高三上學(xué)期一輪復(fù)習(xí)摸底測(cè)試英語(yǔ)試題讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)-森林的秘密：一個(gè)小女孩的冒險(xiǎn)+講義

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Undoubtedly,MotherNatureisalwaysattractivetokids.Inourchildhood,howoftendidweturnadeafeartoourparents’advice?Veryoften!Thus,welandedourselvesinasituationwherewegreatlyregrettedouractofnothavinglistenedtotheadviceofthewise.SuchanunforgettableexperienceIhadattheageof7gavemeaninvaluablelesson,afterwhichIdeeplyunderstoodwhymygentlemotherwasrepeatingtheboringsuggestionsandIwouldtrytotakehersuggestionsseriously.Inmychildhood,Iwassocrazyaboutnaturethatevenplayingamongthecolorfulflowersinourgardencouldmakemyday.Ourhousewasnexttothewoodswhichhadalwaysstirredup(激起)greatcuriosityinmeinwantingtofindoutwhatwaswithin.EverytimeIsawfascinatingbutterfliesdancingfromthewoods,mycuriositygrew.Butmymotherdidn’tlikemewanderingoffonmyownandalwaysensuredthatIwaswithinhersight.Evenifsheallowedmetoexplorethesurroundingareaonmyown,itwasonlytobesomewherenearthehouse.Beingascuriousasthecat,Ialwaysdesiredtoexplorethewoods.Itseemedasifmymotherhadunderstoodmydesire,soshehadwarmedmeonlotsofoccasionsnevertoenterthewoodsalone.“Mom,canIgooutandplayinthegarden?”Iasked.“Sure,”shewouldreplyeachtime.“Kate,youcanplayinthegardenbutyoumustpromisemeonething—onlywhenI’mwithyoucanyougointothewoods.Therearenocasesofanimalattacksonhumans,butit’sstilldangerousforalittlekidlikeyou.It’stooeasytogetlostinthewoods.”“Sure,you’vesaidthatmanytimes!”Iansweredwithoutpatienceatherrepeatedreminders.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。第一段：However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.第二段：“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.文章大意這篇文章講述了作者在七歲時(shí)的一次冒險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷。作為一個(gè)對(duì)自然充滿(mǎn)好奇的孩子，作者經(jīng)常在花園里玩耍，并對(duì)鄰近的森林充滿(mǎn)好奇。盡管母親多次警告她不要獨(dú)自進(jìn)入森林，但作者的好奇心最終戰(zhàn)勝了對(duì)母親的承諾。在一個(gè)陽(yáng)光明媚的早晨，趁母親忙于家務(wù)，作者偷偷溜進(jìn)了森林，開(kāi)始了她的探險(xiǎn)。故事山分析引入：作者描述了對(duì)自然的熱愛(ài)和對(duì)森林的好奇。上升：母親對(duì)作者的警告和作者對(duì)森林的渴望逐漸增加。高潮：作者決定違背母親的警告，獨(dú)自進(jìn)入森林。下降：作者在森林中的冒險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷。解決：作者意識(shí)到自己的錯(cuò)誤，并從經(jīng)歷中學(xué)習(xí)。結(jié)局：作者對(duì)母親的建議有了新的理解和尊重。五處伏筆及回應(yīng)伏筆：作者對(duì)森林的好奇心。

回應(yīng)：作者最終進(jìn)入森林，滿(mǎn)足了她的好奇心。伏筆：母親多次警告不要獨(dú)自進(jìn)入森林。

回應(yīng)：作者忽視了這些警告，導(dǎo)致了后續(xù)的冒險(xiǎn)。伏筆：母親忙于家務(wù)，給了作者一個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)。

回應(yīng)：作者利用這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)偷偷進(jìn)入森林。伏筆：森林中可能存在的危險(xiǎn)。

回應(yīng)：作者在森林中的經(jīng)歷可能證實(shí)了這些危險(xiǎn)。伏筆：作者對(duì)母親的不耐煩。

回應(yīng)：作者的行為最終導(dǎo)致了她對(duì)母親的新理解和尊重。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)（兩段）第一段：描述作者在森林中的冒險(xiǎn)，包括她的感受、所見(jiàn)所聞，以及可能遇到的困難或危險(xiǎn)。第二段：描述作者如何被母親找到，以及這次經(jīng)歷如何改變了她對(duì)母親建議的看法。情感線(xiàn)（150字）文章中的情感線(xiàn)從好奇和興奮開(kāi)始，隨著作者進(jìn)入森林，情感轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)榫o張和恐懼。當(dāng)母親的聲音在森林中響起時(shí)，作者感到內(nèi)疚和后悔。這次經(jīng)歷最終導(dǎo)致作者對(duì)母親的愛(ài)和尊重的加深，以及對(duì)自然的新認(rèn)識(shí)和敬畏。故事線(xiàn)（6條）作者對(duì)自然的熱愛(ài)和好奇心。母親對(duì)作者安全的擔(dān)憂(yōu)和警告。作者對(duì)母親警告的不耐煩和忽視。作者的森林冒險(xiǎn)和所面臨的挑戰(zhàn)。母親的尋找和對(duì)作者的擔(dān)憂(yōu)。作者從經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到的教訓(xùn)和對(duì)母親建議的新理解。主旨升華句（5句英文）"Curiositymayleadusastray,butitisthroughsuchdetoursthatweoftenlearnthemostvaluablelessons.""Thevoiceofexperience,thoughoftenunheeded,holdsthewisdomtoguideusthroughlife'suncertainties.""Nature'sallureisundeniable,butitisthelessonslearnedfromouradventuresthatshapeourcharacter.""Respectforthewarningsofthosewhocareforuscansaveusfromthepitfallsofourownimpatience.""Sometimes,ittakesajourneyintotheunknowntotrulyappreciatethesafetyandguidanceofhome."寫(xiě)作示范示范一However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.Thesunwasshiningbrightly,andthewoodsseemedtocallmynamewitheverybreezethatrustledthroughtheleaves.Ihadseenaparticularlybeautifulbutterflythatmorning,andIwasconvincedithadcomefromthedepthsofthewoods.MyheartracedwithexcitementasIsteppedintotheforest,thedampearthbeneathmyfeetandthetoweringtreesabovecreatinganatmosphereofmysteryandadventure.“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.Thesoundwasfilledwithamixofworryandrelief.AsIemergedfromthewoods,Isawtheconcerninhereyes,andforthefirsttime,Itrulyunderstoodtheweightofherwarnings.Thatday,Ilearnednotjustaboutthedangersofthewoodsbutalsoaboutthedepthsofamother'sloveandtheimportanceofheedingwiseadvice.示范二However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorningwhenthewoodsseemedtowhispersecretsonlyIcoulduncover.Theallureoftheunknownwastoostrong,andIfoundmyselftiptoeingintotheforest,mysmallstepsmuffledbythethickcarpetofleaves.Theforestwasalabyrinthoftreesandshadows,andasIventureddeeper,thethrillofdiscoveryturnedtoagrowingsenseofunease.“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice,abeaconintheencroachingdarkness.Thefearinhertonepiercedthroughmyheart,andIrealizedthegravityofmyactions.AsIrantowardshercall,Iwasnolongertheadventurouschildbutadaughterwhohadcausedhermotherundueworry.Thatevening,aswewalkedbackhomehandinhand,Ivowedtoneveragaindismissthewisdominmymother'swords,understandingthatheradvicewasashieldagainsttheworld'suncertainties.參考答案However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.

Ignoringmymother’sreminder,Islidintotheforbiddenworld.Howfascinating!Amongvariouscolorfulflowersdancedbutterflies.Withexcitement,Ichasedafterthegracefulcreatures,runningdeeperintothewoods.Suddenlytheyflewovertreesanddisappeared.What’sworse,Igotlost!Irushedaround,cryingforhelp,frightenedandhelpless,butinvain.Irepeatedtheuselesseffortsun