lì)埋下伏筆，續(xù)寫中兒子會(huì)從作者的努力中獲得力量與成長。伏筆2：作者不滿醫(yī)生的治療進(jìn)度而決心按自己的方式行事，暗示后續(xù)訓(xùn)練會(huì)遇到更多困難但也會(huì)更堅(jiān)定地克服，續(xù)寫中會(huì)詳細(xì)描述獨(dú)自訓(xùn)練的艱辛與堅(jiān)持。伏筆3：作者害怕永遠(yuǎn)坐在輪椅上影響兒子，這推動(dòng)著她努力訓(xùn)練，續(xù)寫中她的成功會(huì)給兒子帶來希望和改變。伏筆4：從床上到輪椅的移動(dòng)練習(xí)成功后，又嘗試使用室友留下的助行器，預(yù)示著她會(huì)不斷挑戰(zhàn)自我，續(xù)寫中訓(xùn)練難度會(huì)繼續(xù)增加且她會(huì)持續(xù)突破。伏筆5：作者提到愛爾蘭人的倔強(qiáng)性格支撐自己面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)，這一性格特點(diǎn)會(huì)貫穿她的訓(xùn)練過程，續(xù)寫中她會(huì)憑借倔強(qiáng)克服重重困難取得更大進(jìn)步。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：第一段：情感線：孤獨(dú)卻堅(jiān)定，充滿對(duì)恢復(fù)行走的渴望，在訓(xùn)練過程中有對(duì)失敗的恐懼但又不斷自我鼓勵(lì)。故事線：借助助行器在病房內(nèi)緩慢挪動(dòng)，每次只前進(jìn)一小步，汗水濕透衣衫。嘗試沿著病房走廊行走，不斷摔倒又爬起，膝蓋和手肘布滿淤青。逐漸增加行走的距離和時(shí)間，盡管疲憊不堪但依然咬牙堅(jiān)持，心中默念要給兒子希望。第二段：情感線：自豪與期待，希望兒子看到自己的努力和成果后能變得堅(jiān)強(qiáng)勇敢，對(duì)未來充滿信心。故事線：邀請(qǐng)兒子來到病房，在兒子面前自信地使用助行器行走。向兒子講述訓(xùn)練過程中的艱辛與堅(jiān)持，鼓勵(lì)兒子在面對(duì)生活困難時(shí)也要勇往直前。兒子被作者的精神感動(dòng)，緊緊擁抱作者，兩人都對(duì)未來充滿希望，家庭關(guān)系也更加緊密。主旨升華句：“Beliefistheunwaveringpassthatguidesusthroughthedarkeststormsoflife,leadingustoshoresofrecoveryandhope.”（信念是堅(jiān)定的羅盤，引領(lǐng)我們穿越生命中最黑暗的風(fēng)暴，抵達(dá)康復(fù)與希望的彼岸。）“Inthefaceofadversity,thepowerofselfbeliefcantransformlimitationsintosteppingstonesforextraordinaryachievements.”（面對(duì)困境，自我信念的力量可以將局限轉(zhuǎn)化為取得非凡成就的墊腳石。）“Thejourneyofrecovery,fueledbybelief,notonlyhealsthebodybutalsokindlesaflameofinspirationintheheartsofthosewelove.”（由信念驅(qū)動(dòng)的康復(fù)之旅，不僅治愈身體，也在我們所愛的人心中點(diǎn)燃鼓舞的火焰。）“Whenbelieftakesrootinoursouls,wecandefytheoddsandrewritethenarrativeofourlives,evenintheaftermathofalifealteringaccident.”（當(dāng)信念扎根于我們的靈魂，我們可以挑戰(zhàn)命運(yùn)，改寫人生故事，即使在經(jīng)歷改變?nèi)松氖鹿手?。）“Truestrengthliesnotintheabsenceofsetbacksbutintheunyieldingbeliefthatpropelsusforward,onedeterminedstepatatime.”（真正的力量不在于沒有挫折，而在于推動(dòng)我們一步一個(gè)堅(jiān)定步伐向前的不屈信念。）寫作示范一：Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn’tbeinterrupted,Iwouldstarttotrain.Igrippedthewalkertightlyandtookmyfirstshakystep.Itwasastruggle,butIrefusedtogiveup.Iinchedalongthecorridorofthehospital,mylegstremblingwitheachmovement.Ifellseveraltimes,buteachtimeIgotbackup,thefireofdeterminationburningbrighter.Ipracticedforhours,ignoringthepainandexhaustion.Iknewthateverystepwasastepclosertowalkingagainandgivingmysonthehopeheneeded.Itcametimetosharemyachievementswiththepersonmostimportanttome.Iaskedmysontoetothehospital.Whenheenteredtheroom,Istoodupwiththewalkerandwalkedtowardshim.Hiseyeswidenedinamazementanddisbelief.Itoldhimaboutallthehardworkandperseveranceittook.Herantomeandhuggedmetightly.Icouldfeelhistearsonmyshoulder.Fromthatmomenton,Iknewthatmybeliefandeffortshadnotonlychangedmylifebutalsogivenmysonavaluablelessonaboutnevergivingup.寫作示范二：Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn’tbeinterrupted,Iwouldstarttotrain.Iusedthewalkerasmysupportandslowlymademywayaroundtheroom.Ifocusedonmybalanceandtooksmall,cautioussteps.Iwasconstantlyonthevergeoffalling,butIkeptmymindset.Iextendedmytrainingtothehallway,whereIfacedthestaresofotherpatientsandnurses.Ididn’tcare.Iwasonamission.Ipracticeduntilmylegscouldnolongerholdme,andthenIrestedandstartedagain.Itcametimetosharemyachievementswiththepersonmostimportanttome.Iarrangedformysontovisitme.Ashewalkedin,IshowedhimhowIcouldmovewiththewalker.Isharedwithhimthestoryofmytraining,thefalls,thepain,andthehope.Hewassilentatfirst,andthenasmilespreadacrosshisface.Hesaidhewasproudofme.Itoldhimthatheshouldalwaysbelieveinhimself,nomatterwhatchallengeshefaces.Webothknewthatthiswasaturningpointinourlives,andourbondgrewstrongerthroughthisexperience.【答案】Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn'tbeinterrupted(打擾),Iwouldstarttotrain.Witheachpassingday,Ibecamemoreskilledatmovingmyselfintothechairandsoughtgreaterprogress.Holdingawalkingstick,Islowlyputmyweightonmyfeetandrosetomyfeet.Difficultasitwasattheverybeginning,thephrase“"giveup"neverpoppe