作文 06 貴州卷 - 三年(2019-2021)中考英語滿分作文解析

作文06貴州卷2021年真題在線高中生涯即將開始。假設(shè)你叫李明，你對于高中的英語學(xué)習(xí)有什么規(guī)劃呢？畢業(yè)之際，校團(tuán)委將舉辦一場高中英語學(xué)習(xí)規(guī)劃分享會。請根據(jù)以下要點提示，以MyPlanforSeniorEnglishLearning為題，準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿，和同學(xué)們分享一下你的學(xué)習(xí)規(guī)劃。需提升項目高中英語學(xué)習(xí)規(guī)劃一、語音（pronunciation）、聽力多聽多讀課文（texts），多聽英語新聞節(jié)目（newsprograms），觀看英語電影二、寫作（writing）記英文日記：不要把一切都翻譯成漢語（translateeverythingintoChinese），應(yīng)學(xué)會用英語進(jìn)行思考三、語法（grammar）看些語法書，并請教老師四、心態(tài)保持輕松（stayrelaxed），滿懷信心（beconfident）寫作要求：1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.行文流暢，語言準(zhǔn)確，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)任何真實的人名、校名或所在地等信息；4.詞數(shù)80左右。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。MyPlanforSeniorEnglishLearningI’mLiMing.IloveEnglish,butit’salittledifficultforme.Idecidetotrymybesttolearnitwell.Here’smyplanforSeniorEnglishlearning._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnlyinthiswaycanIlearnEnglishwellinseniorhighschool.Ihopeit’shelpfulforyou.Thankyou.考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為材料作文，要求根據(jù)題目所給要點，寫一篇關(guān)于高中英語學(xué)習(xí)計劃的短文。文章要點要齊全，切忌遺漏。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時人稱應(yīng)用第一人稱，時態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時或一般將來時。題目已給出要點提示，學(xué)生將要點提示轉(zhuǎn)換成英文即可，但要注意時態(tài)語法的正確使用，最好使用first…second等詞，使文章銜接自然、敘述流暢。滿分范文MyPlanforSeniorEnglishLearningI’mLiMing.IloveEnglish,butit’salittledifficultforme.Idecidetotrymybesttolearnitwell.Here’smyplanforSeniorEnglishlearning.First,pronunciationandlistening.Idecidetolistentoandreadmoretexts,listentomorenewsprogramsandwatchEnglishmovies.Second,writing.KeepinganEnglishdiaryisgoodformyEnglishwriting.IwilllearntothinkinEnglishinsteadoftranslatingeverythingintoChinese.Third,grammar.TolearnEnglishgrammarwell,IwillreadsomegrammarbooksandaskmyEnglishteacherforhelp.Fourth,mentality.IwillstayrelaxedandbeconfidentaboutmyEnglish.OnlyinthiswaycanIlearnEnglishwellinseniorhighschool.Ihopeit’shelpfulforyou.Thankyou.真題在線（2021年貴州銅仁）百年建黨之際，銅仁市各個學(xué)校都在開展愛國愛黨主題教育活動。假設(shè)你是張華，將參加你們學(xué)校舉行的英語演講比賽慶祝黨的生日，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示及要求，以“Howtobearesponsiblestudent”為題寫一篇演講稿，談?wù)勅绾巫鲆粋€有作為、有責(zé)任感的學(xué)生。要求：1.80詞左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.句子通順，語意連貫，符合邏輯；3.包含所有提示內(nèi)容，但不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；4.書寫正確規(guī)范，卷面整潔。提示：1.愛國愛黨，有理想，誠實守信，善良感恩；2.努力學(xué)習(xí)，樹立節(jié)約意識，不要浪費(如:食物，紙張，水電等)；3.保持身心健康，多參加課外活動和體育鍛煉；4.熱愛自然，保護(hù)環(huán)境，不亂扔垃圾，愛護(hù)動植物。參考詞匯keepone’spromise,bethankfultosb,setthemindofsavingBoysandgirls,July1stwillbeourParty’s100thbirthday.Asteenagers,wearethefutureofourmotherland.Wehaveasenseofdutytomakeourcountrymoreandmorepowerful.Whatshouldwedotobearesponsiblestudent?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening!考題解析【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示詞語和要點，寫出應(yīng)該如何做一個有作為、有責(zé)任感的學(xué)生，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。

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寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要與已給出的開頭和結(jié)尾融合起來，用第一人稱來寫作，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，提出建議可以多使用should來表達(dá)，要做到要點齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。滿分范文Boysandgirls,July1stwillbeourParty’s100thbirthday.Asteenagers,wearethefutureofourmotherland.Wehaveasenseofdutytomakeourcountrymoreandmorepowerful.Whatshouldwedotobearesponsiblestudent?First

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want.Thanksforlistening!2020年一、材料作文1．下面是一篇未寫完的短文，請認(rèn)真閱讀，為短文寫一個30﹣40詞的結(jié)尾。續(xù)寫文字完整。Thereisadebate(討論)inourEnglishclass.Thetopicisthatwhetherwecanbringourmobilephonestotheschool.GroupAsaysthatitisgoodforstudentstodoso.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】范文：Thereisadebate(討論)inourEnglishclass.Thetopicisthatwhetherwecanbringourmobilephonestotheschool.GroupAsaysthatitisgoodforstudentstodoso.Theythinkstudentscancalltheirparentsifnecessary.Andtheycanlistentomusic,sendmessages,surfonthenetandeventakephotosbyusingthemobilephones.GroupBdon'tthinkteenagersshouldusemobilephones.Theythinkmobilephonesarenotgoodfortheirhealth.Andusingmobilephonesisawasteoftime.Ourgroupholdtheviewthatstudentscanuseamobilephonebecauseitcanhelpustolearnmoreabouttheworld.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于議論文寫作，寫作時要按議論文格式寫。在寫作時應(yīng)承接短文開頭，介紹A、B小組的不同看法及理由；接下來介紹我們組的看法及理由。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來敘述內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時，分析A、B小組的不同看法；在描述理由時，應(yīng)分析詳細(xì)；并且分析小組的看法和理由等需要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。2．一場新冠病毒疫情在全世界蔓延，對各行各業(yè)影響很大，使人們對未來的工作選擇有了新的認(rèn)識和思考。請你以"Whatismydreamjob?"為題，用英語寫一篇短文，發(fā)表在學(xué)校英語手抄報上，談?wù)勀銓ξ磥砺殬I(yè)選擇的想法。內(nèi)容：1.疫情前的職業(yè)夢想和原因（2點）；2.疫情后的夢想職業(yè)和原因（2點）；3.現(xiàn)階段應(yīng)該怎么做（2點）。要求：1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語言規(guī)范，書寫清晰；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實的人名、學(xué)校名等信息；3.詞數(shù)80左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：scientist,engineer,policeman/policewoman,teacher,doctorWhatismydreamjob?Ihavemanydreams.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwillbeagoodstudent.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Whatismydreamjob?Ihavemanydreams.Iwantedtobeascientistbecausescientistscaninventmanyhigh-techproductstomakeourlifemoreconvenient.IalsowantedtobeateacherbecauseIliketogetalongwithchildrenanditisarespectablejob.Butatthebeginningof2020,COVID-19brokeoutsuddenlyandmydreamhaschangedsincethen.NowIwanttobeadoctorbecauseIwanttohelppeopleinneed.Whenourcountryandpeopleareintrouble,doctorsandnursesdevotethemselvestosavingpeople’slives.Theyareheroes.Iwillbeagoodstudentinordertomakemydreamcometrue.Iwillstudyhardfromnowonandgotoamedicalcollege.IhopeIcanrealizemydreamoneday.【詳解】題干解讀：這篇短文要求以Whatismydreamjob?為題，介紹一下自己理想的工作。審題可知，文章中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：首先介紹疫情之前自己理想的工作以及原因；然后介紹發(fā)生疫情之后，自己理想的工作發(fā)生了變化以及原因；最后簡述一下現(xiàn)階段應(yīng)該怎樣做來實現(xiàn)自己的理想。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主敘述，人稱是第一人稱或第三人稱。例文點評：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文章采用了兩段式結(jié)構(gòu)，第一段介紹了疫情前后自己的理想工作以及原因；第二段介紹了現(xiàn)階段自己如何努力實現(xiàn)自己的理想。短文敘述清晰、條理，理由充分、合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中用到了簡單句、狀語從句、賓語從句、非謂語動詞等句式或結(jié)構(gòu)，表達(dá)流暢，意思連貫。高分亮點：短語：getalongwith；atthebeginningof；sincethen；inneed；introuble；cometrue；fromnowon。句型：because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句；when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句；動詞不定式作賓語、目的狀語；hope后跟賓語從句；動名詞作賓語。3．假如你叫李華，你們學(xué)校剛剛開學(xué)，正在開展“HappyMonth”活動，請你以“LearntoBeHappy”為題，給學(xué)校英語廣播站寫一篇廣播稿，號召同學(xué)們返校后快樂生活。內(nèi)容包括:1.新冠疫情使學(xué)校延遲開學(xué);2.通過上網(wǎng)課學(xué)習(xí)語文、數(shù)學(xué)和英語等課程;3.“Happy,Month”活動和你的心情:4.如何快樂生活(至少2點)。寫作要求:1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語言規(guī)范，書寫清晰;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實的人名和學(xué)校名稱等信息；3.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：新型冠狀病毒COVID—19LearntoBeHappyGoodmorning,everyone!We’reveryhappytobebacktoschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeallofuscanlivehappilyinthisschool.Thankyouforyourlistening!【答案】例文LearntoBeHappyGoodmorning,everyone!I'mveryhappytobebacktoschool.TopreventtheCorid-19,ourschoolhasdelayed(putoff)theopeningofthisterm.Butwedidn'tstopstudying.OurschoolgaveusonlinecoursessuchasChinese,Math,Englishandsoon.Wewereveryhappy.Nowourschooliscarryingouttheplan“happyMonth”.Howtobehappy?First,Ithinkweshouldhavelifeaims,withlifeaims,wecanliveahappyandmeaningfullife.Then,wemustkeephealthy.What’smore,weshouldbereadytohelpothers.Ihopeallofuscanlivehappilyinthisschool.Thankyouforyourlistening!【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，假如你是李華，學(xué)校剛剛開學(xué)，正在開展“HappyMonth”活動，要求你以“LearntoBeHappy”為題，題干內(nèi)容提示，給學(xué)校英語廣播站寫一篇廣播稿，號召同學(xué)們返校后快樂生活。首先要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。2.例文點評：本例文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明。根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。3.高分亮點：短語：putoff，suchas，soon，keephealthy，bereadyto。句型：Ithinkweshouldhavelifeaims.我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該有生活目標(biāo)。Ithink后接賓語從句。What’smore,weshouldbereadytohelpothers.更重要的是，我們應(yīng)該準(zhǔn)備好幫助別人。bereadytodosth.準(zhǔn)備好做某事。4．全球新冠疫情依然嚴(yán)峻，而我國的疫情防控成就令人矚目，全國萬眾一心，團(tuán)結(jié)抗疫的畫面令我們永生難忘。你的美國筆友Michael想了解你對此的所見所聞和所思所想。請你根據(jù)下面的提示內(nèi)容，回一封郵件。提示：（所見所聞）我們政府采取了很多措施，執(zhí)行（carryout）隔離（quarantine）治療（reatment）的政策（policy）；興建（build）許多特殊的（special）醫(yī)院；許多優(yōu)秀的（excellent）醫(yī)護(hù)人員自愿（volunteer）去幫助災(zāi)區(qū)（disasterareas）.（所思所想）作為學(xué)生，我們要保護(hù)好自己，比如……（至少兩點）；希望全世界人民……。（worktogether；savemorelives）要求：1.80詞左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.句子通順，語意連貫，符合邏輯；3.必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，但不要逐字逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；4.務(wù)必書寫正確規(guī)范，卷面整潔。DearMichael,I’mgladtoreceiveyoure—mail.NowI’dliketosharemyopinionswithyou.SinceCOVID—19brokeout,ourgovernmenthastakenmanymeasures.First______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiMing【答案】例文DearMichael,I’mgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.NowI’dliketosharemyopinionswithyou.SinceCOVID-19brokeout,ourgovernmenthastakenmanymeasures.First,wehavecarriedoutquarantinetreatmentpolicy.Second,manyspecialhospitalshavebeenbuilt.Third,manyexcellentdoctorsandnursesvolunteeredtohelpthepeoplewholivedinthedisasterareas.Asstudents,wemustprotectourselves.Forexample,keepourhomecleanandoftenopenthewindowtokeepthefreshair.Trytoavoidgoingoutsideorgoingtoplaceswheretherearemanypeople.Washyourhandsasoftenaspossible,especiallybeforemealsandafterreturningfrompublicplaces.What’smore,weshouldwearamaskwhengoingout.IIhopethepeopleallovertheworldwillworktogethertosavemorelives.Bestwishes!Yours,LiMing【詳解】1.題干解讀：對于寫作題考生需認(rèn)真審題，全面了解寫作要求，理清思路，確定短文體裁、框架結(jié)構(gòu)和寫作內(nèi)容。本文要求就新冠疫情向美國筆友Michael寫信介紹自己的所見所聞和所思所想，屬于書信類寫作。寫作時需要注意格式正確，用第一人稱進(jìn)行敘述。2.例文點評：本文首先直入主題I’dliketosharemyopinionswithyou，然后分別介紹政府的三點防疫舉措和個人的防護(hù)措施，最后表達(dá)希望Ihopethepeopleallovertheworldwillworktogethertosavemorelives。本文是“總分總”結(jié)構(gòu)，以第一人稱為主，用一般現(xiàn)在時、一般過去時和現(xiàn)在完成時三種時態(tài)展開陳述；內(nèi)容充實，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，方法合理，表達(dá)流暢，條理清晰，是一篇優(yōu)秀的習(xí)作。3.高分亮點：高分短語：wouldliketodo,sharesth.withsb.,asstudents,stayathome,goout,carryout,volunteertodo,livein,forexample,trytodo,avoiddoing,asoftenaspossible,what’smore,allovertheworld.高分句型：1).Third,manyexcellentdoctorsandnursesvolunteeredtohelpthepeoplewholivedinthedisasterareas.（定語從句）2).Forexample,keepourhomecleanandoftenopenthewindowtokeepthefreshair.（并列祈使句結(jié)構(gòu)）3).Ihopethepeopleallovertheworldwillworktogethertosavemorelives.（賓語從句）【點睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。例文中，F(xiàn)irst,Second,Third,What’smore等詞的運用，增強(qiáng)了本文的條理性。二、書信作文5．中國扶貧基金會為了支援西部地區(qū)教育事業(yè)，將聘請澳大利亞外籍教師前往該地區(qū)任教英語。假如你是該地區(qū)希望中學(xué)九年級學(xué)生，名叫張華，請你給即將前往你學(xué)校的澳大利亞外籍教師Mr.Green寫一封信，歡迎他來任教，并簡單介紹學(xué)校和英語學(xué)習(xí)的情況。內(nèi)容包括：1.簡單介紹你們學(xué)校和班級的情況(地理位置，班級人數(shù)等)；2.你們在英語學(xué)習(xí)上遇到的困惑(請寫2點)；3.你們的希望或建議(請寫2點)。要求如下：1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語音規(guī)范，書寫清晰；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實的人名，學(xué)校名稱等信息；3.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：inthewestofChina西部地區(qū)；Australia澳大利亞DearMr.Green,WewarmlywelcomeyoutoteachusEnglishinXiWangMiddleSchool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】例文：DearMr.Green,WewarmlywelcomeyoutoteachusEnglishinXiWangMiddleSchool.IamastudentofGradeNineinHopeMiddleSchool.MynameisZhangHua.Nowletmeintroducemyschooltoyou.OurschoolisinasmallvillageinthewestofChina.It'shardtoliveherebecauseofpoverty.Therearefiveclassesinourschool.Therearefortystudentsinourclass.Thesechildrenareverylovely.WehavenoprofessionalEnglishteacherhere.TheteacherswhoteachothersubjectsteachusEnglish,soourEnglishisverypoor.MostofourEnglishpronunciationisnotright.IhopewecanhaveanEnglishteachertoteachusEnglish.Ihopethatthegovernmentwillinvestinourvillagesothatwecangetagoodeducation.Yours,ZhangHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文，要求以張華的名義給即將任教的外籍教師格林先生介紹學(xué)校和英語學(xué)習(xí)情況。內(nèi)容需包括三點：一是學(xué)校和班級情況；二是英語學(xué)習(xí)的困惑；三是表達(dá)希望和建議。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)以第一人稱來敘述書信內(nèi)容；時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，介紹學(xué)校和班級、自己存在的困惑以及建議和希望；寫作時注意按要點分段敘述，使文章有層次感和邏輯性。6．2020年3月3日是聯(lián)合國第七個"世界野生動植物日"，我國提出了"維護(hù)全球生命共同體"的主題。我們的世界因這些生物而豐富多彩、妙趣橫生。保護(hù)它們，就是守護(hù)我們的未來。下面，讓我們一起來聽聽熊貓惜惜的傾訴吧！假如你是熊貓惜惜，請根據(jù)以下信息給人類朋友寫一封80詞左右的書信。要求：1.信中包含所給信息內(nèi)容；2.適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。注意：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2.書信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫出，不計入總詞數(shù)。1.基本信息：13歲，來自四川，中國的象征；愛好（自主發(fā)揮）。2.我的煩惱：朋友少，家園常常遭到破壞……3.我的愿望或建議（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩條）。參考詞匯：symbol(n.象征)、destroy(v.破壞)Dearfriends,MynameisXixi._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Xixi【答案】例文：Dearfriends,MynameisXixi.I’moneofyourfavoriteanimals—Panda.IcomefromSichuan,China.Iam13yearsold.IamanationaltreasureofChinaandasymbolofChina.Iusuallyliketoplaywithmyfriends.Ialsolikeclimbingtreesandsittingonthetrees.Ilikebamboosbest.It’smyfavoritefood.ButI’vehadsomeproblemsrecently.MyhomeisoftenbrokenandIdon’thavemuchroomtomovearound.Myfriendsarefewerandfewerbecausesomepeoplehavedestroyedmyhome.ThereisnoonetoplaywithmeandIamverylonely.Myfavoritefoodisgettinglessandless.I’mreallysad.Ihopehumanfriendscanhelpme.Ihopethatpeoplecanprotecttheenvironmentandgivememorespacetolive.Ifyoucancutdownfewertrees,myfriendsandIwillbeveryhappy.Yours,Xixi【詳解】1.題干解讀：文章是一篇書信作文。主要是以熊貓惜惜的身份向人類寫一封信。先是介紹自己，然后告訴自己的煩惱以及期待和愿望。要把題目中給出的要求都寫進(jìn)去，要注意人稱之間的轉(zhuǎn)換和時態(tài)的應(yīng)用，還要注意語句之間的連貫。2.例文點評：文章分三段描寫。第一段是對自己簡單的介紹；第二段介紹自己的一些煩惱和憂慮；第三段寫自己的期望。整個文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整思路清晰，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思通俗易懂。3.高分亮點：短語：oneof；comefrom；playwith；likedoing；movearound；cutdown。句型：because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句；Ihope+賓語從句；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。三、話題作文7．某英語網(wǎng)站正在開展關(guān)于良好生活習(xí)慣的征文大賽，請以“GoodLivingHabitsMakeMe________”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文參加此次大賽。要求如下：1.補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題；2.征文應(yīng)包含第一節(jié)所有信息（1.What’syourfavoritefood?2.Howoftendoyouexercise?3.Howmanyhoursdoyousleepeverynight?4.Howdoyourelaxyourselfinyourdailylife?5.Whatdoyouthinkofyourlivinghabits?）；3.重點談?wù)劻己玫纳盍?xí)慣對你的積極影響和作用；4.征文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實的個人信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】[例文]GoodLivingHabitsMakeMeHealthierGoodlivinghabitsareimportantinourlives.Theyinfluenceusinmanyways.Ithinkgoodlivinghabitsmakemehealthier.Iusedtoprefermeattofruitorvegetables.ButnowItryallkindsoffood.What’smore,Ilikesports,andIexercisefor30minuteseveryday.Everyoneneedssleep.Ihaveeighttotenhours’sleepatnight.Withenoughsleepatnight,Icanbereadyforschoolactivities.InsparetimeI’dliketodosomereading.Itmakesmefeelrelaxed.Ithinkmylivinghabitsareprettyhealthy.Developinggoodlivinghabitswasquitedifficultformeatthebeginning,butnowIamusedtoitandenjoyit.Ilookmuchstrongerthanbefore.Ithinkitisgoodlivinghabitsthatmakemehealthierandhealthier.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為話題作文，要求補(bǔ)充完題目“GoodLivingHabitsMakeMe________”后寫一篇短文。文章時態(tài)用現(xiàn)在時或過去時，人稱用第一人稱。2.例文點評：例文分三段，第一段用于引出GoodLivingHabitsMakeMeHealthier這一話題，第二段則根據(jù)第一節(jié)的五個要點對自己的良好生活習(xí)慣進(jìn)行了描述，第三段則對自己的生活習(xí)慣進(jìn)行了評價并肯定了健康生活習(xí)慣給自己帶來的積極影響。例文層次分明，思路清晰，敘述流暢，文中用了許多高分句型及短語，為文章增色不少。3.高分亮點：短語：usedtodo，prefer…to…，allkindsof，what’smore，bereadyfor，atthebeginning。句型：（1）What’smore,Ilikesports,andIexercisefor30minuteseveryday.（and連接的并列句）（2）Ithinkgoodlivinghabitsmakemehealthier.（賓語從句）（3）Developinggoodlivinghabitswasquitedifficultformeatthebeginning,butnowIamusedtoitandenjoyit.（動名詞作主語）8．請將文章用0.5毫米黑色簽字筆寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。安全對于每個人來說都很重要。作為中學(xué)生,我們可能遇到哪些安全問題?該怎樣處理呢?校團(tuán)委決定組織一次安全教育主題班會,請根據(jù)以下要點提示,以HowtoKeepSafe為題寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿。中學(xué)生安全問題及對策一、交通安全:遵守交通規(guī)則。二、食品安全:注意飲食安全。三、活動安全:上下樓梯靠右行;體育鍛煉要小心:不允許私自下河游泳。四、交友安全:注意網(wǎng)絡(luò)交友安全。遇險建議遇到危險要保持冷靜,保證自身安全,然后及時報警或向家長、老師求助。寫作要求:1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整,要點齊全,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.表達(dá)通順,語言規(guī)范,書寫清晰;3.文中不能出現(xiàn)任何真實的人名、校名等信息;4.詞數(shù)80左右。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。HowtoKeepSafeHello,everyone.Safetyisveryimportantforus.Weshouldlearntoprotectourselves.Herearesomesuggestionsabouthowtokeepsafe.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,asstudents,wemustalwayskeepsafetyinmindandvalueourlives.【答案】例文HowtoKeepSafeHello,everyone.Safetyisveryimportantforus.Weshouldlearntoprotectourselves.Herearesomesuggestionsabouthowtokeepsafe.Firstly,wemustfollowthetrafficrules.Secondly,weshouldpayattentiontothefoodsafety.Besurenottoeattoomuchjunkfood.Thirdly,whenwegoupstairsordownstairs,weshouldkeeptotheright.Becarefulwhiledoingsports.Remembernottoswimintheriveralone.What'smore,we'dbetternotmakefriendsonline.Wemuststayawayfromdangerouspeoplearound.Ifwegetintotrouble,wemustkeepcalmandsafefirstandthencallthepolice,theteachersorparentsforhelp.Inaword,asstudents,wemustalwayskeepsafetyinmindandvalueourlives.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。以“如何保持安全”為題展開描述，文中闡述中學(xué)生的安全問題及對策，以及遇險的建議。2.例文點評：本文采用的是第一人稱，時態(tài)采用的一般現(xiàn)在時。準(zhǔn)確運用事態(tài)，并保持主謂一致。句子通順，邏輯性強(qiáng)。3.高分亮點：短語：payattentionto注意；toomuch太多；what’smore而且；hadbetter(not)dosth最好（不）做某事；inaword總之。句子：Herearesomesuggestionsabouthowtokeepsafe用的是倒裝句；Besurenottoeattoomuchjunkfood用的是祈使句；whenwegoupstairsordownstairs,weshouldkeeptotheright中when引導(dǎo)的是時間狀語從句。2019年一、材料作文1．假如你是遵義育才中學(xué)的大明，你們學(xué)校與上海陽光中學(xué)正在實施"山與海對話"（

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