進(jìn)階練15 圖表作文（滿分范文）專練-新高考英語一輪總復(fù)習(xí)（上海專用）（解析版）

PAGE1PAGE2進(jìn)階練15圖表作文（滿分范文）專練（解析版）學(xué)校:___________姓名：___________班級：___________考號：___________一、圖表作文1．（2022秋·上?！じ呷虾Ｊ邢蛎髦袑W(xué)?？茧A段練習(xí)）GuidedWritingDirections:

WriteanEnglishcompositionin120–150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設(shè)你是中華中學(xué)學(xué)生姚平，最近參加了一項(xiàng)研究性學(xué)習(xí)調(diào)研，課題為“父母是否以子女為榮”。通過調(diào)研你校學(xué)生及其父母，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)雙方對此問題的看法有差異（數(shù)據(jù)如圖所示）。根據(jù)圖表寫一份報(bào)告，在報(bào)告中，你必須：1.描述調(diào)研數(shù)據(jù)；2.分析可能導(dǎo)致這一結(jié)果的原因?！敬鸢浮縍ecently，wemadeasurveyaboutwhethertheparentsagreethattheyareproudoftheirchildren．Theresultshowsthat80%ofparentsareproudoftheirchildrenwhileonly60%ofchildrenholdthesameopinion．Accordingtothesurvey，wecanconcludethatthenumberofparentswhoapprovedtheideais20%morethanofchildren．Thereseemstobetwocausesaswetriedtofigureoutwhatledtothissubtledifference．First，conservativeChineseparentsareneveraccustomedtoconveyingdirectlyhowmuchtheyareproudoftheirchildren．Thistendencytoconcealfeelingshardlyhelpschildrendevelopastrongsenseofself-confidence．Second，thecurrenteducationsystemexcessivelyemphasizesthevalueofacademicperformance，thusforcingchildrentoextensivelybelievethatonlybyachievingexcellentscorescantheymaketheirparentsproud．Thisbiasunfairlyunderminesthesignificanceoftalentsforartandsports，whicheasilyfrustrateschildrenandrendersthemmorelikelytounderestimatethemselves．Withoutthegenuineencouragementfromparentsandthereversalofexam-orientededucationalmethods，akidwouldneverendupwithapositivegrown-up．【分析】這是一篇說明文。要求考生根據(jù)圖表寫一份報(bào)告【詳解】第一步：審題體裁：說明文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.描述調(diào)研數(shù)據(jù)；2.分析可能導(dǎo)致這一結(jié)果的原因。第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）madeasurvey，beproudof,heldthesameopinion,figureout,beneveraccustomedto,developastrongsenseof,emphasizethevalueof,endupwith第三步：連詞成句1.Recently，wemadeasurveyaboutwhethertheparentsagreethattheyareproudoftheirchildren．2.Theresultshowsthat80%ofparentsareproudoftheirchildrenwhileonly60%ofchildrenholdthesameopinion．3.Accordingtothesurvey，wecanconcludethatthenumberofparentswhoapprovedtheideais20%morethanofchildren．4.Thereseemstobetwocausesaswetriedtofigureoutwhatledtothissubtledifference．5.First，conservativeChineseparentsareneveraccustomedtoconveyingdirectlyhowmuchtheyareproudoftheirchildren．6.Thistendencytoconcealfeelingshardlyhelpschildrendevelopastrongsenseofself-confidence．根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First,Second連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Thisbiasunfairlyunderminesthesignificanceoftalentsforartandsports，whicheasilyfrustrateschildrenandrendersthemmorelikelytounderestimatethemselves．which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。[高分句型2]Second，thecurrenteducationsystemexcessivelyemphasizesthevalueofacademicperformance，thusforcingchildrentoextensivelybelievethatonlybyachievingexcellentscorescantheymaketheirparentsproud．現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。2．（2022春·上?！じ呷虾Ｊ醒鬀苤袑W(xué)校考階段練習(xí)）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.隨著電腦普及率的提高，老師、家長和學(xué)生對手寫字的重視程度降低了。下圖是一項(xiàng)調(diào)查顯示中學(xué)生不想改善字跡的理由。請說明該現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表自己的看法。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofcomputers,teachers,studentsandtheirparentsarepayinglessandlessattentiontohandwriting.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,about85.8percentofmiddleschoolstudentsthinkthattheirhandwritingispoor.Yetforvariousreasons,manystudentsdon’twanttoimprovetheirhandwriting.51.5percentofthestudentsthinkthattheycanjustuseacomputer,sothereisnoneedtowastetimeimprovingtheirhandwriting,and32.2percentbelievethattheyaresobusywiththestudythattheydonothavetimetopractice.10.9percentthinkthatpracticinghandwritingisuseless.Asthesayinggoes,writingstyleshowstheman.Beautifulandneathandwritingisbeneficial,especiallyformiddleschoolstudents.Therefore,inmyopinion,moreemphasisshouldbeplacedonthisaspectinthefuture.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文。要求考生說明該調(diào)查顯示的中學(xué)生不想改善字跡的理由的這種現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表自己的看法?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累調(diào)查：survey→research各種各樣的：various→allkindsof提高：improve→enhance認(rèn)為：think→consider2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Beautifulandneathandwritingisbeneficial,especiallyformiddleschoolstudents.拓展句：Beautifulandneatcalligraphyisgoodforstudents,whichisespeciallyformiddleschoolstudents.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】10.9percentthinkthatpracticinghandwritingisuseless.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Asthesayinggoes,writingstyleshowstheman.（運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）3．（2022·上海·上海市第二中學(xué)?？寄M預(yù)測）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.目前,網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言（InternetSlang）在青少年中極為盛行，你校學(xué)生會在同學(xué)中就對網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言的看法進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，調(diào)查結(jié)果見下面餅狀圖（piechart）。請根據(jù)圖中信息，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹同學(xué)們的看法，并表達(dá)你自己的觀點(diǎn)。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WiththeincreasingpopularityofInternetSlangamongteenagers,ourschoolhascarriedoutasurvey.Theresultsareasfollows.Somestudentsareinfavorofitwhilesomeareopposed.35%studentsfeelitactiveandfashionabletosayInternetSlang.And33%studentsthinkitisfullofhumorandwisdom.QuarterstudentsholdtheopinionthatitismoreconvenienttouseInternetSlang.While7%studentsviewitasasimplething.TheythinkInternetSlangwasn'tusedbymostpeopleandifitisusedtoooften,itwillcausemisunderstanding.AsfarasIamconcerned,InternetSlangisadouble-edgedsword.Ifweuseitinaproperway,ouronlinecommunicationwillbemorecolorful.【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于議論文，要求考生就網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言在同學(xué)中極為盛行的現(xiàn)象的調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行闡述，并表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累越來越多：moreandmore→increasing支持：support→infavorof認(rèn)為：think→holdtheopinionthat我認(rèn)為：Ithink→AsfarasIamconcerned2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：WiththeincreasingpopularityofInternetSlangamongteenagers,ourschoolhascarriedoutasurvey.Theresultsareasfollows.拓展句：WiththeincreasingpopularityofInternetSlangamongteenagers,ourschoolhascarriedoutasurvey,whoseresultsareasfollows.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]WiththeincreasingpopularityofInternetSlangamongteenagers,ourschoolhascarriedoutasurvey.(with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))[高分句型2]QuarterstudentsholdtheopinionthatitismoreconvenienttouseInternetSlang.(同位語從句)4．（2022·上海靜安·統(tǒng)考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.當(dāng)今社會，短視頻已成為高中生獲取信息的渠道之一，日前，某網(wǎng)站對某地高中生使用短視頻的現(xiàn)狀作了調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下:獲取短視頻內(nèi)容的類型受訪者平均使用時(shí)間占比（該內(nèi)容瀏覽時(shí)間/總瀏覽時(shí)間）輔助學(xué)習(xí)類48%娛樂休閑類31%生活技能類12%其他9%請簡單描述該圖表，并結(jié)合自身或他人情況，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā＃ㄎ闹胁坏贸霈F(xiàn)考生姓名，學(xué)校等真實(shí)信息）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Asurveyconductedbyawebsiteisaimedatfiguringoutthesituationabouthighschoolstudents’useofshortvideosasachannelforgaininginformation.Asisclearlyshowninthetable,about48%oftheirtotalscreentimehasbeenspentoncontentsthatareofbenefittotheirstudywhiletimedistributedtovideosrelatedtoentertainmentandleisureaccountsfor31%.Inaddition,12%oftheirtimeistakenupbywatchingvideosconcerningsomeimportantlifeskills.And9%isspentonrandomcontents.AsfarasIamconcerned,itistheadvancesoftheInternetthatmakeitaccessibleforstudentstohelpwiththeirstudy,relievethemselvesofstressandimprovetheirknowledgeoflifeskillsthroughshortvideos.Thus,itisnowonderthatalargeproportionoftheirtimeisspentonshortvideos.Iamsurethatthistrendwillcontinueandlastforever.【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇圖表類型作文。要求考生表格展示的內(nèi)容去描述某地高中使用短視頻的現(xiàn)狀。【詳解】1.詞匯積累旨在：beaimedat→beintendedtodo與……相關(guān)：relatedto→withregardto除此以外：inaddition→additionally提高：improve→enhance2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Inaddition,12%oftheirtimeistakenupbywatchingvideosconcerningsomeimportantlifeskills.拓展句：Inaddition,12%oftheirtimeistakenupbywatchingvideosthatarerelevanttosomeimportantlifeskills.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Asisclearlyshowninthetable,about48%oftheirtotalscreentimehasbeenspentoncontentsthatareofbenefittotheirstudywhiletimedistributedtovideosrelatedtoentertainmentandleisureaccountsfor31%.（運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的非限制定語從句以及that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】AsfarasIamconcerned,itistheadvancesoftheInternetthatmakeitaccessibleforstudentstohelpwiththeirstudy,relievethemselvesofstressandimprovetheirknowledgeoflifeskillsthroughshortvideos.（運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型以及makeit+形容詞+forsb.todosth.的結(jié)構(gòu)）5．（2022·上海嘉定·高三專題練習(xí)）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.某校對中學(xué)生課余活動(dòng)進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，結(jié)果如圖所示。請根據(jù)圖表1提供的信息描述學(xué)生每天的課余活動(dòng)，并針對圖表2中任何一個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)所反映的情況談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)。生詞：圖表chart_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

AsisshowninChart1,ondailybasis,themajorityofChinesemiddleschoolstudentsdevotenearly100minutestohomework,whereastheyspendlessandlesstimeonwatchingTV,enjoyingmusic,usingcomputers,physicalexerciseandhouseholdchore,roughly50,34,30,25and12minutesrespectively.I’vetosaythateitherChart1orChart2reflectsamostworryingsocialphenomenon.InChart2Ifindthatdoinghomeworktakesupalmost40%ofthechildren’soff-schooltime.Undersuchcircumstances,thestudentssimplycannotspareenoughtimeforfunthings,thuslosingtheprimetimetocultivatetheirsports,culturalandspiritualhobbies,nottosayanythingoftheirartisticdevelopment.Whenthestudentshavebecometestmachines,canweexpectthemtogrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthy?Onbehalfofchildren,Isincerelyappealforlessacademicloadandmoreleisureactivities.【導(dǎo)語】本文是圖表作文。要求考生對中學(xué)生課余活動(dòng)進(jìn)行的調(diào)查結(jié)果談?wù)剛€(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累據(jù)顯示：Asisshown→Itisshownthat令人擔(dān)心的：worrying→worrisome占據(jù)：takeup→occupy有趣的：fun→interesting2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Onbehalfofchildren,Isincerelyappealforlessacademicloadandmoreleisureactivities.拓展句：Onbehalfofchildren,Isincerelyappealforthefactthattherewillbelessacademicloadandmoreleisureactivities【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】AsisshowninChart1,ondailybasis,themajorityofChinesemiddleschoolstudentsdevotenearly100minutestohomework,whereastheyspendlessandlesstimeonwatchingTV,enjoyingmusic,usingcomputers,physicalexerciseandhouseholdchore,roughly50,34,30,25and12minutesrespectively.（由as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】I’vetosaythateitherChart1orChart2reflectsamostworryingsocialphenomenon.（由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【高分句型3】InChart2,Ifindthatdoinghomeworktakesupalmost40%ofthechildren’soff-schooltime.（由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【高分句型4】Whenthestudentshavebecometestmachines,canweexpectthemtogrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthy?（由When引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）6．（2022·上海嘉定·統(tǒng)考一模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設(shè)你是光明中學(xué)的學(xué)生張華。你們學(xué)校擬開設(shè)勞動(dòng)課程，現(xiàn)給出如下方案，學(xué)校委托學(xué)生會征詢大家的意見。內(nèi)容高一：電器使用和維護(hù)高二：植物種植與養(yǎng)護(hù)高三：物品整理和收納時(shí)間每學(xué)期最后兩周，每周2整天地點(diǎn)理科實(shí)驗(yàn)專用教室給學(xué)生會寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容須包括：1)你認(rèn)為該方案中存在的問題；2)你的建議和理由。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearStudents’Union,I’mwritingtoputforwardsomeadviceonthelaborcourseplannedbyyou.Itisofgreatbenefitforusstudentstotakealaborcoursewithanintentionofbuildingupourbodyandlearningmorelifeskills.However,accordingtotheschedule,thecontentofthelaborcourse,whichIthinkisnotappropriateforthesenior1students,issupposedtobeadjustedbecausetheyshouldbedevelopedsomebasicskillsofschoollifesothattheycanadapttotheindependentschoollifequickly.Furthermore,asfarasthetimegiventhelaborcourseisconcerned,itisnotenoughatall.Inordertopaymoreattentiontothelaborcourse,studentsshouldbeofferedmoretimetoexperiencemoreactivitiesrelatedtothelaborcourse.I’mdeeplyconvincedthataslongasyoutakemyadviceintoaccount,thislaborcoursewillbeinterestingandrewarding.Yourssincerely,ZhangHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生給學(xué)校學(xué)生會寫一封郵件，就學(xué)校擬開設(shè)勞動(dòng)課程的方案提出問題，并給出建議和理由?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累提出：putforward→comeupwith方案：schedule→plan此外：furthermore→what’smore考慮：take…intoaccount→take…intoconsideration2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：I’mwritingtoputforwardsomeadviceonthelaborcourseplannedbyyou.拓展句：I’mwritingtoputforwardsomeadviceonthelaborcoursewhichisplannedbyyou.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Itisofgreatbenefitforusstudentstotakealaborcoursewithanintentionofbuildingupourbody,learningmorelifeskills.（運(yùn)用了it作形式主語，不定式短語作真正主語）【高分句型2】However,accordingtotheschedule,thecontentofthelaborcourse,whichIthinkisnotappropriateforthesenior1,issupposedtobeadjustedbecausetheyshouldbedevelopedsomebasicskillsofschoollifesothattheycanadapttotheindependentschoollife.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句以及sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句）7．（2023·上?！ど虾Ｊ薪ㄆ街袑W(xué)校考三模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.最近明啟中學(xué)對教師是否會被人工智能取代這一話題開展了調(diào)查，調(diào)查結(jié)果如下圖。假如你是該校高三學(xué)生李華，請就此話題談?wù)勀愕目捶?，寫一?50-180的作文，文章內(nèi)容需涵蓋：1.簡要描述圖表；2.你認(rèn)為教師是否會被人工智能取代；3.你的理由。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently,ourschoolconductedasurveyonthetopicofwhetherteacherswillbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.10%ofrespondentswereunsure.34%saidtheythoughtteacherswouldbereplacedbyartificialintelligence,while56%saidno.Personallyspeaking,teacherswon’tbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.Becauseinadditiontoteachingstudentsknowledge,teachershaveamoreimportantmission,whichistoeducatepeople.Intermsofeducatingpeople,teacherspossessqualitiesthatcannotbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.Besides,artificialintelligenceisonlyapartialreplacementofteachers’labor,andcannotreplacetheroleofteachers.Thisisbecausealthoughrobotshavecommunicationfunctionssuchasdialogueandmovement,theyarefarfromtherichanddelicatefeelingsofhumanbeings.Thatistosay,thepossibilityofteachersbeingreplacedisverysmall,andteachersbecomeoneofthejobsthatartificialintelligenceisdifficulttoreplace.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表作文，最近明啟中學(xué)對教師是否會被人工智能取代這一話題開展了調(diào)查，調(diào)查結(jié)果如下圖。假如你是該校高三學(xué)生李華，請就此話題談?wù)勀愕目捶?，寫一?50-180的作文，文章內(nèi)容需涵蓋：1.簡要描述圖表；2.你認(rèn)為教師是否會被人工智能取代；3.你的理由。【詳解】1.詞匯積累取代：replace→supersede擁有：possess→takepossessionof重要的：important→significant也就是說：thatistosay=inotherwords2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.拓展句：Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,whoknowhowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Becauseinadditiontoteachingstudentsknowledge,teachershaveamoreimportantmission,whichistoeducatepeople.(運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)8．（2023·上?！つM預(yù)測）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.國際經(jīng)合組織（OECD）對600,000名青少年就生活中最令他們擔(dān)憂的事情進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下圖。請聯(lián)系自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勛钭屃钅銚?dān)憂的事情及原因?！敬鸢浮縏heORGANISATIONforEconomicCo-operationandDevelopment(OECD)asked600,000teenagerswhatworriedthemmostabouttheirlives.Itturnsoutthatfortypercentofthestudentsintheiracademicassignmentsfeelpressure;thirtypercentofthestudentsontheirrelationshipwiththeirparentsfeelalittlenervous;twenty-fivepercentofthestudentsintheirownimagemorecareabout,givingthemsomeconfusion.Theremainingfivepercentofthestudentsfeelanxiousandconcernedaboutotherthings.AsfarasIamconcerned,sometimestheproblemsthatmakemeworryaremainlyinstudy.Itmakesmefeelanxiousandconfusedandsometimeshelpless.Maybebecauseofafailureinanexam,Iwillbeinabadmood.Toimprovetheirpsychologicalquality,Ithinkwestudentsshouldbebetterimproved.Ithinkweshouldgetmorehelpfromparentsandteachers.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文。要求考生針對國際經(jīng)合組織（OECD）對600,000名青少年就生活中最令他們擔(dān)憂的事情進(jìn)行調(diào)查的結(jié)果，聯(lián)系自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勛钭屃钅銚?dān)憂的事情及原因?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累壓力：pressure→stress擔(dān)心：beconcernedabout→beworriedabout就我而言：asfarasIamconcerned→personallyspeaking無助的：helpless→unassisted2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Maybebecauseofafailureinanexam,Iwillbeinabadmood.拓展句：ItismaybebecauseofafailureinanexamthatIwillbeinabadmood.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】twenty-fivepercentofthestudentsintheirownimagemorecareabout,givingthemsomeconfusion.（運(yùn)用了非謂語動(dòng)詞中的現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語。）【高分句型2】AsfarasIamconcerned,sometimestheproblemsthatmakemeworryaremainlyinstudy.（運(yùn)用了連詞that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句。）9．（2021秋·上?！じ呷A師大二附中?？茧A段練習(xí)）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.下面的餅狀圖顯示了某校對學(xué)生學(xué)業(yè)成績評價(jià)的新體制，圖表所示的五個(gè)方面構(gòu)成了一個(gè)學(xué)生的學(xué)業(yè)成績。假如你是該校學(xué)生，請你以“TheNewGradingSysteminOurSchool”為題用英語寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1.簡要描述圖中信息；2.談?wù)勀銓@一新舉措的看法并說明原因。圖表說明：①testresults②notes③homework④classperformances⑤teamwork____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

TheNewGradingSysteminOurSchool

Inordertohelpstudentsdeveloptheirabilitiesinallfields,ourschoolnowhasaskedtheteacherstomakesomechangesinthegradingsystem.Thischartshowshowitworks.

Students’testresults,whichusedtobetheonlywaytoevaluateastudentinschool,makeuponly30%ofhisfinalscore.Instead,howastudentperformsinclass,andhowhetakesnotesanddoeshishomeworkaretakenintoaccount,eachpartofwhichmakesup20%.Besides,teamworkinclassisalsoimportant.Ifyouwantahigherscore,youshouldbegoodatworkingtogetherwithyourclassmates.

I’mallforthenewgradingsystem,whichevaluatesstudentsinallfields.Onlybyputtingthesystemintopractice,canwefullydevelopourabilitiesaswellaspotentialonthewaytoadulthoodandtrulymakepreparationsforourfuturelife.【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表作文，要求考生以“TheNewGradingSysteminOurSchool”為題寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：簡要描述圖表信息以及談?wù)剬@一新舉措的看法并說明原因?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累評估：evaluate→assess考慮：takeintoaccount→consider重要的：important→ofimportance擅長：begoodat→dowellin2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Besides,teamworkinclassisalsoimportant.Ifyouwantahigherscore,youshouldbegoodatworkingtogetherwithyourclassmates.拓展句：Besides,teamworkinclassisalsoimportant,whichmeansifyouwantahigherscore,youshouldbegoodatworkingtogetherwithyourclassmates.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Instead,howastudentperformsinclass,andhowhetakesnotesanddoeshishomeworkaretakenintoaccount,eachpartofwhichmakesup20%.(運(yùn)用了how引導(dǎo)的主語從句和ofwhich引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Onlybyputtingthesystemintopractice,canwefullydevel