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高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)母子間的沖突與意外1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文OneSaturday,athirteen-year-oldboynamedTimwashangingoutwithhisfriendsatalocalcafe.Timandhisfriendswouldusuallyspendtheentireweekendtogether,beforemeetingagainthefollowingweekwhileinschool.Thatday,Tim’smomGloriawantedtochangeuphisroutinebyinvitinghimtowatchanewsuperheromoviewithher.GloriakeptcallingTimonhiscellphone,buthewouldn’tpickup.So,shedecidedtomakeherwaytothecafe,knowingthatthiswaswhereTimandhisfriendsusuallyhadlunchonSaturdays.4續(xù)寫原文WhenshespottedTimandhisfriends,shemadeherwaytothem,onlytoseeTim’sfriendsgiggling.“Yourgrandmother’scometopickyouup,Tim!”theyteased.Timglared(怒視)athismotherandwalkeduptohertostopherfromgoinganycloser.“Whatareyoudoinghere?”!hescoldedher.“You’reembarrassingmeinfrontofmyfriends!”“Ijustwantedtoaskifyouwantedtowatchamoviewithme,”shesmiled,tryingtoholdhishand.Timshrugged(聳肩)offherhands.“Leavemealone!I’mwithmyfriends!”hetoldher.Gloriawalkedbackhomesadly.WhenTimgothomethatnight,itwasalreadyhalfpastten.Hewentstraighttohisroom,notevenacknowledgingGloria’spresenceinthelivingroom.“What’sthematter,Tim?”Gloriaaskedhim.“Whyisitthatyoudon’tlikebeingwithmeanymore?I’mworriedaboutyou,Tim.Ibarelyknowwhat’sgoingoninyourlife!”shesaid,tryingtowalkclosertohim.5續(xù)寫原文“You’resuchanold,boringwoman!Whydidyouevengivebirthtome?!”heyelled.GloriafeltapaininherchestafterhearingTimyellatherthatway.Beforeshecouldrespond,Timgrabbedhisbackpackandranoutthedoor.“Tim!”Gloriacalledout.Timrodeonhisbikeandleftthestreet.Gloriatriedcallingoutandchasingafterhim,buthewastoofast.Then,shefaintedinfrontofoneofherneighbor’shouses.6段首句Paragraph1:WhenTimgothomelatethatnight,hesawaneighborattheirdoor.Paragraph2:Afterridingforhalfanhour,Timarrivedatthehospital.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了十三歲的蒂姆在周六和朋友在咖啡館玩耍,媽媽格洛麗亞想邀請他看電影,卻遭到蒂姆拒絕。蒂姆對媽媽態(tài)度惡劣,言語傷人。媽媽傷心回家后暈倒,蒂姆回家發(fā)現(xiàn)鄰居在門口。蒂姆得知媽媽被送往醫(yī)院,急忙趕去。點(diǎn)1:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語;點(diǎn)2:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點(diǎn)3:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首,續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語;點(diǎn)4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:WhenTimgothomelatethatnight,hesawaneighborattheirdoor.蒂姆深夜回家,看到鄰居在門口。鄰居告訴他媽媽暈倒被送去了醫(yī)院。蒂姆心里一驚,后悔自己剛才對媽媽的態(tài)度。他騎上自行車飛速往醫(yī)院趕去,路上不斷回憶起媽媽平時(shí)對自己的關(guān)心和照顧。到了醫(yī)院,他看到媽媽躺在病床上,臉色蒼白。蒂姆走到媽媽身邊,淚水奪眶而出,輕輕握住媽媽的手。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2:Afterridingforhalfanhour,Timarrivedatthehospital.蒂姆坐在媽媽床邊,想著媽媽的話。他意識到自己對媽媽太冷漠了,一直忽略了媽媽的感受。他決定以后要多關(guān)心媽媽,不再讓媽媽傷心。當(dāng)媽媽醒來后,蒂姆緊緊抱住媽媽,向她道歉。媽媽看到蒂姆的轉(zhuǎn)變,欣慰地笑了。從那以后,蒂姆和媽媽的關(guān)系變得更加親密。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)WhenTimgothomelatethatnight,hesawaneighborattheirdoor.Theneighbortoldhimthathismotherhadfaintedandbeensenttothehospital.Timwasshockedandimmediatelyfeltapangofregretforhisharshwordstowardshismother.Hequicklyhoppedonhisbikeandpedaledasfastashecouldtowardsthehospital.Alongtheway,hewasfilledwiththoughtsofhismother'sloveandcare.Whenhearrivedatthehospital,herushedtohismother'sroomandsawherlyingonthebed,lookingpaleandweak.Hewalkeduptoherandgentlytookherhand,hiseyesfilledwithtears.14范文呈現(xiàn)Afterridingforhalfanhour,Timarrivedatthehospital.Hesatbesidehismother'sbed,thinkingaboutherwords.Herealizedhowselfishhehadbeenandhowmuchhehadhurthismother.Hedecidedtochangehisattitudeandbemorecaringtowardsher.Whenhismotherwokeup,Timhuggedhertightlyandapologized.Hismotherwashappytoseethechangeinhim.Fromthenon,Timandhismotherhadacloserrelationship.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)WhenTimgothomelatethatnight,hesawaneighborattheirdoor.Theneighborinformedhimthathismotherhadfaintedandbeentakentothehospital.Shockedandremorseful,Timimmediatelyhoppedonhisbikeandpedaledasfastashecouldtowardsthehospital.Duringtheride,memoriesofhismother'scareandloveflashedthroughhismind.Hethoughtabouthowshehadalwaysbeenthereforhim,andhowhehadbeensothoughtlessandunkind.Ashearrivedatthehospital,herushedtohismother'sroom,hisheartpoundingwithworry.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Afterridingforhalfanhour,Timarrivedatthehospital.Hesatbesidehismother'sbed,lookingatherwithguiltandregret.Heknewhehadtomakethingsright.Whenhismotherwokeup,hegentlytookherhandandsaid,“Mom,I'msosorryforbeingsomeantoyou.IloveyouandIneedyou.”Hismothersmiledweakly,hereyesfilledwithloveandrelief.Fromthatmomenton,Timunderstoodtheimportanceofcherishinghismotherandtheirre
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