版權(quán)說明:本文檔由用戶提供并上傳,收益歸屬內(nèi)容提供方,若內(nèi)容存在侵權(quán),請進行舉報或認領(lǐng)
文檔簡介
寫作專訓ProjectUnit3KeepFit01佳作賞析02素材積累03寫作演練目錄
[經(jīng)典例題](2024·樂山改編)學校正開展“我運動,我健康”主題周活動,旨在鼓勵同學們踴躍參加體育鍛煉,增強健康意識。為此,校報面向全校同學開展了“我最喜愛的體育運動”征文活動。請你寫一篇英語短文向校報投稿,并在文中鼓勵大家積極參加體育運動。內(nèi)容包括:1.最喜愛乒乓球;2.強身健體,對眼睛有益;3.減少壓力,放松心情;4.面對困難,絕不放棄。注意:1.詞數(shù)60左右;2.包含所有提示要點,并適當發(fā)揮;3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學校。參考詞匯:
stress壓力;
reduce減少;
take
an
active
part
in積極參加[高分范文]My
favourite
sportI
like
sports.
I’ve
got
great
benefits
from
sports.
So
I’d
like
to
share
my
favourite
sport
here.①
My
favourite
sport
is
ping-pong.
It
brings
me
more
than
pleasure.
②
Playing
ping-pong
makes
me
strong
and
healthy.
It
is
especially
good
for
my
eyes.
③
It
also
helps
me
reduce
my
daily
stress
and
relax
myself.
So
I
never
give
up
when
I
face
difficulties.Sports
give
us
so
many
benefits.
I
hope
all
of
us
take
an
active
part
in
sports.
④
Let’s
enjoy
the
real
fun
that
sports
bring
us![名師點評]本文層次分明,要點齊全,內(nèi)容全面,句子相對簡潔,結(jié)構(gòu)完整。①本句點明了主題,引起下文的描述,合乎情理。②動名詞短語作主語,且使用了“make
+賓語+形容詞(賓補)”結(jié)構(gòu),屬于提分點。③使用副詞also,并陳述了打乒乓球的另一益處,使短文銜接緊湊。④用祈使句作為結(jié)尾,拉進了與讀者的距離。
[開頭句]1.
How
often
do
you
play
ping-pong?2.
Keeping
fit
is
not
that
hard!3.
This
year,
my
goal
is
to
be
really
fit.4.
Health
is
important
in
life.[中間句]1.
The
air
is
clean,
and
I
can
hear
birds
singing.2.
I
jog
three
times
a
week
or
more.
I’m
always
full
of
energy
after
jogging.3.
But
my
favourite
way
of
keeping
fit
is
to
use
an
exercise
app
to
work
out.4.
Many
kinds
of
exercises
can
make
you
healthy.[結(jié)尾句]1.
We
have
fun
when
we
keep
fit
together.2.
We
work
as
a
team,
and
we
win
or
lose
as
a
team.3.
To
keep
fit,
let’s
exercise
often![名言警句]1.
Life
is
movement.
生命在于運動。2.
If
you
want
to
be
healthy,
exercise
every
day.若要身體健,天天來鍛煉。3.
Sport
makes
a
man
healthy,
wise,
and
happy.運動使人健康、聰明、快樂。
[小試身手](2024·湖南改編)英語課上老師要求以“Sports
make
us
better”為話題展開三人一組的討論。假定你是李華,將代表小組在全班發(fā)言,請根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇60詞左右的英文發(fā)言稿(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))。內(nèi)容包括:1.介紹你們各自喜歡的運動;2.談談運動對你們的影響。FrankI
like
bike
riding
best.
It
makes
me
...CindyMy
favourite
sport
is
volleyball.
I
often
play
it
with
my
friends
...Li
Hua...[思路點撥]本文屬于發(fā)言稿,格式已給出,接下來應直接進入主題:描述討論的結(jié)果,即用不同的句式描寫組內(nèi)成員最喜歡的運動及帶來的益處。書寫時用一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為第一和第三人稱。[寫作提綱][妙筆生花]Hello,
everyone.
I’m
Li
Hua
from
Group
One.
I
want
to
report
on
our
discussion.
Cindy’s
favourite
sport
is
volleyball.
She
often
plays
volleyball
with
her
friends.
By
playing
volleyball,
she
becomes
very
healthy.
Frank
loves
riding
a
bicycle
best.
By
riding
a
bicycle,
his
body
has
become
stronger
and
stronger.
I
like
playing
basketball.
If
I
have
time,
I
often
go
to
the
park
to
play
basketball
with
my
friends
at
weekends.
Playing
basketball
teaches
me
the
spirit
of
teamwork
and
never
giving
up.
I
want
to
report
on
our
discussion.
Cindy’s
favourite
sport
is
volleyball.
She
often
plays
volleyball
with
her
friends.
By
playing
volleyball,
she
becomes
very
healthy.
Frank
loves
riding
a
bicycle
best.
By
riding
a
bicycle,
his
body
has
become
stronger
and
stronger.
I
like
playing
basketball.
If
I
have
time,
I
often
go
to
the
park
to
溫馨提示
- 1. 本站所有資源如無特殊說明,都需要本地電腦安裝OFFICE2007和PDF閱讀器。圖紙軟件為CAD,CAXA,PROE,UG,SolidWorks等.壓縮文件請下載最新的WinRAR軟件解壓。
- 2. 本站的文檔不包含任何第三方提供的附件圖紙等,如果需要附件,請聯(lián)系上傳者。文件的所有權(quán)益歸上傳用戶所有。
- 3. 本站RAR壓縮包中若帶圖紙,網(wǎng)頁內(nèi)容里面會有圖紙預覽,若沒有圖紙預覽就沒有圖紙。
- 4. 未經(jīng)權(quán)益所有人同意不得將文件中的內(nèi)容挪作商業(yè)或盈利用途。
- 5. 人人文庫網(wǎng)僅提供信息存儲空間,僅對用戶上傳內(nèi)容的表現(xiàn)方式做保護處理,對用戶上傳分享的文檔內(nèi)容本身不做任何修改或編輯,并不能對任何下載內(nèi)容負責。
- 6. 下載文件中如有侵權(quán)或不適當內(nèi)容,請與我們聯(lián)系,我們立即糾正。
- 7. 本站不保證下載資源的準確性、安全性和完整性, 同時也不承擔用戶因使用這些下載資源對自己和他人造成任何形式的傷害或損失。
最新文檔
- 二零二五版員工保密協(xié)議及書面勞動合同組合范本3篇
- 二零二五個人宅基地置換合同示范文本3篇
- 二零二五版商業(yè)地產(chǎn)委托商鋪招商與綠色建筑標準合同3篇
- 二零二五年度汽車維修車間租賃轉(zhuǎn)讓合同范本8篇
- 二零二五年度個人車位使用權(quán)及增值服務協(xié)議3篇
- 二零二五年度寵物殯葬服務及紀念品定制合同3篇
- 2025版物業(yè)項目經(jīng)理勞動合同范本(全新版)6篇
- 鋪設(shè)壓沙土施工方案
- 2025版疫情特殊時期園區(qū)物業(yè)租金減免及服務優(yōu)化協(xié)議3篇
- 2025版舞蹈師資培訓中心教師聘用協(xié)議3篇
- (正式版)JBT 11270-2024 立體倉庫組合式鋼結(jié)構(gòu)貨架技術(shù)規(guī)范
- DB11∕T 2035-2022 供暖民用建筑室溫無線采集系統(tǒng)技術(shù)要求
- EPC項目采購階段質(zhì)量保證措施
- T-NAHIEM 101-2023 急診科建設(shè)與設(shè)備配置標準
- 《復旦大學》課件
- 針灸與按摩綜合療法
- T-GDWJ 013-2022 廣東省健康醫(yī)療數(shù)據(jù)安全分類分級管理技術(shù)規(guī)范
- 四川2024年專業(yè)技術(shù)人員公需科目“數(shù)字經(jīng)濟與驅(qū)動發(fā)展”參考答案(通用版)
- 《我的家族史》課件
- 煤炭裝卸服務合同
- 蘇教版科學2023四年級下冊全冊教案教學設(shè)計及反思
評論
0/150
提交評論