讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+童年海濱樂園歸來時變了模樣+課件-2025屆高三上學(xué)期英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)童年海濱樂園，歸來時變了模樣1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文“Judy,hurryup!Let’sgotothebeach!”Thatwasafamiliarmorningcallfrommyolderbrother,Sirin.Hearingthat,Iwouldspringupquicklyandwewouldsetoffonourjourney.RaisedbyourgrandparentsinSavanna,weexperiencedourhappiestmomentsthere.Nestledbetweenthemountainsandthesea,withitslushgreentrees,crystal-likeocean,andclearbluesky,Savannawaslikeasmallvillagefromafairytale.SirinandIoftenenjoyedthegentleseabreezeasweexploredthebreathtakingcoast,withtheendless,openwaterbesideusandthevast,clearskyoverhead.Wefeltasenseoffreedomtowanderthesandybeachorexperiencetheexcitementofsailingouttosea,delightingintheawe-inspiringbeautyofnature’swonders.Whenwegrewtired,leisurelywalkingonthesoft,warmsandstocollectunique,fascinatingseashellsbroughtusadifferentkindofpeacefuljoy.Thefriendly,warmheartedvillagerstreateduslikefamily,oftensharingtheirfreshly-caughtseafoodwithus.4續(xù)寫原文Threeyearslater,weweretakenawayfromthevillagetoreceiveabettereducationbyourparents.Occupiedwithourstudy,werarelyvisitedourbelovedgrandparents,onlycallingthemoccasionally.Wegraduallyadaptedtothefast-pacedcitylifeandfounditmoreefficientandconvenient.Wheneverwehadanappetiteforseafood,ourdadwouldsimplyorderitthroughhisphone,anditwouldbedeliveredtoourdoorstepwithinminutes.However,deepwithinus,wesometimeslongedforthesimplepleasuresofvillagelife.Weweretoldbyourgrandparentsthatmoreandmoretouristsfloodedintothevillage,whichstrengthenedourdesiretoreturn.So,whentheeagerly-awaitedsummervacationarrivedthisyear,wefinallymadeourdreamtripbacktoourchildhoodparadise.Aftergreetingourgrandparentswithhugsandsmiles,weeagerlyheadedtowardsthesun-kissedseasidetoreliveourcherishedmemories.5段首句Paragraph1：However,whatwesawshockedus.Paragraph2：HearingGrandfather’swords,wecouldn’twaittodosomethingtotacklethepollution.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8朱迪和哥哥西琳在薩凡納的祖父母家度過了快樂的童年，那里山海環(huán)繞、風(fēng)景如畫。他們常漫步沙灘、出海航行，村民也十分友善。三年后，為接受更好教育，他們被父母接到城市，逐漸適應(yīng)了快節(jié)奏生活，但內(nèi)心仍對鄉(xiāng)村生活有所懷念。得知村里游客增多，今年暑假，他們終于重返童年的樂園。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

However,whatwesawshockedus.然而，眼前的景象讓我們大為震驚。曾經(jīng)那片清澈見底的大海，如今竟漂浮著各種各樣的垃圾，有塑料瓶、包裝袋，甚至還有破舊的漁網(wǎng)。沙灘上也不再是干凈的細(xì)沙，而是被各種雜物覆蓋。原本在海邊嬉戲的孩子們，如今都只能在離海較遠(yuǎn)的地方玩耍，臉上少了往日的歡笑。我們沿著記憶中的小路走去，發(fā)現(xiàn)那些曾經(jīng)熟悉的小店鋪，如今也變得雜亂無章。看到這一切，我們的心情變得異常沉重，怎么也沒想到，短短幾年時間，我們心愛的海濱村莊竟變成了這副模樣。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：HearingGrandfather’swords,wecouldn’twaittodosomethingtotacklethepollution.聽了爺爺?shù)脑?，我們迫不及待地想要做點(diǎn)什么來解決污染問題。我們首先聯(lián)系了村里的環(huán)保組織，和他們一起制定了詳細(xì)的清理計劃。接著，我們在村里發(fā)起了環(huán)保宣傳活動，向村民和游客們講解海洋污染的危害。我們還組織了一場海灘清潔行動，吸引了許多村民和游客的參與。大家齊心協(xié)力，拿著垃圾袋和工具，認(rèn)真清理著海灘上的每一處垃圾。經(jīng)過幾天的努力，海灘漸漸恢復(fù)了往日的整潔。看著干凈的沙灘和逐漸清澈的海水，我們心中充滿了成就感，也更加堅定了守護(hù)這片土地的決心。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)However,whatwesawshockedus.Theoncecrystal-clearoceanwasnowcoveredwithallsortsofgarbage,fromplasticbottlesandbagstooldfishingnets.Thesandybeachwasnolongerclean,litteredwithallkindsofdebris.Thechildrenwhousedtoplayjoyfullybytheseanowhadtostayfarawayfromthewater,theirfaceslackingtheusualsmiles.Aswewalkedalongthefamiliarpath,wefoundthatthesmallshopsweonceknewsowellwerenowinamess.Witnessingallthesechanges,wefeltextremelyheavy-hearted.Wesimplycouldn'tbelievethatinjustafewyears,ourbelovedcoastalvillagehadbeentransformedintosuchastate.13范文呈現(xiàn)HearingGrandfather’swords,wecouldn’twaittodosomethingtotacklethepollution.First,wegotintouchwiththelocalenvironmentalprotectionorganizationandworkedtogetherwiththemtoformulateadetailedcleaningplan.Then,welaunchedanenvironmentalawarenesscampaigninthevillage,explainingtheharmofoceanpollutiontobothvillagersandtourists.Wealsoorganizedabeachclean-upactivity,whichattractedtheparticipationofmanyvillagersandtourists.Everyoneworkedtogether,carryinggarbagebagsandtools,andcarefullycleaningeverybitoftrashonthebeach.Afterseveraldaysofhardwork,thebeachgraduallyregaineditsformercleanliness.Lookingatthecleansandandtheincreasinglyclearseawater,wefeltagreatsenseofachievement,andourdeterminationtoprotectthislandbecameevenstronger.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)However,whatgreetedoureyesleftusutterlyshocked.Theocean,onceasclearascrystal,wasnowmarredbyaseaofgarbage,withplasticbottlesbobbingonthesurface,bagsflutteringinthewaves,andoldfishingnetstanglinghaphazardly.Thesandybeach,whichhadbeentheepitomeofpurityinourmemories,wasnowstrewnwithdebris,renderingitunrecognizable.Thechildrenwhousedtofrolicmerrilyalongtheshorenowlingeredatadistance,theirfacesdevoidoftheexuberantsmilesweremembered.Aswemadeourwayalongtheonce-familiarpath,thesmallshopsthathadonceaddedcharmtothevillagenowstoodindisarray.Thesightofallthesechangesfilledourheartswithaprofoundsenseofsadness.Littledidweexpectthatinjustafewshortyears,ourcherishedcoastalhavenwouldbereducedtosuchadismalstate.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)HearingGrandfather’swords,aburningdesiretocombatthepollutionwelledupwithinus,andwewastednotimeintakingaction.Initially,wereachedouttothelocalenvironmentalprotectionorganization,collaboratingcloselytodeviseameticulouscleaningstrategy.Subsequently,wespearheadedanenvironmentalawarenessdrivethroughoutthevillage,usingvividillustrationsandheartfeltappealstoconveythedireconsequencesofoceanpollutiontobothvillagersandtourists.Moreover,weorganizeda