2025年八省聯(lián)考高考英語讀后續(xù)寫寫作指導(dǎo)課件（含范文）

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judgeabookbyitscover.2025屆八省聯(lián)考讀后續(xù)寫的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)綜述

評(píng)分:主要從續(xù)寫內(nèi)容、詞匯語法、篇章結(jié)構(gòu)三方面考慮。1.創(chuàng)造情節(jié)的質(zhì)量、續(xù)寫的完整性及與原文情境的融洽度。2.詞匯、語法的準(zhǔn)確性、恰當(dāng)性及多樣性。3.上下文的銜接和全文的連貫性。201解讀文本寫作步驟過濾出有效信息，把握文章要素。02縝密構(gòu)思文章中心內(nèi)容、段首句相結(jié)合。情節(jié)發(fā)展是主體，細(xì)節(jié)描寫是關(guān)鍵。03打磨寫作快速初步成稿，然后升級(jí)詞匯與豐富句式，最后規(guī)范謄寫。3讀什么？情節(jié)(plots)語言(language)伏線(clues)41.解讀文本，奠定續(xù)寫基礎(chǔ)who;when;where;what;why;how語言風(fēng)格；體現(xiàn)主題事件或推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展的keywords推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展，體現(xiàn)主旨的句子。52.構(gòu)思情節(jié)——依據(jù)兩段首句推理情節(jié)發(fā)展（1）研讀、翻譯好兩個(gè)段首句。兩個(gè)段首句是重要的續(xù)寫提示，在很大程度上指明了情節(jié)的發(fā)展方向。對(duì)段首句分析，可有效地推理續(xù)寫的主要情節(jié)。（2）寫好三個(gè)銜接句（3）寫好升華句。關(guān)注與文章開頭的遙相呼應(yīng)（線索/意圖），根據(jù)具體語境體現(xiàn)正能量。第一段段首句后的銜接句第一段尾句第二段段首句后的銜接句63.打磨寫作*適當(dāng)升級(jí)詞匯、句式*在不影響主要情節(jié)的前提下，可合理地增加部分次要情節(jié)*可依據(jù)需要增加適當(dāng)細(xì)節(jié)描寫（環(huán)境，心理，外貌等）替換高級(jí)詞匯、短語、句式表達(dá)使用adj/adv/with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)/非謂語/復(fù)合句等豐富表達(dá)使用積累的地道短語和名人名言注意不要添加新角色7閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫一段話。第一步：通讀全文，理清脈絡(luò)，把握語言特色和敘述風(fēng)格。Iwas

in

Philadelphia

for

a

conference

when

I

saw

an

ad

in

thehotel.

A

nearby

theater

was

showing

a

documentary(紀(jì)錄片)

aboutseveral

local

animal

shelters

that

were

helping

to

save

abandoneddogs

across

the

country.

I

love

animals,

and

I

felt

an

urge

to

go

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fundraising

event.

However,

none

of

my

co-workers

would

gowith

me,

and

Iwas

worried

about

walking

on

the

street

alone

atnight.Iresigned

myself

to

spending

the

evening

in

my

hotelroom,

but

as

soon

as

Igot

back

to

my

room.I

felt

restless

andbored.The

theater

where

the

event

was

taking

place

wasonly

about

five

blocks

from

the

hotel,

and

the

area

around

thehotel

didn’t

seem

particularly

dangerous.

So,

I

decided

to

brave

it.Igathered

up

my

wallet

and

room

key

and

set

off.whenatthenightwherehoteltheater,InPhiladelphia（費(fèi)城）why（起因）I,ananimal-lover,wantedtoseeadocumentaryaboutsavingdogsatanearbytheater,butnobodywentwithme.Consideringmysafety,Ishouldhavegivenupit.Butafteramentalstruggle,Idecidedtogoalone.8Itwasalreadygettingdarkandthestreetswerenearlydeserted.Imanagedtofindthestreetthetheaterwason,butwhenIturnedthecorner,Istoppedinshock.Infrontofthetheaterwereagroupofbikers——verybig,tough-lookingbikers.I’veknownlotsofmotorcycleenthusiastsandmostarenicepeople.However,inthiscase,Iwasawomanallalone,inastrangeneighborhood,atnight,andthereweretwentyorsoverylargemen-allwearinginsigniathatindicatedtheywereinsomesortofclub-standingbeforeme.Warningbellsbegantosoundinmyhead,andmyheartwaspounding.WasIattherighttheater?HadImisreadthedateoftheevent?who:I(awoman);agroupofbikers(big;tough-looking面露兇狠的)空無一人的；廢棄的環(huán)境描寫；心理描寫9AsignoutsidethetheatertoldmethatIwasintherightplaceontherightevening.Nevertheless,IwonderedifIshouldrushbacktomyhotelinsteadofwalkingthroughthatcrowdofbikers.IfinallydecidedthatIwouldbesaferinsidethetheater.Hopefully,thebikerswouldhavegoneawaybythetimethefilmwasover.上文的環(huán)境描寫和此處大量的心里描寫，包括地點(diǎn)的變換，表現(xiàn)出主人公“I”一路上對(duì)這群“bikers”的緊張和害怕

。Where:從street到了theaterUsefulexpressions:neverthelessadv.然而insteadof代替；而不是bythetime到…時(shí)候

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I

hurried

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theater,

only

to

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there

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bikersinside.

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When

the

film

began,

I

realized

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the

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____________________________________________________我匆匆沖進(jìn)劇院，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)里面甚至有更多車手。當(dāng)電影開始時(shí)，我意識(shí)到這些車手們是一個(gè)動(dòng)物救援小組。注意：（1）翻譯完兩個(gè)段首句可發(fā)現(xiàn)，誤會(huì)是在第二段才解開，因此第一段續(xù)寫內(nèi)容不能寫解開誤會(huì)。（2）主人公的心理變化是提示寫作的重要線索。11寫好三個(gè)銜接句。Paragraph

1:

I

hurried

into

the

theater,

only

to

find

there

were

even

more

bikersinside.

___________________________________________

我匆匆沖進(jìn)劇院，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)里面甚至有更多車手。（1）第一段首句后的銜接句：_________________________________________________注意原文最后通過環(huán)境描寫和心理描寫，可以看出主人公已經(jīng)非常害怕和緊張，覺得進(jìn)入劇院更安全，但她進(jìn)入劇院后看到更多的車手，此時(shí)她的心里應(yīng)該是…Atthatmoment,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes,withmymindimmediatelygettingblankandmymouthopeningwide.With的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，更進(jìn)一步驚慌，到茫然無措。12寫好三個(gè)銜接句。（2）第一段尾句（必須能和第二段首句合理銜接）：_________________________________________________Paragraph

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When

the

film

began,

I

realized

that

the

bikers

were

an

animalrescue

group.當(dāng)電影開始時(shí)，我意識(shí)到這些車手們是一個(gè)動(dòng)物救援小組。Afterawhile,thelightsinthetheaterdimmed,thecurtainopened,andthepeopleinthetheaterbecamequiet,whichmeantthatthemoviehadbegun.細(xì)節(jié)描寫——燈光變暗；幕布拉開；人們安靜；電影開場13寫好三個(gè)銜接句。Paragraph

2:

When

the

film

began,

I

realized

that

the

bikers

were

an

animalrescue

group.當(dāng)電影開始時(shí)，我意識(shí)到這些車手們是一個(gè)動(dòng)物救援小組。（3）第二段首句后的銜接句：______________________________________________________第二段開頭誤會(huì)解開，本文以“I”的遭遇和心理感受并行展開，此處已有情節(jié)發(fā)展，那么我們的續(xù)寫隨之則應(yīng)寫…?Withofstartrecallinghowridiculousmyoverreactionhadbeeninstantlyhelpedmenolongerfeeldangerous.14寫好結(jié)尾句：①結(jié)局性：________________________________________________________________________________②啟示性：________________________________________________________________________________故事的結(jié)局，“I”作為一個(gè)喜愛小動(dòng)物的人，發(fā)現(xiàn)了這樣一個(gè)group,可能會(huì)捐款？加入？…？“I”前文一直以為bikers很可怕，因?yàn)樗麄僢ig，toughlooking，結(jié)果卻發(fā)現(xiàn)他們是愛護(hù)動(dòng)物的好人，這說明?15Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Atthatmoment,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes,withmymindimmediatelygettingblankandmymouthopeningwide.SofrozenandstillatthetheatergatewasI,whichmadethebikersinsideallthrowcasttheirgazesonmethatIfeltnothingbutmyheartpoundingevenmorestrongly,completelyunawareofwhatactionIwouldadopt.Iwasnotsurehowmuchtimehadpassed,butonlygreetedbyeachofthebikercominginfromtheoutsidewhoIhadencounteredinthedesertedstreet.....Afterawhile,thelightsinthetheaterdimmed,thecurtainopened,andthepeopleinthetheaterbecamequiet,whichmeantthatthemoviehadbegun.我匆匆走進(jìn)電影院，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)里面還有更多騎機(jī)車的人。那一刻，我簡直不敢相信自己的眼睛,我的腦海里頓時(shí)一片空白，嘴巴張得大大的。我一動(dòng)不動(dòng)地站在劇院門口，里面的車手們都向我投來異樣的眼光，我只覺得我的心跳得更厲害了，完全不知道我將采取什么行動(dòng)。我不知道時(shí)間過了多久,只看到我在空蕩蕩的街道上遇到的每一個(gè)從外面進(jìn)來的車手都向我打招呼....不一會(huì)兒，劇院里的燈光變暗，幕布也隨之拉開，劇場里的人也安靜下來,這意味著電影開始了。16Whenthefilmbegan,|realizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.Withofstartrecallinghowridiculousmyoverreactionhadbeeninstantlyhelpedmenolongerfeeldangerous.Naturally,bythelightfromthefilm,Ifoundaseatandsatnexttoatough-lookbiker.Afterashortconversationwithhim,Iexpressedmywisht