全國用高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)與增分策略專題六書面表達(dá)第二節(jié)方法運(yùn)用于命題講義

第二節(jié)方法運(yùn)用于命題專題六書面表達(dá)欄目索引一、提綱類作文二、畫圖類作文三、圖表類作文四、(半)開放式作文

(2017·全國Ⅰ)假定你是李華，正在教你的英國朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語。請你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容包括：1.時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2.內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩；3.課前準(zhǔn)備：簡要了解唐朝的歷史。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

一、提綱類作文典例法寶1

“五審”定調(diào)子(1)體裁：告知信類應(yīng)用文，應(yīng)注意告知信格式；(2)人稱：以第一人稱為主；(3)時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主；(4)要點(diǎn)：告知上課時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容及課前準(zhǔn)備；(5)層次：分為三段：第一段問候并告知上課時(shí)間及地點(diǎn)；第二段告知上課內(nèi)容及課前準(zhǔn)備；第三段為結(jié)束語。

法寶2

“韻色”得高分該文除簡單句外，還可使用并列句、省略句及復(fù)合句(定語從句、名詞性從句、狀語從句)，做到句式多樣。法寶3黃金“三步曲”1.遣詞nextChineselesson/meetat/asusual/participatein/sportingactivity/makeit/asyouknow/inorderto/acquireagoodknowledgeof/introduce...to.../beofgreathelp/advisesb.todo/learnabout/inadvance/lookforwardto/hearfrom2.造句(1)Howareyou?(2)I’mwritingtotellyouaboutyournextChineselesson.(3)We’llstillmeetatmyschool，butnotonSaturdayasusual.(4)I’llhavetoparticipateinasportingactivitythatday.(5)Let’smakeitthreeo’clockonSundayafternoon.(6)InordertoacquireagoodknowledgeofChinese，youshouldlearnmoreaboutChinesecultureandhistory.(7)ThistimeIwillintroduceTangpoetrytoyou，whichisofgreathelpinlearningChinese.(8)IadviseyoutolearnaboutthebriefhistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance.(9)Itwillsurelyhelpyouinlearningthepoems.(10)Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.3.成篇DearLeslie，Howareyou？I’mwritingtotellyouaboutyournextChineselesson.We’llstillmeetatmyschool，butnotonSaturdayasusual，sinceI’llhavetoparticipateinasportingactivitythatday.Solet’smakeitthreeo’clockonSundayafternoon.Asyouknow，inordertoacquireagoodknowledgeofChinese，youshouldlearnmoreaboutChinesecultureandhistory.Therefore，thistimeIwillintroduceTangpoetrytoyou，whichisofgreathelpinlearningChinese.IadviseyoutolearnaboutthebriefhistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance.Itwillsurelyhelpyouinlearningthepoems.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours，LiHua

(2016·天津)假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席李津。一批來自英國的高中生與你校學(xué)生開展了為期兩周的交流活動(dòng)?，F(xiàn)在，他們即將回國，你將在歡送會(huì)上致辭。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。1.回顧雙方的交流活動(dòng)(如學(xué)習(xí)、生活、體育、文藝等方面)；2.談?wù)勈斋@或感想；3.表達(dá)祝愿與期望。跟蹤訓(xùn)練注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dearfriends，Howtimeflies！___________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou.參考范文Dearfriends，Howtimeflies！Twoweekswentby，andourexchangeactivitiesended.Onbehalfofmyschool，Iwouldliketoexpressmyfeelings.Asscheduled，weparticipatedinseveralinstructiveactivities.WelearntmanyChinesecharactersandtookplentyofexercisetogether.WewenttotherestauranttotastetheChinesetraditionalfood.Thefoodwasverydelicious.Whilevisitingtheartexhibition，wediscussedthegreatartists’works.Inmyopinion，everyonehereisamemberofourbigfamilyandwelearnalotfromeachother.AndatlastIsincerelywishyouapleasanttripbacktoyourcountry.Ihopewe’llgettogetheragainnextyear.Thankyou.

(2017·北京)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記錄畢業(yè)前夕你們制作以“感恩母?！睘橹黝}的畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的全過程。

二、畫圖類作文典例注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：視頻video法寶1

“五審”定調(diào)子(1)體裁：本文屬于圖畫類作文；(2)人稱：以第一人稱為主；(3)時(shí)態(tài)：以一般過去時(shí)為主；(4)要點(diǎn)：制作以“感恩母?！睘橹黝}的畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的全過程；(5)層次：分為兩段：第一段描寫畢業(yè)臨近，決定制作畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻；第二段寫制作畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的過程及最后達(dá)到的結(jié)果。

法寶2

“韻色”得高分該文除簡單句外，還可使用非謂語動(dòng)詞、并列句、復(fù)合句(賓語從句、狀語從句)，做到句式多樣豐富。法寶3黃金“三步曲”1.遣詞graduationcome/aheateddiscussion/agreeon/makeavideo/materialcollecting/interviewteachers/takepictures/everyaspectofschoollife/tough/debateover/compromise/unavoidable/turnoutperfect/thegraduationceremony/bewellreceived/agreatsenseofachievement2.造句(1)Graduationfinallycame.(2)MyclassmatesandIdecidedtodosomething.(3)Weagreedonmakingavideotorecordourexperiencesatschool.(4)Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek.(5)Duringthistimeweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.(6)Theeditingpartafterthatwastough.(7)Wedebatedoverwhattoputintothevideo.(8)Somecompromiseswereunavoidable.(9)Thevideoturnedoutperfect.(10)Severaldayslater，whenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony，itwaswellreceived.(11)Thestudentsandteacherssharedagreattime.(12)Thatsurelygaveusagreatsenseofachievement.3.成篇Graduationfinallycame.MyclassmatesandIdecidedtodosomething.Afteraheateddiscussion，weagreedonmakingavideotorecordourexperiencesatschool.Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek，duringwhichweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.Theeditingpartafterthatwastough.Wedebatedoverwhattoputintothevideo.Somecompromiseswereunavoidable，butthevideoturnedoutperfect.Severaldayslater，whenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony，itwaswellreceived.Thestudentsandteacherssharedagreattime.Thatsurelygaveusagreatsenseofachievement.(2016·北京)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華。你班同學(xué)參加了學(xué)校的“地球日”系列活動(dòng)。請按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“ActionsforaGreenerEarth”為題，給?？坝⒄Z角”寫一篇英文稿件，介紹活動(dòng)的全過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：地球日EarthDay參考范文

跟蹤訓(xùn)練AweekbeforeEarthDay，posterswereputuparoundourschool，callinguponustojoinintheactionsforagreenerearth.Ourclasscameupwiththeideatomakebetteruseofusedmaterials.Webroughttoourclassroomworn-outclothes，piecesofcardboardandemptyplasticbottles，andturnedthoseintodolls，handbags，tissueboxesandsmallvases.Thatweekend，wewenttoanearbyneighborhoodandgavethemawaytothepeoplethere.Allwereveryhappywiththoseunexpectedgifts，especiallylittlekidsandelderlypeople.Wedidsowellthatwewereinvitedtoshareourideaandexperiencewithallthestudentsofourschool.Weareveryproudofourselvesandbelievewecandomoreforabetterworld.

(2017·江蘇)請認(rèn)真閱讀右面有關(guān)我國電影票房收入(box-officeincome)的柱狀圖及相關(guān)文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

三、圖表類作文典例Saturday

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West...Eachsoundsgreat!LiJiang：Yeah！Andsomemoviestarsarefantastic.SuHua：Andthehigh-tech！...LiJiang：Perfect！Let’sgetsomefoodfirst.Weonlyhave20minutesleft.SuHua：Nohurry.Thecinemaisonthesamefloor.One

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Son：Mum，shallwegoandseeafilmtonight?Mother：Whybother？Wecanstayathomeandwatchfilmsonline.It’sconvenientwithournewandfasternetwork.

Son：Butitfeelsgoodinacinema.Mother：Andtheprice...Wehavetopay50yuanaticket.

Son：Only10yuanmorethanlastyear.Mother：Butstillwecannotgetthemoney’sworth.Somefilmsarejustboring...寫作內(nèi)容1.用約30個(gè)單詞概述柱狀圖信息的主要內(nèi)容；2.我國電影票房收入變化的原因有哪些，簡要談?wù)勀愕目捶?上述對話僅供參考，原因不少于兩點(diǎn))；3.談?wù)勀銓ξ覈娪捌狈渴杖胱呦虻目捶?，并簡要說明理由。

寫作要求1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題。評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。...法寶1

“五審”定調(diào)子(1)體裁：圖表類作文；(2)人稱：以第三人稱為主；(3)時(shí)態(tài)：以一般過去時(shí)為主；(4)要點(diǎn)：概述短文內(nèi)容；分析票房收入變化的原因并給出自己的看法；(5)層次：分為三段：第一段總結(jié)歸納柱狀圖所含信息；第二段分析票房收入變化的原因；第三段提出自己的看法并給出理由。

法寶2

“韻色”得高分該文可多種句式并用，如并列句、復(fù)合句(定語從句、名詞性從句、狀語從句)，做到句式豐富多樣。法寶3黃金“三步曲”1.遣詞box-officeincome/witness/aconstantincrease/slowdown/various/economicdevelopment/powerfulengine/application/appeal/accountfor/consequently/turnawayfrom/leadto/atamediumspeed/movieindustry/enjoyaslightincrease2.造句(1)Thebox-officeincomeofChinesemovieswitnessedaconstantincreasefromabout17billionyuanin2012toover40billionin2015.(2)Thatincreasesloweddownin2016.(3)Thereasonsbehindthisarevarious.(4)Thefasteconomicdevelopmentbefore2016wasprobablythemostpowerfulenginedrivingtheconstantgrowthinthebox-officeincome.(5)Theapplicationofnewtechnologiesandthewideappealofmoviestarscouldalsoaccountfortheincrease.(6)Chinasawadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.(7)TheInternetincreasedoptionsformovielovers.(8)Someviewersbegantoturnawayfromcinemas，leadingtoaslowergrowth.(9)China’seconomyisexpectedtogrowatamediumspeedinthecomingyears.(10)Anincreaseispossibleintheinvestmentinthemovieindustryandthenumberofqualitymovies.(11)Itsbox-officeincomewillprobablyenjoyaslightincrease.3.成篇Asisindicatedinthegraph，thebox-officeincomeofChinesemovieswitnessedaconstantincreasefromabout17billionyuanin2012toover40billionin2015.However，thatincreasesloweddownin2016.Thereasonsbehindthisarevarious.Thefasteconomicdevelopmentbefore2016wasprobablythemostpowerfulenginedrivingtheconstantgrowthinthebox-officeincome.Theapplicationofnewtechnologiesandthewideappealofmoviestarscouldalsoaccountfortheincrease.However，Chinasawadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.AndtheInternetincreasedoptionsformovielovers.Consequently，someviewersbegantoturnawayfromcinemas，leadingtoaslowergrowth.China’seconomyisexpectedtogrowatamediumspeedinthecomingyears，soanincreaseispossibleintheinvestmentinthemovieindustryandthenumberofqualitymovies.Therefore，itsbox-officeincomewillprobablyenjoyaslightincrease.(2017·陜西咸陽二模)仔細(xì)觀察下圖，根據(jù)要求，以“HealthChangesinDevelopingCountries”為題，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文。1.以下圖為依據(jù)描述發(fā)展中國家的預(yù)期壽命(lifeexpectancy)和嬰兒死亡率(infantmortalityrate)的變化情況；2.說明引起變化的各種原因，如生活條件的改善、醫(yī)學(xué)的進(jìn)步、環(huán)境保護(hù)的認(rèn)識(shí)等。

參考范文

跟蹤訓(xùn)練HealthChangesinDevelopingCountriesAsisdescribedinthechart，indevelopingcountriesgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinlifeexpectancyandinfantmortalityratebetween1960and2011.Thelifeexpectancyin1960wasabout40yearsold，whileitincreasedtoabout60yearsoldin2011.Atthesametime，theinfantmortalityratedroppedfrom200per1,000birthsin1960to100per1,000birthsin2011.Therearemanyreasonsforthechanges，Ithink.First，people’slivingconditionshaveimproved，soitisnaturalthattheylivelongerthanbefore.Second，thankstothedevelopmentinscienceandmedicine，peoplearereceivingbettermedicalcarethantheyusedto.Third，developingcountriesarenowbetterawareofenvironmentalprotectionandtheytakemoremeasurestosolvetheproblem，whichalsodoesgood.Inshort，people’shealthconditionindevelopingcountriesisbecomingbetterandbetter.(2017·全國Ⅲ)假定你是李華。你所在的校乒乓球隊(duì)正在招收新隊(duì)員。請給你的留學(xué)生朋友Eric寫封郵件邀請他加入，內(nèi)容包括：1.球隊(duì)活動(dòng)；2.報(bào)名方式及截止日期。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

四、(半)開放式作文

典例法寶1

“五審”定調(diào)子(1)體裁：書信類應(yīng)用文，應(yīng)注意書信格式；(2)人稱：以第一人稱為主；(3)時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主；(4)要點(diǎn)：寫信目的；球隊(duì)活動(dòng)；報(bào)名方式和截止日期；(5)層次：分為四段：第一段自我介紹并交待寫信目的——邀請Eric加入球隊(duì)；第二段介紹打乒乓球的好處及球隊(duì)活動(dòng)；第三段告知Eric報(bào)名方式及截止日期；第四段結(jié)束語。

法寶2

“韻色”得高分除了使用簡單句外，該文還可使用非謂語動(dòng)詞作狀語、并列句及復(fù)合句(賓語從句、定語從句、狀語從句)，做到句式多樣。

法寶3黃金“三步曲”1.遣詞invite/join/tabletennisteam/itisknownthat/benefitfrom/prevent...from.../keepsb.physicallyhealthy/asto/experiencedplayer/givetrainingto/atthesametime/o.../beinterested/signup/lookforwardto2.造句(1)Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojointhetabletennisteaminourschool.(2)Wecanbenefitalotfromplayingtabletennis.(3)Itcanpreventusfromgettingshortsighted.(4)Itcankeepusphysicallyhealthy.(5)WeplantoinviteexperiencedplayerstogivetrainingtouseveryFridayafternoon.(6)Wewilldividethemembersintoseveralgroupstopracticeat5：00pmafterschool.(7)Ifyouareinterested，signuponourschoolwebsitebeforeAugust10.(8)I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.3.成篇DearEric，IamLiHua.Iamwritingtoinviteyouto