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03-運(yùn)動(dòng)與健康話題(一)健康的身體是我們成就一切事物的根本，沒(méi)有健康，什么都無(wú)從談起。

【預(yù)測(cè)題目】健康的生活習(xí)慣對(duì)于成長(zhǎng)中的我們是非常重要的。你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)當(dāng)是怎樣的呢?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的信息提示,寫一篇短文,首句已給出。信息提示：健康飲食;早睡早起,不熬夜;參加運(yùn)動(dòng),強(qiáng)身健體。

要求：根據(jù)信息提示,把握要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不逐字翻譯。字?jǐn)?shù)在100詞左右。

滿分優(yōu)秀范文：Ithinkhealthyhabitsareveryimportantforus.Allofuswanttobehealthy.First,weshouldgetenoughsleepduringthenight.Wecangotobedearlyandgetupearly.Stayinguplateisbadforourhealth.Second,wemusthavetherightkindsoffood.Weshouldeatmorefruitandvegetablesandlessmeat.Weshoulddrinkalotofwater.Weshouldhavehealthyeatinghabits.Third,weshoulddomoreexercisetobuildupourbodies.Finally,weshouldwashhandsbeforemealsandbrushourteethtwiceaday.Ifwedon’tfeelwell,weshouldgotoseethedoctoratonce.

Ifwecandoallabove,wecanliveahealthylife.（二）減壓

生活節(jié)奏加快，競(jìng)爭(zhēng)日益激烈，讓大多數(shù)中學(xué)生在生活和學(xué)習(xí)上或多或少產(chǎn)生了壓力，如何應(yīng)對(duì)壓力是大家不可回避的問(wèn)題。

【預(yù)測(cè)題目】為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學(xué)們中存在的心理壓力問(wèn)題,你們班特意開(kāi)展了一次以"LessPressure,BetterLife"為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽,請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備發(fā)言稿,談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法,與同學(xué)分享,內(nèi)容包括:(1)同學(xué)們普遍存在的壓力是什么;

(2)我的壓力是什么;(3)我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。注意:文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。詞數(shù)100左右。

滿分優(yōu)秀范文：LessPressure,BetterLifeHello,boysandgirls!Pressureisaseriousproblemintoday’sworld.Studentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.Somestudentscan’tgetonwellwiththeirclassmates,whileothersmayworryabouttheirexams.I’malwaysunderpressure,too.Myparentswantmetobethetopstudentinclass.Sotheysendmetoallkindsofafter-classesatweekends.LastMondayevening,Ihadatalkwithmymother.ItoldherIwasnotlazy.Ireallyfelttired.Ineededtimetorelax.Mymotheragreedwithmeatlast.SoIthinkaconversationwithparentsisnecessarytosolvetheproblem.That’sall.Thankyou!（三）為了鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生積極參加體育活動(dòng)，你的學(xué)校即將舉辦英文征文比賽假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)你以Doingsportsmakesme________為題，參與投稿。要求：1.確定主題，說(shuō)明原因；2.圍繞主題，進(jìn)行敘述或闡述；3.詞數(shù)80-100。注意：1.補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題（參考詞語(yǔ)：healthy，happy，relaxed，strong等）；2.可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以闡述具體觀點(diǎn)；3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；4.短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；5.作文中不要出現(xiàn)考生和相關(guān)人物的真實(shí)校名和姓名。Doingsportsmakesme________Recently,sportshavebeenverypopularwithmanypeople.Inmyopinion,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________滿分優(yōu)秀范文DoingsportsmakesmestrongRecently,sportshavebeenverypopularwithmanypeople.Inmyopinion,doingsportsmakesmestrongbecauseitbuildsupmybodyandmind.Iwasshortandthinbefore,somyfatheralwaystookmeoutforrunning.Atfirst,Iusuallyfelttiredandwantedtogiveup.Butmyfatherencouragedmetostickwithit.Halfayearlater,Igrewtallerandstronger.Atthesportsmeetingthisyear,Ievenwonthefirstprizeinthe1,500-metrerace.Sincethen,IhavebeenstrongerandstrongerandIdon'tfearanydifficulty.Inaword,doingsportsmakesmestrong.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，為了鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生積極參加體育活動(dòng)，學(xué)校即將舉辦英文征文比賽。假設(shè)你是李華，要求你以Doingsportsmakesme____為題，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇短文，參與投稿。首先要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文主要采用第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)展開(kāi)敘述，文章構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明，緊扣主題。語(yǔ)言的表述符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：inmyopinion，buildup，wanttodosth，giveup，encouragesbtodo，stickwith。句型：But

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it.但我父親鼓勵(lì)我堅(jiān)持下去。encourage

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sth鼓勵(lì)某人做某事。Sincethen,IhavebeenstrongerandstrongerandIdon'tfearanydifficulty.從那時(shí)起，我變得越來(lái)越強(qiáng)壯，我不再害怕任何困難。strongerandstronger越來(lái)越強(qiáng)壯，比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí)，表示越來(lái)越……。（四）陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)下周將舉行一次座談會(huì)，主題為“幸福都是奮斗出來(lái)的”。假如你是魏華，將參與座談。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下圖片提示，聯(lián)系自身實(shí)際，從德、智、體、美、勞等方面中選取至少三個(gè)方面寫一篇英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勛约簩⑷绾闻^斗。注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。Goodmorning,everyone!I’mWeiHuafromClass1,Grade9.I’mhappytobeheretosharemyideas.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!滿分優(yōu)秀范文Goodmorning,everyone!I’mWeiHuafromClass1,Grade9.I’mhappytobeheretosharemyideas.Ithinkhappinessisachievedthroughhardwork.Firstly,helpingotherswillmakeusfeelhappy.Forexample,weshouldgiveourseatstotheelderlywhenwetakeabus.Afterweseetheirsmilingfaces,wemustbehappiertoo.Secondly,healthybodiescanbringushappiness.Healthisimportanttoeveryone.Onlywhenwekeephealthy,wecanworkandstudyhappily.Soweshouldkeepdoingexerciseeveryday.Thirdly,knowledgemakesourlifecolorfulandinteresting.Inourfreetime,wearewillingtolearndifferentkindsofskills(likecomputerandart)sothatwecanservethesocietybetter.Finally,thebeautifulenvironmentgivesusacomfortablefeeling.Weshouldplantmoretreestoprotecttheenvironment.Wealsoworkasvolunteersandcleanuptheparks.That’sall.Thankyou!【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求以“幸福都是奮斗出來(lái)的”為主題，結(jié)合圖片提示，完成英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，補(bǔ)充剩余內(nèi)容即可。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式結(jié)構(gòu)，第一段點(diǎn)明“幸福都是奮斗出來(lái)的”這一主題，第二段結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，從不同的方面講述了自己該如何奮斗，第三段是結(jié)束語(yǔ)；整篇文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰條理；人稱主要是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：makesb.dosth.；giveone’sseattosb.；forexample；keepdoingsth.；inone’sfreetime；bewillingtodosth.；differentkindsof。句型：sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句；when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。（五）初中三年，同學(xué)們?cè)诔砷L(zhǎng)的路上發(fā)生了巨大變化。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格提供的信息，以“MyChanges”為題用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，向同學(xué)介紹你的變化并簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由。過(guò)去1.癡迷游戲2.厭惡學(xué)習(xí)……現(xiàn)在1.喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)2.愛(ài)好看書(shū)……原因1.運(yùn)動(dòng)使你強(qiáng)身健體，充滿活力。2.獲取知識(shí),使人聰明，更加自信。……要求：1、語(yǔ)句通順，條理清晰；2、詞數(shù)80左右，必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。MyChanges_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________滿分優(yōu)秀范文MyChangesInthepast,Iusedtospendmuchtimeplayingvideogames.Ididn’tlikestudyingatall.Ioftenfeltupset.ButnowIhavechangedalot.Ilikedoingsportsverymuch.Ioftenplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesafterschool.Doingsportshelpsbuildmeupandkeepmeactive.Besides,Ibecomeinterestedinreading.Ittakesmealotoftimetoreaddifferentbooks.Ihavefunreadingandgetalotofknowledge.Itmakesmesmartandconfident.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于說(shuō)明文寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示講述過(guò)去的情況和現(xiàn)在的變化，以及變化的原因。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文主要用第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作，講述過(guò)去用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，講述現(xiàn)在的變化主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫作，講述現(xiàn)在的變化以及變化的原因敘述完整且條理清晰。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：inthepast；usedto；spendmuchtimeplaying；playbasketball；doingsports;buildmeup;becomeinterestedin;havefunreading。句型：Ittakessb.+時(shí)間todosth.表達(dá)“花某人多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間做某事”的句型；and表示并列的句子。（六）假如你是李楠，你的美國(guó)朋友Jim擔(dān)心感染新冠病毒，想了解一些防止感染新型冠狀病毒的方法，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給他回復(fù)一封e-mail.1.勤洗手，不要用手去摸眼睛鼻子和嘴。2．盡量待在家里，出門戴口罩，遠(yuǎn)離他人。3．鍛煉身體，不熬夜，保持身體健康。要求：1.字?jǐn)?shù)：80一100；2．參考詞匯：contract感染，Covid-19新冠病毒，mask口罩3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________滿分優(yōu)秀范文DearJim,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter.Yousaidyou'realwaysworriedaboutcontractingCovid-19andwantstoknowsomewaystopreventtheinfectionofthenewvirus.Iamveryhappytoansweryourquestion.Firstofall,washyourhandsfrequently.Don'ttouchyoureyes,noseandmouthwithyourhands.Secondly,trytostayathome,wearmaskswhengoingout,andstayawayfromothers.Thirdly,exercise,donotstayuplate,andkeephealthy.Ithinkthesecanhelpyou.Yours,LiNan【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是書(shū)信作文，注意書(shū)信的寫作格式。本文也是材料作文，認(rèn)真閱讀所給材料，找出有用信息，列出寫作提綱。首先寫Jim擔(dān)心感染新冠病毒，想了解一些防止感染新型冠狀病毒的方法。然后根據(jù)給出的要點(diǎn)寫出具體的方法，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但要包括所有要點(diǎn)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文可分兩段寫，第1段描寫Jim擔(dān)心感染新冠病毒，想了解一些防止感染新型冠狀病毒的方法；第2段寫預(yù)防新冠的具體方法。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。給出建議時(shí)，應(yīng)用祈使句表達(dá)，注意使用表達(dá)順序的詞，表達(dá)條理清楚。寫完以后，注意檢查，看看是否有語(yǔ)法、格式、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和單詞拼寫等錯(cuò)誤。（七）健康是大家最關(guān)心的話題，中考的熱點(diǎn)話題。請(qǐng)你以保持健康的途徑為題寫一篇相關(guān)題材的英語(yǔ)短文。要求語(yǔ)言通順，沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。TheWaytoStayHealthyHealthismostimportantforanyofus.]nordertostayhealthy,weneedsomecommonknowledge.

First]y,payattentiontothediet.Weshouldeatlotsoffruitandvegetables,becausetheyarerichinfiberandlowinfat.Asaproverbsays,"Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway."Sofruitisgoodforhealth.Don'thavealotoffoodthatcontainstoomuchfat,suchasbutter.Meanwhile,sweetsshouldbeeateninproperquantity,becausetoomuchsugardoesharmtous.Don'tdrinktoomuchcoffee,either.

Secondly,exerciseisnecessary.Regularexercisecanhelpuskeepfromgettingfat.Peoplewhodorunningeverydayusuallyhavestrongerheartsthanwhodon't.

Finally,formgoodlivinghabits.Weshouldsleepforabout8hoursatnight,andneverworktoohard.Overworkandlittlesleepwillleadtoillness.What'smore,stayawayfromcigarettes.

Thesearethethingsweshouldpayattentiontosoastostayhealthy.

（八）《怎樣保持健康的生活習(xí)慣》

健康的生活習(xí)慣對(duì)于成長(zhǎng)中的我們是非常重要的。你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)當(dāng)是怎樣的呢?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的信息提示,寫一篇短文,首句已給出。

信息提示：健康飲食;早睡早起,不熬夜;參加運(yùn)動(dòng),強(qiáng)身健體。

要求:根據(jù)信息提示,把握要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不逐字翻譯。字?jǐn)?shù)在80詞左右。

滿分優(yōu)秀范文：

Ithinkhealthyhabitsareveryimportantforus.

Allofuswanttobehealthy.First,weshouldgetenoughsleepduringthenight.Wecangotobedearlyandgetupearly.Stayinguplateisbadforourhealth.Second,wemusthavetherightkindsoffood.Weshouldeatmorefruitandvegetablesandlessmeat.Weshoulddrinkalotofwater.Weshouldhavehealthyeatinghabits.Third,weshoulddomoreexercisetobuildupourbodies.Finally,weshouldwashhandsbeforemealsandbrushourteethtwiceaday.Ifwedon’tfeelwell,weshouldgotoseethedoctoratonce.（九）近來(lái)，中小學(xué)生的健康問(wèn)題日益引起人們的關(guān)注。其中垃圾食品、電子游戲等是影響健康的重要因素，請(qǐng)以“KeepHealthy”為題談?wù)勀愕目捶?。要求?．列舉中小學(xué)生面臨的健康問(wèn)題。2．談?wù)勗鯓硬拍鼙３纸】怠?．80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)人詞數(shù)。4．語(yǔ)法正確，文理通順、流暢，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。提示詞：junkfood,bebadfor,computergames,suggestions,stayawayfromKeepHealthyToday,somestudentshaveseveralhealthproblems.____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion：KeepHealthyToday,somestudentshaveseveralhealthproblems.Somedon’thaveenoughtimetosleep.Somedon’thaveahealthydietandofteneatjunkfood.Somearecrazywithcomputergamesorplaywithmobilephonestoooften.Alotofstudentsaretoobusytodosports.Theyalwayshavetoomuchhomeworktodo.Whatshouldwedotokeephealthy?Firstly,Ithinkweneedabouteighthours’sleepeveryday.Secondly,weshouldlearntorelax.Wecandosportseveryday,suchasrunningandplayingballgames.Thirdly,weshouldeatmorevegetables,fruitsandlessfastfoodorjunkfood.Also,wearesupposedtopaymoreattentiontoourstudyandstayawayfromcomputergamesoroursmartphones.Ifwecandevelophealthyhabits,wewillbehealthierandhappier.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以“KeepHealthy”為題寫一篇短文，談?wù)勚行W(xué)生如何保持健康。短文可以從描述中小學(xué)生面臨的健康問(wèn)題及談?wù)撊绾伪３纸】祪煞矫嬲归_(kāi)寫作。寫作中要注意語(yǔ)言的選擇及句型的正確選用。要注意語(yǔ)法正確，語(yǔ)句通順，行文流暢。短文用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一、三人稱形式進(jìn)行表達(dá)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文以keephealthy為中心，首先在第一段里描述中小學(xué)生所面臨的健康問(wèn)題，本段內(nèi)容用幾個(gè)some開(kāi)始的句子和一個(gè)alotof開(kāi)始的句子排比組成。讀起來(lái)節(jié)奏感強(qiáng)，條理分明；本段中所用的becrazywith;too…to…等等句型、詞組的使得準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)；第二段講述如何保持健康。本段先由一個(gè)問(wèn)句總起，然后由firstly,secondly,thirdly,also等等從幾個(gè)不同的方面談?wù)摫３纸】档姆椒?。層次清楚。最后一段?jiǎn)短結(jié)尾，總結(jié)全文：如果養(yǎng)成健康的習(xí)慣，我們會(huì)更加健康、快樂(lè)。點(diǎn)明中心，突出主題?？键c(diǎn)：考查話題作文。（十）為響應(yīng)我市全面創(chuàng)建國(guó)家衛(wèi)生城市的號(hào)召，某校開(kāi)展了“綠色港城，健康生活”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以"TheGreenCity,theHealthyLife"為題，根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示，簡(jiǎn)要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。主題

綠色港城，健康生活

做法

騎車出行，減少空氣污染;

垃圾入箱，保持城市整潔;

多種樹(shù)木，保護(hù)自然環(huán)境。

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……(至少2條)

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