高中英語讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+祖母的愛成就舞會閃耀時(shí)刻+課件-2025屆高三上學(xué)期英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)祖母的愛，成就舞會閃耀時(shí)刻1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Lizawasayounggirlwithbrighteyesandahopefulsmile.Shewassittingonherbedwithherlaptop.Shescrolledthroughanonlinestore,hereyeslightingupatthesightofabeautifuldress.Itwasadesignergown(女禮服),shiningwithsequins(亮片)Butitwaswayoutofherbudget.Shesighedandlookedoverathermother,whowasreadingabookinthearmchairbythewindow.“Mom,canIpleasegetthisdressformyprom(正式舞會)?It’sperfect!”Lizapleaded,showingthescreentohermother.Hermotherglancedatthepriceandshookherhead.“Liza,that’stooexpensive.Wecan’taffordtospendthatmuchonadressyou’llwearonce.”4續(xù)寫原文“But,Mom.Everyoneatschoolistalkingabouttheirdesignerdresses.Idon’twanttobetheonlyonewithoutone,”Lizaargued,hervoicerisingwithfrustration.Hermothersighed,tryingtostaycalm.“Honey,Iunderstand,butspendingthatmuchmoneyonadressisn’tpractical.Besides,someonehasasurpriseforyoutoday.Youmightnotneedtobuyadress.”Lizalitup.“Asurprise?Whatkindofsurprise?”Hermothersmiledmysteriously.“You’llsee.Justbepatient.”Liza’sgrandmother,palm,enteredthehouse,holdingapackagewrappedneatlyingiftpaper.Pam’seyestwinkledassheapproachedLiza.“Hello,dear!Ibroughtyousomethingspecial,”palmsaidwarmly,handingthepackagetoLiza.5續(xù)寫原文Liza’scuriositygotthebetterofher,andsheeagerlytoreopenthepackage.Insidewasabeautifuldress,handcraftedwithfinedetailsandcare.“Liza,tryiton.Itwasmadebyyourgrandmother,thoughnotadesigner,butitisasignoflovefromher,”hermothersaid.Lizaputonthedressandstoodinfrontofthemirror,withahappysmileonherface.“Iwillgototheprominthis!Myclassmate’swillbeenviousofme!”6段首句Paragraph1：Intheevening,Lizamerrilywalkedintothehallwiththedress,accompaniedbyhergrandmother.Paragraph2：Hearingwhatherclassmatesaid,Lizaproudlytookhergrandmother’shandandintroducedhertothem.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了利薩在網(wǎng)上看中一條昂貴的設(shè)計(jì)師禮服，希望能穿著去參加正式舞會，但母親表示價(jià)格超出預(yù)算，無法購買。母親稱有人會給利薩驚喜，或許她不用買新禮服。隨后，祖母帶著親手制作的精美禮服來訪，利薩穿上后非常滿意，決定穿著它去參加舞會。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

Intheevening,Lizamerrilywalkedintothehallwiththedress,accompaniedbyhergrandmother.晚上，利薩穿著那件禮服，在祖母的陪伴下，興高采烈地走進(jìn)了舞會大廳。大廳里燈光璀璨，五彩斑斕的燈光交織在一起，如夢如幻。音樂聲悠揚(yáng)動聽，節(jié)奏感十足，人們隨著音樂翩翩起舞。利薩一走進(jìn)來，就吸引了眾多目光。她的禮服在燈光下閃爍著柔和的光芒，精致的手工細(xì)節(jié)讓它顯得與眾不同。同學(xué)們紛紛投來羨慕的目光，幾個(gè)女生圍上來，不停地夸贊她的禮服漂亮。利薩心里樂開了花，她優(yōu)雅地和同學(xué)們打招呼，同時(shí)緊緊挽著祖母的胳膊，感覺自己是世界上最幸福的人。就在這時(shí)，一個(gè)同學(xué)好奇地問道：“利薩，你這禮服是哪個(gè)大牌設(shè)計(jì)師的作品呀？簡直太驚艷了！”11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Hearingwhatherclassmatesaid,Lizaproudlytookhergrandmother’shandandintroducedhertothem.聽到同學(xué)這么問，利薩驕傲地拉起祖母的手，向大家介紹道：“這可不是什么大牌設(shè)計(jì)師的作品，而是我最親愛的祖母親手為我做的！”同學(xué)們聽后，都露出了驚訝和敬佩的表情。利薩接著說：“我原本想要一條昂貴的設(shè)計(jì)師禮服，可媽媽說太貴了。沒想到祖母給了我這個(gè)驚喜，她花費(fèi)了很多時(shí)間和精力，一針一線地為我縫制了這件禮服。每一個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)都飽含著她對我的愛?！蓖瑢W(xué)們紛紛點(diǎn)頭，對祖母的手藝贊不絕口。祖母有些不好意思地笑了笑，但眼中滿是自豪。利薩在舞會上盡情地跳舞，她知道，自己身上穿著的不僅是一件漂亮的禮服，更是祖母滿滿的愛。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Intheevening,Lizamerrilywalkedintothehallwiththedress,accompaniedbyhergrandmother.Thehallwasbrightlylit,withcolorfullightsinterweaving,creatingadream-likeatmosphere.Themusicwasmelodiousandfullofrhythm,andpeopleweredancinggracefullytothemusic.AssoonasLizaentered,sheattractednumerouseyes.Herdressglistenedwithasoftlightunderthelights,andthedelicatehand-madedetailsmadeitstandout.Herclassmatescastenviousglancesather,andseveralgirlssurroundedher,constantlypraisingherdress.Lizawasoverjoyed.Shegreetedherclassmatesgracefullywhiletightlyholdinghergrandmother'sarm,feelinglikethehappiestpersonintheworld.Justthen,aclassmateaskedcuriously,"Liza,whichfamousdesigner'sworkisthisdress?It'ssimplyamazing!"14范文呈現(xiàn)Hearingwhatherclassmatesaid,Lizaproudlytookhergrandmother’shandandintroducedhertothem."Thisisn'tadressfromafamousdesigner.Itwasmadebymydearestgrandmotherwithherownhands!"Herclassmatesshowedexpressionsofsurpriseandadmiration.Lizacontinued,"Ioriginallywantedanexpensivedesignerdress,butmymomsaiditwastooexpensive.Unexpectedly,mygrandmothergavemethissurprise.Shespentalotoftimeandenergysewingthisdressstitchbystitch.Everydetailisfilledwithherloveforme."Herclassmatesnoddedinagreement,fullofpraiseforhergrandmother'scraftsmanship.Hergrandmothersmiledshyly,buthereyeswerefullofpride.Lizadancedheartilyattheprom,knowingthatthedressshewaswearingwasnotonlybeautifulbutalsofullofhergrandmother'slove.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Intheevening,Liza,radiatingjoy,enteredthegrandhallinherexquisitedress,accompaniedbyherbeaminggrandmother.Thehall,ablazewithresplendentlights,reverberatedwithlivelymusic,ascouplestwirledgracefullyonthedancefloor.ThemomentLizasteppedin,alleyesweredrawntoher.Herdress,amasterpieceofhandiwork,shimmeredwithawarmglow,settingherapartfromthecrowd.Herclassmates,filledwithadmiration,flockedaroundher,showeringherwithcompliments.Liza,beamingwithpride,gracefullyacknowledgedtheirpraisewhilekeepingafirmholdonhergrandmother'sarm.Amidstthecommotion,acuriousclassmatepipedup,"Liza,thisdressisastunner!Whichrenowneddesignercraftedit?"16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Hearingthisquery,Liza,withasenseofdeeppride,graspedhergrandmother'shandandpresentedhertothegroup."Thisdressisn'ttheworkofahigh-enddesigner;it'salaboroflovefrommydeargrandmother!"Herclassmates,visiblytakenaback,werequicktoexpresstheiradmira