作文 10 吉林卷 - 三年(2019-2021)中考英語滿分作文解析

作文10吉林卷2021年真題在線在日常生活中，人們會遇到交友、飲食、交通或防疫等安全問題。請以“SelfProtection”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1.結合生活實際，談談自我保護的重要性。2.列舉生活中的安全問題（至少兩個方面），并分別提出合理化建議。3.發(fā)出自我保護的號召。寫作要求：1.語言流暢，層次清晰，可以適當發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)80-100詞，開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。3.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生本人的學校名稱和姓名。SelfProtectionThesedays,peoplepaymoreattentiontosafetyproblems.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inshort,selfprotectionisimportanttous.Wisheveryoneasafelife!考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為話題作文，要求以“SelfProtection”為題寫一篇關于自我保護的文章。題目已給出三個方面要點提示，學生應對幾個要點進行敘述。2.寫作指導：寫作時人稱應用第一人稱，時態(tài)應用一般現(xiàn)在時或在敘述過去發(fā)生的事情時用過去時。文章包含三個要點提示，第一個是結合生活實際來講述自我保護的重要性，第二個是關于自我保護的一些建議，第三個是號召大家進行自我保護。文章應要點齊全，層次分明，條理清楚，不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫、語法時態(tài)使用錯誤。滿分范文SelfProtectionThesedays,peoplepaymoreattentiontosafetyproblems.Asstudents,wehavetogotoschooleveryweekday.Onthewaytoschoolweneedgoacrosstheroadsometimes.Ifwearenotcarefulenough,wemaybehitbyacar.Sowehavetolearntoprotectourselves.Buthowcanweprotectourselves?First,weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.Second,don’tcrossthestreetwhenthelightsarered.Also,weshouldeathealthilyandsafely.Thesethreesuggestionsaregoodforustoprotectourselves.Weshouldadoptthesesuggestionstoprotectourselves.Inshort,selfprotectionisimportanttous.Wisheveryoneasafelife!2020年1．請以"ASpeechattheNationalFlagRaisingCeremony"為題，根據(jù)以下要點與要求，用英語寫一篇國旗下的發(fā)言稿。要點：1.講述一件事；2.寫出你的感受。要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；2.不少于80詞。（文章開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ASpeechattheNationalFlagRaisingCeremonyHelloeveryone,Iamhonorabletogivethespeechatthenationalflagraisingceremony.Iwatchedthenationalflagraisingceremonyonthemorning,markingthe68thanniversaryofthefoundingofthePeople'sRepublicofChina.IwassoexcitedandproudthatIalmostcried.WatchingthenationalflagraisingceremonyattheTian’anmenSquareonthecountry'sbirthdayhasbeenawayofChinesecelebratingtheNationalDay.Somejoinedthegatheringforsight-seeing,andotherscametoexpressthefeelingofpatriotism.Atthatmoment,ItookprideinmyselfasaChineseandwassurprisedattherapiddevelopmentofourcountry.Thanksforyourlistening.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于演講稿。要求將題目要求敘述清楚，寫一篇國旗下的發(fā)言稿。2.寫作指導：本文以一般過去時為主，在寫作時第一段主要敘述自己觀看升旗儀式的經(jīng)歷并表達自己的感受；第二段感謝大家收聽。寫作時注意語句通順、語法正確、語意完整。2．假如你是李華，你所在的學校即將開展以“文明禮貌伴我行爭做文明中學生”為主題的英語演講比賽。請完成下面的演講稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.列舉生活中至少兩種不文明現(xiàn)象并寫出各自產(chǎn)生的影響；2.提出至少三條爭做文明中學生的建議；3.發(fā)出爭做文明中學生的號召。寫作要求：1.詞數(shù)80—100詞，開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的學校名稱和姓名；3.可以適當發(fā)揮。Hello,everyone!MynameisLiHua.Nowadays,peoplecaremoreaboutourgrades.Infact,goodbehaviorisasimportantasgoodgrades.However,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ibelievewe'llbebetterstudentsaslongaswebehaveourselves.That'sall.Thanksforlistening.【答案】例文一：Hello,everyone!MynameisLiHua.Nowadays,peoplecaremoreaboutourgrades.Infact,goodbehaviorisasimportantasgoodgrades.However,somebadbehaviorcanbeseenaroundus.Forexample,somestudentsthrowrubbisheverywhere,whichmakestheenvironmentworseandworse.Somestudentsarealwaysshoutingbackangrilytotheirparentsgraduallytherelationsbetweenthemhavebecomedifficult.Howcanwebehavewell?First,Ithinkweshouldbepoliteandkindtoothers.Bereadytohelpothersinneed.Second,trytobehonestandkeeppromises.Themostimportantthingistofollowtherulesatschoolorinpublic.Let'spulltogetherandtakeactionfromnowon.Ibelievewe'llbebetterstudentsaslongaswebehaveourselves.That'sall.Thanksforlistening!例文二：Hello,everyone!MynameisLiHua.Nowadays,peoplecaremoreaboutourgrades.Infact,goodbehaviorisasimportantasgoodgrades.However,wecanhearsomestudentstalkloudlyonthebus.What'sworse,somestudentssmokeinpublicplaces.Thesemaymakeothersuncomfortableandsmokingisharmfultopeople'shealthtobebetterstudents.Weshouldthinkofothersandkeepthevoicedowninpublic.Andweshouldfollowthetrafficrulestomakesurewearesafe.Besides,weshouldtrytobehoneststudentsandweshouldn'tlietoothers.Let'spulltogetherandtakeactionfromnowon.Ibelievewe'llbebetterstudentsaslongaswebehaveourselves.That'sall.Thanksforlistening.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于演講稿寫作。在寫作時應緊接開頭繼續(xù)寫作，根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示列舉生活中至少兩種不文明現(xiàn)象并寫出各自產(chǎn)生的影響，提出至少三條爭做文明中學生的建議并發(fā)出爭做文明中學生的號召。2.例文點評：例文主要用第三人稱進行寫作，主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫作。講述爭做文明中學生的建議分成三點來寫，敘述完整且條理清晰。3.高分亮點：短語：caremoreabout;infact;forexample;throwrubbish;shoutingback;behavewell;inneed;tryto;keeppromises;followtherules;pulltogether;takeaction;fromnowon；what'sworse;isharmfulto;thinkof;keepthevoicedown;inpublic;makesure;lieto。句型：Ithink…賓語從句；which引導的定語從句；aslongas引導的條件狀語從句；weshoulddo表示建議的句子。2019年3．提問是獲取知識、形成能力的重要途徑之一。請以“KnowledgeComesfromQuestioning”為題，結合你的一次經(jīng)歷，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文。(文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名)KnowledgeComesfromQuestioning【答案】例文KnowledgeComesfromQuestioningItiswellknownthatquestioninginoneofthemostimportantwaystolearnknowledgeanddevelopabilitieswhichprovestrulyinmyexperiencelastyear.Onedaylastspring,myfatherandIwentouttoflyakite.Withthestringinhand,myfatherstartedtoflythekite.Soon,itwashighupinthesky.Iwonderedifitcouldflyhigherwithoutthestring.SoIcutthestring.Suddenly,thekitebegantogohigh.However,afterawhile,tomysurprise,thekitewascomingdownandfellontothegrassfinally.Ifeltupsetandasked,"Ithoughtthataftercuttingthestring,thekitewouldflyhigher.Whydiditfalldown?""Myfatheranswered,"Thestringwasnotstoppingthekitefromlyinghigher,buthelpingitstayinthesky,becausethekiteitselfcan'tflyup.Itistheairthatmakesitfly.Byusingthestring,youhelpthekitegoupintherightdirection.Whenyoucutthestring,itcouldnotsupportthekite.""That'sit!"Icriedwithjoy.Fromthisexperience,Ilearnednewknowledgebyquestioning.Howwonderfulitwas!【詳解】1.題干解讀：提問是獲取知識、形成能力的重要途徑之一。請以“KnowledgeComesfromQuestioning”為題，結合你的一次經(jīng)歷，這是一篇敘事的作文。2.例文點評：根據(jù)題目要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。3.高分亮點：短語：oneofthemostimportantwaystolearnknowledgeanddevelopabilities；wentouttoflyakite.；romthenon；dayafterday；dependon；comefrom。句型：Iwonderedif加從句；becausethekiteitselfcan'tflyup.；Byusingthestring,youhelpthekitegoupintherightdirection.Whenyoucutthestring,itcouldnotsupportthekite.""That'sit!"Icriedwithjoy.。三、書信作文4．假如你是李華，想?yún)⒓覥hinaDaily舉辦的以”夢想職業(yè)體驗”為主題的2019年夏令營活動。請給主辦人Mr.Smith寫一封介紹個人情況的申請郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1.個人信息與興趣愛好2.夢想職業(yè)與個人計劃寫作要求；1.詞數(shù)90詞左右，開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的學校名稱與姓名。DearMr.Smith,It'smypleasuretointroducemyselftoyou.Idohopetojoinintheactivityandlookforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!YoursSincerely,LiHua【答案】DearMr．Smith，It'smypleasuretointroducemyselftoyou．MynameisLiHua．Ilikereadingandwriting．Ispendlotsoftimereadinginthelibrarywithmyclassmatesafterschool．AndIhaveahabitofkeepingadairy．Iwanttobeawriterwhen